part-1 completed KURBAAN HUA-A ZAYA FF chapter 10 updated

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Posted: 9 years ago

OKAY SO CREDIT ,WRITER , AUTHOR AND THE DIRECTOR OF THE STORY IS@LUVPREETIKARAO MY BEST SIS,SHE SAID ME TO WRITE THIS STORY ALL THE IDEA IS OF HERS AND ONLY WORDS ARE OF MINE SO THE CREDIT GOES TO...@LUVPREETIKARAO
PROLOGUE
zain-aliya l hate u,l will take the revenge from you for destorying my family
NOW WHAT WILL HAPPEN TO ZAYA STORY?

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Posted: 9 years ago

CHAPTER-1
lts been a week since mamu died,everything is now changed in barkat villa,zain gave his first talaq to aliya
aliya was sitting in her room when zain entered his eyes were all red due to alchol
aliya-zain tum
zain came towards aliya and removed her duptta and said
zain-tumhein mera pyaar bohat pasand hai na toh tumhe aaj wo milen wale hai
and zain took aliya to bed ,after one hour zain went back to his room aliya got up from her bed and clutched the sheet and cried
aliya cries her heartout
aliya-kyun allah kyun pehle apne mujhse mera mamu ko durra kar diya phir mera shahur ko kyun main sirf unke biwi bistar tak hoon
kyun
and aliya cried and she slept
this was the routine of aliya
OKAY SO THIS STORY IN START WILL NOT BE HAPPY OKAY BUT AS THIS STORY WILL PROCCED EVERYTHING WILL BE FINE

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CHAPTER-2
NEXT MORNING
BARKAT VILLA
all were having their breakfast and aliya was serving them all
zain-aliya chalo
and drags her to bathroom
zain-wash all the clothes ,clean the floors l need this all completed by 12o'clock
aliya without saying a word do all this work,and in night zain use to take aliya to the bed like this few weeks pass
ONE FINE DAY
aliya was cooking the lunch for everyone when she felt dizzy and she ran to washroom and she viomities a lot
aliya-kya ho raha hai mujhe ho sakte hai ki mujhe dehydration ho gaye hai
aliya went back to do her work
EVENING
aliya was sitting in her room when zain entered the room,aliya was feeling very dizzy
zain-aliya humein ek party main jaane hai so be ready
and zain goes away
after few minutes aliya get down by wearing a sari
aliya-chalo zain
zain-tumhe party main aane ki zorraat nahni hai koi aur mere biwi ka banekar mera saath aaya rahi hai
and aliya cries a lot
PARTY
zain enteres the party a see a lovely couple he got all the memories spend with aliya and he drinks a lot ,when he was drinking he saw a girl she was not very beautifully but was fine
the girl came and sat besides zain
sana-hi handsome kya baat hai itne drink kyu kare raha ho
zain-tum se matlab
sana-waise drink karne ki do wajah hote hai ek toh pyaar main dhoka yaa phir drinking is my hobby toh kya main jaan sakte hoon aapke drinking karne ki wajah
zain was about to get up when sana stops him by holding his hand

NEXT UPDATE-WHAT WILL ALIYA'S FUTURE AND WHAT IMPACT OF NEW ENTRY WILL BE ON ZAIN AND ALIYA'S RELATIONSHIP

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CHAPTER-3
zain got up from his sit but sana stopped him by holding his hand ,she then got up,zain was seeing aliya in sana,zain got angry
zain-haath chodo mera
sana took zain till her car and dropped him till the home
BARKAT VILLA
aliya saw that sana dropped zain,zain was going upstairs when aliya stopped him
aliya-kaun thi wo
zain holded aliya's hair very tightly
zain-tumse matlba and pushed her on wall
aliya cried
NEXT MORNING
ZAIN'S ROOM
aliya brought tea for zain,
aliya-zain yeh lo chai
zain took the tea from aliya's hand and throwed it
zain-utho isko
aliya was gathering all the pieces when she got hurt ,aliya's hand was bleeding ,zain saw that and purposely he dragged her by that hand aliya now with full courage pushed zain away from her and she ran to her room,chandbibi saw this and went to aliya's room
chandbibi sat beside aliya
chandbibi-dulhan lo
and she applied a cream on it
aliya was now feeling dizzy and she ran to washroom to voimte
chandbibi followed her
chandbibi-dulhan doctor ko main phone karte hoon
aliya-nahni chandkhala main khud jaakar aati hoon
DOCTOR'S CLINIC
doctor examine aliya properly
doctor-aapke husband wo kahan hai
aliya-wo todha busy hain
doctor-khair,by the was congralutions aap maa bane wale hain
aliya got tears in her eyes aliya left the clinic with all her courage
CAFE COFFE DAY
zain was having a coffe when sana entered the cafe she saw zain and approached him
sana-hello
zain-hi
sana-friends
zain-yeah
zain decided to make sana as her friend because he will feel some peace in his heart after sharing things with her
here at home
aliya -kya karu zain ko keh doon
aliya-nahni asie nahni kar sakte main lekin Kya karu main,allah meri help kijiye pls kya karu baby aap bol na
and she kept her hand on her tummy
shazia heard this convy
shazia-ohh
and shazia goes downstairs
everyone gathers in the hall and zain too
surriya-kya hua shazia
shazia-aliya maa bane wale hai
surriya-what aliya
aliya ran downstairs and saw that everyone was present

NEXT UPDATE-WHAT WILL HAPPEN NEXT

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CHAPTER-4
surriya-oh toh yeh bacha kis ka hai
aliya-mami yeh bacha zain ka hai
surriya-oh really toh dna test karo phir
aliya-nahni
and she ran upstairs
zain followed her
zain twisted aliya's hand
zain-DNA TEST karo
aliya push him away
aliya-tum ne mujhe pe zulam kiye main chup rahi,raat ko mera saath bistar pe soye toh bhi main chup thi ,tum ne mere ammi abbu ko bura kahan toh main chup thi lekin aaj nahni aaj baat mera bacha ki hai,yeh sab main iss rishte ke liye kare rahi hoon,lekin mere bacha ke liye agar mujhe apna rishte bhi todhan pada na toh bhi thik hai issliye main ghar chodkaar jaa rahi hoon
aliya was about to leave the room
zain-agar tum gaye toh tumhari baby ko main apna naam nahni dena wale aur uske future ka kya,agar wo mere bacha hua toh tum usko abbu ka pyaar do payoge

aliya got tears in her eyes
aliya-zain tum usko apna naam do yaa mat do iss se kis ko fark nahni padhta kyun ki yeh modern society hai aur mere bacha ka khaayal main khud rakha sakte hoon aur zain tumhe pyaar ka maltba bhi pata hai,tum wo zain nahni ho jise se maine pyaar kiye tha
zain shouted
zain-maar gaye wo zain,aur rahi baat pyaar ki toh wo har koi deserve karte hai siva tumhara tum itne cheap oh ki

and he left the room

AFTER THREE MONTHS
BARKAT VILLA
ALIYA'S ROOM
NIGHT TIME
aliya-mere gol gappa khane ka mann hai lekin itne raat ko kahan se lekar aao main
zain heard this and within 15 minutes chandkhala enters in the room with gol gappa in her hand
dulhan-dekho
aliya-gol gappa thank you and she starts to eat it
zain was seeing all this actually he brought this for aliya by himself and kept them on kitchen and then ordered chandkhala that he wants to eat gol gappa and chandkala saw them in the kitchen so she decided to take this for aliya

NEXT UPDATE- A TWIST?

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CHAPTER-5
BARKAT VILLA
AFTER FEW DAYS
aliya was cooking the food when she heard the voice of laughter ,she came out and saw a giral in zain's arm
she kissed zain on cheeks
sana-oh my baby
and zain kissed her on cheeks
aliya saw this and she went back to her past
FLASHBACK
zain was swimming in pool when aliya came to swimming pool area to hang clothes on rope,zain saw her and came out of the pool and back hugged her
aliya-zain kya kare raha ho
zain-romance
and he nuzzle her neck
aliya pushed him away and ran to their bedroom zain followed her,in bedroom zain chased her and finaaly caught her and they both fall on bed and they both celebrated their love
END OF FLASHBACK
PRESENT
aliya was disturbed from her thoughts when she heard the laughter,zain saw her and gave her a angry look and he went back to his room with sana .surriya was seeing all this from a distance
surriya-dekh aliya
aliya ran to her bedroom
EVENING TIME
aliya was talking the clothes from rope when heard a voice
surriya-sana ka nikkah main zain se karna wale hoon
aliya was shocked

NEXT UPDATE-MORE TROUBLES FOR ALIYA

NOTE TO ALL THE READERS-NO L WOULD'NT BE ABLE TO UPDATE MY WORKS TILL 20 DAYS AS I AM BUSY SO WAIT FOR ME

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CHAPTER-6
BARAT VILLA
after hearing the words from surriya's mouth aliya was totally shocked
aliya ran upstairs and went to zain's room
aliya saw sana lying in zain's arm
aliya-zain
zain-kya hai
aliya-tum sana se nikkah karne wale ho
zain-haan
aliya-tum asie nahni kar sakte
zain without hearing further words took sana down stairs and aliya followed them
zain-mom papers
surriya hand in papers
zain signed the papers and sana too
surriya kept a hand on their shoulders
surriya-yeh hai zain ki dulhan sana zain abdullah
surriya forcefully feed aliya a sweet
zain-sana chalo aaj hamari suhugaraat hai
zain and sana went to their room

next update-well now the real story will start

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CHAPTER-7
BARKAT VILLA
ZAIN'S ROOM
sana-zain l love you baby lets make love to each other
zain-sana please l can't do this you have to wait
sana-okay fine l will wait for you
next morning
zain's bedroom
aliya was passing from the room when she saw sana tieing the knot for zain
zain-thik se karo,ohh aliya jee
aliya-zain wo
zain-well aliya mera ek kaam karo sana tie knot kar rahi hai tum mere shoes polish kar do aur haan uske baad pls unko pehne bhi dene okay get on work
aliya without uttering a word was doing her work and then made zain to wear the shoes when aliya was standing zain caughted her from hairs
zain-sana mere bacha ka dhyaan bhi rakhne wale hai after all biwi hai aur after all raat ko hum toh offical husband and wife bhi hogaye
aliya-zain pls bacha ko mujhse mat cheena
zain-kyun tum kya chahte ho ki mera bacha tumhara jaise cheater bane apne standard main raho tum aliya
and he goes away

NEXT PART-TWIST...

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CHAPTER-8
BARKAT VILLA
AFTER 7 MONTHS
now aliya was 6 months pregnant
its was every other day of aliya's life where she has to do all house hold chores and has to listen to zain's taunt ,aliya was busy in her work just then she thought that she should make some raw mango pickle for her
after some time when she was done with her pickle she decided to keep the pickle on terrace
aliya without wasting a second went to terrace ,when she was passing she saw surriya showing a necklace to sana,nafisa and shazia
surriya-this is beautiful right
sana-yes ofcourse,yeh mere liye hai na
surriya-nahni yeh nafisa ke liye hai
nafisa please yeh lo
nafisa-thank you mom
sana was very angry as she doesn't got the necklace
sana in angry left the room
aliya saw all this and thought that sana didn't loved zain but his money
EVENING
nafisa was getting ready for a party just then she thought that she should wear the necklace that was gifted to her by surriya when nafisa opened the box she found that it was empty
nafisa-mom
surriya and every one was gather in hall
surriya-kya hua nafisa
nafisa-mom jo apne mujhe necklace gift kiye tha wo necklace nahni hai mere paas
sana-mujhe pata hai kise paas hai wo

NEXT UPDATE-A NEW TWIST

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CHAPTER-9
BARKAT VILLA
sana-yeh sab iss aliya ne kiye hai
aliya-maine main asie kyun karonge
sana-jeasouly
aliya-pagal ho kya tum
surriya-asie hosakte hai aliya
aliya-mami sacchi maine chori nahni kiye
sana-toh kya maine kiye
surriya-enough, zain!!!!!!!!!!
zain-yes mom
surriya-iss ladke ne aaj saare limits cross kar diye
zain-kya kiye mom iss ne
surriye-iss ne 10 lakh ka necklace chori kiye
zain-what
he holded aliya by hairs
zain-tumhari himmat kaise hogaye,mujhe lag tha ki tum atleast kabhi chori toh nahni karonge lekin tum ne aaj wo bhi kar diye
aliya-zain please maine asie nahni kiye
zain-toh kya mom aur sana jhooth bol raha hai
aliya-haan zain
zain-oh really bohat hogaye tumhara aliya

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