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Posted: 9 years ago
Spunky Update
Vicky calls Maan to the night club and spikes his drink so that he can enjoy himself
well Maan feels its time that he also shows Sam that he is indeed interested and what better way
to start from now as he knows that she likes partying and after marriage he will have to take her
to parties .
Vicky tells Maan that Bhabhi is coming and so Maan thinks its Sam so let he show her his dancing skills
waiting now to see what will happen
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Posted: 9 years ago
Beautiful update
Lol...good job vicky
Aaj toh Maan gaya..😆
He will get to see the sherni side of his mishti i think..haha
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Posted: 9 years ago
hi awesome update! well written! Poor Maan! he has no choice as Sam loves 2 party! dadi teases Maan! Maan resolves 2 keep his promise! Vicky calls Maan! Mana goes to help Vicky! bt Vicky is at a club n called Geet there! Maan thinks is Sam! Maan drunk! he thinks he is imaging Geet! update soon
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Part - 67

As Maan keeps dancing with Shiela, a pair of jealous and angry eyes keep staring him...

Maan feels conscious about aomeone staring him and looks around to find who it is and finds a pair of beautiful eyes warning him to stay in his limits...

Maan ignores the warnings as he likes that jealous looks on his Mishty and wants to have more fun...he keeps dancing with his eyes fixed on Shiela so as to make his Mishty more jealous and wants to see how possessive she is...

But even without looking at her he can feel the intensity of her eyes that has changed from a warning signal to a danger signal, they have turned red in anger and could burn and turn him into ashes if they could...

He then realizes that the intensity is growing higher and higher and even feels the heat on his shoulders...as if someone has touched him with a burning torch...

He turns back and finds that it's only his Mishty's ever so delicate fingers that have become so strong that they could pierce his skin and tear him apart...

As soon as he looks into those beautiful eyes that are burning in rage he starts losing himself...

His Mishty looks at him as if to ask him..."aap yahan kya kar rahe ho?" , you are in the wrong place, let me show you your right place...

Maan becomes Mishty ka Maan...he aumatically withdraws his arms form shiela's shoulders and his feets automatically step back and start moving towards his Mishty...

His Mishty is very angry and she turns back and starts walking away...

Maan catches hold of her hand and stops her...

She turns back and stares him...Maan tries to manofy her with his killer looks...

But that's not working...he then pulls her and she swirls and carshes bang on his chest...

She is still angry and won't want to look into his eyes...

She keeps her head down but Maan lifts her chin and makes her look into his eyes...

As soon as their eyes meet all her defences fail and she is helpless but to follow their command, they have always been guiding her and leading her into this dreamland where there is love and love only... her anger vanishes and she is lost in his passions...

The next song plays...

Maan leads her and Geet follows him as they start dancing...for once Maan has also entered this so called dreamland and doesn't complain as far as he is with his Mishty...

He is not even bothered whether it is yet another dream of his or it's reality...

Geet on the otherhand is happy that her dreams have atlast come true, yes, it's Geet, she is Maan's Mishty, and now even he can't deny the fact that she is the one who has stolen his heart and blown him away with her innocence and her love, which may not be so real but it has all the power and purity to win over his heart that has been in search of true love and has just discovered it...

Both of them are lost in each other and they are just happy in their own world, far far away from reality...but it's hard to escaoe the reality checks...

Someone has just dropped by to see Geet...

It's none other than Sameera...Sam came back late from Sanjeevani as she had been working on some research papers along with Armaan...

Armaan wanted to take her for dinner and also drop her home as it was too late and she has been working for him, sam went out with Armaan and got home to find that Geet has gone out to some club alone...

She is sfarid that Geet might get into trouble again and she calls Maan, his mobile keeps ringing and he doesn't answer...

Sam then asks Armaan for help and he is here with her...

Sam is shocked to see Maan so lost in Geet and that passion and love in those eyes which she had been searching for all these days shinning bright infront of her and finally she found that but for the wrong person...

Sam still can't believe her eyes...but MK yahan? That too with Geet? and it also seems like he is drunk...what the hell is happening? MK drinking after so many years?

She has never seen him drinking after that day when he sweared not to drink...and as you know MSK, he is a man of words...he keeps his words whatever happens...

But now Sam's trust and faith in her MK and also his love has been shaken, maybe this not her MK, maybe this is actually Geet's Khrish...

For a second Sam tries to console herself saying that Maan is only acting, trying to be Khrish and helping Geet's problem...then the look in his eyes when he looks at Geet and then their lost state where they are so happy looking into one other...this is what Sam wished for, to be his love, to be loved by him like this...and what she got? Betrayal ?

Sam was so happy when Maan said yes for their marriage and found a ray of hope to win his love too, afterall they say sometimes it's lave first and marrrigae next and at times it's marriage first and love next, she thought it's love before marriage for herself and it would be love after marriage for MK...

She thought maybe MK is weak in romance, weak in emitions, weak in expressing himself...that's why he doesn't feel the same intense love for her like she feels for him...

But here he is showering all the love in his whole life on his love, yes, it's only Geet and never Sam...

Maan and Geet are unaware of the surroundngs and are still lost in themselves...even as the other pairs pause for a minute when the music stops and the next song is played Maneet don't stop gazing each other and they don't want to let go off the oter and they stick to each other the whole time...

It's like some magical spell cast on them that they remain united like this forever...and the party continues with our Heer and Ranjna continuing their love story...

Armaan who had just entered after parking the car finds Sam standing speechless with her eyes fixed in one direction...Armaan sees Maneet dancing there and is happy for himself...

What a wonderful sight? It's really romantic with our love Jodi lighting up the space with their romantic aura...and this idiotic Sam is so blind in loving MK that she fails to see the love of Armaan...sigh...only time will change everything...Armaan has to wait for his turn and it seems like it's not far away...he can see himself and Sam also dancing like Maneet in the near future...

Sam couldn't stand the sight and she turns back to leave...she finds Armaan and is all the more shocked, he has been trying to tell her about Maan all this time and she was not bothered to listen to him properly...

Armaan: Sam, do U still

Sam breaks down before even he could finish his sentence , she is hurt, very badly and he doesn't want to hurt her more...

Sam: will you drop me?

That's the only words she said and Armaan also respected her privacy...he also didn't utter a word and left immediately after dropping her without any further questions...

Sam is shattered beyond console and she can't easily accept the truth, the fact that Maan doesn't love her, ohh...that she knew already but the fact that Maan loves someone else, tha's news to her...she has just got the shock of her life and she needs to deal with it alone, in her own way...

Back at the club after the party is over and Maneet are done with their gazing sessions Geet finds out that Maan is under the influence of alcohol and is struggling to even walk on his own she is a little angry with him...

Geet: ye kya hai?

Maan: what?

Geet: mujhe ye sab pasand nahi hai, samjhe aap?

Maan: hare, mujhe laga tum bahut kush hogi

Geet: kush toh hoon, lekhin kisne kaha aapko peene ko?

Maan: tumme lagtha hai ki meinne piya hai?

Geet: aur kya?

Maan: ye nasha ki wajhe ye nahi hai

Maan acts as if drinking holding his hand towards his mouth...

Maan: ye nasha usse bhi bahut bhuri hai, aur isska naam jaanthi ho?

Geet: mein kuch nah jaanthi, ab ye Vicky kahan hai?

Maan: Vicky?

Geet: haan Vicky, mujhe yahan akhele chodke kahan gaya?

Maan: shayad tum bhool gayi ho ki tum akheli nahi ho yahan pe

Maan keeps on talking and talking...and he almost looses his balances and Geet could hardly hold him...ye Khrish toh bahut bari hai babaji...

Geet: akheli hothi toh achcha hotha, Vicky ke bache, tumme toh mein

Maan: phir se Vicky?

Maan is getting more and more jealous...

Maan keeps staring Geet...geet looks lost in her thoughts...

She is thinking what next? How will they get home?

Maan: Geet, tummra Khrish yahan hai, tum kissko yaad kar rahi ho?

Geet: hmm apne baap ko, aap phir se aaise kaise kar sakthe ho?

Maan: what? what did I do?

Geet: yaad nahi aapko? Uss din bhi aap aaise hi pike aaye the

Maan tries to remember but can't, all he knows is that he is now Khrish and not MSK, he can do whatever he wants...

Geet: aur aap ne wada bhi kiya tha ki aap phir kabhi nahi piyoge, aaj kya hua?

Ab toh ye Khrish ko chodke mere barein mein jaanne lagi hai kya? issko toh mere barein mein sab kuch patha hai?

Geet snatches the mobile from Maan...

Geet: phone dijiye mujhe

Maan: hare Geet geet

She has got the phone...

Maan: ye kya kar rahi ho? aur kissko phone kar rahi ho?

Geet: Vicky ko, ye uska hi plan tha na

Maan: what? tum yahan Vicky se milne aayi thi?

Maan is disapppinted...

Maan: kya baat hai Geet? aaj kal tum apne Khrish ko bhool hi gayi?

Geet calls Vicky...

Vicky: halo barbie

Pari stares him...

Vicky: sorry babhi

Pari: Vicky ke bachu, you have changed a lot after coming here

Vicky: haan babhi, bolo

Geet: Vicky, tum kahan ho?

Vicky: mein bahar hoon

Geet: kya? tum abhi ke abhi yahan aao, bahut gadbad ho gaya hai

Vicky: kyun babhi? Bro appko akhele chodke chale gaye? Ye Bro bhi na?

Geet: ye toh tum apne Bro se aake pooch

Vicky: what? aap Bro ko phone do

Geet: tummare Bro tumse baat karne ki halat mein nahi hai, woh toh gaye, fuse ho gaye

Vicky: OMG, I'm sorry barbie

That's it...once Pari excused but not again...

She snatches the mobile from Vicky...

Pari: halo barbie doll, ab mere boyfriend ko akhele chod do, I'm back

She cuts the call and switches off the mobile...

Geet tries to call back but...

Vicky: Pari, what's this? this is not fair

Pari: what's not fair? You cheat

Vicky: Pari no

She starts hitting him...

Vicky: Pari, just listen to me

Pari : Pari is angry, she won't listen to your lies

Vicky: Pari pari

Pari: just get in the car

Pari gets the keys from him and starts driving herself...

Vicky tries to explain...

Vicky: Pari you have mistaken, just stop, I have to go

Pari stares him...she raises the speed...

Vicky: Pari, look out, what are you doing?

Pari: just shut up, you stupid, another word and I'll kill you

She keeps speeding...

Vicky had to keep his mouth shut...

She keeps on drivng still her anger goes...

Meanwhile Maan has almost fainted and Geet calls a taxi and takes him to KM...

There Nakul is upset that Maan is drunk and he is afraid that dadi will not be happy to see Maan in this condition, he helps Geet to take Maan to the out house...

Maan is sick and starts puking...Geet helps him and Nakul gets him hot water...

Geet couldn't leave Maan in that condition and she decides to be with him...

Geet stays back with Maan that night to take care of him...

Part68

Edited by ghsp2fan - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
omg
krish back
poor sam heart broken

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Posted: 9 years ago
sam ka dil break tu hona hi tha
maan usse pyaar nihi karta tha
ab sam ko realize ho raha hai
maan usse kabbi pyaar nahi
kar paye ga bcuz he loves some one
and its geet
ab jab maan apne sense main aye
ga tu patta chale ga usse ne kiya kiya
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Posted: 9 years ago
feeling bad fr sam...

lovely update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...
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Posted: 9 years ago
hi thanks 4 da awesome update! wonderfully written! Maan is drunk n lost in Geet! Sam is there 2 check on Geet n wt she sees stuns her! she sees the love Maan has 4 Geet! Sam shattered! Armaan is with her! Geet will take care of Maan! update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
This Was An Awesome Just Fabulous Just Lovely Update
Maan still enjoying himself with Sheila dancing and feels like someone is staring at him
so he turns and sees Geet there but she has anger in her eyes and it seems now Maan
is truly enjoying as he realize that she is jealous but within few minutes Geet takes him away from
Sheila and instead both Maan and Geet start dancing and enjoying their lovely love filled
moments while Sam comes to the night club thinking about Geet's safety and sees and gets a shock seeing both Maan and Geet so in love so into the dance and Sam realizes that even though
Maan promised her marriage but he loves another woman and that is Geet .
when will Geet realize that Maan is only Maan and not Krish and now too that he is drunk
he calls himself Krish when will Geet be truly cured from this problem when will she start
accepting the reality or she always stay in her dream world
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Posted: 9 years ago


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