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Posted: 10 years ago
Caught up with all the chapters and let me tell you that you did an amazing job with this story and also for making us feel it👍🏼.

No Doubt, those were some really sad, turn of events for Khushi. The only saving grace now in her life being Asha.

From what I gather, I believe Arnav to be Khushi's crush. I just wish Khushi ends up making the right call for everyone's sake and most of all for her sanity.

Looking forward to seeing how the conversation goes, coz I truly can;t wait to see them together😃 - YKWIM😉!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago

Chapter 8:


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Arnav looked at Asha, who was laughing and playing. He had coincidentally passed by her school and had found her standing there, looking longingly at a child who was holding her parents' hands. His respect and admiration for the girl grew. She knew Khushi or her chithi as she called, was upset and so, she had hidden her own sorrow. He had never in his life seen a child as mature as her. He also didn't like the fact that she was growing faster. He wanted to gift her, her innocence and allow her to glide seamlessly in the web of emotions, rather than hiding it. Just like her "mausi", Arnav mused. He was determined to wipe those bad pages from their lives, even if Khushi doesn't allow. If he had to go, he will. But he would make sure to bring back their lost "genuine" smiles. He had not come to Connoor anticipating this. Neither, he had any idea such a thing would happen, nor would he have encouraged it then. He would have backed off, even if Khushi had not told him, her past. But now that he knew it, there was no looking back. He was there and he would fulfill the purpose of his presence. Maybe this was meant to happen.

With this in mind, he went to her.

"Asha?"

"Arnav uncle. Aap yahan? (Arnav uncle. You here?)"

"Tum kya kar rahi ho, yahan pe akele? (What are you doing alone?)"

"Chithi ab tak nahi aayi. (Chithi didn't come till now.)"

After waiting for about half an hour and calling Khushi for about seven times, Arnav decided to take Asha home.

"Asha teri ghar ki raasta pata hain tujhe? (Asha do you know the route to your house?)"

"Haan mujhe to sab kuch pata hain. (Yes, I know everything)", she spoke Up proudly.

Arnav smiled at her and after an hour of misleading and directing, they both finally did reach the lane. Asha looked extremely happy at her accomplishment. She had directed her Arnav uncle. Usually, it was Khushi who does that. So, that is itself made the kid ecstatic. After banging the door for half an hour, they both decided to play frisbee. Arnav was worried, no doubt. Yet, he didn't know what to do.

The door opened revealing a very tired and sober Khushi. Her red puffy eyes clearly indicated that she was crying. Arnav's heart yearned to rub and erase it off.

Asha ran to Khushi and hugged her. "Na evalo neram wait panen theriyuma? (You know how long I was waiting?)"

Khushi crouched to Asha's level and ran a soothing hand over her head. She placed a soft kiss on her cheeks, seeking an apology in return. "I am sorry. Na thoongiten. (I am sorry. I slept off.)"

"Whatever is that girl telling?" Arnav mused. He wanted to know what prevented her from going to the school and she had very conveniently spoke in Tamil, just so that he doesn't understand.

"I hungry", Asha spoke up and Khushi took her inside to give her something to eat. As Asha sprinted off, Khushi turned to look at Arnav, who was watching her or rather observing her. She knew she had to thank him for his, yet another considerate thinking. But she was not ready to face him. Not yet. "But when?" her mind questioned her. Her eyes very clearly showed the storm, her mind was experiencing. She gave him a very small smile and took hesitant steps towards him when Asha called out. Khushi's head swung between the house and Arnav. When Asha's call for her increased, Khushi went towars her. With every step towards the house, Khushi's heart pulled her towards Arnav.

Arnav knew that she was confused and in two minds. Her faltering steps were a clear testimony. She needed time and space. He was ready to give her that and much more, if she wants. With one last glance at the house, Arnav left, hoping for happier times and better days.

Khushi came out, only to find out that he had left. "Of course why would he wait for me? I don't mean anything to him." "Are you insane? Can't you see his concern shining in his eyes?"

The battle between her heart and mind continued.

**

That night proved to be a very difficult one for both. The new dawn meant both would travel together to yet another destination, without Asha.

**

Khushi looked at the sleeping form of Asha. She never knew she would be at the stage of her life, where she was in dilemma. From the very start, she had been a girl of determination and clarity. But a certain Raizada had thrown her off track. She had lost her focus on the articles she was working on. Her thoughts were muddled and she knew whom to blame. She was half afraid and half anxious. Afraid of the way her thoughts were going and hinting at. Anxious that this will lead to the unknown. She did not want to go there, did she? Didn't her life have enough problems already, that she had to add this to that? Wouldn't this give her a migraine, instead of a headache? Yet every time, Arnav's hopeful face flashed before her. His eyes promised something, she dare not think about. Was she ready to do this? She was not alone, she reminded herself. Her every decision will have a direct impact on Asha. She shook her head. She needed to clear her mind. Every problem has a solution, she kept repeating. Her only source of strength was Asha, so she was afraid to lose her. Why is destiny so unkind? It made her lose and now it wants her to believe and trust a Stranger, of all people? "Ironical, isn't it?" A sardonic smile spread on her face at that. Just when she was picking up the broken pieces if her life, destiny decides to send someone to unsettle her further. "Trust God and his decisions", her mother's solution to every problem. Could she or Will she?

**

Arnav gazed at the stars, at his parents. He may have not seen him, but he believed that they wouldn't have voluntarily left him.

Young Arnav was upset and sad. "Kya hua Arnav? Yahan Ao. (What happened Arnav? Come here.)", Suni Ma called out to him.

"Main apne Ma aur Papa se baath karna chahtha hoon. (I want to speak to my Ma and Papa.)"

Sunita looked at the kid with a very affectionate smile. She did not want to shatter that hope, the kid had. She wanted him to trust the world. Moreover, she wanted him to trust himself to come up. Lack of parents, shouldn't be the reason behind his defeat.

"Dekho upar. Wahan do tare bahuth acchi tarah chamak rahe hain na? Woh dono teri Ma aur Papa hain. Teri Ma aur Papa sabse special hain. Tum bahut lucky ho. (You see there? There are two stars shining brightly. Those two stars are your Ma and Papa. Your parents are very special. You are extremely lucky.)", she told, caressing his face. A slow smile bloomed on Arnav's face.

"Sach main? (Really?)" Getting a nod from his Suni Ma, Arnav decided that at the end of every day, he would speak with his parents. Share the happenings of the day and also seek solutions from them for his every problem. The kid had trusted and believed in himself. He was special and lucky and he knew it.

A lesson learnt or taught in the childhood remains with us forever. "Ma what shall I do? Should I give her time and space or push her to speak with me? I am confused Ma. I am ashamed of myself too. Wasn't I very cruel to her? I did not know what she has gone through, yet I accused her. I require your help today, more than any other day. Papa won't you help me, at least?"

She would have started hating me? Maybe she is afraid? But why am I so worried? Is this that strong attraction that has attracted me like a magnet towards her? With every passing minute, the amount of questions increased. But there were no answers. Arnav's goal from childhood was to live closer to the nature and it was because he believed that only in those places his "parents" really existed. The closer, the nature; the nearer he felt towards them. Khushi had become his euphoria since he laid his eyes on her and Asha was his routine, like Karishma.

He just hoped that as the dawn cracked open, there will be calm and not another unanticipated storm.

**

Khushi dropped off Asha at her school with the promise of coming early to pick her up, unlike the previous day. She took lazy steps towards the bus stand. She spotted Arnav looking at the train, thoughtfully. Her heart sped in anticipation and her mind went on an overdrive. Just then, Arnav turned and their eyes clashed.

**


Chapter 9


Click of the Day:


This is where I leave you all. I hope you all enjoy the last phase. I am giving you few extra chapters. On "sukanksha's" request, I am considering giving few Happy wala chapters. But yeah let's see. Do tell me how it is, if you have time. Ciao guys!

Happy wala Sunday 😆

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Edited by Sadh123 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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This was kind of filler update but it was nice since it answered my questions like how Arnav met Asha and brought her from school.
I have already told you Asha is a smart kid and it is reflected here too. The way she directed Arnav towards her house.
Khushi is still in a dilemma.
Arnav blames himself for not understanding Khushi! Aww!
I loved how he sought help from his parents.
I hope they talk in the next update and things get better 😃
P.S. I am glad you are extending it.🤗
P.P.S. What is the name of the flower in your "Click of the Day" ?
Edited by barsha_dash - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
I will be back Sadhu, just need a little time...
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I am back Sadhu, though not completely in the pink of health, yet coping much better.

Nice update. Loved how Asha took Arnav home after getting lost several times. 😆
Kids are the sweetest and I am loving this Asha more and more.

Khushi's mind and heart are surely playing games with her. As much as she is attracted towards Arnav, she is scared of acknowledging that attraction. She is just not Khushi not, she is Asha's only hope in life.

Can anyone accept Asha as their own? Can anyone be that broad minded? Is Arnav that broad minded? These questions are killing Khushi from inside.

What will she even talk to Arnav? How can she make him understand what is bothering her and she is scared of his reaction too.

These emotional turmoils are torturing Khushi and loved how you handling this matter slowly without rushing into it.

Good job ponnu, and glad that you are including more chapters in the story.
Edited by canapoem - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: canapoem

I will be back Sadhu, just need a little time...


Di go sleep now! *order*
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice one sadh :-)
Kushi wanted to speak to arnav, but he left without waiting for her.. so sad.. but the sentence "why would he wait for me " has cracked me up. .. this girl is too much attracted to him..
Arnav had realised his attraction towards kushi, and he asking his parents to help him made me emotional sadh..
Kushi is his euphoria. .. i felt he has decided to give their relation a chance... good. .
Waiting for them to sit and talk. ..
Ps: I'm glad that you are planning to write few more chapters on their happy moments. .. will wait dear :D
Edited by pravallika - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
wow awesome update loved it can't wait for next part.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Sorry for not commenting on the previous update!
Anyway, i loved reading both the updates together!
Khushi letting out her pain by shouting over him was for good! Keeping everything in heart will only hurt more! And Arnav got to know about her past!
And then Arnav's thoughts over what Khushi said was beautifully written Sadhana! Loved that part the most!
Asha is one great child! So mature and understanding!
Your Arnav is too nice for words! I love this Arnav!
So Khushi is still confused over what Arnav feels! Well, she must trust her heart!
Khushi's dilemma about her life and taking chance was beautifully written!
Losing parents at a young age is the worst thing anyone can face and Arnav faced it! My heart went out for that young boy!
Good work Sadhana!

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Posted: 10 years ago


Sadh meri bachchi,

Such a lovely update...you say in your author's note that you cannot write long updates or depict human emotions well enough...believe you me, given your age and experience in these matters my girl, you are doing a fabulous job. I have told you several times before how I think you have a very articulate and clear writing style. So believe me, when I say, this is good stuff.

On to the story...beautiful progression...Arnav and Khushi's feelings are now all over the place...what is it that Arnav is struggling to tell her...does he still have more baggage you have not told us about? Khushi's we know clearly enough. She senses he loves her but is not really sure...ah, young love! Khushi is being tough here, although she may have hurt Arnav in the process...she should perhaps have considered...and perhaps will...that Arnav has no way of knowing how her life turned out...atleast poor Arnav finally knows the truth of her life now...and thinks himself insensitive...oh what a tangled web...hope they talk to each other and resolve the issues. Asha could help bring them together, I reckon. That is one smart girl!

Waiting for the next chapter. Sorry for the late response...Asli duniya being a bitch! 😊

Best,


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Posted: 10 years ago
beautiful update
arnav -asha- khushi , the trio have very strong connection
khushi really needs to listen to her heart and trust God , things do happen in life for good , just need to be brave and have patience


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