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Hey guys! I'm a silent reader here and I absolutely love this show and Rana ji . I have been meaning to write my own story here. I finally gathered the courage to post a preview. So can you please give me feedback if you would want me to write more. And also if this is similar to any other stories you have read on this forum please let me know, I will not continue it, it's just that I haven't read all of the stories soš. So please let me know and thank you guys. Oh and excuse my mistake I not the best writer.
About the story: This story is set in modern time (I know the show is about a raja and rani,that's why I wanted feedback before I started writing anything) below is a little sneak peak...Enjoy!
They were laughing as my arm burned up with pain. Tears rolled down my eyes and my mouth was clenched. Suddenly I felt hands on my face wiping away my tears, I looked up to see who they belonged to. A concerned face smiled at me his eyes asking if I was okay. I nodded my head in response. After the little silent conversation he got up and stared at the boys who had pushed me and caused me to get hurt. Something in his look made their face go pale, in an instance they fled to safety. Then turned to me and helped me up. "They wouldn't hurt you again, I promise" he said smiling.
I looked up at him and smiled,
"Thank you Indra, I love you."
"I love you too Gayatri"
10 years later...
I hate him, she thought looking right into his percing eyes
I hate her, he thought returning her blazing stare
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