ArHi SS - Arnav's Plight ||COMPLETED||

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Posted: 9 years ago

#71

Originally posted by: ranogill
Awesome arnav

Thank you! 😊

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Posted: 9 years ago

#72

Originally posted by: .Anisha.
Loved the update
do continue soon
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Thanks a lot!! 😊

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khareshelley

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Posted: 9 years ago

#73

read both parts.. nice concept.. love to arnav's point of view on sheetals's entry..!!!

he is already having negative vibes from her.. and his dear wife is busy attending her..!!

lets see what game sheetal is playing and how arnav is gonna expose her...!!!

aarav doesn't like khushi..!!

thanks for pm..!!

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divya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#74

Poor arnav... Love the update

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seeta naipaul

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Posted: 9 years ago

#75

Khushi is jus too naive

But Arnav is on to Sheetal

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1053117

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Posted: 9 years ago

#76

loved the update.. awesome 😛

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Sravya/Sravs

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Posted: 9 years ago

#77

{~*~}

For PM's send BUDDY request to ~ MahrunLuckyPMs

[Not this account please...I'll be not sending PM's from this account after 15th November, 2015. Please refrain. New readers if any, do buddy the PMs account not this one!!]

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This is a messy teaser. Not a particular scene. It covers almost till the end of this SS. See guys, I'm giving you blatant hints here 😛 Try and find out the mystery! 😉

The teaser is in writer's Point Of View but still happens in the story. Yes, in front of Arnav!

The first part, till before the breaker, comes in next update. After that it's scattered and can happen in the next or the after updates. Sorry for the confusion beforehand! 😆

~TEASER~

I'm so sorry, sweetheart! But I cannot act as unaffected as you've done, Khushi.

'We used to have sleep outs in each other houses.'

'Koi baat nehi, you didn't knew me then!'

'You're not understanding me,'

'I'm fine.'

"Chotte did you and Khushi-ji fight?" Anjali coaxed her brother to say something.

"Why are not showing up at home lately?" Nani added her questions.

"Dad..." Aarav smiled through tears.

"I hate all of you."

"Arnav-ji, I love you. I'm sorry," Khushi cried helplessly.

"You don't!" he roared.

"Now he's mine," Sheetal quipped triumphantly.

"I wanted her to experience how it is living without a husband!"

"You're a witch!"

"She's a liar"

"You stole my husband from me!"

"You're going to be out of my house...NOW!!" Arnav roared making her flinch.

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Hmm...yeah, that didn't make sense. I know! It didn't to me too.

LOL!! Kidding, of course I know what I'm writing. I know right? I guess I do... *Giving a charming smile*

*Signalling you guys to come near* *Whispering close to your ears* I know to lie too *Mischievous smile*

{::} SCROLL DOWN FOR THE NOTE...IMPORTANT!! {::}

Edited by Lucky_arshi - 9 years ago

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Sravya/Sravs

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Posted: 9 years ago

#78

:Mark this point:

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[After November 15th (You'll know why this date) there'll be NO PM's sent from my this aka Lucky_arshi account. I'm getting confused on who are my readers who am I a reader to. So please if you're a reader please buddy the above account! And yes send buddy request only if you are or want to be a reader of my story. I'm afraid of ghosts so please...I don't want to give any place for ghosts in my buddy's account...]

NOTE

Kindly check out the 4 notes in this post.

1: Regarding this story, few clarifications.

2: Regarding my update schedule.

3: Regarding my previous in-complete stories.

4: Regarding the new story.

Be sure to check them all...everything is important, as for me!! 😛

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*Regarding the Story

I know, these point you'd probably know, but I just wanted to make sure...that's it!

1. As you all are already reading, this story is going in Arnav's POV. Then you should also remember that what every thinks cannot be explained. I know Arnav is capable of gauging reactions and all, and he will too. But he's not a mind reader so he don't know what they'll be thinking. So this points out two...actually three...things, i.e.,

(*) Not everything that happens in his absence will be known by Arnav. Simple, because he wouldn't be present to see those happenings. Not until Arnav sees will he know what is happening at home.

(*) And that further points out that whatever Khushi experiences being at home remains unknown even to you people (Not to me though, because I know what happens 😉) until Arnav learns about them. So you don't know when she's like how?

(*) Arnav suspects Sheetal but he don't have any strong point to really go behind her back and know about her everything. So don't expect Arnav to do the background check and all that crap right now. It always isn't the same.

2. Raizada's will be the same as like they have been in the serial during this track. The only changed character is Arnav.

3. The whole of this story concept is what if Arnav recognises the not so very sensible but still in a catch of unawareness, his family hurts Khushi and actually acknowledges that rather than keeping mum. What if he's been a bit more considerate and accommodating about Khushi's feelings? This is the point, the whole story is about!

So I guess that concludes the things I wanted to say about the story.

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*Regarding the Updates

Well guys, I don't know whom to blame for this. I guess my course, I have my exams next month, i.e., from November 2nd to 15th. So that says I'll be busy preparing this month, as there's not even a full month in my hand. So updates may go haywire. I'm sorry but I don't have any other choice.

I have two more updates in hand. (Well next is already written, the other is under working process) So I may post the updates somewhere around this month. And don't worry you'll get the PM's too.

So all in all in this part of note all I wanted to say is 'MY UPDATES MAY GO HAYWIRE TILL I COMPLETE MY EXAMS...' I'll be sure to be regular after I'm back from exams.

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* Regarding my previous in-completed stories.

Well, I see some of you people want me to not leave my previous story in-complete. So I'm thinking on doing that too. BUT...that'll be only after I'm back. 'Shaadi Mein Pyaar' and 'Mystery Jeu' will both end most probably in two updates each. I'll work on them after I'm back. I promise!

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*Regarding the new story.

Well, after I'm back, I'll start a new story too. Which is a serial take-out again. Well, here's the one...a jhatka before I'll actually start it!! 😉

~ Banner Credit: Sandhya Di aka -sevenstreaks- ~

(I'm in love with this banner )

When it's all finished, guess that depends on how you live. Just pray that all of your wrongs don't overshadow all that you did .

- Big Sean

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This story is my take on the serial from Khushi and Arnav returning to Shantivan after Arnav's kidnapping, they are free from the clutches of goons. To be precise before the Shyam's revelation by Khushi.

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Well, that's end my note that is so long putting my usual update lengths at shame 🤣

How many of you are excited for the new story? How many of you are sad for me taking a break? How many of are eager for 'Arnav's Plight' update?

Iss se mujhe koi farak nehi padne wali, jab tak aap log ek comment nehi dal dete hain. 😆 I know I'm a drama queen. I'm already named so from my sisters...who are drama queens themselves 🤣

Well...I'll be waiting for whatever you've to say.

Thank you all lovely people for your kind love and support every time!!

I'm open for all...bashes, criticism, suggestions, appreciation etc. etc. etc...

Read, like and comment!!

Cya all beauties,

Arshi love...Forever and beyond. ❤️

- Lucky 😊

Edited by Lucky_arshi - 9 years ago