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Posted: 9 years ago
#11
Amazing story!!
Geet is a firecracker and Maan is a thorough Gentleman. Kya frank hai bandi! Maan ke ghar mei rwh rahi hai and slowly even was successful in getting work. And Maan is a really sweet guy! Propose toh Geet hi karegi!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow super cute ss.. Maaneet full of comfidence.. Lovely.. Cont soon hun
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Posted: 9 years ago
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thank u for writing this story on my request...

going to read now😃

i loved the title a lot...👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Energetic Update
Geet is a dynamite while Maan a gentleman both like each other but Geet notice that
Maan is scared to let her know while he thinks that both Geet and her Daadi has trust
on him he cannot break that trust and neither can he have a personal relationship with Geet
if they are having a professional one
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Posted: 9 years ago
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first part...
wonderful start... i liked the way how u kept the characters of geet and maan just like the serial... maan angry young man but good hearted... and geet bubbly innocent... and i really loved here geets blabbering... 😆

geet left the house for acting ... and now all alone in mumbai.. but maans heart already started beating for her... thats y he is not able to see her in danger😳

mast start... loved this
Edited by -lakshmi- - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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part 2
ye geet ek dum patakha hai... maan is like pulled towards her like a magnet...

dadi bhi bilkul geet jaisi hai😆

geet is so bossy... but u can call her sweet bossiness... when she declares some thing maan does nt feel like ordered too...

and kya confidence hain bandi mein... her confidence brought her back to sets and she got the role too...👏

ab rehthe saath mein and kaam bhi saath mein... wow... but maan is a true gentleman and this is holding him from confession...

lagtha hai wo bhi geet hi karwaayegi... i just love this geet

continue soon...

thanks again
Edited by -lakshmi- - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#17
Nice part plz update next part soon will be waiting
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Posted: 9 years ago
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excellent update! well written! Bold dynamic Geet!
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Concluding part...

Geet looks upset suddenly...

Maan is so much worried to see the change in her, he had never seen her sobbing or quiet...

This disturbs Maan and he can't see her like that...he wants to know what's bothering her and help her out as much as he can...

He thought Geet would tell him all the story on her own as usual but this time she prefers to keep it to herself, this makes him worried all the more...

It must be a very big problem, so only she is not even ready to share it with him, then suddenly something strikes Maan, after all who is he, he is just a co-star and she need not share each and every thing that happens in her life with him...

He keeps auguing within himself that he should be knowing all about her, they literally spend the whole day together, both at work and at home, grr, it may not he a perfect home, it's just a room, still that's their home as of now...

Maan thinks maybe they need a home for future, what future? They may not be working together for a lifetime, this movie would take a year or so and what then?

Geet will go her way and Maan will be back to his lonely life...

But how can he even think of living alone, he is so used to neing with Geet, and he doesn't even know when he started liking her company and he has since then taken her for granted as she is all around him though he didn't meant her to be with him, he thought it's b'coz he drives her to work as they work together and back home as they stay at the same place...

Maan has got his own car now, and it's an automatic deal that Geet drives to work and Maan drives back...

She even fills the tank once in a while and demands his share when they happen to eat out or order something...

He would have done the same with anyother person, be it a male friend...haina?

What's so special? Everybody does that...

All is well until now, Geet has become silent and she being the only speaker of their partnership, now they have zero communication...that too frustrates Maan...

He can ask her what is so bothering her, but his stupid principles, he thinks it must be too personal to share else she would tell him on her own...

MSK fails to realize that happiness is shared with everyone but not the problems, problems are shared only with friends, that means she doesn't even consider him a friend...

Then there is no way he can ask her...

Fed up with his strange behavior Geet erupts like a volcano one day...

They are going home after a long day at work, they had a really painful scene that day and are still in the same mood...Geet is exhausted and the pressure is too much for her...

Geet breaks down and is crying silently...

Maan couldn't stop himself from wiping her tears...

Geet stops him...: thank you, but as always I can handle it myself, you need not bother

Maan: but Geet, you are crying

Geet: mein bhi ek insaan hoon, mujhe bhi rone ka huq hai

Maan is speechless...ab isse kaise baat kar saktha? But if doesn't speak even now it may be too late...

Maan suddenly stops the car and turns and hugs her and makes her rest in his broad shoulders...

Geet keeps sobbing and Maan with that gentle touch makes her feel that yes, this is the place for you when you are in need of that support system...someone on whose shoulders you can rest your burden...

Maan: haan, I was also thinking the same, if you feel like crying you should, and if you want to talk I'm always there for you, I jus wanted to say you are not alone, mein hoon Geet, tumme kissi baat ko bhi lekhe darne ki koi zaroorat nahi, koi bhi problem ho toh hum milkke face karenge, haina? aakhir hum frinds hai, haina?

Maan wants to confirm their friendship while Geet is happy that atleast he is considering that there is some kind of a relationship between them...abhi friendship hai toh aage jaake naye rishtey mein badal bhi jayega...

Geet: tumne ek sawaal karne mein itne dher lagaya?

Geet thinks how long should she wait for his confession...wait karthe karthe kahin budde toh nahi ho jaaye?

Maan: tumne bhi mujh pe barosa karne mein itna dher ladaya haina?

Geet: waise abhi bhi koi barosa nahi, lagtha hai mujhe hi kuch karna padega

Maan: what? tum meri friendship ko shak kar rahi ho?

Shak kya? Geet toh dawe se keh sakthi hai ki ye friendship nahi hai...

Geet: nahi toh, mujhe toh bahut kushi hai ki tume apni friend ki kitni fikar hai

Geet is sarcastic...

Maan: khaas karke teri

Geet: kya kaha tumne?

Maan: yahi ki tum meri bahut khaas friend ho

Geet: itne khaas hoon toh apne mann ki baat kyun chupathe ho?

Maan is shocked...issko toh sab kuch patha hotha hai...

Maan: tum kehna kya chathi?

Geet: kuch nahi, tum nahi samjhoge

Maan: par Geet, tum itne udaas kyun ho? kya hua hai?

Geet: woh meri shadhi hone wali hai

Maan: Kya?

Maan ko zor ka jatka laga...

Maan: lekhin kaise? Tummari career toh abhi abhi shuru hui hai

Geet: lo, issko toh meri career ki padhi? Waise shadhi bhi toh karni haina?

Geet comes to the point...

Maan: haan, lekhin itni jaldhi bhi kya hai?

Geet: mujhe nahi, meri family ko hai

Maan: kyun?

Geet: ladhki hoona, issiliye

Maan: kyun? Unko ladhkiyon pe koi barosa nahi hai kya?

Geet gets angry...mujhpe nahi sare ladhkon pe barosa nahi kar sakthe na, ladhke ho hi aaise, including the MSK

Maan: what? tum aaise kasie keh sakthi? Agar mere jage koi aur hotha toh kya kya hotha?

Geet: wahi toh

Maan: what?

Geet: meine kaha wahi toh, tumne kuch nahi kiya, kuch bhi nahi

Ye kya keh rahi hai? is she complaining that he has not done anything?

Oh yeah Mr.Buddu Singh Khurana...

Maan: tum nahi jaanthi ki mein kuch bhi kar saktha, tum MSK ko nahi jaanthi

Geet: kuch bhi?

Geet gets closer to him and their faces are just inches apart...

Geet dares him to go ahead and do something...

Maan also is feeling the rush if adrenalin as he saters her inviting rosy lips...but you know MSK is a true gentleman and he sighs away to stare the night sky...

Geet: ek kaam toh tum kar hi sakthe

Maan: what?

Geet: uss ullu ke patte se chutkara pane mein meri madat kar sakthe

Maan: kaun ullu ka patta?

Maan is afraid if she is referring to him!!!!!!!!!

Geet: uss stupid Daman

Maan: Daman kaun hai? aur tumme kyun pareshaan kartha? Tum fikar mat karo Geet, mein ussko achcha sabak sikhatha ki woh tumme hamesha hamesha ke liye bhool jatha

Maan folds his fist and shows his power packed biceps...

You know Maan loves action...

Geet: isski koi zaroorat nahi, he's a duffer and I'll take care of him

Maan: he's not Ur problem?

Geet: he is like my puppy, he'll happily nod his head to whatever I say

Maan: what's wrong with that? Every girl wants her husband to be like that

Geet: but I'm Geet Handa, I want to marry a man, not a puppet, I want my man to take care of me and not the vice versa, tum samaj rahe haina?

Maan: Geet, tum fikar mat karo, ye tummari nahi meri problem hai

Geet: I need you to handle my family

Maan: I'll talk to Dadi

Geet: Dadi is in our side

Maan: so it's Ur Dad that U fear

Geet: no the entire Handa Khandan

Maan: what?

Maan is puzzled...

Geet: tum aarhae haina mere saath, tum kudh jaan jaooge

That weekend Geet takes Maan to her native place and there all are very eagerly awaiting Maan's arrival...

As Maan enters the Handa house he receives a filmy style welcome...

It's like entering a theatre...there starts the music...

"Kabse aaya hain tere dulhe Raja

Ab Der na kar jaldi aaja"

Here comes Mohinder Handa to welcome MSK...

Mohinder: it's your line...gao

Maan looks confused...

"Tera ghar aaya mein aaya tujhko lene

Dil ke badle mein dil ka nazraana dene

meri har dhadkan kya bole

Sun sun sun"

The family follows...

"Saajanji ji ghar aaye

Saajanji ghar aaye

Dulhan kyun sharmaye hai

Sajanji ghar aaye"

Maan looks for Geet to save him from this filmi chakkar family...

Dadi: welcome to our Bollywood fan club

Ranno: humme toh aaise hi damaat ki talaash tha, aap BW ka agla Bachan ho, hummari Geet bahut lucky hai, jaise Bachan ji aur Jaya ji...

Brij: nahi chachi, Sr bachans toh aap aur chachu hai, this is gen next, Abhishek aur Aasishwarya

Remember Geet's OH dialogue...in GHSP...

Maan can't tolerate this...

Maan searches for Geet, ye Geet kahan gayab ho gayi...

Geet then comes...Maan is relieved to see Geet...

He rushes to meet her...

Then the situational song changes...

"Raja ko Rani se pyar ho gaya

Pehli nazar mein pehla pyar ho gaya

Dil jigar dono ghaayal hue

Teere nazar Dil ke paar ho gaya"

Maan: Geet ye sab kya hai?

Geet: meet my BW crazy family

Maan: now I know that why you are so crazy

Geet: what? you think I'm crazy?

Maan: then what's all this?

Dadi intervenes...dona kya kusur busur kar rahe ho?

Geet signals Maan to Zip his mouth...

Maan remains silent...

DJ change the music...

"kuch na kaho, kuch bhi na kaho

Kya kehna hai? kya sun na hai?

Humko patha hai, tumko patha hai"

Maan: Geet ye log toh mujhe pagal kar denge

Geet couldn't hear him properly...

Maan shouts...

Maan: Geet, mujhe tumse akhele mein baat karni hai

Mohinder: akhele kyun ji? Hum san jaanthe hai, haina?

The whole family goes...hum sab jaanthe hai ji

Music change...

Geet starts lip sinking...

"aaj kal tere mere pyar ke charche har zubaan par

Sab ko maloom hai aur sabko kabar ho gayi

Humne toh pyar mein aaisa kaam kar liya

Pyar ki rah mein apna naam kar liya"

Maan gets angry and stares Geet...

He then goes near her and asks her...Geet, what's happening?

Geet: ye log toh uss rumour ko sach samajhthe

Maan: what?

Maan couldn't hear too...

Maan is frustaed and Geet feels pity...bas bahut ho gaya, issko bacha lethi hoon...

Geet the takes him to her room...

Maan closes the door and locks it...

Then he sighs...

Maan then comes forward towards Geet...

Maan is about to shoot the queations when Geet stops him...

Geet: sshhh chup bilkul chup

Maan hears a roar of laughter...

A bunch of kids come out from beneath the cot...

Kids: ye kya ho raga hai?

Geet: shaitanon, chal hat yahan se

All the children leave...

Maan: Geet, ye kya ho raha hai?

Geet: sshhh bunti bahar aao

One small citie pie comes out of the screen...

Maan: bas itna hi hai? aur koi Bandar bakhi hai kya?

Geet: bachon ko Bandar nahi kehthe

Maan: kya pagal pariwaar hai tummari?

Geet: you will fall in love with them soon

Maan: mein? Not possible

Geet: let's see, tum kab tak inkar karthe rahoge?

Maan: what?

Geet: kuch nahi

Maan: ye kaisa mazak hai Geet? inko kya ho gaya?

Geet: kuch nahi, inko hummare barein mein patha chalgaya

Maan: hummare barein mein kya?

Geet: ye log uss rumour ko sach samjthe

Maan: tumne mana kyun nahi kiya?

Geet: mana kyun karoon? Sach ko bahut din chupake nahi rak sakthe, haina babaji?

Maan: kaisa sach?

Geet: ye tum apne aap se poochlo toh jawab mil jayega

Maan steps forward looking at Geet passionately...

Maan: achcha? Toh tumme sach patha chal gaya?

Geet: haan

Maan: lekhin Geet, tumme pura sachayi patha nahi

Maan now corners Geet...

Geet: hmm

Maan: mein bathatha hoon ki sach kya hai

Geet: kya hai?

Geet feels shy for the first time...

Maan's mischievous amile makes her nervous...

Maan: tum mujhse

Maan whispers in a husky tone as he keeps gazing her beautiful face...

He starts his gazing from her forehead and moves to her eyes...

Maneet eyelock...mahiii...

Geet: tumse kya?

Maan: nahi mein tumse

Maan now zeroes in on her lips...

Geet : tum mujhse

Maan: ye bhi koi poochne ki baat hai?

Geet: Maan, bathaona

Geet almost pleads...

And the whole parivar goes...bathao bathao aur bathao

Maan feels embarrassed...luckily he stopped at the right moment...warna kya hotha?

Sare parivar ke samne? Nahi nahi...Maan is a gentleman...

Maan looks at Geet like...kabab mein haddi?

Maan: meinne toh door ko lock kiya tha

Geet: uss shaithanon ka kaam hai

Geet reminds the kids who left and then tey didn't close the door na?

Maan: Geet, chalo, hum apne ghar chalthe hai, phir dekhthe hai ki mujhe kaun rokhtha

Maan flies with Geet from there...that's the end of the reel life love Jodi and the beginning of the real life love Jodi...

Matches are made in Bollywood...

Dedicated to all the Bollywood couples...

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Happy Diwali Guys...

hope you enjoyed reading this...

have a damekedhar Diwali...

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