Manan: Sunshine of his life ch 6 pg8 updated 26.11.15

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Prologue:


"Mr. Manik Malhotra u r the cheapest man, i ever know" these are the lines I heard..

And after this sentence something unexpected happens Manik Malhotra I mean the rockstar, the boy who was dream of every girl of the space academy, Got slapped by a common girl. Shock was visible on faces of everyone.
Of course everyone is gonna shocked..
N Manik was standing there void of any expressions.. What's wrong with him man? Okay m being jerk .. I know I know
"What the hell girl what's wrong with you, in fact who the hell are you, what's ur problem haan?? " shouted Mukti.

"Yeah we or i say Manik toh don't know who r u?? N u slapped him " said an angry Alya

Dhruv just stood there..

But instead of answering them she turned back, nd left giving an angry glare to offcourse our lover boy Manik...

Hmm about the problem even m unaware what happen with the love story of my best friend.. Why the girl whom he love crazily from last 2 years slapped him in front of whole college.
Did he said something??
Nah, not possible he don't have that much guts.. He even didn't proposed her till now. Okay okay he have guts but the fear of rejection man..
Did he done sumthing??
Nah there is nothing he will be able to hide from me.. Then ..
Think .. Think ..



Authors note : This is my first story , please suggest me a suitable title n tell me ur response about the prologue..



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Posted: 9 years ago
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The prologue is somewhat fascinating.. it makes me wanna read more..
And what I am listening.. the manik malhotra doesn't have guts.. what!!
However just waiting to read more about the story.. what had happened that the girl slapped manik.. did he do something..??
Uff so much to know.. so please update the part soon..

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Posted: 9 years ago
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INTERESTING STORY...WAITING EAGERLY FOR NEXT UPDATE! !!!!
CONT SOON!! :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Index

Chapter 1
Chapter 2
Chapter 3
Chapter 4
Chapter 5
Chapter 6
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey..
Prolouge seems to be intersting..
Nice start..
Looking forward for this story..
Continue soon..
Do pm from next time..
Bbye..
Take care..
Lots of love..
Puccha..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Is dis ma angry man manik..

Waiting for update
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Prologue seems to be interesting..
Would love to hear more...
Looking forward to this story...
Continue soonish..

Stay blessed
Love myrah
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Posted: 9 years ago
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sounds like an interesting story...
i would love to read more of it...
manan are in a secret relationship maybe...
can't wait to see what happens...
continue soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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would love to read more in here!!the title could be of any of the hindi songs you love! I mean many of the people have so you can do the same!Anyways if you want some kind of posh title then just PM me about it! I don't have on in my mind right now but will soon get one!Your writing seems interesting! Continue soon!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Title n prologue both r awesome update the first part soon

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