Love is Fascinating [AR-Virika ff] _ Half-Update

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hello Everybody!!
This is my first ever ff, I hope you all Enjoy it as much as you Enjoy others.

Love is FASCINATING
Prologue:

As the sun was rising, a woman of about 30-40 years of age was sitting on a bench on a deserted pathway near a house, wearing a bandana over her loosely curled hair. She had a loose white shirt and a bag over her shoulders and boots under her long skirt till her mid limbs. While she was busy reading a book enveloped in a purple velvet cloth, a newspaper delivery guy passed by throwing a newspaper accompanied with a magazine on the porch of the house.
Suddenly her eyes shifted from her book towards the thing that disturbed her silence and there followed a gasp that escaped her mouth. Her eyes sparkled with excitement and her lips curled up in a smile that lightened her face.
She looked at the frontcover of the magazine from far and said: "I think I've got my new Client."
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On the other side, a girl was curled up on a sofa in her dorm room with her hand on her head,waiting impatiently for something when the sound of a bike erupted and she jumped disturbing the peace and ran downstairs towards the mail-room. A delivery guy was adding mails to the lockers when she jumped in front of him, giving him her name, took her mail.
And started opening it there, throwing some magazines on a table she opened a particular one and then... eee, she shrieked with joy, startling the mail guy. Then out of sudden ran out of the room to her dorm, forgetting her mail. Reaching her room, she woke her roommate and started screaming:THE PRINCES ARE COMING!!!!THE PRINCES ARE COMING!!!!THE PRINCES ARE COMING!!!!. Her roomie looked at her with a distorted expression, after getting sense of what her friend was saying she snatched the magazine out of her hand and started reading it while her friend started happy-dancing. She looked up from the magazine with a smile on her face and said: "We should tell RJs.
And they ran out.

Hope you all will like it. i know it doesn't give much sense but prologue is supposed to be like this.

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi Eveyone!!

Index-
Prologue- Page 1
1. Just some Beginning- Page 1
2. Surprised Meetings- Page 2
3. The Fall and Just Some History- Page 4
4. I don't want a HAPPY ENDING- Page 6
5. I found my Basket- Page 8
6. Difference in our Families- Page 12
7. The Proposal Confusion- Page 16
8. I Met Him- Page 24
Edited by Ashstyle - 9 years ago
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Characters:
MALE

Armaan Malik




Viren Vadhera

Arnav Malik



Rahul Vadhera

Maan Khurana


Atul Joshi



Sujal Garewal



FEMALE

Riddhima Malhotra

Jeevika Malhotra

Muskaan Chaddha

Geet Chaddha


Khushi Gupta



Anjali Sharma



Kashish Sinha


Edited by Ashstyle - 9 years ago
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Chapter 1: Just Some Beginning

As the sun was about to rise, Two figures could be seen sneaking out of their dorms buildings and moving towards the entrance gates of their university. After a usual long banter with the watchmen, they were allowed to pass through the huge gates that were iron bolted. As they moved out their eyes fell upon the mail man coming towards their way and a smile conjured up on their faces knowing that their friend would be waiting for the mail impatiently. One of them extended her hand towards the other and said:'Chalien', The other looked at her and smiling took her hand saying' Let's Go.'

They ran off down the long road.

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A girl with huge curly hair was standing beside the big gates of the university, fidgeting with her things waiting impatiently for someone when a pair of arms enveloped her into a tight hug from behind and excitement bubbled through her body. She turned with a huge smile on her face and spoke in a loud voice: 'Geet! How are you? haww You are looking too good. Wait! Wait! Did you hear the news???I am soo Excited since...' and Geet butted in: 'Of course Muski. I've heard about it and I mean Can you believe it THEY are finally coming, and yeah Where were you? I've been searching for you all over the place since morning.'

This was Muskaan and her twin sister Geet that were very much alike in pretty much everything except hair. While Muskaan had a huge mass of curly hair Geet preferred them straight but they both love each other very much (and ofcourse each other's hair), are very melodramatic people and they are very much fond of THE PRINCES.

Muskaan replied, 'Well you could have asked someone, I've been waiting here since long.' Geet replied in melodramatic way, 'Okay now i have to ask people about my twin sister. Aj kal kya din agaye hain, By the way Who are You waiting for? The class is about to start in 15 mins.' Muskaan replied casually, 'RJ, I was so excited to tell them the news but they won't ever comeback, those idiots'

"Who are you calling idiots huh?" came a voice and they both turned around. There they were standing under the rays of beautiful sun, both looking cool as ever in caps over jeans and shirts. Muskaan and Geet both jumped at once and took both of the girls in a tight hug which was equally returned. After a sec or two, Riddhima said," Guys out of breath, too tight" and came out.

The twin sisters after over coming the reunion both got back to their mock angry state and Riddhima and Jeevika both got a smack on their arms by them. Geet said accusingly, 'Yeah, you two are idoits' 'And Monkeys,have been waiting here for long and don't tell me where you went, always telling me those lame excuses with those cute faces' said Muskaan backing her.

On the sound of laughters Muskaan turned with anger to the Malhotra sister trying to resolve guilty faces but it was no use. After a while Jeevika said, 'Well, It's not a lame excuse but we did go to watch the Sunrise and on the way saw your favorite person coming with your mail, well what did your mail said about those dudes whom we've never seen.' To which the twins faces lightened up at once and they both spoke with excitement," You won't believe it, THEY ARE COMING TO OUR UNIVERSITY.'

Both Riddhima and Jeevika looked at each other and then at the other two dumbos who were blabbering and shrugged their shoulders saying 'Cool, Now can we get to our already late class' and they both ran off to their hostel to get their bags leaving their friends annoyed about their behavior towards THE NEWS.

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After the classes attended, all the friends were sitting together in the university building except RJ who were off to some teacher's errand, discussing about the news when Muskaan started," You know I am completely sometimes surprised about their behavior, I mean there was no sign of excitement after I told them the news" and Geet backed her by saying" I know Yaar you all know how we are always talking about the princes but they haven't even once seen them, not even out of curiosity"

Khushi turned hat, looking at Anjali and they both smiled seeing where the talk was going and just sat there thinking about the reason behind that silence. Anjali asked, 'Well when are they coming? Those Princes It is pretty exciting that we'll meet them, Does anybody know?' and one look at the faces of the twin sisters told her that the magazine was not that informative than they think it was.

Changing the topic Khushi said:" Okay leave that for once and tell me Where are those sisters?" Anjie replied," They must be waiting in Cafeteria"

"Well then, TO THE CAFETERIA" Khushi said with enthusiasm.

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A Guy was sitting on his laptop, relaxing after a long tiring day at his office when a mail caught his attention. It was about some visit to some university and the door of his room opened at that exact moment. Viren entered Armaan's room with a tired expression on his face to inform him about the visit and said, 'Hey bro! What you doing? Well, don't think I have to remind you that but we have a university to attend tomorrow' and received a startling reply,' Why didn't you tell me that before? I just read the mail now'.

Viren passed a look and said, 'I told you but apparently you didn't listen. Get prepared for it cause I'm already done, by the way I'm leaving for the club,Coming?' he asked even after knowing the reply, 'You go, I can't come, lots to do,Bye"and Viren took leave.

Armaan sighed with exhaustion thinking how can he go to some club after such a tiring day. After renewing some energy, he stood up from his couch and picking some papers thought, 'Let's study, can't believe I have to study even after becoming a businessman.'

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I know it is not the right Chapter-1 but whoever reads this, try keep reading it, you might actually like it afterwards and tell me about your opinions.It's just the start.

Edited by Ashstyle - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey Ash!
First of all, welcome to IF! I see you're a newbie!
This place is awesome!
And your story looks amazing so far!
I'm intrigued as to what's ahead!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Heyy, you write very well...ur story luks good...nd a warm welcome to india forums...

Do continue...tnx fr d pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
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cs is attractive.1st time i'm seeing Gurpeet as sujal in a ff.any reason y u chose him as sujal instead of Rajeev?update abt the introduction of characters also good.was surprised 2 c geet along with muskaan as u hadnt included geet in the cs.y didnt u exclude geet in d cs?Is maan also there?waiting 4 more chapters
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hii welcm to IF...all the characters are nice...sorry i m telling u this...but its my personal opinion...plzzz i cant imagine in my bad dreams... Gurpreet singh as A SUJAL ...for me sujal is only Rajeev...sorry dear if i hurted u but...i cant imagine him...if possible plzz replace him...or give me the reason why u have chosen gurpreet instead of Rajeev
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thank you for liking and sharing your views. my computer was not able to upload Rajeev's photo as SUJAL so i uploaded Gupreet cuz i also like him as much, Well i have edited my post and also added the Maaneet pair as they were not the part of the characters when i started my ff and i included them at the last minute.

Thank You.
Edited by Ashstyle - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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U have changed the pics.But then why both Gurpreet and Rajeev's pics r put 4 Sujal?Who is the real Sujal?I also like both.plz update d 2nd part soon


Originally posted by: Ashstyle

Thank you for liking and sharing your views. my computer was not able to upload Rajeev's photo as SUJAL so i uploaded Gupreet cuz i also like him as much, Well i have edited my post and also added the Maaneet pair as they were not the part of the characters when i started my ff and i included them at the last minute.

Thank You.

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