ERRONEOUSLY SEDUCED #10 Updated EPILOGUE on Pg 148 / 19-11-2015 - Page 56

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Posted: 9 years ago
Emotional update...

But, you stopped at right time

waiting for next

thanks for pm dear
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Posted: 9 years ago
gEET ALREADY TOOK A PROMISE FROM MAAN TO SAVE THE BABY
NOW MAAN DOESNT KNOW WHAT TO DO

WHOM WILL HE CHOOSE
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Posted: 9 years ago
Part 48 Outstandinggg update...
finally he realised he loved her...
Loved d way he insult Sam...
totally Enjoyed it...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Part 49 Awesome update...
Geet in critical condition...
Parth called Maan nd told about Geet..
Daadi slapped Maan ...he need that ...
now Doc give shock of life...to make decision about Geet nd Baby...
finally he understand about plant nd nightmear incident...
what is all about...
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Posted: 9 years ago
part 50 Comment already posted...
waitinggg 4 next part...
Continue Soon..
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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome updates ...
Loved it ... Sameera came back and Maan forgave her ... She creating mu between Maaneet ... Geet s nt accepting Maans proposal and Maan s getting angry on Geet ... Maan told Geet to move out of the house and hurted a lot ... Geet s broken completely ... Dadima a taking Geet to km and Geet s nt able come out of pain .. Geet s going under depression ... And for Maan his ego s everything .. Maan started to love Geet ... Geet s hospitalized ... Maan broke off the marriage ... Sameera s again got insult from Maan and Maan know about her ... Maan s broken by seeing Geet in hostipal ...
Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome updates ...
Loved it ... Sameera came back and Maan forgave her ... She creating mu between Maaneet ... Geet s nt accepting Maans proposal and Maan s getting angry on Geet ... Maan told Geet to move out of the house and hurted a lot ... Geet s broken completely ... Dadima a taking Geet to km and Geet s nt able come out of pain .. Geet s going under depression ... And for Maan his ego s everything .. Maan started to love Geet ... Geet s hospitalized ... Maan broke off the marriage ... Sameera s again got insult from Maan and Maan know about her ... Maan s broken by seeing Geet in hostipal ...
Continue soon
Waiting ...
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Posted: 9 years ago
superb yet painful part...
i guess due to geet promise maan chose the baby...
hope geet is also fine...
loved the update..
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Posted: 9 years ago


PART - 51




HOPE is bigger thing that Maan learn on that day. His eyes glancing at doc's serious and stern face which havoc him but still he had a hope.


"Doc..." dadima broke the unbearable silence.

"We save baby as you demand. But he is weak and pre matured so we put him in incubator for some time." Doc give the statua about the new arrival in khurana clan. But Maan's ears craving to listen about his Geet only. He was done everything to get his blood but today when he got the news of his son his happiness is meaningless for him.


"Doc how is she? Please tell me that she is fine." Maan pleads and he don't even realize this.


"Stay strong Mr. Khurana." Her tone is serious and pierced him into pieces.


"Doc please tell clearly." Dev scared and demand proper information, because Maan wasn't in a condition to ask any questions, the moment she advised him.


"She is unconscious due to heavy blood loss and other complications. We shift her into i.c.u. stay strong and pray." She left breaking their hopes.


Maan broke down and fall on his knees. His body stiffed and eyes turn stoned. Dev forced him to sat on chair but he gave no response from his side. "I kill her." He only mummerd these words which shattered all others to. Dadima came and embrace him to compose him but he sat stiff and repeating his words again and again.


"No you don't." Dadima herself don't know how to handle him. Because first ever he felt any emotional attachment for some one and if she died they lost him completely.


"Yes dadima I kill my Geet. She craving for my love but I only give her pain and humiliation and now she is punishing me. I kill her dadima. I kill her." Maan's condition scared all. Dev was younger to him, and when Dadima is unable to handle him, his heart squeezed badly in fear.


Maan glance at her with his burning eyes and only utter those painful words which roses her pain only. Dadima cuddled him firmly. "Nahi bete. Sambhaliye khud ko." She wiped off his tears. "Kuchh nahi hoga Geet ko. She loves you and baby so much. She would not do this to you." Dadima use every thing to calm him but every second his heart only sinking.


One whole day passed. Dadima and Dev send Meera home as kids were alone there. She was scared facing Parth, coz she knew he would ask first and same happens. Parth asked for his chachi. Meera was clueless about her answer. So she twist him and avoide giving the exact information. Parth is sensitive so before going to sleep he again do prayer for her life.


Sun dawn but Geet still laying lifeless and Maan staring her from outside like a statue. He didn't even blinked. Dadima and Dev went to see the baby but he was standing staring his love in a hope that any moment she might open her eyes. Suddenly he walked into doc cabin and demand for his baby.


"Doc I want my baby right now." He demands.


Doc gave a sharp glare to him. "Mr. Khurana he is in incubator. We can't remove him till he stables." She said strongly.

"Please doc. I want my baby right now. Please give him to me." Maan pleads.


"Look Mr. Khurana if you want to see him them I will take you near him. You can see him. But I will not allow his removal. He is weak." She glared him at his insane demand.


Dev came behind him and over heard. "Bro what are you doing here. Let's go." He tried to pull him out but not so easy.


"I will not go any where. I want my baby and no one can stop me." Now hos tone turned harder and rough. Dev feel his fumes. Maan turned to doc and damped his hands on the table before her. "I said I want my baby right now."


"But bro." Dev tried to put the condition of a baby in his mind but Maan glare him to and shut his mouth.


"Kuchh nahi hoga use." Maan hold his words firmly.

"Ok then sign these papers." Doc saw his devil attitude and bow down. But she assigned so they will not dragg later in any legal matter.


Doc went to the room where his baby, there love symbol sleeping in glass chamber with several pipes attached, same like his mumma.




Doc carefully removed all wires and draped him soft cotton clothe. She carefully handover him into his father's arms. "Mr. Khurana please think wisely. You riskinghis life plus you don't able to handle him without his mother." She cautioned him.


"I will take him to his mom. She will take care of him." It seems Maan lost his all senses. Dev and doc both panicked seeing his behavior. Maan kissed very gently and moved out, followed by Dev.



Maan moved into i.c.u ward where as Dev went to call Dadima. He informed her about his insane decision. Situation turned worst and she ran to compell Maan for baby's safety. But when she saw the view through window she stopped there only. Her eyes shed tears and courage which she showing for her family left her.


Maan held her flimsy hand and made it touch baby's tiny head. "Geet see our baby. You always carved to hols him in your arms na so now get up. He is waiting for you to hold him." Maan sat near her and pleads. "Geet I fullfilled my promise now its your turn. You want me to save our baby, I do it. Now get up, he needs you." Maan placed the baby next to her and fold her arm around him. His eyes shed tears and wet her limp hand. "Geet please don't leave us. Main nahi sambhal paunga ise. He never forgive me for snatching his mother from him. Geet I know I am sound so selfish but main to humesha se aisa tha na still you love me then why you turned your eyes now when we both need you most. Geet selfish main hu tum nahi. So stop behave like this." Maan kissed and pleaded. His fear gripping his hope gradually which made him loose his control over himself. All he want is her only.


Maan kissed her several times and pleads to come back. The effect of medicine over from the baby and he start crying like hell. Dadima saw and command Dev to called the doc quickly. She can't risk baby's life also. Dev rush to caled the doc and Dadima enter inside.


Baby crying like hell. "Geet please wake up. Your baby needs you. He is calling you. Mere liye na sahi but you have to answer his call for you." Baby cried more and Dev appeared with doc and nurses. Nurse came forward to hold him but Maan obstructing her. "Don't touch him. His mother only have a right to hold him." Maan widened his eyes and threatened her.

Dadima to insists but he act stubbornly. Seeing no other option she slapped him. "Have you gone mad? You want to kill him. Kya jwab denge Geet ko agar ise kuchh ho gaya to?" She bursts on him.


"Yes I am gone mad. Dadima you don't know. She will avoid anyone's call but not his. Trust me she will get up to hold him." Maan cried like a helpless kid before her and she cuddled him. Meantime nurse act fast and took baby out of the ward.



They again put him into incubator. Doc checked him properly.


"Doc how is he?" Dev's voice was chocked coming out with lot of push.


"Thanks to God that he is fine. Or else your insane brother leave no chance to kill him." Doc scolded him for Maan's actions.




Dadima to left him with Geet. In a hurry to save baby no one noticed the tears of Geet coming out hearing her baby's cries. Maan leaned his head near her and clenched his eyes.



sorry for updating late. I am not well guys. So sorry for mistakes also.


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Posted: 9 years ago
So maan choose baby as Geet say now geet condition is critical emotionally update

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