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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part 30- lovely update loved maaneet convo maan is total gone aww geet in short dress maan is so angry seeing her loved the part
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Part 31-amazing update geet still doesnt want to accept that maan truely loves her atleast maan tried to clear her doubt
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Part 32- wow maan proposed her thats too in a romantic way so how can geet say no but her mom doesnt like maan she is very much worried for geet but maan didnt mind at all oh no new trouble maans ex what will maan do now loved the part thnx 4 pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
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lovely update! well written! he proposes! Maaneet gng 2 date! Maan n mom talk! update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome update. You have a very unique style of writing. Now Maaneet are dating and Maan asked Geet for dinner and dance. Where from this ex-gf came. Another problem for him.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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PART 33

She wraps her arms around him

was missing you'

M-Serena.. I am not being rude.. I jut don't like all this. Besides, why are you in my office? If you were coming to India, you could have called. I would have arranged an appropriate meeting

S-You weren't picking up my phone!

M-Which means I was busy and I still am and you are the one who is rudely interrupting

S- This is no way to treat your girlfriend Maan

M- Serena I made it clear when I left that it is over between us. We don't have the same goals

S-What's your goal love...I can do anything for you

She rubs her body to his

M-Fortunately... I can hire much pleasant personally for just what you are offering

S-Means ? You wanna say love can be hired? That's your definition of love Maan?

M- You are not offering love and I don't love you

S-I love you...I am offering love and you couldn't love me when we were dating or is it some other b**** has caught your fancy

M-You don't love me. I have never been in love with you. We had a casual affair; I thought it was clear from the beginning. Seriously, or you to be assuming anything else I am doubting your mental faculty and am thanking my own that i broke it off when I did and now I would like you to leave coz as I said earlier I am busy

S-You say no to me...no to Serena! Men can do anything to get me and you refuse me!

M-Well there are always exceptions. Besides what are you complaining about? You got all others who don't say no

S-Who's the s*** who's causing all this? Is she prettier than Serena?

M-I find everyone else prettier than you. You have ugly inside Serena..

S-What???????? How dare you say that????

M-You know you hold no appeal to a blind person...if I were to have no eyes I wouldn't have seen anything pretty in you in the first place

Maan ka phone rings. He sees is Geet calling. Wo pick nahi karta. He'd rather talk without distractions

S-I am staying in your place

M- Go ahead. I won't go home. Besides you are too chummy with my mother for my comfort

Maan says taking her elbow and escorting her out

S-I am staying in your room. I have put my luggage there

M- As I said; go ahead I am not going there...and when you leave I'll have it purged and desanctified...or maybe I should now just shift into a place of my own...maybe today I'll go estate shopping

He says cooly

Serena nikal gai gusse se

Usse bahar nikal kar Maan ne Geet ko call kiya

M- Hey babes

G-Phone kyun nahi uthaya

M- My ex showed up in my office ... usse bhaga raha tha

G-Ex? Oh...baat karni hai to karlo...main rakhti hoon

M- Bhaga diya use. 1 ssal se nahi mila pata nahi kaha se tapak gai, kehti hai ki mere kamre mein rahegi... hey Geet can i crash at your place tonight? Mereko sofa chalega agar guest room mein nahi rehne dogi to

G-hmm..shayad tumse bohot pyaar karti hai wo

M- Mere status se to definitely bohot karti hai

G-Huh?

M-Kya huh? Tell can I stay at your place tonight? Ya main hotel mein room book karau?

G-Nohot sundar hogi naa wo. Aur kitni exes hain? Tumne kaha tha tumhari koi gf nahi thi

M-Tch serious wal nai thi they were just affairs...and is she is pretty. I don't know behind all that make up who knows what she looks like

G-Har baar ye hi kehte hoge then the loop continuous

M- Getting jealous? I like it... main hi kyu jalu

G-Khair chodo main rakhti hoon...maine to cookies ke lie...khair

Phone kaat diya

M- Main aa raha hoon

Maan manages to say

Raat ko around 8 he knocks on the door

Geet opens matar khaate hue

She frowns seeing him

G-You??

M-You invited me to cookies...smells great

He says coming inside Geet ko side karte hue

G-Arreee!!! Ghar mein koi nahi hai ! Aise nahi aa sakte tum

M-Tch tumhara plan hi galat tha phir... mereko bula liya aur maa ko bhaga diya..hmmm?

Maan gives Geet a sexy grin..

M-What are your plans with me hmm?

G-Maine tumhe kahan bulaya????????

M- You mentioned cookies...that means an invitation

Maan jakar baith jata hai sofe par

M- I am hungry. I didn't even have lunch

Geet jati hai kitchen mein matar leke aati h bina chille

G-Matar chilo. Tab khana banega

M- But I'm like hungry now...you like to see me hungry? You would make me work in this state? Mian din bhar kaam karke aaya aur tum ab matar chilwaogi?

G-Han! Bahane mat maaro. Kaam karo

M- Mereko matar chilne nahi aate

G-ohhh Mr Maan Singh Khurana ko matar chilne...tch tch tch...chilne nahi aate...hawww

M-Zyada tch ch mat karo tumhe bhi annual repot banani nahi aati

G-At least I don't say no. Mujhe koi bole to at least i will try

M-Tum mujhe khana khilao main kaam karunga aur tum mujhse kaho Maan bhook lagi hai band dukan bhi khulwakar tumhe pehle khana khilwaunga ye nahi kahuga ki jao pehle report banane ki try karo

Geet banake laayi kuch snacks aur garam garam chai

G-Tumne bataya nahi how did you like the cookies?

She says having some of his snacks

He smiles

M-The best, just like you

G-Flirt. Saara khatam ho gaya?

M-Haan

G-Kyaaa? Sab khaa liya? Bhukaad! Ek din mein thode khaana tha

M- Well main khaa rahat ha, meri secretary ne adha le liya... and then I didn't get time for lunch and it was good so...

Maan shrugs

G-Secretary ne adha le liya? Aise kaise? Tumne usko roka nahi? I didn't know you are so chummy with the secretary too

Maan looks a sheepish and guilty

M-Well I had been a really mean boss for the last few weeks coz I was miserable without you and she really like you. She did say that she would quit if I break your heart..

Geet smiles

G-She did? Wh did she?

M- As I said she like you...or your cookies...or me not being mean...all three

G-Well actually...you were such a villain when I met you first

M- hey girls always go for the bad boys ...and I have a public image to maintain

G-Public image of a bad boy?

M-No public image of mean arrogant and ruthless

G-Why?

M-Bad sounds more like playboy...business having brains or wealth isn't enough to be successful. Money will go away if you fool around with it and brains will help you if you can't get people to trade with you, warna mujhe kya roz coat pant pehnne mei alag mazze aa rahe hain..

G-Don't playboys fool around with money

M-Depends if the play boy is foolish or not...

Maan leaves after a while as her mom about to come back and he didn't want any troubles for Geet

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Geet's phone rings

M-Hi Geet!

G-Ab yaad aa rahi hai..kahan the itne din?

M-Arre bohot maslaa ho gaya tha islie tumhe contact nahi kar paaya

G-Kaisa maslaa?

M-You know Serena...she came over and stayed over at my place for a week

G-Yeah..and you were staying in a hotel..I know

M-Yeah...and Serena is so chummy with my parents and stuff...and she went all soppy sad about our break up and stuff

G-Your break up?

M-Yup...so then...it all became a family fiasco and stuff mom was pressurizing me to go back to her and...I told them about you

G-O ohhh Then?

M-They want to meet you?

G- I met your mom..I know how it went...horrible...

M-yeah...we need to change her opinion

G-Hmm...when are they meeting me?

M-Today evening

G-Whaaat?????

M-Yeah...just show them that you are a right choice..7.30 hotels JW Mariott...Italian restaurant...be there...

G-But my sis is here...She is flying today

M-Arrgh! Can't you come for me?

G-Ok...won't you pick me?

M-I can't.will drive mom and dad...you take a cab ...

G-Ok

M-Yeah ok bye...remember it's super important...I will talk to them about our marriage after this

G-Yeah..ok...bye

As Maan hangs up...Geet gulps with nervousness trying to process so much information and news

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Posted: 9 years ago
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hmm interesting how maan handles serena and tells geet about her too...love that...how easily he goes to geet house to hang out with her...wonder how the meeting between geet and his parents is going to go...hope no fiasco happens
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Posted: 9 years ago
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nice update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome Chapter 😃
Serena is so chipkooo lol 😆
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Nice update...
Maan's ex is staying in his home.. its so rude that his ex doing all this even after breakup...

Well I wish the meeting between geet and maan parents should go well without any disturbance...

Continue soon...

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