RiMa SS : Passionate Love (Chap 1 - Page 10)

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Passionate Love


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RK gulps the drink, he is hell furious, "Chief she denied to work with you." Bittuji's words are still ringing in his ears, he again order a drink and gulps in one go!! RK places the glass on table, "How can she reject me? She doesn't know who's path she crossed!! She has to pay for it."

RK is going to leave when his eyes catches a girl. She is enjoying the loud music, she dances on the song, completely lost in her world. RK can't resist himself but stares at her. Just then she walks to the counter and stands beside him, "One vodka!!" She order.

RK keeps staring at her, he looks at her from top to bottom, she is wearing a knee length dress with black high heel which covered her leg till knee and she wears a black coat over her dress. "Damn!! Man, give it fast." She said a little aloud.

As the waiter serves her the drink, she gulps quickly, she seems alcoholic. Suddenly she feels a pair of eyes on her, she turns at him and asks, "Hey!! Why are you staring at me? Haven't you ever seen a girl before?"

RK really feels embarrasse, but manages his arrogant looks well and replies "Yes!! But never seen a girl like you before."

"Oh really?" She asks sarcastically and again gulps the drink, "Hey hold on!! Give a hold on your mouth, you are getting over limit." RK says while snatching the glass from her hand.

"No!! Let's party tonight." She says and takes a bottle and leaves the pub, RK follows.

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They are walking on the New York street, she sees him coming, so asks "Hey are you following me?"

"Look!! You are drunk, tell me where you live? I will drop you." RK says giving her a support.

"No leave me!! I want to party. You know it's a very special day for me." She says drunk.

"Okay! You can party at your place."

She pushes him and says, "Just go!! I don't need anyone. I will party here alone. You go!!"

"Don't be so stubborn." RK holds her hand tightly. She squeezes in pain and starts crying dramatically, "You are hurting me!! You are bad boy." RK immediately frees her hand and politely says "Look!! Don't you want to go home? Your parents will be worried for you. Isn't?"

Hearing this her face fell down, eyes gets teary, "Home? Parents? I am not so lucky, I don't have anyone." She cries. Her tears somewhere pinch on his hurt badly, he wants to wipe them, he wants to hug her, he says "Who told you haven't anyone? From now you have a friend."

"Friend?" She asks.

RK forward his hand and says "Will You be my friend?"

She smiles and shakes hand with him, "Now you are my friend, now we two will party." She jumps.

"Okay!! But we can't party here. See!! Snow fall starts. Get up and lets go." RK gets up and looks at her, she days "I can't walk. Lift me up." RK looks at her shockingly when she looks at him innocently and pouts, "Please!!"

RK lifts her in his arm and said "Now tell me where is your home?"

She doesn't reply him so he walks towards the car. Meanwhile she rested her head on his shoulder and says "Will You ever leave me like others did?"

RK looks at her and says "No!!"

"Promise?"

RK nods with a smile and then asks "By the way what's your name?"

"My name... Aa... No!! Madhu... Madhubala... And you?"

"Rishabh!!"

"Rishabh? Rishu.. My friend..." RK smiles when she closes her eyes while whispering, "Thank you Rishu."

****

Its a small teaser. I hope you will enjoy it.


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