FF: ArHi: Perfectly Imperfect::COMPLETE

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premdewaani

@premdewaani

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#581

Really nice story dear:-)) read all the parts in one go..

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win7

@win7

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#582

Lovely story. I loved it.

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hotchic.

@hotchic

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#583

Wonderfully written story.😊

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Aishwarya

@Aish002

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#584

nice story...very well written...loved it...ending was super cute...😊

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Arshi67

@Arshi67

Sparkler

+ 13

Posted: 10 years ago

#585

Just read this story again.

And again marvelled at how beautifully you captivate with your sublime weaving of words.

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luvbug

@luvbug

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#586

read this all over again...very beautifully written...

and absolutely loved the epilogue 😃

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chsweety22

@chsweety22

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#587

read it in one go

awesomeee

keep writing

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moonstonespirit

@moonstonespirit

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#588

This is amazing!! I read the whole thing at once. I couldn't but my phone down till I completed.

The title is just brilliant. Perfectly Imperfect is a tag I associate with another desi tv couple I love. Seeing it here compelled me to read through your story. I am so glad that I read it though. Such beautifully written price of work. The past was integrated into the story really well. And just the way you described their feeling

I loved the ending. And how cute is Aryan!! He truly is their son in every sense.

I really enjoyed reading it. Will go and checl out your other stories now.