Kabhi Na Kehna Alvida (Swasan) .... Part 3 updated

Hey...I m die hard fan of swasan... so thought of writin a FF of swasan... sorry in advance... if there is any spelling or grammatical mistake... [/FONT]

Glimpse
A girl cries and says "he cant leave me and he cannot die... I love you... I love you sooo much , u cant leave me... i cant live without u... plzzz come back
A elderly women... who is the mother of that girl comes n says"swara leave him... he is died...we have to do his final ritual... leave him shona... he is no more" n wipes r daughtes tear

I dnt no ... how it is???? 1st time im trying something... plzzz comment n let me know how it is...

Love
Mahira



Chapter 1

chapter 2

Chapter 3

Chapter 1



Its a warm day. A girl wearing long white salwar is running to cross a road without seeing left n right. Her friends says "stop running swara... who is she to you????someone else can help her" Swara stops n says " if u would be in tht place ( pointing toward the old women... who just had an accident and none of the people is helping her... Swara is running to save her ) ... n some people says u like that...could u be happy????"
Her friends stays quite n swara turns n help the women... n take her in her car. The old women is admitted to hospital n the charges of hospital is paid by swara.
Swara says to doc " Plzzz save her... She had an accident... so I took her" n the doc takes the women in operation room ( Swara closes her eye n she remember something... a tear skips from her eye )... Her white salwar had turn to red...


In the meanwhile... When Swara was helping the old women , a boys sees swara and smile looking at that sight


SOOO GUYS WHO IS THAT GUY ???IS HE A HERO??? IF NOT ... THN WHO ELSE????
Guys dooo comment...n let me know how is it???? If u all dont comment thn I wont b knowing how it is ... so I wnt b continuing it... bcz I wil thing its not nice... soo wont continue... sooo plzzz comment. ...
Love
MAHIRA

I promise you guys... next update it wil be long... its just an introduction to swara's character. ...

Originally posted by: princess1222

Chapter 1



Its a warm day. A girl wearing long white salwar is running to cross a road without seeing left n right. Her friends says "stop running swara... who is she to you????someone else can help her" Swara stops n says " if u would be in tht place ( pointing toward the old women... who just had an accident and none of the people is helping her... Swara is running to save her ) ... n some people says u like that...could u be happy????"
Her friends stays quite n swara turns n help the women... n take her in her car. The old women is admitted to hospital n the charges of hospital is paid by swara.
Swara says to doc " Plzzz save her... She had an accident... so I took her" n the doc takes the women in operation room ( Swara closes her eye n she remember something... a tear skips from her eye )... Her white salwar had turn to red...


In the meanwhile... When Swara was helping the old women , a boys sees swara and smile looking at that sight


SOOO GUYS WHO IS THAT GUY ???IS HE A HERO??? IF NOT ... THN WHO ELSE????
Guys dooo comment...n let me know how is it???? If u all dont comment thn I wont b knowing how it is ... so I wnt b continuing it... bcz I wil thing its not nice... soo wont continue... sooo plzzz comment. ...
Love
MAHIRA

quite interesting 😊😊

This is really interesting!

Interesting..

Please forgive me if there is any typing mistake... Im updating in my cell because my laptop is not working..

Here is the update


Chapter 2

Scene 1 - Swara's house

It was a bright new day and the morning rays were disturbing Swara.

Swara -( to herself ) why do this sun rays disturb me daily and break my sleep. I'm fed up of this.

Swara gets ups and closes the curtains and then goes to sleep. While going to bed , she sees the time...

Swara - ( to herself ) oh no Swara!!! How can u sleep so much???

She gets up and goes to get ready for hospital.


Its almost have been a week that the old women is admitted in hospital. Today she is gonna get discharge. To Swara is going to see her for last time.

Scene 2 - Hospital

Swara comes running to hospital as she was getting late to meet the old women

Swara - Doctor !!! M I late ????

Doctor - No swara . You r not late. The patient is getting ready ( wearing her dress ) . She wil be here in a sec. Till then do the formalities of discharge paper.

Swara does the sign on the paper. After finishing she comes back , when she see the old women coming after she gets ready.
Swara goes and toches her feet to take blessing . The old women bless her saying '' u wil get a good husband in your life who will love you to the core of his heart ''

Swara smiles at her and says in mind '' This wont be true '' and a tear skips from her heart


Scene 3 - Maheshwari home

A man is seen wearing a formal suit with a black blazer. He is calling of his mom. The boy is none other than Sanskar maheshwari

Sanskar - mom !! Mom !! Where r u??? Plzzz come here and help me wearing this tie.

Sujata ( sanskar's mom ) comes running to her only son

Sujata - dont shout soo much!!! I m nt deaf. I can ear. I no its ur first in office and ur really tensed. Bt plzz calm down.

Sans - Mom help me na. U know right I dont no to tie tie... So plzzz help me. If i get late to office then that vampire will kill me. So tie fast

Sujuta ( hit him playfully ) - he is not a vampire. He is your dad.

Sans - okie ! Okie!! Dad.

Sujata makes him wear tie and eat sweet curd. For a successful day in office. Sanskar kisses his mom's cheek and runs as he is getting late for his first day in office.

End


Its enough for today... will continue according to your comments... Do comment... if u all dont comment then gonna discontinue the story.

Love


Mahira

Let me know guys... do u want background music? ???

Loved ur update..

the story is moving slow,... but its nice update,... So keep up your work,...