Forgotten Warrior - A Praja FF Epilogue Pg 10 15/11

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hello all,

I am very upset with CVs showing Ajabde's death before the battle of Haldighati😡 and have decided to not watch the show but only come here for FFs😉.

so this might be my last Praja FF, unless i get another idea. But this FF is based on a Warrior that the CVs have completely forgotten about. For me it gives me completion to the story.

I have tried to show some historical facts but most of this story is pure fiction.😳

Once again I will dedicate this to my dear Garima as she is the one whose stories gave me a motivation. Garu I will be posting a new chapter each day. Promise 😉 Please let me know how it is

Forgotten Warrior

Prequel

It has been months since Mewar faced the defeat in the battle of Haldighati. Maan Singh who was the general of Akbar's army thought he had klled Pratap as he found the silver Chatra (royal sign) on a dead man's back. However when he saw the face of the man he was shocked. That was not Pratap at all. It was the person he shared his name with - Maan Singh Jala.

Meanwhile, Chetak - Maharana Pratap's horse had taken the wounded warrior far away from the battleground (roughly 2 miles) before finally succumbing to death while crossing a river stream; when he saw Shakti Singh and Vikram Singh coming towards them.

Maan Singh on realising that Pratap was still alive tried to follow him. However, since the intense heat had already taken a toll on the Mughal army he was in no position to chase Maharana Pratap. Also, he feared that an ambush must have been planted in the narrow Haldighati pass, by the Bhils and the Sesodia Rajputs.

Hence he left the battle field without taking over any of Mewari land.

Technically the Mughal's won the battle. But what did they win - nothing.

There was a completely different story on the other side. Maharana was wounded badly; not only physically but even emotionally. His entire army was almost destroyed and the only surviving generals were himself, his friend Chakrapani, his Acharya Raghavendra and his two brothers. The only consoling thing was that his motherland was not crushed under the mughal feet.

Finally not being able to take the luxury of the palace, Maharana left the palace and started living in a small house near the forest. He was accompanied by his mother (who had returned after hearing of the war and Pratap's defeat - to be his strength) his chotima Sajjabaiji and Veerbaiji, his two wifes and his two brothers.

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INDEX

Prequel - See Above

Part 1 - Page 2

Part 2 - Page 3

Part 3 - Page 4

Part 4 - Page 4

Part 5 - Page 5

Part 6 - Page 6

Part 7 - Page 7

Part 8 - Page 9

Epilogue - Page 10

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Pari my jaana 🤗
You're back

Please don't say this to be your last ff cuz I want you to write more. You are an amazing writer and the prologue shows that itself

Am so excited for this one and am 100%sure it is going to be a real gem

Thank you for dedicating the story to me

Love you loads

Am your firstie

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow! What a start pari. I am getting excited for this story already. 😃 Please do update soon.And don't say this would be your last because i still want you to keep writing more. 😳 ⭐️
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Posted: 10 years ago
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i am waiting
start is just awesome
do start up soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: twilightlover29

Pari my jaana 🤗

You're back

Please don't say this to be your last ff cuz I want you to write more. You are an amazing writer and the prologue shows that itself

Am so excited for this one and am 100%sure it is going to be a real gem

Thank you for dedicating the story to me

Love you loads

Am your firstie


Garu jaana🤗

I am so glad you liked my surprise😛 and as you motivated me with your constant updates i just had to dedicate this to you as the update speed of this story will match yours😉

regarding this being my last MP ff well CVs have really made me go off MP😡😭 but will try to write more if any scene comes to my mind😳

yey you are the person to comment first i am so happy 👏

first chapter is on its way
Edited by pari0706 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: ramya06

Wow! What a start pari. I am getting excited for this story already. 😃 Please do update soon.And don't say this would be your last because i still want you to keep writing more. 😳 ⭐️


thank you Ramya... i am glad you liked my prequel😃

the Cvs has made me go off Maharana Pratap to be honest😡 can't believe i am saying this but even Ekta Kapoor's serials are not so unrealistic to make me run like this

but you never know i might get inspired by reading more MP ffs and write more.😳

looking forward to reading your comments in my future chapters😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: roshallovepraja

i am waiting

start is just awesome
do start up soon


thank you ... first part is coming soon😳 hope you will enjoy the rest of the story as well
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Nonie12345

Wonderful start Pari😃


thank you ... the next chapter is coming soon keep reading and reviewing😉
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Part 1

It was one of the days when all the men of the house had gone to the neighbouring state to meet their head.

The visit was successful and the head had agreed to help them against few rough groups that were operating in the forest area; kidnapping and killing the passerbys.

Maharana was confident that these groups were supported by the Mughals and hence he was in a very happy mood to get some support against them.

Hence he decided to talk about some light topics and asked Kuwar Shakti about his time when he was alone.

"kya? Dadabhai? aaj aap humse yeh kyun puch rahe hai?"

"kuch samay se yeh prashna humare mastishk (mind) me tha, bas puchne ka avsar nahi mil paya. Toh bataiye, jab aap Mewar se dur the, to kya karte the?"

"hum bas ek desh se dusre deh ghuma karte the ek naye naam ke saath. Veer - yahi keh kar bulate the log hume, aur humne kabhi bhi unki galafemi ko dur karne ka pryatna nahi kiya. Hum ek veer yodha the aur yehi humari pehchan thi. Kai log hum bulate the yudh kala ka pradarshan karne, toh vahan jate the - pratispardha mein hissa lene. kai baar gaon vale hume apni samasiyaon ke nivaran (solution) hetu bulate the toh vahan jate the unki sahaita karte. aur humara pet palne ke liye aur sahaita karne ke liye humare mamusa the ve sada humara Kuwar Vikram ka aur Maasa ka khayal rakhte the. hum jante hai ki daajiraj ne unko yeh zimedari di thi, aur ek tarah se ve hi humari sahayta karte the. Isiliye humne bhi iss baat par koi prashna nahi lagaya."

listening to the last part the atmosphere was a little awkward as the two brothers could never agree on anything relating to their father and hence had agreed to disagree on this and not talk about it.

"toh hume bhi bataiye apne inn veer gatha ke bare mein. kya kabhi apko kisine Mewar amantrit nahi kiya?"

"Mewar?"

"haan yaha par bhi toh kai pratispardha ayojit ki jati thi. humare sare samant apne apne kshetra(area) mein ayojan karvate the. toh kya kisi ne apko amantrit nahi kiya?"

"kiya tha ek baar hume nimantran mila tha, lekin pratispardha ke liye nahi, yudh mein sahayta hetu. "

"Kya? Yudh hetu?"

"ji hum bhi ashchariya chakit the aur hume laga ke kadhachit yeh Daajiraj ka hukum hoga ya fir koi shadyantra"

"toh fir hume bhi sunaiye voh kissa - kahan se aya tha vo nimantran?"

"ek din hum Mewar ki sima ke pass ek gaon mein the, ek pratispardha hetu. us pratispardha ke baad humari mulakat ek yodha se hui. uski umar toh bohot choti thi, ya yun keh lijiye ki ve ek balak hi the, unhone humari veerta ki prashansha ki aur hume amantrit kiya ki hum unke rajya aye. Karan puchne par unhone bataya ki ve Bijolia se aye hai aur unhe humari sahayta chahiye Afghano ke virrudh. Parantu Daajiraj ne hume Mewar se nikal jane ko kaha tha, aur Bijolia Mewar ka hi hissa tha. Issi liye hume laga ki yeh to ho hi nahi sakta ki Mewar ke kisi kshetra ko yudh mein sahayta ki avashkta ho aur Daajiraj aur aap vahan na ho. isiliye humne use mana kiya. Toh voh humse kehne laga ki theek hai yadi hum nahi chalna chahte toh koi baat nahi. parantu Baijilal humse milkar avashya hi prasan hoti, aur yadi hum bhavishaya mein ana chahe toh Bijolia ke dwar sada humare jaise veero ka swagat karenge. yeh kehkar ve chale gaye"

"aapne unka naam nahi pucha?"

"haan unka naam Patta tha. hume bhi yeh thoda ajeeb laga tha, parantu hume mamasa ka patra mila tha ki Maasa ka swasth theek nahi hai. toh hum chale aye maasa ko dekhne. Uske pashchat jab kuch mahino paschchat maasa ke swasth mein sudhar ke baad jub humare maan me yeh baat phir se ane lagi toh humne pata lagane ka prayatna kiya. toh hume pata laga ki, ki aap vahan aye the aur afghano ko bhaga diya tha."

Shakti laughed a little before continuing

"ve balak ati veer the, aur unke mukh ka tej hum aajtak nahi bhula paye. aur unhone kisi Baijilal ke bare mein bhi baat ki thi. parantu aajtak hum nah jaante ke ve kaon hai. Aap to Patta ko jante honge na? Aur kadachit Baijilal ko bhi?"

"Ji jante hai, parantu aapne unke bare mein pata lagane ka prayatna nahi kiya?"

"Kiya tha, tab pata chala ke ve Bijolia ke bhoot purva Samant ki beti aur aaj ke Samant ki badi behen hai. Aur Kyunki unka bhai abhi chota hai, ve hi sara karyabhar sambhalti hai. Aur ek bohot achi yodha bhi hai. Suna hai, ek saath 10 sipahiyon ko maat de sakti hai ve. bas yehi pata chal paya. lekin ve aab kahan hai yeh nahi jante. Kya aapko pata hai unke bare mein? Ek stri ki itni prashansa vo bhi yudh shetra mein humne kabhi nahi suni. Hum ek baar avashaya hi milna chanhenge unse. Kya aap jante hai ki ve dono aab kahan milenge?"

"Patta aab iss duniya mein nahi rahe. Jab uss dhurt Mughal ne Chittor ke durg par akraman bol diya tha toh vahan hue Jauhar Saka mein Patta aur unki patni bhi shamil the"

"Kya? He Eklingji, unki atma ko shanti dena. Aur Baijilal? kya unhone bhi Jauher kiya?"

"NAHI, ve jeevit hai." Pratap replied.

"Dadabhai, tab toh kadachit ve aur unke pati bhi humari iss yudh mein sahayta kar sakte hai. unhe bulayiye na."

however before Pratap could reply they heard a group of men people laughing. this was unusual as they were inside forest and no one was supposed to be in there. So they left to find out who was laughing.

What they found shocked them to the core. they stealthily ran towards the offending people, without noticing that some of the men on the trees had seen them and were ready to trap them in a cage. Before they knew it, they were inside a very very strong cage that even Pratap could not break - no matter how hard he tried.

It seemed that the cage was made especially for him and effort was made so that Pratap couldn't get out.

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Amazing part Pari😃
So Shakti does not that know that bajilal is his bhabhi Ajabde⭐️
Nice to see Shakti's reaction to this news
Edited by Nonie12345 - 10 years ago

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