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dear plz mention index on first page
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PART 31

Geet is getting anxious by the pressure of performing

Poori duniya jahan bhool kar they are kissing each other. But they are parked on side of road... and ahem ahem...somebody knocks on the window

Maan comes back to reality with a rude shock and a moan for some more time

He puts Geet back in her seat

Geet to bechari shock se excitement se pant sa kar rahi hai

2..3 deep breaths and rolls down the window part way

Bahar se the officer says ki it's no parking blah blah

Maan says blah bah sorry...won't happen

He quickly rolls up the window and starts driving, hi knuckles white on the wheel

Instead of taking Geet home he drives somewhere else jahan they can get some privacy and talk

Geet chup chap sar neeche kar baithi thi

He takes her to his secret place..

Wahan bahar gadi roki, chup chap wo utra

Opens the door for her and offers her his hand

She silently puts her hand on his

Maan chup chap usse le kar chalne lagta hai

Thodi trail se improper unpaved raasta hai, idhar turn udhar turn end mei jakar the trail leads to a clearing

Sundar si jagah...waterfall, pond and trees, soft grass, a fairy tale kind of place

He takes her there and stops, turns to her putting a kiss on her forehead

M- I wanted to bring you here...on that Sunday...but you fell ill

G-Its...it's beautiful

M- I knew you would like it. Tell me what colors the water?

He says with a wry smile

G-Blue?

He smiles and nods

M-You didn't see blue water, this is it. Want to go in?

She smiles

G-In?

M-In the water?

G-emm...emmm..I...I don't know

M-You just have to take your shoes off and the water is clean. I am not talking about swimming

G-ok

M-You don't have to if you don't want to

She takes off her sandals

Maan takes off his shoes and socks and rolls up his pants

Geet sits on the edge with feet dipped inside

He joins her there

Maan thodi der chup baithta hai

He points ki dekho choti choti machliyaan bhi hai, like big as half your finger

She nods happily

Fishes come and tickle their feet

Thodi der baad Maan says

M- This can't keep up like this

She looks at him questioningly

M-We can't keep making out at random places and be not be on speaking terms other hand...I mean not that I mind that...it's great really. But that's not all it should be

G-We??????? You do it. Tum ek khule saand ho

He snorts at her idioms

M-Better than jungli janwar

He says

G-Tumse milna hi bekaar hai

Geet uth jaati hai

Maan grabs her hand and stops her

M-How is everything going? Your sis your mom your job?

G-Stop ...! I don't want any intimacy

She shuts her eyes

M- I am right in for conversation if you would get your mind out of those things...

He says with half smile

M-Tell me how have you been?

G-Fine

M-Are your eyes fine?

She is looking down

She nods

G-You?

H shrugs..

M-I am getting by. My secretary may be plotting my murder...

He says with a light smile

G-huh?

M- I ask her to change my schedule a lot...gets on her nerves. How is your mother? Does she miss me?

G-She is fine. What's the time?

Maan tells her

G-ohhh..I have to go...Shankar must be waiting

Maan release her hand

M- I see

G-Come

M-Geet, just so we are clear. What is it do you really want? You bring me stuff to eat, tell that you love me and then you are saying you have to meet this guy?

He says very evenly and slowly

G-So?

M- Who is this guy to you?

G-To me? A very special friend

M-You called me special friend too, what should I understand?

G-That's different. You both are special

M- Are you trying to tell me that you are in love with both of us?

G-Love???????? Of course not. Where does the love thing come from?

M-I don't know. I am a jealous guy. You say you have a special friend and you called me your special friend for so long. What else am I supposed to think? I don't... I just want things to be clear ...to know where I stand in your life

G-Where do I stand?

M-What sort of question is that? Have I said there is some other friend who is a girl in my life?

G-Who am I to you, it's still not clear

M- What part isn't clear to you? Is this some sort of game for you Geet? Who reveals their hand first? You will only answer me after I have put my heart out on the platter for you? Always replying my question with a question. You are the greatest teacher on romance. What do you make of my leaving everything...just to follow you around?

G-Haven't I told you already what you mean to me? Why do you get angry at every drop of a hat

Maan sighs

M- I am not angry. I am not even shouting

He gets up the ledge and wads in the water, walking around...looking at his feet; hands securely thrust inside his pants pocket

G-Why don't you just calmly listen to me once and kindly shut up for few minutes

M- I am listening...you only asked me questions .Did you want me to sit and not answer? And I am sorry but I can't be calm about something so important

G-Fine then don't listen to me

M- You haven't said anything

G-Do you give me scope????????

M- Fine I am giving you scope. I'll not say anything; all ears

He says and stops walking, standing still looking at her

G-I think...knew you don't love me and I do. So...I decided it's better not to get involved and get hurt in return. So I decided to avoid you

Maan just blinks his eyes not moving another muscle, closely listening to what she is saying

G-And Shankar is my childhood friend. He helped me...as he is still in institute...he would teach me the tunes and he was the one who referred me to my eye doctor, as his surgery wasn't possible. He gives me a flower every month of anniversary of my surgery

Maan ab bhi chup chap khada hua hai, listening to her... he doesn't want to be blamed for not listening or letting her complete

G-I just have to say this. Finished. Ye hi kehna tha

M-So this Shankar, he is in love with you? Or he thinks of you just as friends too

G-We are just friends. What kind of question is this?

M- Have you ever asked him if he thinks of you just as a fiend or more than that? Has he ever said he think of you more than as your friend?

G-Maan...stop these silly questions. You sometimes act so possessive

M- Coz I am the possessive jealous kind and it's not silly. And if they are silly then just satisfy my silly curiosity

G-Possessive about me?

Maan shrugs

M-You think I blow a gasket at every girl walking around in shorts?

G-But why?

M-Why? See now you are asking me questions again. Tell me what this guy feels for you

G-I don't know

M- You think it is possible that he is in love with you too?

G-I don't know...but he is nice... such a sweet guy

M-What would you do if he was? Would you leave me so that you don't break his sweet heart?

G-You? Where do you come in between?

M- So there is nothing between us?

G-emm...it's complicated to answer

M-Would you leave me if he said he loves you and want to be with you?

G-No

M-You wouldn't doubt your decision ever? Even if he says you are the only bright light in his dark world?

G-See Maan, you don't love me its established coz it's not possible...coz its illogical...coz men like you say this to every people they meet. You will only settle for a woman with fat cash or looks to die for. We are simple people with modest upbringing and specially people like us...who have a disfunctionality and we just like to lead a calm lives...we don't dream of love or marriage

Maan rubs his head...but stays quite

G-We are liabilities and struggle each day to lead a decent respectable lives where we can support at least ourselves

M- My turn?

She looks at him

G-Say

Maan holds out his hand pointing one finger

M-One issue at a time. Would you still not go to him even if he says stuff like you are the only bright light in hi dark universe? Just think before answering coz if you say you won't go and then you change your mind later; I won't let you. Then you can add barbarian to your list of adjective for me

G-I don't know the answer

Maan nods

M-Why is it established that I don't love you?

He says pointing two fingers

G-Coz you don't. I think...I mean there's no reason

He nods again

M- Anything I can do in particular to prove otherwise?

G-See, I know you are a nice man...we are really attached...you know people like you...very rich, high society, best education, foreign studies and popular...everything successful...it may be weird...you know sometimes we like a different taste of food

He nods

G-But we have to get back to our normal diet

M-So what do I have to do to prove to you that I love you? You don't particularly know?

G- You are being kiddish; those girls are for you not I. Look at yourself. You are Maan Singh Khurana. The Maan Singh Khurana

Maan walks closer to where Geet was sitting...still a few steps away and stops again

M- And what can Maan Singh Khurana do to prove that "The Maan Singh Khurana" is head over heels in love with you? Don't give me reasons why I can't be...

She looks at him

M-Do you have a solution? A test?

G-Just come to your senses and prove it to yourself. I am sure you will regret your decision when you come to your senses

M-Tch! So you don't have a solution. Then you'll just have to accept the possibility of the fact that I may be in love with you even of by laws of society I shouldn't be, coz I forgot to read that rule book while I was falling hard for you. Okay?

She smiles

M- I'll take that smile as yes

He says smiling back

M-Now issue no.3

He says pointing 3 fingers in air

M-Yes, we are attached by a special bond

G-But, you are still the unromantic jaanwar

Maan smiles and nods

M-Our bond that is more than friendship and I don't have that bond with anyone else. You are perfect, no disfunctionality in my eyes. You are beautiful inside and out. So I am not embarrassed to take you out in public neither do I hate you when we are alone coz you are always beautiful

G-Chii dhat!

She hides her face in her hands

He stands close to her taking her hand off her face

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Great to see this story being updated again!

Okay, so Maan has declared his love, but maybe Geet still has some doubts. It is getting interesting!

Waiting for more; continue soon, please!

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Posted: 9 years ago
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hi thanks 4 da lovely update, superbly written! wonderful Maaneet moments! update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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AM READING UR JADED PRINCE TOO
ITS REALLY SO DIFFERENT AND SUPERB

FEEL ABD FOR MAAN PAST

BUT NOW HE SMILING WITH HER

LIKE THAT
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi Nilz...
I am half done with this Blind Dating FF and i simply loved it😃...

Loved maan and geet friendship and their fights for silly matters😆...

I request you to update the index for this story , so that it will be useful for all while reading the entire story..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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nice update...
waiting for next update..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Superb Update
I actually like the fact that Maan is been cautious when speaking to Geet
I like that now there is no argument instead both are now talking yes finding out
some facts but Geet still feels that Maan can't love her and he so confidently ask her
what should he do prove he that he is in love with her only
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wonderful story...
Loved Maan and geet character in this fiction...

I wonder how Geet became matured sometimes and childish sometimes...

Waiting for your update...

Continue soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome Update 😉
Nice to see Maan confessed ek tarah se declared his love for geet 😳
But she is always confused 😆
Waiting for more romance 😳 😳

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