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Posted: 9 years ago
Dadi wanted geet for maan.she not like ria kapoor,maan s fiance.that girl is so rude just like maan.maan could not move from geet side after watching her in white kamiz.if she ok,maan would like her,dadi thought it.maan filled mang of geet by mistake
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Posted: 9 years ago
Dis story is not simple like i thought.maan has a past as like geet.both of them r in same boat.maan alwz blame geet for her pain.but geet come just after vicky s marriage.but i m sure,maan ll crazily love geet.nd can't wait for it
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice one,maan fearing something is it related to his past or just a dream indicating towards the future,and he is blaming geet for the nightmares,just because of the sindoor incident,other side the family is deciding maan's marriage, eagerly waiting for next part
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Posted: 9 years ago



I'm sorry. Yash, Naina and Dadima looked up in shock. Don't look at me like tat. Maan gave them a nervous smile. Maine sorry kaha kal raat ke liye.

Kyu. Yash asked. Sorry kyu. Tumne tho sahi kiya na.

Dad please don't be sarcastic. Yash grinned. I know I should not have reacted like tat but you know how I feel after those nightmares.

Yeah and poor Geet... acha kiya Maa tat you decided to send her away. Yash ignored Maan. Achi ladki hain and I do not want to make any false promises to Dheeraj and its better she goes back home.

I said I'm sorry. Maan said in anger. And for god's sake do not show as if you aren't listening me.

Kuch kaha kya. Naina asked. Chalo breakfast karte hain.

Mom I said sorry ok and Geet can stay here. The three of them just smiled. Ok I do have a problem with her but tat does not mean she can't stay.. aakhir aap hi tho kehti hain na Dadima. Dadima narrowed her eyes at him. Tat I need to learn to respect people so I'm trying and Geet kaha hain he looked here and there mujhe sorry kehna hain ushe kal raat ke liye.

Woh tho..

Bad man you still cry. And the devil was behind him. He closed his eyes trying to control his anger. Big bad man still cry Dadima.

Geet. She jumped seeing him turn towards her. I...

You stay away. Maan clenched his fists. You hate me na so Geet baby to hate you 1,2,3,4,5,6... Geet baby no talk and no stay here now.

I'm sorry Geet baby. Geet frowned at his sudden sorry. Your big bad man says sorry to you and you can stay with Dadima.

But you hate me na... you shout at Geet baby. She pouted. So Geet baby go.. Geet baby take Dadima and go away.

Wat. He was shocked and angry. How dare you take my Dadima away.. you..

See see you shout at Geet baby.. I hate you.. I don't like you. She cried banging her legs on the floor. You hurt me.. see she showed her hand tat had bruises from last night grip. I tell Di and Vicky friend to.. I tell police uncle too... I saw in TV.. you hurt me na so police take you.

I said I'm sorry.

No sorry... you hurt.. you bring blood of Geet baby. She stepped closer and showed him her hand. It was really bruised. I no stay here.. I take Dadima and tell police uncle you bring blood. And next second she pushed him and sat next to Dadima for breakfast. I tell police uncle Dadima.. see he bring Geet baby blood.

Hmmm.

Dadima. Maan frowned hearing his Dadima agree with her. You too.. how could you..

The same way would. She taunted him. Maanthe hain humne thodi galati ki but uski saaza Geet ko. She shook her head in pain. Pata hain all night she was crying with pain... aapko tho khush hona chahiye tat she is finally leaving your HOME.

Maine sorry kaha na Dadima. He repeated again. I just could not control myself. All I could see was her and somewhere I feel she's taking you away from me. Dadima smiled hearing him complain like a little boy. I don't share you Dadima aur yeh jabse aayi hain aap sirf shout karti hain mujhpar and there's no love for me.. so how can I just sit and watch she take you away from me.

Tum panch saal ke bache ho kya Maan? Yash asked with a smirk. Seriously you are running the top construction business and you act like a baby...I mean 5 years old.

When it comes to Dadima I do not care? He gave an angry look to his father. Dekho Dadima kaise ushe feed karti hain haan.

Do not I feed you?

Kab kiya.. since she came you did not even ask me a glass of water. He complained with irritation. And now since I said sorry she behaving weird.. maine sorry tho keh hi di hain so ask her not to go.

And why so? Maan shot a glare to his Mom. Bolo why.

Vicky and Pooja will be hurt and I do not want them to be upset.

But wat about you haan? Yash asked. You can't bear to stay a second with her.

I'll manage and I understood tat I have been unnecessarily torturing her and now I feel bad about it. He framed his words carefully. Its not right for me to say bad things when she does not even understand why I say them and she's already in pain and does not know wat mess her life is in so I have decided tat I'll try to help her and not to make her cry and now please don't look at me like tat.

Are you sure about your decision Maan? Dadima finally said something. I mean you would not try to...

No Dadima. He cut her. I know I have been bad but please give me a chance. Kal raat bahut socha maine and I realized how wrong I was so please do give me a chance to rectify my mistakes. He once again gave a sad nervous smile showing how sorry he was. Please..

Then say sorry to her. Dadima's sharp words cut through him. Apologize to Geet nicely.

Ok. He smiled a bit and walked towards Geet who was staring at him as if he was a subject to study. Geet...

I no talk to bad man.

Geet baby I'm so sorry.. sachi mein sorry. He pinches his neck gaining her attention. Sachi mein sorry Geet baby.. dekho Bad man really sorry for shouting at you and I promise I will never ever shout at you... Will you be my friend?

You play with me.. you give toffee. Maan's eyes wide. You play.. you give Geet baby toffee.

Yes I play and give you lots and lots of toffee. Geet smiled and pressed a kiss to his cheek making him freeze on his place. Something hit him so hard but then soon he was recovered with her blabbering.

Ok.. then Geet baby be new friend. And she started to clap making everyone smile. Dadima Geet baby new friend.. see new big Bad man friend.. na na no big bad man now only new friend.

Ab chalo breakfast karo. Naina gave Maan a sweet smile and served him the breakfast while Dadima continued to look at him. She knew her Maan wasn't bad at heart but sometimes trusting him was a big step when he wanted something very badly.

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New friend.. new friend. Geet screamed his name seeing him enter the mansion. New friend.. new friend play with Geet baby na. She smiled and continued to shout from her place where she was playing building blocks. Please play new friend. But Maan tried to ignore her and walked upstairs but stopped seeing Dadima stare at him from one corner and he knew his Dadima kept a close eyes on him from last few days.. You no play new friend.. she asked with sadness.

I do play Geet baby. He stepped behind and smiled at her. But you see I just come from office and I sweat..

Swat. She pouted not knowing wat it meant. Geet baby no swat new friend.

Not Geet baby but new friend swat... I mean sweat. He mentally cursed himself for behaving like Geet. I go to my room and take bath ok.

I give new friend bath. Maan eyes almost popped out. I know to give bath.. you go nangu and I give bath ok.. we na play in water nangu-nangu.

Wat. He did not believe wat he was hearing. Wat we do?

We play nangu-nangu new friend. Geet smiled and stood up on her legs. You see you Geet baby new friend na so we bath together.. nangu-nangu in water. And she grabbed his hand and started to drag him upstairs. Geet baby like water so we play lots and lots ok.. nangu-nangu and for few seconds he was so lost tat he did not even realize Geet had dragged him and he easily walked few stairs.

Geet.. Geet.. He suddenly started to yell coming back to senses. Geet. Geet..

No no Geet... only Geet baby new friend. She continued to walk and since Maan wasn't putting any force she was able to drag him along with her. You new friend na so say Geet baby ok.

Geet.. just wait.. just wait ok.. he tried again but when she did not stop he added sugar in his words. Geet baby wait na.. your new friend wants to say something please.

Kya hain. She suddenly stopped and looked at him in anger. You no nangu bath.. you no Geet baby bath.

I want to.. I mean no. He corrected himself. Geet see you girl na. He slowly held her hands in his and new friend boy so how we nangu bath together.

But we friend na.. we do all play bath eat dance sleep together. She was so innocent tat anyone would have jumped with her invitation and poor soul Maan was falling into his own trap. We now nangu bath ok.. in your room.. Dadima say you have big wash and Geet baby see.

Kab kaha.

Kab kaha. Geet repeated his words. Kab kaha.

Grrr

Grrr

Shut up

Shut up.

Geet baby. Maan smiled at her trying his sweetness on her. See I take you in my room ok but you play and I bath alone.. I big boy na and if you listen to me I give you new game and new toffee.

Really. She asked with excitement. You give new game.

Yes..

You also take me in new car. Maan frowned. God from where his car came. You take me in new car and I give you kiss ok.. like this and she kissed his both cheeks and the very moment Maan felt a current pass through him. Something different feelings but then he shrugged and smiled at her. You take na.

Yes I take.

Ok then you go bath and I sit in your room and play on your mobile. He just nodded. He looked at her and somewhere something warned him for worst but he did not know wat it was coz he suddenly smirked and grinned evilly as he was going to do wat he decided and Dadima who was standing and looking at them from a corner smiled seeing Maan really changed. He had proved tat he meant wat he said and since last few days he was very nice and calm with Geet.

Precap: And wats on devil's mind.😡😡

Next Update after 175+ likes... as always update is ready.😛. you give likes and comments and I update tomorrow again.

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NEXT : PART 7


Edited by sdlife19 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
unres my part -5 comment on page - 79 ...
thanks for the pm Di
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Posted: 9 years ago
yupii you updated ... let me read first fir comment karte hu ..
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Posted: 9 years ago
Meri jannat di I keep falling in love wid our maaneet here wid every update di jab maan ne sorry kaha na geet ko usi waqt kuch gadbad lag raha tha aur it proved too but di hoping ke dadi can see wht maan is planning in his devil mind, but di in sab main geet was happy getting a new frnd in maan aur jab ever geet kisses maan innocently something stirs in him but he's letting go of tht feeling now di waiting for maan to fall in love wid our innocent cutie aur waiting for the next update eagerly😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
Never mind. 😆
Lovely update Shobha 😊
Edited by Maaneet099 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wonderful part... I don't trust his yaar... The way he appolgize to his parents n willing to say sorry plus letting her stay at Km... Very fishy... Geet have some devil plan in his sleeve... Maan is getting effected by geet but ignoring it... Dadi is not trusting him truly yet.. Maan is getting jealous of geet bcs he wants dadi fr himself.. Precap... Hope he don't hurt geet..
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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome update . maan behave nicely with geet !! big wonder , even dadima fell on his trap & think he is changed . sure he is planning something against geet . geet want to give bath to maan 😉 that was hilarious 😆
precap is interesting
waiting for next

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