Swasan OS - Only You (16+)

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Posted: 9 years ago
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This OS is after when Swara realizes her love for Sanskaar but is hesitant to confess her feelings...this OS is gonna be long so divided it into 2 parts. (It's 16+!!!!!!!!!)
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Part 1A
Swara was standing by the window. It had been 2 days since Sanskaar had left for a business tour. She was feeling lonely. Yes, she had fallen head over heels in luv with Sanskaar but was very hesitant and shy to express her feelings. Also, they had got 6 months only because of the court's orders.She stood their reminiscing their moments together. It had been such a wonderful journey with Sanskaar.
Swara-Tum kab aaoge Sanskaar, I can't live without u, plz tumhara kaam khatam karke jaldi se aa jaao.
Just then she heard a car's screeching. A handsome, and charming hunk with black specs stepped out of the car. It was Sanskaar. She was in the 7th heaven.
Swara-Finally tum aa Gaye Sanskaar
As she was about to turn, her eyes caught something. A girl of about her age also stepped out of the car. She was beautiful and had long silky hair. She came and hugged Sanskaar. Swara was shocked. How could Sanskaar do this???? She fell down on the floor, tears flowing uncontrollably.
Swara(crying bitterly)- How could u Sanskaar? Tum aisa kaise kar sakte ho! Tum toh surf mujhse pyaar karte the name, haa? Toh phir...
She broke off. She couldn't control herself. But then
Swara-Main aise haar nahi maan sakti. Mera naam bhi Swara Maheshwari hain.
She had to be brave. She wiped off her tears and got ready.

Hall
Everyone was at the door welcoming Sanskaar.
Sans-Maa, yeh Tanya hain, Meri bohot acchi dost.
And then he looked at Tanya, who nodded lightly, with a smile.
Sujata-Haan chora, wo toh dikh hi raha hai, kitni acchi dost hai yeh chori thari. Then everybody laughed. Just then, Sanskaar felt the room temperature rising, as he saw towards the stairs. Swara was descending from the stairs, looking no less than a fairy. She was wearing a Pink colored Anarkali with a halter neck. He kept staring at her until she came close to him, but instead of talking to him, she moved towards Tanya.
Swara-Hi Tanya, main Swara hu, Sanakaar ki PATNI. She stressed on the word Patni and then put her one hand on his shoulder. Sanskaar was bewildered by her behavior.
Sans(mono)- Yeh Swara KO kya hogaya? Kuch Dino pehle toh bada gussa dikha rahi thi, aur ab...?
Just then, Laksh entered the scene.
Lux-Hello everyone!
Sans-Bhai dekh main kise lekar aaya hu!!!
Laksh-Tanya!!!!
Tanya-Tumse dobara milkar khushi huyi Laksh. They shakes hands but Tanya immediately withdraw her hand.
Laksh-Ok guyz enjoy, main upar jaata hu, bye
The moment he went, Sanskaar bent towards Tanya and whispered something in her ears that made her blush. This made Swara more angry.
Precap-Swasan romance...revelations

So guyz, the "16+thing" will be on the2nd update.

Love Anu 😊 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice start .do continue soon 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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😆😆😆😆😆😆
Swara Jealous ...
Great...

Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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continue soon. . plz pm me.. it was very good..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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So here's the last part. Enjoy!!!!
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Swara was sitting in THEIR room. From the moment Tanya had come, Sanskaar was just not leaving her. They both were gossiping and giggling.
Swara- Yeh Sanskaar bhi na! Jaise hi yes chachundar aayi woh to mujhe bhool hi gaya. Kabse ussi ke saath chpka huwa hai. Mann karta hai USS Pagal Chachundar KO laat maarke MM se nikal dun. Subah se raat ho gayi lekin Sanskaar ka kahin pata nahi.
Swara was visibly very tensed. She loved Sanskaar but he was just spending his time with Tanya. Swara went towards the window and stared at the moon.
Swara-Offo, in sabke chakkar me main toh bhool hi gayi ki aaj naye parde aaye hain. Chalo abhi unhe laga deti hu.
Swara took the stool and climbed it with the curtains in her hand.
Swara(dreamily)- Kaise kahu main Sanskaar se ki main use kitna pyaar karti hu...pata nahi.
She was so lost in her thoughts that she lost her balance and fell.
Swara-Aaa...
She closed her eyes in fear, but two strong arms caught her. She opened her eyes to see the most beautiful pair of black eyes gazing at her lovingly. She was lost in those eyes if the person whom she loved the most, Sanskaar. But then she suddenly recollected about Tanya and stood straight, shaking his hands off her waist, surprising Sanskaar.
Sans-Arre Swara tum...
Swara(interrupts)- Tum yahan kya kar rahe ho Sanskaar?????
This question shocked him. The Swara he knew was very sweet, bubbly and kind then what had happened to her?
Sans-Swara yeh tumhe huwa kya hai, jabse main aaya hu main dekh raha hu ki tum mujhe ignore kar rahi ho. Aakhir baat kya hai?????
Sanskaar was losing his temper now. He held Swara by her shoulders tightly. Swara turned back.
Swara-Aisa kuch bhi nahi hai
Sans-Swara tum...But then something struck his mind. Swara's behaviour change was because of Tanya. He had spent the whole day with her, and didn't get the time to talk with Swara. This made him really happy. Now he decided to tease Swara a Lil further.
Sans(teasingly and faking anger)- Swara batao mujhe aakhir baat kya hai!!!!
Swara just lost her control now.
Swara-Wo Tanya hai problem. Jabse wo chachundar aayi hai tum bass usi se chipke huwe ho. Meri taraf ek baar bhi nahi dekha. Tum kya nahi samajh rahe ho, I LOVE U, u fool.
She turned her back towards Sanskaar, fuming with jealousy and anger. Sanskaar was on cloud nine hearing her confession. He slowly walked towards her and put his hands around her petite waist. She shivered under his touch.
Swara-San...sans...Sanskaar
He put all her hairs on the right side andkissed her nape. She was melting under his touch
Sans-Tanya aur Laksh ek doosre se pyaar karte hai. Wo toh main jab tour pe gaya tha tab main use mila aur yeh sab plan kiya .
Swara heaved a sigh of relief. Sanskaar made her turn towards him and looked in her eyes.
Sanskaar(teasingly)-Waise tumhe pata hai na ki main hamare 'suhagraat' pe hi tour pe chala gaya tha. Toh kyun na aaj...
Swara-Dhat
And she freed herself from his grip and as about to run, when he caught her left hand and pinned her to the wall. Sanskaar kissed her left cheek.
Swara-Sanskaar koi aa jayega
But he didn't listen to her, he moved his face closer to her and their lips met in a hot kiss. First Swara was shocked but then she also gave in. Now they were madly kissing each other. They broke off their kiss, not because they wanted to but because of the lack of oxygen. Swara couldn't meet his gaze so she ran and clutched the curtains. She closed her eyes feeling the moments. Suddenly she felt a hand on her waist that made her turn around. Sanskaar removed all her jewellery and let it fall on the floor. Hetook her up in bridal style and put her on the bed and came on top of her. She was blushing hardly and put her hands on her face. He smiled and slowly pulled off her duppata slowly. She turned on the other side, not able to hide her blush. Now he got an opportunity to loosen her strings. 1st he slowly opened her 1st Dori that made her blouse loose from the shoulders. He kissed her shoulder blade. Then he opened all her strings of her blouse and pulled the quilt on them. Swara also gave in. He turned on the other side so that Swara is on the top. She went towards his ears and whispered
I LOVE U SANSKAAR
Sanskaar kissed her neck region and said
I LUV U TOO SHONA
With this he completely made her his. The moon witnessed the unison of two souls; physically, mentally and emotionally.
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Finished. Plz feel free to criticize
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Grt. Jealousy always brings people closer.
This was awesome
Plz do write more
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Posted: 9 years ago
#7
Such a cute one...
Awe...jealousy swara...
Loved it dear. ...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#8
Jealous Swara and awesome ending. 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Loved it so much ...I wish cvs brought this track ...btw I feel u could extended more of Swaras s jealousy part ..it's interesting though ...I love love blooming parts
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Jalan hogaya...so, the changes occurred...when would Swara move forward in the actual serial...i wonder???😕

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