INFATUATION - Page 2

OMG!! it was urs...loved it...😊...but I think the whole plot  should have come out good if it was written in ss form...Maan's emotions were not justified clearly...😊
Edited by sanghita0000 - 9 years ago

i really love this OS... you present it really well... best of luck for next os

Originally posted by: sanghita0000

OMG!! it was urs...loved it...😊...but I think the whole plot  should have come out good if it was written in ss form...Maan's emotions were not justified clearly...😊

Nice os

lovely emotional OS! well written

Originally posted by: sheetalvasa

Nice os

Maan geet aur meera...teeno apni jagah pe sahi hai par meera ka loss sab se bada hai...

Mujhe yeh story mein meera sab se jyaada pasand aayi...jis tarha se woh maaneet ke bete ko apna beta bolti hai...awesome! Usska pyaar hi maan ko chod ne ke liye majboor karta hai...kitni aasani se woh apne aap ko sab se alag kar deti hai!!

Kuch aisa likhti raho...achha lagta hai...

ek ase khani jis mein galati sab ki ho kar bhi koi ghnaghar nahi 

Hai Anuradha first thanks for link. Nice OS.concept is old but the presentation is new. Everyone is at fault but no one is fault. Maan n Meera love is true but maan n Geet started with attraction n ended in love. Meera is the one who lost everything but she did it for maan. Maan n Geet suffered because they don't want to hurt Meera. So we can say that circumstances made this. Loved this OS. Please try to write more.

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Such a wonderful story

 Maan dint loved Meera he thought he loved her 😕

Geet?? I dont know  😔

This Infatuation things never understand by my brain

But one thing is clear in this Meera got hurt 😭

After spending with Geet he dint come to close to Meera

What i have to say about him?? 😔

Should i be happy with that or should i be sad that he dint said to Meera 😭

Meera took right decision to leave Maan that is the toughest decision she took 😭

It must be hard for her 😭

Nice story,concept dear 😊

Loved it. ❤️


Edited by Asheley - 8 years ago