Ishra FF : Jis Ko Dua Mein Maanga (Prologue)

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey guys,

I'm starting a new story. I am not good in writing but still I tied. Please read it and drop your feedback. Thank you. 😊

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Jis Ko Dua Mein Maanga

Prologue

Outside Bhalla House..

Ishita stepped out of the car outside the Bhalla house. A nice cool breeze touched her face and caressed her cheeks. Ishita stopped in her steps, took a long breath and closed her eyes tightly. She felt his presence. Even before stepping inside the house, she knew that he was here inside the house. Raman Bhalla was present inside the house.

Inside Bhalla House.....

Raman was supposed to return home next week, but Today was his younger brothers marriage. The marriage was fixed in a hurry and took place within a week after the engagement. Raman was also informed about the wedding just two days back. Raman wanted to take a earlier flight, but as it was the last moment decision, he couldn't get an earlier flight.

Raman was in his room freshening up. He had taken a non-stop flight from New York. He had asked Neelu for a hot cup of coffee. He was very tired, but right now he was least bothered about it, as he was excited to meet that one person for whom his eyes were craving since the last two months.

Ishita Iyer, his Madrasan. THE LOVE OF HIS LIFE.

He knew that his parents must have definitely invited Ishita and her family for the wedding. He just couldn't wait any longer to finally meet Ishita after two months.

Suddenly he heard a lot of commotion in the living room. He smiled as he knew that everyone must have returned from the wedding. He took his coffee cup and went outside his room. His room was on the second level of the house, which overlooked the living room downstairs. He went and stood outside his room by the railings of the corridor. His eyes were searching for Ishita.

He heard his Toshi jee's voice "Ishita, puttar yahan aao.".

It was as if Ishita also felt his presence there, cause no sooner she stepped inside, she looked up and their eyes finally met.

And there she was, his beautiful Ishita, standing there looking at him. He couldn't take his eyes off of her. She was looking so beautiful, almost like an ANGEL. She was looking exactly the way he pictured her to look on their...

Suddenly Raman dropped the coffee cup from his hand, as the image of Ishita standing in front of him, sunk in...

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Please write your honest views and comments, as it will encourage me to write further. Criticisms are most welcome.

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice start Reema.
Interesting too.
Cont soon..
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Looks good!!! Start without hesitation n pm me dr!!! All the best...
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Interesting concept. ..
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Seems interesting.
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Very interesting start!
Please continue soon.. looking forward to this! 😊


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Originally posted by: Anu_IshraDivan

Very interesting start!
Please continue soon.. looking forward to this! 😊


Thank u dear.
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nice prologue reema
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