Alzia SS 21 century 'Mere khwabon ka Malik' part 8 pg 11

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Character introduction

Razia Nasir Ahmed; a simple girl with high moral values, B.A second year student

Ikhtiyar Mirza; a spoiled brat (details later)

Nasir Ahmed; Razia's father, he is a librarian raising his two kids with difficulty

Yasir; Razia's younger brother

Shazia; Razia's maternal cousin

Begum Turakshanda Mirza; (turkan) Ikhtiyar's mom, member of the national assembly , a very shrewd poltician and a very strong mother

Feroz; (ruknu) Mirza's younger brother

Yaqut; Razia's neighbour and teacher

Zaroon; Ikhtiyar's friend

Ittefaq; ikhtiyar's friend (atigin)

Razia's mother died soon after Yasir was born, Ikhtiyar's dad died too.

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Jaldi update karo.Intezaar hai humein!!!😳
Yeh bhi AFSAW Hai!!!👏
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Originally posted by: Astoria

Jaldi update karo.Intezaar hai humein!!!😳

Yeh bhi AFSAW Hai!!!👏

😃 sure sure
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Turkan Mirza ki mommm!?? Kyun kyun kyun!
Ruknu aur Mirza bhai bhai! Kitni barr wish kiya show mein dono ek ho jayein aur Yakut ki band baaja baraat shuru.. 😆
Continue soon!
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Originally posted by: ..radiance...

Turkan Mirza ki mommm!?? Kyun kyun kyun!
Ruknu aur Mirza bhai bhai! Kitni barr wish kiya show mein dono ek ho jayein aur Yakut ki band baaja baraat shuru.. 😆
Continue soon!

Yr i hate ruksar aunty isiliye turkan is his mommy😃
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Originally posted by: princess200

Kyaa baat hai bhai🥳

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It was a fresh friday morning, the thick grey clouds were covering the sky of Delhi, it was drizzling and the atmosphere looked beautiful. Razia Nasir Ahmed walked towards the dargah with her cousin sister Shazia at 9;00 am, the roads were wet and muddy and they didn't have an umbrella with them, Razia wore a black simple dress and covered her head with the dupatta.

Shazia; Razia barish hogai to?

Razia; to kya aapi? aapko pta hai na ami har jumme ko dargah aati thi aur aaj to unki barsi he, hum har jumme pe to aate nhi aaj to hamen mat rokiye

Shazia; hum rok nahi rhe Razia..lekin

Razia; aapi bas hum jaldi se jayenge chaadar chada k forun wapas ajayenge.

They reached the dargah and stopped at a shop to buy the long cloth, as Razia was selecting the cloth, she felt a pair of eyes staring at her. She got conscious, she didn't move her head and just tried to peek with her eyes. And she saw those eyes, a pair of beautiful green gray eyes stared at her, the eyes were big and the most beautiful eyes she had ever seen, but she was not interested.

Razia; aapi, wo wahan...koi hamen ghoor rha he

Shazia; RAzia tumhen to pta he na, yahan kese kese log aate hen, dhyan mat do aur chalo

They walked away and went inside the dargah, the ladies portion was separate so she sighed in relief.

After a while when they returned, Razia saw those eyes again, and this time so close, looking directly into hers, she almost bumped into him. She started trembling, he scanned her from top to bottom and smiled, Razia looked at him too but just his face, not just his eyes but his features were gorgeous too, a slim face with a beautiful jawline covered with a stubble, long slim nose, and beautiful wavy brown hair that were completely wet due to the constant drizzle. He moved his hand towards her, Razia jumped back, he had a small bouqet in his hand. He wore a plain black pathani with a black muslim cap.

"aapse haseen na sahi pr aapko tohfa dene k laiq phool zarur hen ye mohtarma" he said in a flirty voice

Shazia; badtameez, hat pare ghar me maa behen nhi tumhare

she pulled RAzia away, but he ddin't give up, he followed them

"arre naam to btati jao mohtarma, haseena, jameela, kya kahen tumhen" he called from behind

Shazia; begairat inhe aur koi kaam nhi hta.

Suddenly he came infront of her and bumped into her, she lost balance and was about to fall, he caught her and she fell in his arms, he caught her from her waist supporting her weight, and suddenly a garland fell on them, covering them completely.

Razia; dikhai nahi deta aapko?

"waqai..abhi to hamen aapke siwa kuch dikhai nhi de rha" he replied, he was staring at her blankly.

Shazia came to them, removed the garland and pulled Razia.

Shazia; door raho smjhe wrna joote se marenge tumhen

Shazia was pulling Razia away, but he caught her from the other hand, and walked towards Shazia.

"dekho khatoon, jab humen kuch pasand ata he na to use chura lete hen hum, aapki choti si chappal se humen dar nhi lagta" he said with a smirk

Razia; dekhiye aapko Allah ka waasta humara peecha chodiye

Razia begged, he left her hand instantly.

"aap yun minaten na kijiye, aap hamen hukum bhi deti to hum aapko jaane dete mohtarma" his voice was flirty his eyes fixed on her face.

Razia looked down

Shazia; chalo Razia

they both walked away.

"Razia" he said sighing in relief. Two guys came to him. One short heighted and plum, the other tall and smart. The plum one was named Zaroon, the smart one was Ittefaq

Zaroon; kya miyan, kyun shareef ladki ko ched rhe the tum

"hum ched nhi rahe the, Ikhityar Mirza ki fitrat me chedna nhi aata miyan" he replied in anger

Ittefaq; to kya kr rhe the?

Ikhtiyar; arre humen pta nhi kya hogya use dekh k, itni khoobsoorat, itni paak, itni roohani ankhen, esi ladki to kabhi hamare khwabon me bhi nhi aayi miyan. Zaroon pta kro ye kon hai kahan rehti he kya krti he, hamen iske baare me sb kuch janna he

Zaroon; kyun miyan? pehli mulaqaat me dil haar bethe kya?

Ikhtiyar; hamara dil ab hamara kahan rha miyan, ye to uska he, jise dekh k ye dhadakta he.

Razia went back to her house and sat down, she was panting.

Shazia; pareshan mat ho Razia ese lafunge to milte rehte hen bhool jao

RAzia; aapi lekin dargah jesi paak jagah pr bhi, sharam kyun nhi aati logon ko

Shazia; chodo na, tum aram kro

Razia; humen library jana he dopeher ko, abu k liye khana le kr aur kuch kitaben bhi leni hen

Shazia; theek he mai chalti hun

RAzia; jee aapi

Razia went to her room to change, and as she opened her cupboard, something that she saw made her smile and forget her encounter with him. She picked up the paper with the drawing that she made, that made her smile, and lay down on the bed.

Razia; kitne fazool log miljate hen na, hamen aap kab milenge MAlik?

she smiled and blushed closing her eyes.

Shazia had forgotten something so she returned, and not being able to find it she came to ask RAzia for help only to find her laying with her wet clothes on the bed with her drawing

Shazia; uff Razia...chodo ise, khoon na jalao hamara, sach me tumhari is bewaqqofiyon k aage na hum sochte hen wo dargah wala lafunga hi acha tha

RAzia; aapi?! hamare Malik ko kisi dargah k gunde se mat jodiye, kahan ye kahan wo

Shazia; Razia tum pagal ho kya?

Razia; pagalpana kesa aapi? kisi ko ranjha pasand hta he kisi ko majnu, kisi ko shah jahan, to kisi ko DDLJ ka Shahrukh, bas hamari pasand thodi mukhtalif he

Shazia; mukhtalif? tumhari pasand bilkul atrangi he Razia...majnu ranjha shahrukh ko sb jaante hen unki kahaniyan mashoor hen pr

she snatched her drawing and pointed at it

Shazia; isko koi nhi jaanta, iski tasveeren bhi tum apne khayalon se bnati ho

RAzia; aapi!! jo bhi ho, is dunya main, MAlik Ikhityar-ud-din Altunia jesa ashiq na tha na hai aur na hi kabhi hoga.

she took her drawing back and stared at it smiling.
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Hmmm,that dargah waala part.I don't know but I felt a divine and blissful.I should feel it as it's a holy place but the thing is that when Alzia first meet in a dargah,it gives a divine and magical touch to their pure love for each other.It makes it heavenly.
Let's come to Razia and Ikhtiar's first meeting.Hmmm,he was staring at her.😳 And she could feel it too.Usually,when a guy stares at a girl,it is considered weird and inappropriate.But there was nothing lewd in the manner in which Ikhtiar stared at Razia.I tried to imagine myself in Razia's place and when I imagined Ikhtiar's stare,it seemed so lovely and filled with purity❤️ Ah!! Sonu,meri jaan,Loved the way you described it👏


Chahe koi bhi century kyun na aajaye,Altunia ki fitrat badalne waali nahin hai😆 Flirt kahin ka😆
But I loved it again when he let go of her hand when she requested him too😳

Shazia will remain a kmh forever🤢

And Razia has a crush on Malik Ikhtiaruddin Altunia!!!!!!😳😳😳 Razia,dear,woh toh humesha se aapke thay,aapke hain aur aapke hi rahenge😳

So,it's a reincarnation story too??😉

Anyway,AFSAW,AFSAW and AFSAW👏👏👏
Dil khush kardiya Sonu🤗🤗
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Originally posted by: Astoria

Hmmm,that dargah waala part.I don't know but I felt a divine and blissful.I should feel it as it's a holy place but the thing is that when Alzia first meet in a dargah,it gives a divine and magical touch to their pure love for each other.It makes it heavenly.

Let's come to Razia and Ikhtiar's first meeting.Hmmm,he was staring at her.😳 And she could feel it too.Usually,when a guy stares at a girl,it is considered weird and inappropriate.But there was nothing lewd in the manner in which Ikhtiar stared at Razia.I tried to imagine myself in Razia's place and when I imagined Ikhtiar's stare,it seemed so lovely and filled with purity❤️ Ah!! Sonu,meri jaan,Loved the way you described it👏


Chahe koi bhi century kyun na aajaye,Altunia ki fitrat badalne waali nahin hai😆 Flirt kahin ka😆
But I loved it again when he let go of her hand when she requested him too😳

Shazia will remain a kmh forever🤢

And Razia has a crush on Malik Ikhtiaruddin Altunia!!!!!!😳😳😳 Razia,dear,woh toh humesha se aapke thay,aapke hain aur aapke hi rahenge😳

So,it's a reincarnation story too??😉

Anyway,AFSAW,AFSAW and AFSAW👏👏👏
Dil khush kardiya Sonu🤗🤗


Shazia isn't a kmh here😛 she would play a cupid too
and no its not a reincarnation story 😳 Razia just has a crush on Malik Altunia 😉
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Shazia isn't a kmh here😛 she would play a cupid too
and no its not a reincarnation story 😳 Razia just has a crush on Malik Altunia 😉

It's good for her to be a cupid for change😆
And I can understand Razia.Malik Altunia cheez hi aisi hai😳

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