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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: dhruvika1991

Nice one drabble 2 about ranaji what ge think about rani gayatri... Is amazing as per the character your drabble is perfect to it as ranaji can thibk.like tht...


Thank you, glad you think so.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Draco_Elt

Now Sarcy. blowing out some virtual kisses to you.I always wanted someone to think from Ranaji"s POV and believe me it was worth a read. Absolutely loving it.


lol 😆 Thank you, for the virtual kisses as well as your words.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: frustrated12233

Oh lord!! I can't thank u enough for writing this...finally ranaji is talking... Lol

On a serious note... Its awesome..
Jst a drabble.. Bt d way u put it up it comes out bttr thn a brief ff!
Thnx fr d pm
Do continue soon


I see that quite a few of us wanted to know what goes on in Ranaji's mind. So I decided to take the initiative to find out. 😉 Thanks, next part coming up shortly.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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~ Crack Shot ~

The attack on Gayatri was not a chance accident but a well-orchestrated one. The thought kept buzzing in my mind as I tried to focus on the target before me. Finding an answer to the perplexing mystery, my mind presented only two names as the potential perpetrators - Kunwar Chacha and Kunwar Chachi. My concentration swapped targets and in a bid to find a way to obtain the incriminating evidence, I missed the shot. Merry laughter greeted my ears and turning around, I saw Gayatri there. Not one to wallow in grief or self-pity, she was already up and about, no traces of Badi Rani Maa's tirade from last night marring her disposition. At my expression, she immediately sobered. She turned to leave when my next words halted her.

"Rani Gayatri, do you think this is funny?"

Oddly, a look of admiration crossed her face at my words, and before she could collect herself, I pulled her closer to table where the glass bottles were set, challenging her to try her hand if she thought herself better. Her denial to do so for lack of a slingshot amused me, and I was quick to dump the rifle in her hands, despite her pleading look. As I moved aside to allow her space, she almost lost balance and I had to steady her - a mistake. Her eyes, instead of the target, found my face and stayed there, refusing to budge. A hint of a smile danced on her face and I was forced to direct her attention to the target. As I tried to guide her faltering hands on the rifle, I knew it was a lost cause. She was totally nervous and distracted by my proximity. At my command to shoot, her fingers hit the trigger but only because her fingers were caged by mine. The shot rang out and before I knew it, she had buried her face in my chest. I was baffled and, as she raised her head, I deftly extricated my arms from around her. She was embarrassed for her behavior, but I didn't miss the look in those eyes that had led her to seek solace in me during that moment of distress - Trust. I didn't want her trust. With trust followed affection, and on its heels came love. Choosing that moment, I let the reprimand flow from my lips.

"Jis kaam ko karte hue khudke haath kaanpte ho, us kaam me dusron ka mazaak nahi udaya karte, Rani Gayatri."

And then, paying no heed to her explanation, I resumed shooting. The sound of the successive shots crashing the bottles added to her distress, but I didn't care. I couldn't care, not when the consequences would be painful for both of us.

Falling in love with a broken heart would do Rani Gayatri no good.

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Posted: 9 years ago
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aww its amazing beautifully written ranaji doesnt want gayatri to fall for him because it wont be good for her
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Posted: 9 years ago
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This is adorable. Ranaji is aware of Gaytri's feelings for him but he choose to ignore it and not letting her to dream more, because he thinks that this is going to hurt them both, at the end...👍🏼
I know he will realize it soon that this is not something which can hurt them but something that can heal his broken heart..

Last line of this drabble is awesome and so deep:
Falling in love with a broken heart would do Rani Gayatri no good.

So, Its not just about the promise he had given to Sona but also because he doesn't want to hurt Gaytri. Can I assume that he actually is caring for Gayatri a lot?! Yes, I do cause this is making me feel lovely...❤️

Would love to read something from Gayatri's POV too, even though she seemed like an open book in the show, still there is a lot more in her and there is a much scope to explore her... IMO.

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part 4 loved the way its written how Rana must have felt and his thoughts as he did the rifle shooting practice with her
she was scared yet he did not want to ease her as it will only lead her to pain
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: .SSS.

This is adorable. Ranaji is aware of Gaytri's feelings for him but he choose to ignore it and not letting her to dream more, because he thinks that this is going to hurt them both, at the end...👍🏼
I know he will realize it soon that this is not something which can hurt them but something that can heal his broken heart..

Last line of this drabble is awesome and so deep:
Falling in love with a broken heart would do Rani Gayatri no good.

So, Its not just about the promise he had given to Sona but also because he doesn't want to hurt Gaytri. Can I assume that he actually is caring for Gayatri a lot?! Yes, I do cause this is making me feel lovely...❤️

Would love to read something from Gayatri's POV too, even though she seemed like an open book in the show, still there is a lot more in her and there is a much scope to explore her... IMO.


Well, Rana's actions are controlled by the CVs on the show, but his thoughts are controlled by me. 😆
Also, from the way I see him, he comes across as a very perceptive person. He is always aware of what RM, BRM and the KCs are doing and why. So it goes without saying that he understands Gayatri too. I'm just trying to bring that out through these drabbles.

I do have a piece in progress from Gayatri's POV. If it turns out to my liking, I will definitely share post it. 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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^^

A piece in progress? Just make it soon. I'm exited! :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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loved reading so far...excited for the coming.

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