MANAN FF: IT'S NOT END,IT'S NEW START..... Chapter 4 pg 29 - Page 15

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Posted: 9 years ago
Awww... I loved the bond between nandu navya aaliya mukti n dhruv...
That was so sweet...
They are gonna celebrate manik's bday even though he is not wid them...
Either manik or cabir is in critical state in the hospital heina...
Bt how n what happ?
Wanna read more...
Thnkz 4 the pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
Ausom
update
Yaar
I just love It
Continue soon
Eagerly waiting for next part
Love
Diya😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
Ok so my boys are in London, but which one is Manik and which one is my Cabira. Hope both will be alright and comeback soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update
But confused as to who is in ICU, Manik or Cabir?? But whoever it is pls make him alright soon.

Can't see Manik/Cabir like this, like one of them in ICU and one not able to tell his friends about anything...

And loved Fab 3 and NavNi bond.

Cont Soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Loved the update...👏
the new bonding between fab3 and navya nandu is awesome...
wow manik bday celebration...
who is in the hospital?? is it manik??😲
really interesting...
waiting for you to open up more suspense...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hey Sam..
nice update dear..
I think cabir is in icu..
Waiting for next update..
Continue soon..
Thanks for pm..
Bye..
Take care..
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice update...
Awsumm yr...liked it
but whose in icu? Its manik or cabir
Eagerly waiting to knw...
Thamk uh for pm
Update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Thanks for d pm dear

Ohhh no phr se suspence...
Way too excited to knw more abt dis
Pls update soon
Can't wait to knw what's gonna happened next
It's more interesting than serial...
Thanks for writing dis dear
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Posted: 9 years ago

SORRY GUYS...

COULDN'T POST DOWN STORY

SORRY FOR THE INCONVEINCE CAUSED

I HAVE FACTURED MY HAND IN EXCITEMENT...

('MAY BE PARTH WILL COME' THIS IS EXCITEMENT)

AND ADMITTED IN HOSPITAL FROM PAST 1 WEEK

MY FRIEND WHO HAS BEEN HELPING ME OUT WITH THE TYPING HAD BEEN OUT FOR THREE DAYS ...


Hope U All Will Like It...

Thanks for Ur Love...

Keep Showering Ur Love Nd Blessings On Me...

So Here Is Next Part ...

I Hope U Will Enjoy...

Chapter 3

Scene 1

Mumbai, Night Time

Moorthy Residence...

Nandu Is Sitting In Her Balcony & Gazzing at the Stars...

Thinking About Manik...

Thoughts Raced Through Her Mind.

"Manik Where R U? Where Did U Suddenly Disappear? I Want U By My Side... All I Want Is U Only U... Nothing Else... I Want U To Hold Me. Promising Me That U Would Never Ever Leave Me Like This Time U Did..."

"I Love You Manik... I Love You Hamesha..."

She Again Gets Busy In Gazzing At Stars...

(She Never Loves Stars But After Manik She Started To Love Them... B'coz It Makes Her Feel Her Manik's Presence...)

After Some Moments She Remember That She Haven't Invite Aryaman

She Took Her Cell Nd Msg Aryaman

"Tmrw Is Manik's B'day ... We All R Gonna 2 Celebrate It... Do Come @ 11:00 Am"

Scene 2

London, Morning

The Boy Slept In His Sitting Positions. His Swollen Eyes Witnessing How Much He Had Cried...

Dr. Came Near Him. Ruffled His Hairs... Nd Wake Him... Said Him "Go Nd Fresh"

Scene 3

Mumbai, Early Morning

Nandu Wake Up As Soon As Sunrays Hits Her Face...

She Prayed To Her Aiyappa for Every ones Well-Being... Nd Special Prays For Manik...

"Keep Manik Healthy Nd Happy... May Fulfill His All Wishes."

She Also Said To Herself That "Today's Celebration Will Go Smoothly Nd without Any Hurdle"

She Is So Much Happy Today...

Why Should'nt She After All Today Is Her Protector, Her Friend, Her Love, Her Boyfriend's B'day...

She Gets Herself Ready For College...

She Stands In Front Of Mirror She Smiled Thinking About Manik...

But Her Smile Will Live On Her Face Or It Will Fade Soon??

She Picks All Bags Which She Have Shopped Yesterday While Returning Home...

She Also Msged Mukti to Bring Cake along While Coming To College.

Scene 4

Mumbai

Space Academy

Nandu Reached College. She Has Planned Everything. She Goes Towards Music Room.

But There She Got Shock...

All Instruments Were Found Nowhere... She Gets Tensed. She Couldn't Find Anything

She Ran Outside.

She Dashes With Aryaman

Aryaman: Hey Hii Nandini!!!! What Happened? Why R U Running Like This?

Nandini: Aryaman (Panting) ... Who Music Room... Music Rooms Se Sari Instruments GayabHai...

Aryaman: Are Instruments Na Who HongeYahiKahi Kisi Aur Room Mein NahiToh Library Mein Honge

( He Said Casaually )

Nandini: Aryaman... Yeh Fab5 Ke Instruments HaiInhe Koi BhiMatlab Koi BhiNahi Hath LagataHai...

(Suddenly Peon Passes By... Nandu Ask Him About Instruments)

Nandini: KyaAapKoPataHaiKe Fab5 KeSare Instruments KahaHai?

Peon: Ha Who Nyonika Mam Ne Sare Instruments KoUnke Cabin Mein RakhaHai...

Nandini: Thanks

(Peon Goes)

Nandu to Herself: Nyonika Mam... UnheKyaZarroratHai? Kahi Ye Phir...

(Her Chain of Thought Is Broke By Aryaman)

Aryaman: Nandini Let's Go

(At That Moment Fab3 Navya Arrive... Nandini Narrate Them The Whole Thing...)

Everyone Leaves To Meet Nyonika

Scene 5

London

Boy after Freshning Came in Dr.'S Cabin...

Dr Spoke To Him...

Dr.: I Have Talked With My Seniors... And Seniors Said This Case Is Too Difficult To Handle.. We Have To Operate Him... But...

But...

But...

(Dr Was Hesitating To Inform Him)

But... There Is Less Chances Of Success...

It Means If Operation Undergoes Successfully Then He Can Live His Life Like Before But If It Is Unsuccessful Then He Will Go In Coma For Lifetime Or It May Cause A Death Too...

All Over Chances Of Success Is 25% ...

(Dr Turned To Watched Him)

He Saw The Boy That He Turned Numb Not Able To React... Dr Shook Him)

Reality Hit Him He Become So Weak So Weak That He Unable To Speak Up

Dr Patted His Back and Said "Decision Is Yours Only"

Dr Left Him All Alone To Make His Decision Of Life

Scene 6

Mumbai

Space Acadamy

Nyonika's Cabin

Nyonika Was Talking On Her Phone ... At That Moment Everyone Comes ...

Nyonika Cut the Call Nd Shouted On Them

Nyonika: What The Hell Is This? Doesn't U All Have Manners?

Mukti: We Have Manners Nd We Show It Only On Our Loves Ones So... I Hope U Have Understood

Nyonika: What's The Reason That Made U All To Come Here?

Nandini: Aap Ne AisaKyuKiya? AapKoPataTha Na?

Nyonika: KyaPataTha? What All R U Talking?

Aryaman:Mam AapkoPataHai Ki Hum KyaBaatKarRaheHain?

(He Pointed Towards All Instruments)

Nyonika: Ohhh So You All Are Talking About This... Ha Maine Hi Sare Instruments HatayeHai Music Rooms Mein Se

Nandini: But Why?

Nyonika: U 3rd Class Girl Who The Hell R U? To Ask Me ? Now U Will Teach Me What Should I Do Nd Don't Do? Don't You Dare To

(Everyone Gets Angry Listening To Nyonika)

Mukti: Mind Your Tongue

Dhruv: How Could U Talked To Her Like This?

Nyonika: Ohhh So U Make Them All On Your Side ... Tch... Tch... So Cheap

Aliya: Mam... Don't You Dare To Talk To Her Like This Or Talk About Her...

She Is Our Life... She Have Done So Much For Us... She Became Our Support System... She Stood For Us But This All Things You Will Never Understand

Everyone Gets Emotional

Nyonika: Cut The Crap What U Want Say Fast I Don't Have Time To Spend On Loosers Like You...

Nandini: We Want Our All Instruments

Nyonik: Kk Then Take It Fast Nd Leave

(Everyone Pick Up Their Instruments...Dhruv & Mukti Pick Up Their Respective Guitar Aliya Her Keyboard Navya Helps Her Arayman Was Going To Pick Manik's Guitar But Nandu Stop Him & Herself Goes Towards Guitar Nd Pick It Carefully)

(Bg Song YehDosti... MiltiNasseb Se)

Pheeww

Finally Done It

Sorry Guys I Am Stopping Here But I Promise I Will Update Next Part Soon...

That Part Will Be A Long One Nd U Will Love It

I Hope U Will Not Disappoint Me...

Plz Plz Do like Nd Comment

B'coz In Such Boring Atmosphere Of Hospital Your Comments Nd Likes Give Me Peace Nd Encourage Me

Plz PlzPlz

Edited by Samruddhi_Kadam - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
nice update tc get well soon

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