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Kavyashree pradhan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#391

ITS OKEY, EXAMS ARE IMPORTANT.. Hope to catch up soon..

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Dhariya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#392

no problem dearwill wait..take your time

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OhMeriJaan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#393

Ok so I am finally done! All chapters in one go! But where do I start from? Every chapter right from Nandini's Diary has been FAB from the word go! And just when I thought this one can't be outdone and there comes the next chapter!

But my fav by far would for sure be the 10th chap! I have loved every frame of it! Every single dialogue Manik mouthed was brilliant! How much I had wished to see that on the show! Honestly this is how it should have been! Manik should have seriously shown them their places! But alas! Nevertheless! This was so much awesome to read and trust me when I say I had jumped the most when Manik was giving it back to Dhruv Alya and Mukti the way deserved it!👏

Close contender for my most fav would be Nandini's Diary entry! That was sheer awesomeness! How beautifully had you penned it down! Sheer awesomeness! I had told you even before and I tell you yet again, the diary entry had me reading it again and again! I would have infact done that for all the chapters but well then I would never finish it and I might never reply to you😆

I would have defo spoke about every chapter individually! But well then I would be boring you! :P So just know this much that every single chapter was BRILLIANT! The choice of words, the emotions brought out, the way the story had been weaved up! Everything and much more! Simply FAB!

Now give me the next chapter soon! Lol this is what happens when I read it all in one go and I dont have more chapters to satisfy my hunger😆 But yeah do your exams well before that! They be more important! All the BEST! 🤗

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Loqi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#394

Originally posted by: soothu
this is d best chapter ever.u nailed it
every words of manik...its painful...he loved dem very much...

u r 100% successful in explaining his pain..
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WOAH..THAT WAS 😲
THANKS THOUGH😊

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Loqi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#395

Originally posted by: ShiLee

Wonderful it is..😊..I loved each and every word 👏

You are an amazing writer..hats off..

Thanksss😳

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Loqi

@Loqi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#396

Originally posted by: Dhariya_
no problem dear
will wait..

take your time

Originally posted by: neeharika__
On hold
Mera kya hoga ab

Koi ni i understand ill be egarly waiting

Originally posted by: tas456
No worries dear
Will wait patiently for the next update

Originally posted by: Kavyashree22
Its okey,if you are having exams.. Don't send pm's.. And i think you should take a break with update too during exams.. Anyways..i loved the update.. Wow!manik has changed and maturity reflect in those words which he puked.. THE FEELING OF LOVE CAN NEVER CHANGE.. Manik still feels the touch of nandini.. Thanq for pm.. ROCK THE PAPERS IF PRACTICALs thn for that too.. Just rock it..

Originally posted by: AMAR_LOVE
we will wait

Originally posted by: kitkat5756
It's ok sweetheart ...no prob ...take as much time u want...but when u return plz pm because it's really hard to find stories...we love ur story a lot ...so it would be very helpful if u pm us ...with lots of love and hugs...hope to c u soon

Thanks people ...

The thing is I accidentally delted the story file and due to exams I will take some time in writing.

Apologies...

But will update soon because I have a week break before the next exam😳