Zinda Hu Baas Tere Isqh Me .......PART 9... Page 32... 02.02.2016 - Page 5

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Is very difficult to read because it is very mysterious

now dont take to long to update

sound very interesting
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very interesting roles...

nice CS...

i want to read more
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Bapre baap !!! So many comments ? I will update the story as soon as possible ... But as a newbie IF does not allow me to sent the pm with like so I am waiting to cross 48th post . Then updates will be regular
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yayyy...i am great fan of ek boond ishq also ... wanna read storyline on arshi ...
and saw its banner also...am in love with it already plzzz😊
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Thanks everyone for your comments and likes toward my works . Now I am a Groupbie . So as per my promise my updates are going be be regular one
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PART 1



Tihar Central Jail ,

A man of his mid 20 seating in a corner with a pencil and sketch book in his hand . His face is covered with long hair . He is busy in his own work of curving a wooden house .

Suddenly two other prisoners start gossiping about him .

One of them - "Look at him.. Who says by looking at his face that he can do such a pathetic work ? He looks like as if he does not know anything !!"

Second Person - "Yes ! Who thought that the eldest son of Takhur saab can do some thing like that . Chi ! He RAPED AND MURDERED his own fiance . He must be hanged till death . "


Suddenly the person left his pencil and skatch book and looks at them . His one look is enough for shut them up . He then left the place with out saying a single word .


Laxminagar , New Delhi

" Khoosi , o khoosi uth ja ! Nasta taiya ho gaya . Uth ja meri baccha tujhe toh apni jilabi stall me vi jana hai .( Khushi ... Hey Khushi wake up! Breakfast is ready . Wake up my baby you need to go to your "jilabi stall" ) " A mid fourty woman calls a girl of early 20 who is sleeping peacefully in her bed .

Suddenly the girl wake up and hugs the woman and says in sleepy tone " Uff amma tujhe kinti bar bolungi baccha nahi bacchi "

Her mother smiles and hug her and replied " Ok meri bacchi ab uth ja mai tere liye teri pasand ki adrakwali chaye banaya . Jaldi se pee le and dukan ke like nikal ja " ( Ok! My girl ! Now wake up . I made your fevourite "ADRAKWALI " tea for you . Drink it fast and go to your shop ) " .

She left her bed and went to bathroom .

After sometime she enters their drawing room and takes her favourite adrakwali chaye . Suddenly a voice calls her from behind

" Aaa faltu aj mei collage ki fees bharne ki last date hai . Tujhe yaad hai na ? " ( Ay Faltu today is the last day to pay my collage fees . Do you remember na ? ) " Her little brother ( Not so little) asks her ,

" Are Rohan tu ghabra maat . Mai hu na.. Mai sab kuch samal lungi . ( Are don't worry Rohan . I am here na ! I will do everything) " She replied with her dazzing smile .

"Ha mai janti hu tu hai . Lakin tu kab tak haum sob ki bojh apni ... ( Yes I know that . But for how you will do that for all of us ...)" He is cut by her sister .

"Tu yea sab math soch . Jake apni padai pe dhyan de .( You don't need to think about all these . Go and do your study ) " By saying this she left her house .

Kinnar Mandir , Old Delhi Bazar

A gang of Kinnars are busy in their daily dancing practice . Today is their festival day . Suddenly a black car stop in front of the mandir and one kinnar dresses like a queen peeps through the car door . Suddenly all kinnars start to throw flowers in her direction and chants " Kalavati didisaab ki jay ho "
She the seats in her chair and orders others to start their dances .

Raizada Mansion , New Delhi

A man of early 50 is busy in her phone with some one.
"No no I don't want to listen anything . I am know that my beta is innocent and I must take him out of jail . For that I can do anything . And anything means anything. "by saying this he keeps his phone and look very worried .

Suddenly a woman of her mid 40 enters the room and say in a high volume " You again try to contact Mr. Roy about Arnav's bail . How many times I say you that I do not want that CRIMINAL in my home . Do you ever thing if Ashish bhaisaab comes to know that you again trying for your CRIMINAL son 's bail how will he reacted ? From the vary first day he did not liked Anrav and now for his our family reputation is in sake . he never allows him in this house again . "

The person answers in a clam tone " Ratna this is my house and Arnav is my son. He is above any damm reputation for me . And I know that he is innocent and one day whole world came to know it . Aur rahe baat bahisaab ki unke mai samal lungi .( And about brother! I will manage him)" By saying this he lefts the place with out noticing that his wife's face lose her color by listening his words .

As soon as the man left the room a boy of early 20 enters the room and says in a angry tone " Mon again dad going for that Arnav's bail ?? I donn't understand why dad always runs behind him . As if I does not exist for him . You know na mom if Arnav Gets bail then ... "

But he is cuts by Ratna ." Don't worry akash . Noting is going to happen ."

"Ok mom . I am going now . Aj friends ki sath ek party hai . Mai aj raat ghar bapas nahi ayunge. App ipni irritating BAHU ko samal lena !! ( Today I have a party with my friend .I will not come back home today night . You just manage your that irritating daughter-in-law ) " by saying this he lefts the room leaving a thoughtful Ratna behind .

Chatpata Jilebi Stall , Old Delhi

Khushi is just going to open her stall suddenly a group of rowdies come of sntch the key from her hand and demand their "hafta "

"Aye lafange mera key mujhe bapas kar de . Nahi toh tera ekdin ki meri .( Aye Idiots give my keys back to me . If not then I will show you what can I do ) " by saying that she starts to chase the boys . Suddenly the boy throws the key in a old temple and says "Aab ja kinnar se apni key mang lena .( Now go and collect your keys from Kinnar)"By saying that he left the place .

" Hei devimaiya !! Aab mai kya karu ?? Kinnar ki pass meri key hai lekin mujhe toh kinnaro se bahut dar lagti !! Kya karu mai ? " ( Oh! God . What will I don now ? Kinnars have my keys now but I am very afraid of Kinnars . NOW what ? ) " Khushi as usual starts her talk with her devimaiya .

Suddenly she remembers that it is the last day to pay her brother's fees and she then decides to enter kinnar mandir .

She says to her self " Nahi Khushi bacchu tuje uha janai hoga . Nahi toh tu apni bhai ki fees nahi bhar payengi ( No Khushi baby you need to go there . If you do not go there then you can not able to pay your brother's fees ) " and then she enters the Mandir.

Suddenly she bangs with someone . And everyone stops in her stops . As for them iit is very shocking that a girl from outside dare to enter their house without their concern . To them it is a great sin .

The person with whom Khushi banged catchs her by her hand and jerks her up and says in an angry tone " Mandir me nahi ana chaiye tha ! Now no one going to save you from me . I must punish you. Kalavati now going to punish you ."

Yes the person is none other that kinnar queen Kalavati .

Suddenly Khushi's eyes fall on a plate full of red colour . She suddenly grab the plate and throw the colour in Kalavati's eyes and the collect her key and left the place .

Behind an angry Kalavati vows to punish her. And in her judgement the only meaning of punishment is "Death ---- a slow and painfull death !!!"
I KNOW THE UPDATE IS SHORT . BUT WHAT TO DO ? I am very busy with our Dugra Ppuja ! So sorry for it .

P.S. BUDDY ME FOR P.M.

Edited by Jayeeta143 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Yippee... Mou Di I'm the first one to comment .. The story line is beautiful... Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Superb update
Loved it
Well written
Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Shreyapari

Yippee... Mou Di I'm the first one to comment .. The story line is beautiful... Continue soon


My gudia?? Thanks baby

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