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Posted: 10 years ago
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Lovely chapter I'm eagerly waiting for the past to unfold as wat went wrong that they split or they didn't get chance to express their feelings
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Posted: 10 years ago
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i loveee ittt!! You make me want to read so much more and what I love about the way you write is that I can actually imagine all of it happening while reading
fantastic, superb continue soon :D
And more of ArHi scenes next time
Love, Laiba
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Posted: 10 years ago
#13

Originally posted by: Anam Ali

Wonderful update Griffy

So descriptive
Loved the flashback scenes and present story
Looking forward to the next part
Cont soon

awww sista thanxx a lot 😳😳😳 will continue at the earliest 😃...
😛
cheers
griffy
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Uzii

Lovely chapter I'm eagerly waiting for the past to unfold as wat went wrong that they split or they didn't get chance to express their feelings

aww thank u soo much 😃😃😃
heheh u will come to know soon as I will end this ff in like 10 -15 parts...
thanxx for commenting 😳😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Laiba-

i loveee ittt!! You make me want to read so much more and what I love about the way you write is that I can actually imagine all of it happening while reading
fantastic, superb continue soon :D
And more of ArHi scenes next time
Love, Laiba




aww thats such a nice compliment jaan 😳😳😳 thank u
I will continue soon..u and anam motivate me so much 😛😳😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
#16

Originally posted by: vidu87

Awesome update

Luvd it
Cont soon


thanxx a lot dear yes will update at the earliest 😳😃
Edited by griffy.fz - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#17


Part 3

Dear diary

It is said you should be surrounded by those who make you feel valued...and loved. But the question is that do we value our own self? All my life I had given importance to other people opinions or feelings or thoughts over mine...and maybe that's what resulted in a mess. When for long you deny your own soul acceptance...when you don't try to fulfill its wishes your soul aches and its enthusiasm diminishes day by day.

I was unknown to this ...I kept pushing away my feelings for arnav..I kept shutting them in box..and maybe that's why I eventually lost him and also a part of myself.

Every person has layers...has different shades...we show all shades to only those we truly are comfortable with...As days passed and our friendship progressed... I came to know more and more about arnav.. He may look like a strong guy... but with every conversation we had... I discovered another shade..another side of him... and maybe he did too. From an awfully shy person in the beginning to a complete crazy girl...he also saw it all...all?? No maybe he saw most of it... he didn't see the side which was falling in love him...but he did catch glimpses of her crazy love eventually...which I know was not a good idea...he wasn't ready for it ...he was dealing with another mess of his own..

The discovery of arnav's love side...unfortunately not for me...you know how you think you are in a fairy tale..u meet ..u like...u fall in love.. and yeah you have your forever... and then bam! Reality strikes... yes love happened but only on my side...and by the end I was convinced it was not love...well you cant blame me.. I still remember that phone call... that unraveled by sweet secret fairy tale

"Hey khushi...sleeping??"...I looked at the clock ... it was 2 am...the first thought was not that he called so late but the heaviness of his voice...I knew something was wrong...

"Hey arnav ...what happened?"...

"Can we talk if you don't mind..." I looked at my roommate fast asleep...I came out of my room

"yeah tell..."

"I am sorry to call... I just didn't know what to do"

" what is wrong..you are scaring me..."

"Khushi..." and then his voice broke "she left me and I don't know what I might do"

Somewhere a small part of my heart cracked... unaware that many more were to come... unaware that eventually I will give it all and yet I wont be enough...and also unaware that it was beginning of a friendship of unspoken bond...a bond of love for me and a bond dependence for him...

To tell the truth it was not arnav's fault that he had a girlfriend who left him and he turned to me for help... we were good friends...it was almost one year since we knew each other...even though I still ask my self why??

What pursued after this phone call and what lead to it cannot be explained in few lines...from a friendship so strong... to doubts...to fights ... to parting... my story has it all...except love his love...

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Khushi stared in the mirror..a confident 28 year old lawyer stared back at her ...trained to hide feelings still...her diary lay beside her bed...only they knew the tears she had shed last night... only they knew that beneath this strong girl was weak broken girl who had built these walls to protect this soul...

She thought " why are u back...why...? I was doing okay...I was fine... I was moving on!... "

Her phone rang..

An unknown number flashed on her screen...but she knew somewhere whose call it was ...

"hello..."

"hello...:" that voice was back and her heart sank..."arnav here...I am calling regarding the meeting... I wanted the meeting to be on site so you can understand some of our terms and conditions"

She could manage just an okay

" I am messaging you the address... will you be there by 10 am?"

Again an okay was also she could manage

"khushi..." And her heart sank deeper but then she looked at the confident person in the mirror slowly falling apart...she straightened her face

" call me miss gupta please...as we are cordial colleagues ... I will be there on time..."

And she cut the phone...

Her heart racing...a tear had found way through her eyes...and she knew...the story was unraveling again...

"why...arnav why?"

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As arnav kept the phone... he felt a tinge of anger.. a tinge of pain...

He thought "how hard have I tried to get this project...but it is not gonna be easy to get her back...of khushi kumara gupta... its time I rewrote our story"

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Guys please please comment!! I would be grateful!!

Comments suggestions anything you guys not liking...please tell

I am really sorry about the late update...I want to complete this ff soon too!!

thanx for being patient

cheers

griffy


Part 4

Edited by griffy.fz - 9 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#18
Great part griffy
Want to find out what really happened do write flashback


Arnav wants khushi back now

Looking forward to the next part

Cont soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#19

Originally posted by: Anam Ali

Great part griffy

Want to find out what really happened do write flashback


Arnav wants khushi back now

Looking forward to the next part

Cont soon


aww anam you read ...thanxx jaan 😳
yeah i will write about the flashback in next one ...hinted few things in this one😃😃

love u 😳😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
#20
That was beautifully written, i could snap all of the script in my mind which gave it an even more beautiful image of the part. You have such an amazing way of writting that I actually felt like I was reading someones personal diary but i hate you for making it too short and leaving such a suspense before ending... Continue soon, im waiting for more :)

Love, Laiba

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