Till My Last Breath(A kriyansh Melancholy)

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Heya people...
I hope u remember me... 😛

I am back with one new shot.. It can may be a two or three shot.. Don't know depends on the words... 😛

okay so first of all as the topic name says its a kriyansh melancholy so obviously its going to have a sad ending... Sorry but I really wanted to write something like this.

Pls pls do read people... N do tell me how it it?? I've wrote something after a very long time... Hope you all will like it.

Love Megs :*
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Index

Chapter 1- scroll down 😃
Chapter 2- coming soon 😉





P.S.- banner credit goes to NITA... 😳😃
Edited by --megs_arsha-- - 10 years ago
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some thing about characters



Well this story consist the old d3 gang, even taani. no one has a negative role here. everyone is same as they were in the show.


happy reading... 😃😃


Edited by --megs_arsha-- - 10 years ago
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CHAPTER 1



TILL MY LAST BREATH

(A Kriyansh Melancholy)

17th September.

11:30 pm.

Mumbai, India.

Shekhawat Villa.

A house filled with people busy preparing for some occasion, big occasion. Every corner of house was filled with people. Everyone was running here and there. Some taking care of decoration some of food and some were busy in checking the place where the guest will stay.

12:00 am.

After whole days hard work everyone sat on the sofa in the main hall of the building to relax for some time before going to their rooms.

Rishi- so I guess aab hum sab ko so jaana chaheye.. kal bahot kaam hoga.

Ranvijay- haan. Tou chaleye sab chalete hai... kal jaldi bhi uthna hai.

Everyone then proceeds towards their rooms.

12:15 am.

On Terrace.

Sharon Rai Prakash

And

Swayam Shikhawat

Together With Their Families Request The Honor Of Your Presence

At The Celebration Of Their Marriage

Saturday, The Nineteenth Of September.

At Shikhawat Villa, Bandra Talao, Mumbai.

Swayam read their marriage invitation which made Sharon blush slightly. To hide her flushed face Sharon hugged him, hiding her face.

They both stayed that way for some time taking in the moment of togetherness, togetherness before their marriage.

Sharon- swayam

Swayam- hmm.

Sharon- I love you.

Swayam(smiling a bit)- I love you too..

To break their moment of little happiness two devils came namely Reyansh and Taani.

Taani- Bhabhi aab please jaldi chaliye isse pehele koi aap dono ko yahan dekh le.

Rey- haan swayam and Sharon aab tum dono ko humare saath chalna hoga... kyunki agar kisi ne tum dono ko saath dekh liya tou problem ho jaegi.

Taani- haan or aap dono ke saath saath sab mujhe or rey ko bhi nai chodenge.

Sharon- haan theek hai. Bye swayam and rey.

Swayam- bye Sharon. Take care.

Sharon smiled lightly at his sweet gesture and nodded her head signaling a yes.

Sharon- chalo taani.

And they both leave and soon rey and swayam too leaves.

18th September

Morning

8:00 am.

Sharon gets up she hears her phone's message beep. She voluntary fetches her phone to check whose message it is. As soon as you looks at the screen of her handset, a smile appears on her face reading the name of whom the message belonged to. Then she opens the message and reads what it said

"Hey! Sweetie,

Good morning. I hope you had a sound sleep.

Now quickly get up and get ready and come over to terrace to meet me. I'll be waiting. Before any comes and drag you for "Rasams".

Love Swayam"

Sharon then quickly gets up and goes to washroom to get all ready. After 20 minutes she comes out wearing a "lehenga-choli". She puts on her necessary accessories- big jhumkas, a light neck piece, some bangles and payal. She checks herself ones in the mirror and was about to go when she realizes that one thing is left. Biting her tongue she applies bindi on her fore head and leaves her room to go to terrace. As she steps out of her room she encounters Taani, who was just about to sneak in to her room.

Taani- bhabhi..

Sharon- haan taani jaldi bolo mujhe jaana hai.

Taani- haan vo mujhe pata hai apko kahan jaana hai. Mai apko bus ye he batane aayi thi ki apke pass sirf 15 minutes hai bhai se milne ke liye fir apki shaadi ki rasamein start ho jaegi. 15 minutes baad mai apko bulane aa jaungi aab jaldi se jao.

Sharon- thanks taani. Thank you so much.

Bye.

On Terrace

As soon as she reaches on to terrace, she finds swayam already waiting for her there. Swayam turns on hearing the melodious sound of her payal. He stands there in an aww seeing her bride. She was looking gorgeous, the most beautiful person for him. Sharon spokes breaking is sharonland moment.

Sharon- swayam did you talked??

Swayam- huh..

Sharon- swayammm...(shaking him) did you called her?? Is she coming???

Swayam- ohh haan. Maine phone kia tha but she didn't picked.

Sharon- Ok. Call her again

Swayam- okay

Swayam then dials a number. After 4-5 bells a girl picks up his call.

Girl- hello..

Swayam- hey.. hey..

Girl- hii Swayamm... kaise ho?? Shaadi ki sab taiyari ho gayi??

Sharon kaisi hai?? I know vo bahot khush ho gi na.. kyu nai hogi after all kal tum dono ki shaadi hai.. I am so so so happy for you... an..

Sharon- voh! Hold on babes. Kitna bolti ho..

Girl- oh Sharon tum b yahi ho.. hehe.

Sharon- haan. Aab ye batao tum kahn ho?? Aayi kyun nai abi tak.

Swayam- haan or kal mera call kyun nai pick kiya tha??

Girl- wow! Wow! Easy guys easy. Mai abhi abhi pahochi hoon Mumbai. Or swayam kal jab tumhara call aaya tha tab mai flight mein thi isleye.

Swaron- ohh... chalo jaldi se aa jao.. bye

Girl- byee... see u both soon.

Call ends.

Taani- bhabhi chalo jaldi.. sab apko bula rahe hai..

Sharon- haan taani mai aati hoon... bye swayam.

Sharon leaves terrace with taani and swayam follows them after few minutes. They both reach the main hall where everyone was waiting for them. Sharon was accompanied by taani, rinni, simmi, neha and vishakha. And Swayam with rey, vickey, nilesh, amar and bharat.

They had a small pooja in the starting and then starts with haldi ki rasam.

P.S.- the following song is played in background no one is actually singing it 😛

Banno re banno meri chali sasuraal ko
Ankhiyon mein paani de gayi
Duaa mein meethi gud dhaani le gayi (x2)

Re Kabira maan jaa
Re Faqeera yun na ja
Aaja tujhko pukaare teri parchhaaiyan
Re Kabira maan ja
Re Faqeera yun na ja
Kaisa tu hai nirmohi kaisa harjaaiya

Re Kabira, Re Kabira
Re Fakeera, Re Fakeera... (x2)


First sharon's mom come and apply haldi on her face, hands and feet. She does the same thing with swayam. Followed by her dad and then by swayam's parents.

Tooti chaarpai wohi thandi purvaai rasta dekhe
Doodhoon ki malaai wohi
Mitti ki suraahi rasta dekhe... (x2)

Ho Doodhoon ki malaai wohi
Mitti ki suraahi rasta dekhe...

Gudiya ri gudiya tera gudda perdesiya
Jodi aasmani ho gayi
Shagun pe dekho shaad maani ho gayi (x2)

Then comes the turn of their friends first comes simmi then vicky then neha then others. In the end comes rey he first applies haldi to swayam and when it comes the turn of Sharon he takes the whole bowl and puts all haldi over face. Everyone starts laughing and the rasam went great.

suddenly they hear someone from behind.

Girl- haww. Rasam over??? But I am left.

She comes forward takes haldi in her hands and apply it on swayam and sharon's face and hugs them.


Re Kabira maan jaa
Re Faqeera yun na jaa
Aaja tujhko pukaare teri parchhaaiyan
Re Kabira maan ja
Re Faqeera yun na ja
Kaisa tu hai nirmohi kaisa harjaaiya

Re Kabira, Re Kabira...


The whole gang had mixed emotions on seeing the girl who just entered.





Edited by --megs_arsha-- - 10 years ago
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note- I know this part has more of swaron... but cant help coz this is how I have planned the story to start...

I hope u guys though enjoyed the part 😃
Edited by --megs_arsha-- - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Superb meghna... udate soon!!!! waiting eagerly
Love,
Shirisha
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Posted: 10 years ago
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hey
i m always ready to read kr story
amazing story
awesome
so sworan r gonna marry
wow
is she kriya whom they r talking
ohh i m waiting for her entry...

come soon i m waiting
loved the update
thanx for pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Amzng story
Loved it

Keep smiling
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey...
Beautifully written...
I loved swaron's terrace scenes...
The gang celebrating haldi ceremony together was superb...
That was kria na???
Update soon...
Thnkz 4 the pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Amazing
Lovely update

But but but the real fun is yet to come

Ahh sad ending :-(

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