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Posted: 9 years ago
Awsome ...brilliant ...ur writing is amazing...update the next parts soon...😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
enjoy ur vacations
waiting come back soon

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Posted: 9 years ago
Ok i told u on pg 41 n now lets continue...
Lets strt grm chrctr sketch... really awesm selection.. dey match perfectly tgthr..
Jack..flirt... max..reserved n hs gf... tiger... angry young man.. i lyked all the three..
Now m more excited fr fab 5 to b bck...
Nd also abt d mystery n evrythng...
Nd tiger y is he so rude.. jst lyk manik... angry angry... or we can say cocunut...heheheee...

Nd den our cutest nandu cums... omg she is so nautnki.. mera boyfriend kho gya h .. hahahaaa really?? Sso cuteee... nd jack all tym flirt... manik ne dekh lia to kya hoga... hahaaa.. n max ws cool.. n den nandu fell in pool hawww... nd tiger saved her.. i lykd it... he is nt dt bad.. he assured her n manik.. excited fr d facing thing... wat will hppn nxt? Fight? Friends will b bck? Hope nandu handle dem n get dm tgthr... wud love to see thm tgthr hving fun n ol...

Den cuks my fav prt... our manan romance... so beautiful momnt fr dm... song ws perfct.. strtd frm a towel n dey landed on ahem ahem... but manik's wrds..stole away my heart again.. sch a true gentlmn.. he respects her a lot n love her.. care fr her.. n wat not... yr hw i mean hw cn u put sch beautiful scenes n write so well.. no nt only well its amazinggg... u r my bestest... sch me m ur fan yrrr... nd den nandu cutely says marry me den... aww..sch a pure soul.. luvd der innocnt n pure confessions... n der true love is so adorable.. hayyeee nazar na lageee...

Update soon plzzz... m so excitd fr d nxt track... luving manan... thnks fr d pm bt i ws late in seeing dm.. sholly bt u knw d reasn na m nt so well...so... once i'l b bck on my health i'l cmnt pccaa a lmbaaa n on time... ok till dn enjoy ur vaccatn.. bck soon... keep smiling... spread love... nd ya u knw 'l b waitinnnggg...
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Posted: 9 years ago
I read all ur chapters in one go n I really liked it pls. Do pm me pls...
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Posted: 9 years ago
No problem dear...
We will wait...
Enjoy yur vacations...😊

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Posted: 9 years ago
I read al chp in one go n I truly lyked 4rm the bottom of my heart pls. Do pm me next tym...
Update soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
AWESOME CHAP👏😉 ...THIS IS THE FIRST TIMEIAM COMMENTING AND ALL BECAUSEOF UR DHAMKI😆
I WAS NOT A MEMBER SO COULD NOT COMMENT BUT FROM NOW ON I WILL ALWAYS COMMENT LAMBA 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago

Chapter 12 A

Manik's POV..

"Baby please..! Aik bari ankhain kholo..! Look at me..!"I pleaded again emotionally and suddenly I felt a pat on my shoulder.


"Dar gai hai bohat ziada..! She will be fine..!"The guy who saved Nandini said and I gasped on guessing the voice..! His voice was still the same..! He was still the same..! The warmth of his hand was still the same..! HE WAS TIGER...! MY BEST BUDDY..! I look at him and he was looking away..! Then I noticed my other two buddies Max and Jack..! After 10 long long years..! How much I didn't wanted to face them..! And finally they were here..! Suddenly Nandini's sneeze broke my trance and I remembered that she was all drenched. Max came running with a towel..! He was still the same..! The caring one..!

"Here..! Use this..!"He said softly kneeling in front of us and gave me the towel..! I look at him angrily and I threw the towel away..


"I don't need losers help..!"I said coldly and Tiger walked away after picking up his guitar..! Max picked up the towel again and came towards me..!


"Manik..! She needs it..!"He again tried but I was in no mood..!


"I said na..! I don't need your help..! Apni girlfriend ka khyaal kesy rkhna hai I know..!"I said coldly and after snuggling Nandini more close to my chest I walked towards our room..! Leaving a expression less Tiger, a worried Max and careless Jack alone.


"Manik..! Manik..!"Nandini was still constantly whispering my name.


"Shhh..! Everything will be ok..! I am here baby..!"I shushed her as I placed her on the bed..! She was wet..! "Baby? Get up and change..!"I tried but she was not even opening her eyes..! I bit my lower lip and decided. I pull the curtains over the window turned off all the lights and picked up a pajama shirt from Nandini's luggage and I closed my eyes. Then I carefully changed her dress staying my limits of course..! Then I called the receptionist to send a doctor and covered Nandini with the blanket..! I kissed her forehead numerous time as now it was burning..! She had fever..! I was trying my best to control my tears..! She was unconscious..! She wasn't talking to me..! The only asset of my life..! Finally few tears rolled down my cheeks and I heard a knock on the door..! It was doctor..! He checked Nandini and told me that she had fever..! She got fever because of fear and of course cold..! He gave her and injection and I again tears brimmed in my eyes remembering that how much she was afraid of injections..! He gave me some medicines too and asking me to take care of her he went..! I again sat beside her holding her hand..!


What she was doing with fab3? She knew that they were here..! She hide it from me..! I know what was her agenda..! She wanted to know the truth..! My truth..! Fab5's truth..! That's why she land up in trouble..! I will tell her..! Because now I don't want her to suffer more..! She will cry for me for once na it will be better to cry over and over again..! Yes I will tell her..!

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"Guys..! Come on..! We should go and ask for that girl's well being..!"Max said worriedly.


"Max.! Tjy kam sunai daita hai kya? Manik nay clearly bola he doesn't need our bloody help..!"Jack said angrily.


"Haan tou? Wo tou shuru say he aisa hai..! Tiger..! Say something..!"Max was still worried.


"I don't care..!"Tiger said coldly looking out of the floor length glass window..


"Stop pretending as if you don't care..! You do care..! I know..! I know tu nay us larki ko q bachaya..!"Max shouted..


"I saved her just for humanity..!""Tiger's cold expressions were still there.


"Chal bay..! Jhoota..! Itna tou hum tjy janty hain..!"Jack said smilingly and slapped Tiger's shoulder.


"Of course..! Tu nay us larki ko islye bchaya because tjy pata chal gya tha kay wo Manik ki girlfriend hai..! Because she was shouting for Manik..! Aur agar usy kuch ho jata tou Manik phr say dukhi ho jata jo tu nahi chahta..!"Max said laughingly and Jack too joined him. Tiger's expressions were like "Choori pakri gai"


"Aisa nai hai..!"He tried last time to defend himself..!


"Chup kar na..! Why are you lying yar..! Thak gya hoon main..! Khud say jhoot bool bool kar..!"Max said in a sad tone and other two too became sad.


"Main bhi..! Tu nay dekha Manik aur bhi handsome ho gya hai..!"Jack said with an unknown proud.


"Haan..! Aur lagta hai he finally have got his true love..!"Max said smilingly.


"Aray haan...! Wo larki tou Manik ki girlfriend nikli..! Main tou us kay sath flirt kar raha tha..! Manik mjy ni chooray ga..!"Suddenly Jack shouted worriedly and Max laughed loudly. There was a faint smile on Tiger's face too..!


"Ab tjy Manik kay punch say koi ni bacha skta..!"Max threaten him playfully and Jack was really scared."Ok agar tum log nahi ja rahy tou main ja raha hoon us ka pata karny..!"Max finally said and got up. He came out of the room and knocked MaNan's room. After sometime Manik opened the door.


"Hi..! How's your girl?"Max asked worriedly and he can clearly guess from Manik's eyes that he had cried.


"She is suffering from fever..! But doctor was saying that she will be fine soon..!"Manik said softly and Max nodded.


"Take care of her..! She is so young..!"Max said in a low tone.


"I will..!"Manik too said and he shut the door. Max immediately came back to his room.


"How's she?"Jack asked sipping some brandy.


"Fever ho gya hai usy..!"Max said standing beside Tiger while Jack nodded.


"Manik kesa tha?"Tiger whispered in a low tone only audible to Max.


"His eyes were swollen..! He had cried for sure..!"Max too whispered in a same tone and Tiger closed his eyes in tension and stress..!

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Edited by Mawara_Ejaz - 9 years ago
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Chapter 12 B

Nandini's POV..


I opened my eyes weakly and look at my surroundings..! Hotel room..! My eyes immediately spotted my man he was standing near the window and the most heartbreaking thing was his tears..! He was crying..! Silently..! I got up quietly and walked towards him..! I stood in front of him and he look at me..! I carefully stepped over his feet and held his collars tightly. I gently placed my lips over his the only consoling and healing balm for us..! His hands held her securely close to him and he started kissing me back..! My hands traveled to his hair and I ruffled his hair gently. He was crying with in the kiss and I let him cry..! I kissed and kissed him ever so softly until I was breathless..! I wiped his tears and shook my head in a no..!


"Ap hamesha meri happiness ki baat karty ho na? What about your happiness? What about your smile?"I said sadly and he had no answer for it. He was just weeping..! I held his hand and made her sit on the bed. I myself knelt in front of him and held his hands which were in his lap. "Ap please mjy btayen na?"I pleaded.


"Ten years ago..!"He started between his sobs and I held his hands more tightly. "After attending a concert I was coming back home..! I don't know how the brakes of my Car got failed..! And I met an accident..!"He told me and I gasped. He met an accident..! He paused..! I got up and sat on the bed. He laid in my lap and held my hands..!


"I was in ICU for seven long long days..! I was unconscious..! Seventh day I came to my senses and I saw all my buddies standing around my bed..! I smiled at them but you know they na..! They didn't smiled back..! Then the next thing Tiger said was like a bomb for me..!"He was so much afraid on remembering the badest memory of his life..!


"Shhh..! It's ok..! Take it slow..!"I whispered and pecked his forehead gently. He closed his eyes and his grip on my hands was so tight..!


"You know what he said?"He asked like a baby.


"What?"I too whispered softly.


"He said that fab 5 means nothing to him now..! He said that they all will make a solo career..! And Nandu..! They all went..! Except Cabir..! They broke Fab 5 Nandu..! They broke us..! Tiger said that he don't believe in fab 5 anymore..! I was shattered Nandini..! From that day I hated them..! I hated them from the core of my heart..!"Manik told me crying badly and I too was crying with him..! They all left Manik? Why? This is such a lame logic that they want a solo career..! It was a shit logic of course..!


"It's ok Manik..!"I said between my sobs Manik got up and hugged me tightly..


"They broke me Nandu..! I hate them..!"He shouted painfully..!


"Manik..! Shh..!" I tried to comfort him and made him lay on the bed properly. He held me close to him and I kissed his cheek.


"Fab 5 was my life..! They snatched my life from me..! They molested my soul..! They left me alone..!"He said in so much painful voice that I felt my heart bleeding on his pain.


"Everything will be ok Manik..!"I whispered in his ears and he hide his face in my hair.


"No..! Nothing will be ok now..! Everything is ruined..! No one is with me..!"He said and I felt another tear fall on my neck.


"I am with you..!"I said cupping his face and he look at me emotionally.


"Promise?"He said holding my hand.


"Paka promise..!"I said and I again made him hide his face in my hair. Then I kept patting his head and after some time I felt his breathing became even..! He was asleep..! I carefully adjusted his head on the pillow and pecked his forehead. Then I caressed his hair and smiled. He was a 30 year old man with a child heart..! He was hurt deep inside..! I promise I will solve this mystery..! I will make everything ok..!

Edited by Mawara_Ejaz - 9 years ago
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Chapter 12 C

Fab 4 were there..! Only Cabir bhai was left un ko kesy bulaoan? Suddenly an evil plan hit in my mind and I picked up Manik's cell phone..! I quietly got up from the bed and I walked to the balcony. I dialed Bhai's number and he picked up the call on third bell.


"Bhai?"I said with a faking sadness and hearing my voice of course he panicked.


"Nandu? Behna kya hua?"He said worriedly.


"Aachooo..!"I faked a sneeze and then started. "Mjy bht taiz bukhaar ho gya hai..! Ap please aa jaoa..!"I said as if I am crying.


"Hain? Bukhar? Main..! Main abhi aa raha hoon..! Tum preshan ni hona ok..! Manik say bolo tmhara khyl rakhy main agli flight say aa raha rona ni..!"He almost freaked out and I winked at myself with that I hung the call.

Now no one can separate fab 5..! I have heard Manik's side story..! Now it was turn from Tiger's side story..! But for that I have to wait for Cabir Bhai..! There was something seriously wrong..! I came back to room and saw Manik awake.


"Ap uth q gaye?"I asked sitting beside him and he smiled.


"Tum jo nahi the..! Islye ankh khul gai..!"He said smilingly and pulled me more closer. I too smiled and he fused his lips with mines again..! I readily gave in and he within seconds pinned me on the bed under him..! This kiss was something in it..! I was feeling as if he was giving his pain to me and I was sucking all his pain from him..! He kissed so madly and passionately that I moaned helplessly in his mouth..! I crumbled the bedsheet in my fists and suddenly I felt his fingers traced my bare arms and reached my fists..! He with a negligible effort freed the bedsheet from my fist and entwined his long fingers with mine tiny ones all the time kissing me crazily yet passionately..! He left my lips when they became swollen..! I was panting heavily but he was in no mood of leaving me..! He left my one hand and his free hand traveled to open the buttons of my shirt. He opened the first button and kissed me there..! Then he did the same with the second too and he trailed the kisses until he opened all the buttons..! I felt like my heart will explode with pleasure...!


"Manik..!"I shouted in pleasure when he impressed another kiss on my stomach..! He smirked and came to my lips. My one hand was still entwined with his with the other free hand I pulled him again for a kiss and this time I was dominating..! We again kissed..! OH GOD..! It was heaven..! His arms were heaven..! He was world..! He was my owner..! We broke gasping for oxygen and he rested his forehead with mine..!


"We have to stop..!"He whispered and I became sad..! I didn't wanted him to stop..!


"Manik..! Please..!"I pleaded but he was THE MANIK..! He ignored my plead and buttoned my shirt again then he sat up straight. I too sat up sadly he pulled me for a side hug and I smilingly rested my head on his chest..! HE RESPECTS ME SOOO MUCH..! He brushed his lips with my forehead..!


"Ab bukhaar nahi hai..!"He said happily and too smiled. "Let me order something to eat..! Phr tmy medicine bhi laine hai..!"He said looking at me and I nodded obediently. Then he orders garlic chicken soup and pasta for us. We both laid cozily in each other's arms..! And I started telling him about my childhood sometimes he laughed..! Sometime he smiled..! But yeah one thing he was smiling at least..! The food came and Manik as usual fed me with his hands. I ate like an obedient child..! Then he fed me medicines and then I again started my blabber for the first time in my life I have got someone who was just listening to me that too carefully..!


"Aur pta hai phr na me bhaag gai hahaha..! Bechara dhruv prank mera tha aur phas wo gya..!"I ended up telling him my another "karnama" and he nodded.


"That means you were very naughty hmm?"He said smilingly and I nodded.


"Yesss..! Very..!"I exclaimed and he again laughed. I was about to say something more when suddenly the door knocked.


"Tum yahen laite raho me dekhta hoon..!"Manik said adjusting my head on the pillow as I was resting it on his chest. I smiled and my gaze followed him. As soon as he opened the door Cabir bhai came barging in shoving Manik away and I was shocked to see him so early. Even Manik was shocked. I got up and sat straight.


"Nandu..! Mera bacha..! Meri behna..! Ab bukhaar kesa hai? Flue kesa hai??"He shouted worriedly and cupped my face. I bit my lower lip in guilty I think kuch ziada over acting ho gai..!


"Cabir..! Relax..! She is fine now..!"Manik said patting his shoulder and Cabir sighed. Meri poal khulni wali hai..! "But how do you know..!?"Suddenly Manik asked the most bomb question. I got up and run outside the room to save myself as I knew I will get scolded by both..!


I run towards the swimming pool side and my bad luck I banged with Tiger..! But no he was my savior..! I should be thanking him..!


"Thanks for saving my life..!"I said as he was about to walk away.


"Myny tmhry liye nahi kiya..!"He said coldly and I shrugged akruu..!


"I know..! Tell me one thing? Did you really wanted a solo career or there was something else?"I asked coming in front of him and he gave me deadly glare to which I was not afraid of course..!


"None of yours business..!"He yelled on top of his voice and was about to walk away again when I held his hand.


"It is my business Mr.Tiger Khurana..!"I too shouted.


"Why? Why is it your business?"He shouted.


"Because I love Manik..! He is hurt because of your decision..! He is hurt because you walked away..! You broke him..!"I was so much furious.


"Shut up..! Kuch nahi janti tum..!"He shouted.


"Tou btayen na? I want to know..!"I again shouted.


"If I wouldn't had walked away that time tou Manik aj mar chuka hota..! We saved his life..!"He yelled and I was stunned. We both heard a gasp and turned. Again a shock because Manik was standing there tears in eyes..!

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Quick update..! Only I know how I managed it..! Oh God..! I am crazy..! Yes I am crazy..! Bohat kuch hua..! Manik ko kya story pata hai aur real story hai kya ya main agly update me btaoan ge jo God knows kab aye ga..! I am sorry..! Wish me luck tomorrow is my first day at Uni :) Bak bak ka time nahi hai..! I don't have time for pms please help yourself..!

Keep smiling..!

Keep shining for your love ones..

Lots of Love..

Mawara

Edited by Mawara_Ejaz - 9 years ago

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