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Unress!!
Once again m first...yayyiiee😊😛
First of all m speechless each nd evry emotion written nd portrayed by u was lyk woooww...it actually made me cry ...it's very rare dat i cry while readingg👏
Fr manan...it's lyk the qoute has come true'' one day someone will come into ur lyf..hug u so tight nd took all ur pain away...thn u realise why it never worked out with anyone elsee''🤗
Nandu's anger nd manik manaofying was greattt😳😳
I must say u hve grown brilliantly as a writer...i hve seen u frm d start...earlier it was good...but nw its best,,,,,ur vocabulory nd ur commands wid d words has become so very much better👏👏❤️...u hve actually proved it...ur way of portraying feeling has improved tremendously...dis update said it all😃😃😉
The manan talk was amazing...beautifully justified fr both the prospectivess😳👏
I luvd d hot manan romancee😉
Cabir...jamming srsly hhaayeee😳
Dinner was so cute...everyone feeding each other...awww❤️
It was a brilliant update
Always keep writing😊
Edited by Chocolava14 - 10 years ago