Ishra os -dagaa nahi karenge sanam

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Hi guys ,I am back but not with any new ss but with an os on current track.I don't want to write anything on present yhm but can't control myself ,so here it is.

The scene starts with Raman telling everyone about this surrogacy and about shagun stay with them since she is carrying ishra baby. Ishita was shattered listening this but said nothing and went to her room.Raman goes behind her and said-i know u must be feeling cheated but its for ur good only.now we will have our own child with our blood and flesh ,noone will call u infertile.

Ishita- I know u do this for me but u can't forget that u broke my trust.

Raman-ohho ishita can't u see I have done this for u only.for ur happiness. U should be happy.

Ishita-if u think I should feel happy about this betrayal of urs then I am happy.u can keep shagun in this house.Raman hugged her and thanked her.

Shagun start staying with them.nobody tell her anything since ishita had instructed them to keep quiet.Raman was very much happy in his world ignoring ishita.

One day.

Ishita-raman I have to go to London for a medical conference. Do u wanna join.

Raman -try to understand ishita,I can't leave shagun alone.


Shagun smirked listening to him and thought ,soon Raman will be mine.

Ishita- OK then I am going to London alone,take care of ruhi and adi.

Shagun-i will take care of them.thinking u r making a big mistake ishita leaving ur family on me.I will make them mine.

Ishita goes to London for a week.shagun tried alot to come near Raman but he was stick to take care of her due to ishra baby.adi and ruhi were also in their own world, don't give much importance to shagun.everyone is least interested in her.Raman was missing ishita like hell but can't go leaving shagun alone.
Ishita came back after a week.Raman goes to receive her ,he was very happy to see her,he hugged her but ishita was too cold towards him.she goes to their house and hugged everyone warmly.Raman was observing a change in her behaviour. But couldn't make out what's the problem.

Its been a month since she came back from London.ishita had maintained a distance from Raman but Raman was thinking as soon as the baby will come everything will be sort out.

One day when Raman was going to office,ishita collapsed in kitchen.everyone was hell worried.they called the doctor.

Doctor-she is pregnant.

Everyone was very happy.shagun thought he'd plan is failed.raman hugged her warmly but she don't hug him back.

Raman broke the hug and said- what happened.

Ishita-i can't betray u like u did .its not ur child but subbu's child.

Raman was shocked and so was all.

Raman-what do u mean.

Ishita- I went to London not for any conference but because subbu called me.vandu akka told him about my miscarriage. He called me and said if I can conceive one time ,I can conceive another time too.he knows a big gynecologist there.I went there and she checked me.she wanna do a test on me for my fertility. Its like an artificial insemination. She said she wants ur sperms as specimen but since u were not there,she used subbu's telling that its just a test and in 99%cases nobody conceive in first attempt.but I am lucky that I conceived in first attempt only.now I have to inform subbu that he is going to be a father again.

Raman was shocked beyond words to say anything.

Raman fumbled-how how can u do this to me.I am ur husband. U can become mother of my child only.

Ishita-really if u can became father of of our child from shogun's womb then why not I.

Raman-but I did this for our good.

Ishita-i had also gone to London for our good.if u have accompanied me then it would be ur child.

Raman look at toshi ji-maa tell something to her .she cheated me.

Toshi ji-how I can tell her something when I can't tell u anything.

Madhu-my ishu didn't betrayed u .u urself didn't go with her.its ur fault.

Raman- but she is my wife.listen Ishita u r not going to give birth to this child. U have to abort this child.

Madhu-why she will abort her child.always everyone taunt her as infertile. Now when she is pregnant u want her to abort the child.

Raman-but its not mine.I will not accept him.

U don't have to accept him.its my child. They hear a voice.Raman turned to find subbu standing on the door.

Raman-how dare u enter this house. Just get lost.

Subbu ignore him and goes to ishu and said,finally u r pregnant. I am so happy for u .he hugged ishita.

Raman blood boil at the sight.

Raman- leave her,she is my wife.

Subbu-but going to be mother of my child.

Raman-ishita just think what adi-ruhi will think.

Ishita-had u thought before making shagun surrogate mother for ur child.

Raman-its not only mine but our child ishita.

Ishita-our child ,u must be joking Raman.a thing belongs to two people when both have agreed on it.have u asked me before doing this surrogacy.no,u stole a part of me like a theif and taken my signature as a fraud.this child belongs to u only.

Raman-but I did this for ur happiness only.

Ishita- yes and I am happy,because I am bearing a life within me.I am not an infertile woman anymore.I am pregnant Mr Raman Kumar bhalla.


Subbu-if Raman don't want u here.come I will take u to my house.

Raman-ishita u can't go ,how adi ruhi will live without u.

Adi-we will papa.if u will give her stress like this.it will be harmful for her child.ishimaa u go with subbu uncle.we will come to meet u when we want.

Ishita pecked adiru and hugged her.she started packing her bag.

Shagun to raman-enough of this drama Raman,I am very tired.take me to my room.

Raman-adi take shagun mamma to her room.all smiled secretly at this as their plan started working.adi take shagun to her room.she settled on her bed frustrated.

In ishra room,ishita was packing her clothes.Raman goes to her and said- ishita u love me naa how can u go to subbu house leaving me alone.

Ishita- yes Raman I love u.but u only make me realise that love is not enough for living.having a child is utmost important.

Raman-but its not my child ishita.

Ishita-so what Raman.its my ,u only want that nobody call me infertile. Now II got a chance to prove that I am not infertile and u want me to abort this child.does ur love is so shallow.

Raman-but how can agree for this child ishita after all subbu is ur ex.

Ishita-shagun is also ur ex Raman.but I agreed then why not u.

Raman was quite because he don't have any answer for it.he can't be happy seeing subbu's child in ishita's womb even if its a mistake.now he realised how ishita should have felt seeing his child in shogun's womb even if it is for surrogacy.

Ishita was walking outside ,Raman was pleading please don't go.but she was adamant.

Toshi ji-ishita I was saying ,u can stay here only and subbu will live in iyers residence,till the child is born.is it OK.

Ishita nodded.

Subbu settled in iyers house.next morning subbu brought white lilies for ishita.

Subbu-this is for u ishita .

Ishita took the flowers and smiled- u still remember my choice.Raman remember how he gifted orchids to shagun.be felt ashamed of his acts.

Raman-ishita I am going to office.do u want anything.

Shagun-i wanna eat sitaphal ice cream.

Ishita -I don't want anything.

Whole day he couldn't concentrate on his work.he goes to home early taking sitaphal ice cream for ishita thinking how she want it last time.he entered in the house ,shagun came and took the ice cream from him.he was searching for her .he couldn't find her and goes to iyer and saw subbu was feeding her,vada sambhar.

Ishita- u still remember my choice.

Subbu-i am not doing for u but for my baby.its so good how life have given u a second chance.u have a family now u r going to be a mother too.only if I wasn't a fool u would be with me.this baby would be out of our love .

Ishita-its our destiny subbu..

Raman saw her and thought how she can talk with subbu with so much ease.then he remember how he talk with shagun these days.his guilt increased manifolds.he goes from there with unshed tears in his eyes.

Ishita saw him going from there crying.she cried bitterly.

Ishita-i can't do it anymore subbu.I can't see him in tears.

Subbu-some few days more ishu.he will understand his mistake and ur worth.but I must say ur husband is a fool.he believe that artificial insemination story.

Ishita-like manoj make him believe that this child is ours.I am so grateful to u subbu.u r doing this much for me.

Subbu-because we r friends.and this is like a repentance for my mistake.

Next part is below.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Next day Raman was getting ready when he saw ishita giggling with subbu.his anger knows no boundary.he goes to ishita and shouted-dont u think u spend all ur time with him.have u forget u have two kids.
Ishita-we have two kids even that time when u were spending ur all day with shagun.

Raman-because she is pregnant with our child ishita.

Ishita-i am also pregnant with subbu's child.

Raman fell on the couch like a lifeless man.

Subbu kissed her forehead and said-ramam don't deserve u ishu.come with me.I always loved u.if u can forgive Raman numerous times then why not me.u r going to be mother of my child.come with me.

Ishita hold his hand and start walking.

Raman-please don't leave me ishita.at least think of our kids adiru.

Adiru-we r also coming with u ishi maa.

Raman shouted -no Ishita please don't leave me alone.I will die without u .please ishita I am sorry.

Raman wake up and realised its a nightmare.ishita was sitting beside her.she was hell worried because Raman has high fever.

He hugged ishita tight and said- I am so sorry ishita.please don't leave me ever.I will die without u.If u want u can keep ur baby.it will be our baby but please don't leave me ever.

Ishita hugged him back.

Subbu-its not needed.

Raman broke the hug and asked why.

Subbu-because ishu is not pregnant .its just a plan to make u understand that a child is for love.love can't be for child.I once lost her because of my foolishness. U don't do it.she is just too precious.

Raman hugged her tightly.

Raman-i am so sorry ishita.

Shagun comes to their room and said-what do u mean Raman.u don't want this baby anymore.

Raman-sorry shagun its my fault but I want only my love,my Ishita. If u want u can keep this baby ,I will pay ur maintainance.


Ishita-its not needed Raman because its not our child but her and manoj child .and they do it because shagun wants to take revenge from us.

Adi-yes papa.and showed him the video footage where shagun is laughing at Raman's foolishness and their successful plan.

Raman slapped her and simmi kicked her out.abhishek arrest shanoj for fraud.

In ishra room.

Raman hugged her tight and cried bitterly.

Raman-i am so sorry ishu.I was behaving like a jerk.

Ishita- sorry,I also make u cry.

Raman-but not more than me.

Ishita-then promise me u will not hide anything from me in future.

Raman-i promise, dagaa nahi karenge sanam(won't betray u)

Dil de diya hai jaan tumhe denge
Dagaa nahi karenge sanam
Rab ki kasam yaara rab ki kasam

Mere ashq kah rahe meri kahaani
In he samjho naa tum sirf paani
Aata nahi yakeen kya se kya ho gaya
Kis tarah main tumse bewafa ho gaya
Insaaf kar do
Mujhe maaf kar do
Itna hi kar do karam
Rab di kasam yaara rab di kasam.

Ishita-raman even if that child would be of our blood then also its wasn't ours because parents should feel love for their child .like we feel for adi and ruhi.they r our child even if its ur and shagun's blood.relationship r made of love and affection not of genes and DNA.

Raman- now I understood my fault ishita.I love u and want u only.don't want any child to prove our love for each other.

Adiru-and what about us.

Ishra called them and hugged them tight.now they r again a happy family.


That's all.hope u people will like it.all joota ,chappals are accepted.

Love
Raksha
Edited by cutieruhi - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Superb .that was indeed a perfect plan and end for this crap track.we are thankful to you for this lovely and sensible os.I just want that CVs should read it once and realise that where they are lacking behind.a perfect ans for all raman deeds .nice you should write more of these.
Edited by Divanru - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Res
Unres 😳
It was super duper diii😆
Chalo yeh subbu kise kam tho aya 😆
But sometimes i feel ki subbu and raman mai there is only one difference 😕
Subbu is frank directely bol diya ki shadi is only for child raman is some how doing it indirectely althow not intentionally
Any was i love the ending 😳
It was superb



Ps - new story hai kyax😳
Edited by 12Singmeenu - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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unres.
It was awesome & unbelievably penned OS Rakshu..
The Thought itself is brilliant..
U have written what we all expect from Cvs..
Subbu planning ws good...
Raman's mistakes can't be rectified better..
The Mental torture he had is what makes the story an emotional one..
I wish Cvs see this & see how awesome writers we have in this forum..
U have jumped to a different level in writing Sister😊
Stay good & write more..
Edited by kaa1202 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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nice os
nice song
nice choice
loved it
raman was behaving like a ...
(don't wanna tell him anything)
how could they behave like that
they keep shagun in their house
i totally love london scene
ishu is preggy with subbus child
but i thought she is really pregnant (with ramans child)
i love jhallu kumar way too much yaar
ending was very nice
keep always writing like this and entertain us with more ur talent
love u di
Edited by kimty1230 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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awesome os
raman taste his own medicine😆
Edited by mamtasingla - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Too good yaar...yhm cvs...kuch sikho...learn something from our forum writers...if u wud have been the cv...yhm shayad wud not have lost its charm...brilliant dear!!!!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Loved d story d way all d family members made him realise his mistake is too gud... Subbu ko itna a ha insaan kaisa banaya yaar tumne??? Bt it was worth Raman ko aise jalte hue aur guilt ridden dekhke Bahut acha laga serial mein toh aisa kuch nahi dikayenge atleast we came to see dat in dis story loved it totally Shagun kabhi nahi Sudar sakti even adi Ruhi are good
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Your imagination has given me kind of heart attack. I was visualizing what it would have been with characters. I literally visualized it. Awesome.

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