MaNan FF 'Uljhane' Chapter 3. The Reminiscence, Pg.4

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Posted: 9 years ago

#11

Hey ..

Thanks guys for the positive feedback. Working on the second part. Will update by today evening , pakka. 😃

Please do give your feedback, I need both positive and negative ones. 😳

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The next chapter is ready and its titled The Hot Payback... 😉

Hit the break guys... Its not that kind of "HOT" ... Read till the end, then only you will know... 😛..

A heads up...Since Nandini's childhood was in Madras, now Chennai. She will occasionally use tamil words and sentences. For those who do not follow the language translation will be given at the end 😊.

Here she has used "Korangan".. meaning monkey in all South indian language😆

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suraiya77

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Posted: 9 years ago

#14

Hahaha!
It was really a hot payback
loved it
Omg!
Manik is really a big flirt the story is totally different
update soon

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sharon.babu

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Posted: 9 years ago

#15

awesome update...

again bumped into each other...tit for tat...

their nick names were just awesome...bimbo and korangu (i am from tamil nadu...and the word for monkey is korangu not korangan...)

keep up the good work...continue soon...

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Partholic_Girl

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Posted: 9 years ago

#16

The hottest payback ever seen 😉 😛
I really really loved the track 😉
Its awsum 😳
I loved it to the core
The plot is really very interesting 😃
Stay blessed
N do continue soon 👏 👏

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: sharon.babu
awesome update...
again bumped into each other...tit for tat...
their nick names were just awesome...bimbo and korangu (i am from tamil nadu...and the word for monkey is korangu not korangan...)
keep up the good work...continue soon...

Thanks a lot for the feedback and the correction. I am not a south indian but have many friends who speak tamil and malayalam. I just came to know that, as u said korangu is tamil and koragan is malayalam. 😕... I just took help from them to make this FF a little more authentic. Will keep in mind the difference henceforth 😊

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mananneetu

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Posted: 9 years ago

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hey...great update...luved manbir conversation...
nd again manan bumped into each other..yeah tit fr tat... 😲
i must say that the revenge was really very hot . 😉 wat does that nick name given by nandu to manik mean?? does it mean monkey!?
update soon..

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: mananneetu
hey...great update...luved manbir conversation...
nd again manan bumped into each other..yeah tit fr tat... 😲
i must say that the revenge was really very hot . 😉 wat does that nick name given by nandu to manik mean?? does it mean monkey!?
update soon..

Yup U are right. Nanndu calls Manik Korangu meaning monkey,, 😆 Its tamil 😊

Well people say revenge is a dish thats best served cold... But this is Manik and nandini's story.. nothing goes as planned😈

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Posted: 9 years ago

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I came to know that there is a 10 post limit for newbies. Not fair😭anyways, I already cooked up a scenario for their next part. 😃 But I cant post until tomorrow

Well, to be frank, they just met today There is lots and lots that will happen in the future.. sometimes good and sometimes bad...

Do click that on like button if u like what u read till now... prettty pleaseee...😳

And yes, please give lots and lots of comments... I am open to all... negative and positive...😃

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