Jodha Akbar FF: Zindagi Ki Daasthan ~ Ch16, 26/02/16 THREAD 1 CLOSED - Page 41

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Hii... I hve read first time zindagi ki daasthan n it was really superbbb... Somthing new is there in this story n after reading i really biggg thanks for giving us such a lovely n romantic story... U r really super-duper... Can i know ur name???


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Posted: 9 years ago
I seriously cannot wait for ur nxt updAte. Pls update soon... Yu already taken ages. .
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Pls pls update today or befor Monday.
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I seriously cannot wait for ur nxt updAte. Pls update soon... Yu already taken ages. .



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Posted: 9 years ago
HI GUYS! i decided to update since its been a while.. well, because it has been a while.. here is a small recap on the previous chapter!!

PRECAP: Jodha and Jalal at the office party, Adham and Shariff tries to rape/molest Jodha...


Chapter 8


Jalal softly carries Jodha in his arms, and gets out of the reception hall from the back side with Abdul..
He had told Salima to bring Jodha's handbag and follow him.
Rukaiya and Salima both went along behind Jalal and Abdul.

They reached to the car outside, it was raining before. The roads were wet and the cars were full of water droplets.
Abdul unlocks the car with Jalal's keys and opens the back seat door as Jalal swiftly walked in, sat, and puts Jodha in his lap. He made sure that she was still asleep. She seemed unconscious. But she only fell asleep after crying so much.

He got Jodha's bag off Salima.

Salima: Sir please take care of Jodha.. And let us know if you need anything. I'm always here Sir.

Rukaiya: Sir I am extremely sorry about whatever has happened.. I never knew my boyfriend Adham would ever stoop this low and..

Jalal: Rukaiya, nothing is your fault. Fair enough he was your boyfriend but whatever happened was done by him. Not you.
And Salima, thank you very much, I will let you know how Jodha is.

Rukaiya: Sir take care of her and please inform me as well.

Jalal: Sure, I will. You girls go home safely and once you ladies reach home, text me and let me know.

Salima and Rukaiya: Yes sir

Jalal nods and says;

"Abdul, let's go"

Abdul starts the car and leaves. While driving on the dark roads, Jalal gets jodha up a little bit and rests her head on his chest. He hugs her and a tear dropped down his eye. He kissed on her head and to himself he says;

'I am so sorry jodha, I am so sorry my jaan, I am so sorry. I could not protect you once again. But Jodha I know I was late but I am glad I reached on time before those bas*ards went further'

Jalal was swiftly planting soft kisses on her head/hair from a line.
Jodha was still dead asleep in jalals arms.

Jalal was thinking..
'What will happen when Jodha wakes up'
He got afraid and hugged her a little tighter and softly.

Abdul: Jalal.. Whatever happens, do not break down. Jodha bhabhijaan would need you when she wakes up.
Please don't break down okay?

Jalal: Abdul, I don't know what will happen when Jodha wakes up. How will I handle her..

Abdul: I know you too well Jalal, you will handle bhabhijaan very well. But promise me, do not fall weak in front of bhabhijaan. If you fall weak in front of her, then who will take care of her?

Jalal: I will do my best Abdul.

Jalal was just hugging jodha thinking what will happen when she wakes up..

They reached their destination.
Abdul parked the car on their driveway.
Jalal slowly opened the door and took Jodha in his arms again and swiftly but quietly walked inside the house.
Abdul followed and locked the front gate from inside.

Jalal straight away went to their bedroom and put Jodha on bed.
He turned the lights on and turned back to see Jodha.
He was left shocked when he saw all scratch marks and a hand print on her face.

He dropped on the floor as soon as he actually noticed Jodha's actual condition in the light.
Abdul came in and looked at his bhabhi..
Abdul also got shocked. Jalal and Abdul were too busy saving Jodha from Adham and Shariff that they did not notice what her condition was. Abdul looked at Jalal who was on his knees on the floor shocked with a tear on his cheek.

Abdul puts his arm on Jalals shoulder and bobs down to Jalal.
Abdul with a bold but low tone voice said to jalal;

"Bhai, you have to be strong to take care of bhabhi.. She will wake up any time soon."

Jalal looked at Abdul, and both gave each other a tight hug.
Abdul again says;

"You have to be strong, for bhabhijaan.. At least. I can understand what you are going through right now, but bhabhijaan will need you Jalal, please remain strong as my brother Jalal."

Jalal broke the manly hug and wiped his tears.

"Don't you worry Abdul. I will take care of my Jodha.. I am with her no matter what. I need you to kick Shariff and Adham out of our company.. Not just that. Make sure they never get a job anywhere in future.. No matter what. But for now I will take care of my Jodha"
Says jalal.

"Jalal I'll leave now. I am sure you will take the best care of bhabhijaan. You is all she needs right now.
Call me if you need anything. I will catch a taxi and go back."
Abdul says while he pats on jalals back giving him support and strength.

Jalal nods his head.

Abdul leaves and jalal locks the door.

Jalal goes back to his room and again sees jodha in this state. He gets restless as he sees her again.
He controlled himself with much difficulty.
He turned the main lights off and turned on their side lamp which was dark blue. He went next to Jodha on the bed.
He looked deeply at her with much concern.

10 minutes passed and she was still not awake.
Jalal held her hand and kissed on her palm.
He got up and got comfortable by changing his suit into normal clothes.
He wore his track pants and due to his habit, he left himself shirtless.

He swiftly went to their cupboard and got her silk rosy pink night gown out.
He went back to her slowly without disturbing her sleep he took off her saree and petticoat and blouse.
He slid it down without making her feel it. He took off all her jewellery's and bracelets and placed them on the dressing table.
He went back to her and took off her undergarments and bra as well.
Now she was completely naked on the bed. Jalal could clearly see all the marks she has on her body which is normally spotless.
He carried her up in his arm and puts the night gown over her back, as if he is covering a small blanket over a little newborn baby. He lays her back on bed, puts her arms inside and ties the night gown on.
He covered her with the blanket and sat quietly next to her on the bed. He was holding her hand in his hand. He was waiting for her to wake up..

15 minutes later
Jodha was still sleeping and Jalal quietly had his head on her palm as he was holding her hand.
Jodha suddenly gets flashbacks of Adham all over her trying to kiss her, she started getting sweat droplets on her forehead and neck. Her head started moving from the right side to left and the left side to right.
Jalal had his eyes closed so he was completely unknown with Jodha's movements right now.
Jodha started fearfully murmuring in her sleep.
'No-no please le-leave me, please. I am Jalal's wife. I-i am pregnant, please leave me. Please please'

Jalal hears jodha and looks at her.
He saw she was drenched in sweat.
He gets worried for her and caresses her head and saying;

"Jaan, open your eyes. You're with your Jalal. Look baby, you're completely fine"

As Jalal said this, Jodha went all calm and quiet.
Jalal couldn't see Jodha's condition like this. He swiftly got up and almost speed-walked to the window and tries his best to control himself.

Jodha starts breathing heavily as she again gets a flashback of Shariff who pulled off her saree and threw it to the other side revealing her cleavage and stomach to them.

She wakes up with a jolt and sits on the bed yelling out
"NAAAHI" with her eyes shit tightly.

Jalal got scared and looked back at her. He saw that she's awake now.
He ran back to her, sat next to her and put his arms around her shoulders slowly trying to calm her down. And with a soft and low tone he says;

"Jodha, tum bilkul.."

[Jodha, you're completely...]

But as jodha feels a heavy, mans hand on her body, she jerks it off and says

"NAHi, Hummein choona mat, hummein mat choona"

[NO, please don't touch me, don't touch me please]

Jalal puts his arms on her shoulder again and in a little louder tone he says;

"Baby, it's me Jalal.."

Jodha quickly opens her eyes and saw that she is in her room.. She saw Jalal right next to her.
As soon as she saw Jalal, she quickly hugged him tightly and bawled her eyes out.
Jalal tightly hugs her back, and caresses on her long hair and back.

Jodha continued to cry. Jalal tried his best to control himself but he couldn't. He couldn't hear his beloved wife sobbing loudly on his chest. He hugged her tighter and silently ended up letting a few tears out as jodha was crying her heart out on his chest.

Jalal: Shh. Chup ho jao jodha. Kuch nahi hua hai..

[Shh. Be quiet Jodha. Nothing has happened..]

Jodha starts sobbing louder than before. She dug her nails into his back and said
"THEY TRIED FORCING ON ME JALAL"

To calm her down Jalal quickly said;
"Jodha they're behind the bars now, you're safe in my arms right here. Look, please don't be scared. You're with your Jalal"

Jodha takes her head off his chest and looks at him and yells again and says;
"HE MADE ME TOUCH HIS.."

Jalals eyes gets widen in shock hearing this. He understood what she was saying.
Jodha couldn't complete off her sentence. She immediately shut her eyes tightly and dropped her face with a bang in his neck.

She repeated herself.. 'He made me touch his..' as soon as she repeated this, she stopped. Dead silence in the room.. After a second she burst out sobbing again while hiding her face in his neck

Jalal was hell angry at the two disgusting men's who were behind bars right now. He wanted to shoot them dead when he heard from jodha what they made her do.
Jodha still had her face hidden in his neck and her arms on his chest.
Jalal carried her up and put her back into bed properly.

She was now laying down on her pillow but still Jodha was in the same position. She was not ready to let go of Jalal.
Jalal was on top of Jodha trying to free her hands off his neck now.
But jodha still had her face hidden and her hands got tighter on his neck.

Jalal gave no pressure of his weight on her.
He goes near to her ear and whispers;
"Calm down babe, let go of me, I am here with you"
Jodha made her grip on the back of his neck harder and didn't respond.
Jalal added;
"Jodha, hummein dekho, look at me"
[Jodha, look at me, look at me]

Jodha's sobbings were getting lower.
When jalal told her to look at him, she slowly and in a low whispering tone says;
'No jalal, *sobs* don't let go of me. *sobs* Don't leave me alone.. *sobs* these guys will again.. *sobs* *sobs* ...no, *sobs* I am only yours. *sobs* Please don't let go of me *sobs* *sobs*

Jalal understood that she is very shocked and afraid right now.
He gets very upset. He feels for Jodha. He can feel her pain.
He wanted to hug her tightly and cry in her lap.
But Jodha was the one who needed him right now..

Jalals eyes were becoming watery. He puts his head down to her neck gives her a peck.
Jodha slowly closed her eyes to feel his touch. Her hands automatically transferred into his hair from his neck.
Her sobbings were lowering.
Jalal lifts his head up, looks at jodha again, and again goes down to her neck and kissed her.
She slowly pulled his hair in her grip.

Now her sobbings stopped.
Jalal pulled her night gowns robe and opened it.
She still had her eyes shut.
He got both of his arms and placed it both on her bare shoulders and slid her night gown off.

In this dark warm room, with warm dark blue dim lamp, Jodha's bare body was visible to Jalal just like a shadow.
The warm dim blue lamp light hit her body and gave half of her bare body a blue shade.
He swiftly kissed again on her neck.

She stopped sobbing, though she was now breathing very heavily.
Jalal wanted to kiss her everywhere, he started to give her trails of kisses from her neck to her shoulders and down to her arms.
He gave a peck on her shoulder and moved forward to kiss her again.
His eyes laid on her wounds.

He felt a pinch to his heart when he saw Jodha's wounds.
His hand immediately went to the bed-side draw and he took out an antiseptic cream called Savlon.

He immediately opened it and squeezed some cream out on his fingers. He knew it would burn her when he would apply it. That's why he kissed on her lips and said,
"Keep your eyes shut Jodha, I am going to apply some antiseptic cream on your wounds."

Jodha opened her eyes and looked at Jalal.
She immediately said
"Nahin Jalal. Yeh dawa lagne se hummein bohot jalan ho gi. mat lagye"

[No Jalal, applying this cream will burn on me, please don't apply it on me]

"Please." She whispered. her tears started to roll out again.

Jalal: Shhh.. Chup ho jao, Ek dum chup.

[Shh. Be quiet, silence] he cutely snapped at her.

She sobbed a little.

He slowly kissed her tear away from the right side of her eyes and slowly moved to the left side to kiss away her left over tears.

He slowly moved down to her lips and slowly smooched on her lips. He took her lower lip in his mouth..
As soon as Jodha felt his wetness on her soft lips, she left out a soft moan and closed her eyes.

Jalal slowly while kissing her, moved his fingers to her wounds on her arm and applied the cream on her wounds.
Jodha was completely lost in his deep kiss. They had their lips completely locked with each other and Jodha's hands were playing with his hair.
As soon as Jodha felt the burn on her body, she thought Shariff scratched her again and that Adham is on top of her.
She freaked out and pulled Jalals hair very harshly and tried to get him off her.
She yelled out;
"GET OFF ME ADHAM"
Jalal got shocked seeing her in this condition, trying to push him off her thinking it's Adham.
In the same tone he yelled out;
"JODHA, OPEN YOUR EYES"

hearing Jalals voice, she stopped and opened her eyes and saw that it's Jalal, her love, her husband.
she looked at him with a very innocent sad face, she burst out crying again and quickly threw her arms around him and hid her face in his neck again.

Jalal knew it is going to be hard to make Jodha forget this. But he also knew that he has to be with her 24/7.

He whispered in her ears
"Hum hain jodha, apne pati ko nahin pehchaanti?"

[its me Jodha, don't you recognize your husband?]

Jodha tried to stop her tears. she kept breathing in and out heavily.
Jalal with his other hand caressed her head and kissed on her hair.

Jodha with a low sobbing voice said
"hummein laga ki.."

[I thought as if..]

Jalal: Shh. Shaant ho jao jodha, hummein dekho, ab hummein yeh dawa lagane do.
Thoda toh jale ga hi, magar hummari jodha toh kuch bhi seh sakti hai, hai na? My jodha is strong, right?

[Shh. Calm down Jodha, look at me, now let me apply this cream on you. It will burn a little, but my Jodha is strong and can handle any pain, right? My Jodha is strong, right?]

Jodha put her head back down on the pillow, shut her eyes tightly for 5 seconds, opened it again and looked at Jalal..
she put her lips together closing her mouth and sobbed inside nodding her head allowing him to apply the cream on.

Jalal smiled at her and said;
"My brave girl, my brave Jodha"
He gave her a tight peck on her forehead.
And started to re-apply medicine on her wounds.

It started burning again but at the same time Jalal was blowing on it, trying to give her some relief.
Jodha was silently sobbing inside herself, it was all noticed by Jalal.
He went to her other arm and applied some cream there.

All this time jodha had her eyes shut, trying to bare the burning sensation.
Jalal then applied a little bit of the cream on the side of her lip where it was bleeding before.

He put the antiseptic tube on the bed side table and said;

"Aakhein kholo aur deko, ho gaya"

[Open your eyes, and look, its done]

She opened her eyes and in a vulnerable voice she said;
"Thank you jalal.." *sobs*

She wasn't sobbing because of what happened with her today, but she was sobbing because of the burning sensation on her arm, due to the cream Jalal had applied on her.

Jalal then lovingly looks at Jodha and suddenly he let everything go..he started letting his tears out, he quickly hugged her tightly. He placed his head on her breasts. He was crying.. Crying his heart out on her bare bosoms.

Jodha quickly put one hand on his head and the other around his back hugging him very tightly. She sobbed, and he sobbed. Both were letting out their pain to each other..

After 5 minutes, Jodha tried to control herself.
She wiped her tears and said;
"Jalal, look at me, I and your baby, both are completely fine. If it wasn't for you, if you didn't come on time, I would've probably been raped by those two today.."

Jalal quickly put his head up and covered her mouth from his hand. He shook his head said saying no.
"Never jodha. I promise you that you will get full justice Jodha. And I promise you that this will never ever happen to you ever again.."

Jodha smiled a little. Jalal wiped her tears away.
Then Jalal added;
"Par haan, I can't promise you about me.. I will rape you anytime I want"

[But yes, I can't promise you about me, I will rape you anytime I want]

Her eyes became bigger hearing this.
She let out a laugh. Jalal smiled, caressed her head and said
"Woh bhi without any warning"

[that too, without any warning]

Jodha laughed again and both hugged each other tightly.

"You can rape me, love me, or ravish my body anytime Jalal, I don't care..it's your right..my body owns to you, I am yours anyway"
She says..

Jalal whispered to her;
"I will never let go of you Jodha, I will always be with you.. I love you my jaan"

Jodha without saying anything broke the hug and kissed him on his manly chest twice and hugged him again.

Jalal broke the hug again, he goes down and caressed her stomach. leaving a smooch on her tummy, he pulls the blanket and covers themselves with it.
He moved her night gown which was on the bed when he it took off to apply medicine on her.
Both laid down in bed giving each other a bone crushing hug.
Jalal asked her;
"Do you need to talk to me?"

Jodha replied;
"Nahin jalal, I have nothing to say"

"I am here to listen, do you need to take it out? but promise me you won't cry"
says the loving husband!

A tear dropped out her eye.

"Bole the na, no crying babe" he adds as he wipes her tears away.


[told you right, no crying?]

Jodha hugs him tighter and says; "no Jalal, I dont want to say anything. I am just thnkful to you, to my husband that he reached on time and saved me..


She adds
"You know Jalal, I got very scared when they came in the room.. For a moment I thought I should kill myself. But then I thought of our innocent child.. And only prayed to god that he keeps me and our child safe"
She hugged him tighter and added
"I can never give my body to anyone else other than you, you're my husband, my love, my life, my everything. I can't imagine anyone even touching me.. But today.."

Jalal cuts her in-between and says;
"Shhh. You're only mine Jodha, I am sorry that I didn't reach there on time before all this happened.. but Jodha, I am glad that I came before their plan succeeded. I am sorry Jodha, I should've taken you with me.."

Jodha looked at him while resting her head on his chest and her arms rested on his stomach. She asks;
"How did you come inside by the way? I thought Shariff locked the door.."

Jalal then tells her,
"Yes Jodha, I went down to tell Abdul that you're not well and that we should leave now. So to collect my award from my behalf and give it to me at office.
I told Abdul, and a waiter came to ask us for some drinks.
We said no, and we were coming upstairs. Abdul then called that waiter and asked for the keys of the restroom so that when we leave, he can lock it and give it back to the waiters.
But Jodha, when we reached there, we saw the door was closed. As I tried to open it, we found it locked. But when I was going to knock, we heard your cry.. You yelled out 'Naahi?!"
"Yes, that is when they pulled my saree off and saw my cleava.."

Jalal quickly put his hand over her mouth and said;

"You don't have to tell me what they did Jodha" he crushes her to himself and hugs her very tight.

"Jodha, when I heard your cry, I didn't think what was happening with you.. In fact, I had no idea why you were crying for. Abdul then quickly unlocked the door with the keys.. And what we saw Jodha.." He stopped there.
he turned right over to Jodha and both quietly laid there hugging each other..

"I love you Jalal.." whispers Jodha.

"I love you too mera bacha" says Jalal kissing her on her forehead.

Jodha rests her head on his bare chest and slowly both fall asleep in each other's arms..


PRECAP: jodha slowly recovering!

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Edited by mohammadnoureen - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
lovely update dear...
I loved d way jalal cared jodha a lot...
nd abdul was right that jalal should be strong at that time...
update next part asap dear...
nd thanks for pm...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Very very nice and lovlest chapter update nest chapter soon pm me thanks for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
vry nice chppy..
emotional...
tnxx for the PM
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Posted: 9 years ago
awsum dr

loved it
both are consoling each other

update asap
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Posted: 9 years ago
superb lovly chap dear..
loved it.
abdul was rit ja hv to be strong fr jo...n
m happy tht he stay strong infrnt of jo..although he was so brokn frm inside seeing jo in this condition.
aww...luv the way ja tking care of jo as lik a little child...beautyful.
this both adhm n shareff shuld punishe severly.
beautyful updt dear..
eagrly waiting fr nxt updt
updt soon n thanks fr pm..

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