KAYA FF ||GENEVON|| CHAPTER 1- PAGE 2 (29/9)

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~~~~~GENEVON~~~~~



Kabir inspected the planet carefully. It was the weirdest think possible he had ever seen. And ugly damn! It was ugly too. He couldn't even identify it's shape properly. What did it look like? A giant egg? Nope! Was it round shaped? Nope! He was desperately trying and failing to match it with any kind of structure. Leaning towards the huge monitor he was adjusting the system for a better view. He again leaned back to his chair and gave a deep sigh. His worry stricken face expressing disappointment. Suddenly a voice made him turn around "All good Captain?" Kabir returned a smile "Yes Ananya. Everything's fine." Ananya frowned "Are you ok?" Kabir smirked "Yes, I am completely fine. Thank you. I was just checking out Genevon. I've never seen anything like this before." Ananya turned to the monitor and set her eyes on the huge screen. There it was. That disgusting scene! A planet 10,0000 kilometres away from their spaceship. It looked like a creepy creature that could be anyone's horror. Ananya stared at the screen for minutes and then with a worry stricken face replied "Me neither Captain. Whenever I see this thing, it freaks me out. I don't know what's wrong but I am not having a very good feeling about it. Sometimes I think we should probably leave
immediately;far away from this thing." Kabir again sighed "I wish we could do that. But it doesn't matter if we want to continue this research or not; our will doesn't matter. We have orders to follow. And we have to follow them no matter what." He turned towards Ananya; took her hand and squeezed it lightly, "Are you scared?" Ananya smiled "No Captain, just a bit nervous and tensed. There's something about this planet which freaks me out." Kabir nodded "I know. But don't worry. We'll be ok." Ananya smiled "That I know Captain. Thanks." They oddly parted their hands as if they weren't willing to.


An awkward silence was followed and both of them were trying desperately to find words. Ananya stammered a bit "Um...uh Captain um...this..this report came from WSE today. They want us to start working as soon as possible. And I just wanted you to check it out and provide Dr. Zaslavski with further orders for the progress of the research." Kabir smiled "I will surely do that Ananya. Thank you. What would I do without my talented Engineer? This mission would have been impossible without you." Ananya tried and failed to hide her blush "Thank you Captain. It means a lot to me. Though I don't deserve the
compliment but..." "And why do you think that? Ananya, you are a beautiful and talented young woman. You deserve much more appreciation than you get." Ananya stared at him and he returned an assuring smile. Ananya could feel her all anxiety going away and it relaxed her. Suddenly the shuttle opened with a click and a number of people entered. "So, what do we have here Captain?" An old man asked as he stepped towards the monitor. Kabir got up in a welcoming gesture "I hope we are ready Dr. Zaslavski." The old man smiled a winning smile and said with confidence "We are good to go Captain." Turning towards the screen, he frowned and whispered "Genevon, here we come."



GENRE : SCI-FI (SCIENCE FICTION)

TAGS : THRILLER, ACTON, MYSTERY, SPACE, ROMANCE



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CHAPTER 1 - PAGE 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
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My god!!!! U here!!!!!!
Wow!good to see u here yaar!
I love your story in both forums...
It's just too good!
Hollywood science fiction...isn't it?

Too good !
Eagerly waiting!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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hehe story in both forum greT Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#4
Totally different plot.
Great! !
Please continue😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Excited...This is sooo interesting...Update soon😊
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[]{}<>CHARACTERS<>{}[]


(~)Kabir Sharma : A 28 years old young senior officer at the WSE and the Captain of 'Omnion'. He was a bright student at the space academy and graduated with excellence. He is an ideal leader and treats his crew with respect and care. He has won many medals from the WSE in the recognition of his bravery and success. Ananya is his love interest. He admires her a lot and secretly loves her. He respects Dr. Zaslavski a lot and admires him as his father.

(~)Ananya Kashyap : Ananya is a 23 years old young senior engineer at the WSE in the department of 'Space Technology and Engineering'. She is the lead engineer of 'Omnion'. She is beautiful and charming and an amazing person by nature. The whole crew admires her a lot for her sweet behaviour. She is Kabir's love interest. She sees him as an idol and has a crush on him. She is like a daughter to Dr. Zaslavski.


(~)Dr. Zaslavski : A renowned senior researcher at the WSE and the leader of research of 'Omnion'. He is
an old man in his 60's. Being the oldest person on board, he treats the whole crew as a loving father. Specially, he admires Ananya as his daughter. He also admires Kabir as his son.

(~)Dr. Suresh Chakrabarty : An assistant to Dr. Zaslavski and a junior researcher. He is very talented though sometimes gets scolded by his senior for silly mistakes. But also gets much appreciation from Dr. Zaslavski for his intelligence sometimes.


(~)Ashley Gordon : An assistant to
Ananya and a novice of the 'Applied Space Technology and Engineering'. She shares a sisterly bond with Ananya and sees her as an idol.


(~) Alpha-Prime : A specialised Robot of version-22e. He is a loyal member of the search team and sometimes takes up the task of cheering everyone with his jokes. He is sweetly teased by Dr. Suresh for being the first robot with a sense of humour.


<>{}[] Important Locations and Set-ups []{}<>


(=) WSE : World Space Enterprise. It is a huge space station and conducts research and various missions in space. It is associated with the 'Space Academy'.


(=) Space Academy : The educational institution for the students interested in space science. It allows students to get recruited to the WSE for their career.

(=) Omnion : An advanced scrutinising spaceship run by the most renowned search team.


(=) Genevon : A planet thousands of lightyears away from the solar system. It was detected by the WSE after the space detectors received some unusual radiations from it. Genevon has the outlook to haunt to horror.


(=)TOA-353 : A supercomputer which is in charge of functioning 'Omnion'. It is appreciated by the search team members.


<>~SYNOPSIS~<>



An Inquiring advanced spacecraft is conducted for a mission by the most renowned and skilled search team. They take up the challenge of exploring Genevon- a creepy and mysterious planet and soon find themselves in danger. They take part in an imbalanced war as they struggle not only to save their lives but also to save earth from the clutches of a destructing devil.

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Posted: 10 years ago
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A nice and different story. ..
Please do continue🤡
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice story want u to continue soon ... Please pm me with
ur future update


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<>||CHAPTER 1||<>


She is coming.

Are you sure?

Captain, I control this spacecraft. Who would know better than me?

Where is she now?

She is in the corridor. She will get here in 3 minutes 24 seconds 35 microseconds...

TOA please, I am not a machine ok! My brain can't function such tiny measures that well. Just tell me when she is about to open the shuttle. Damn! I'll die out of anticipation!

Captain, I'll count that too in nano, pico...

TOA I said enough!

You are not a machine but I am! I am programmed this way! You can't blame me! I am programmed to count from the highest level to the lowest one including huge to tiny numbers.

Ok ok got it TOA. Just inform me in those nano, pico and whatever.

Oh! There is 2 seconds 24 microseconds 34 nanoseconds 45 picoseconds for her to enter!



Just as TOA spoke up, Kabir heard the sound of the shuttle opening. Kabir turned around to greet a smiling Ananya.


An: Captain.

Ka: Ananya.


They stared at each other and then suddenly TOA spoke up again.

It's been 5 minutes 15 seconds 26 microseconds 32 nanoseconds 43 picoseconds since you two have been playing the 'stare game'.



Ananya looked away in embarrassment while her cheeks became red because of her heavy blush. Kabir felt like breaking TOA into pieces. Why always interrupting? Kabir tried to make Ananya comfortable as he gave a small laugh



Ka: Machines you know! It's just umm...well, forget it. Anything you wanted to discuss Ananya?

An: Captain, I was just doing the the last minute checking.

Ka: And?

An: We are ready Captain. I was just thinking that you take a round trip and confirm the final settings.

Ka: That's pretty well Ananya. Let's go.


They walked through the corridor towards the end of it and reached another shuttle which led to the centre of Omnion. As Ananya led the path, they resumed their conversation. The strong and compact metallic walls reflecting light and echoing their voices as they wandered through the round shaped platform



An: I have checked the machineries and fuel. Our two fuel tanks are full and we have an extra one that will carry some more gallons in case of emergency. Omnion's system is checked and she is completely fine and stable.

Ka: What about armory? I mean you know in case of...

An: That part is also taken care of Captain. We have EU-mod missiles and it is the most powerful in it's class. And it is the latest model.

Ka: That is good and umm...the risks and safety...

An: Captain, I know you are worried. But have faith. Omnion is the most advanced spacecraft and it is designed to face any odds of the space. We have calculated risks.

Ka: And that is the least we have to take for a mission.

An: Yes.
Ka: Thank you Ananya. Well done indeed. Your dedication and sincerity surprises me sometimes. The way you handle Omnion is just amazing. It shows how much you care for he
An: We all care for her Captain. After all Omnion is our home.

Ak: That she surely is. That is an undeniable truth. Well, I guess it's time for a meeting before we start our journey. Please join the meeting in ten minutes. I'll see you then.

An: Sure Captain.



They again were lost in each others eyes smiling ever so lovingly. Without breaking the gaze Ananya nodded and started for the main system chamber. Kabir kept on staring until she vanished in the corridor



TOA: Captain, may I ask you something?

Ka: My goodness! Our super intelligent super computer is asking for permission! TOA, were you even programmed with manners?
TOA: In some parts, you are right Captain. I have been programmed to ask permissions, to thank, to...

Ka: Ok ok TOA, got it. I don't want to know the list of manners you know. What do you want to ask?

TOA: Why don't you tell her?

Ka: Tell her what?

TOA: That you like her.

Ka: Well, I don't only like her TOA. I love her.

TOA: Then why don't you tell her?

Ka: It's not that easy TOA the way you think it is. You won't understand so just let it be.

TOA: What's hard in telling mere words?

Ka: You won't understand TOA.

TOA: Why?

Ka: Because you are a machine. You don't have emotions. It's nothing for you to say anything. But sometimes it is very difficult for us to utter mere words. It's because we are driven by emotions and you are not.

TOA: I have been programmed with...

Ka: They are not emotions TOA. Emotions are something that cannot be programmed. Emotions are the gift of nature that is given by God. It is something that humans can never create; something that is beyond our power. Well, now please TOA it's time for the meeting. Make an announcement of the conference.

TOA: Affirmative Captain.

Ka: Good.



Kabir folded his hands standing straight at the edge of the huge round floating conference table. Everyone became silent by his very known gesture as it was a signal that he was going to start talking.

Ka: Please be seated. As it is known to everyone that we are fully prepared for our new mission, so it's time to start our journey for the new dimension. Does anyone have anything to say regarding the mission?


Kabir paused for a while as he gaze travelled around the table

Ka: Well, I assume not.

Alpha-Prime: And so now our Captain is going to start his frequent orders.


Dr. Suresh laughed out and then stopped abruptly getting the strong glare from Dr. Zaslavski. Kabir suppressed his laugh and not breaking the serious expression on his face, spoke up


Ka: Alpha, discuss with Dr. Zaslavski about the situations that may occur cause we'll need your help mostly in inspection. Dr. Zaslavski, please prepare and check the arrangements for the experiments sir. Dr. Suresh, as Dr. Zaslavski will be busy handling the arrangements and instructing Alpha; you are ordered to do the preliminary experiments so Dr. Zaslavski can later continue the major ones. Miss Kashyap, as the final checking is done, prepare your team for the functioning of the machineries. And Miss Gordon, you are ordered to take care of the minor factors which Miss Kashyap won't get time to check.


Kabir took in a long breath as he finished. He again took glance of his major crew members


Ka: So, the primary meeting ends here. We'll have another conference as soon as we reach Genevon; to discuss further plans. Till then, good luck and all the best with your jobs.


Everyone got up in a swift move and prepared to leave for their destination


Ka: Hey, wait a minute. Where are you going?


Everyone looked at Kabir confused and all at once muttered "Captain?"


Ka: Meeting is over. That means for now I am not the bossy Captain anymore, just Kabir. And I guess we forgot a very important thing...


Kabir chuckled as everyone frowned


Ka: TOA...

TOA: Yes Captain!

Ka: Please proceed.

TOA: Sure!


The wall on one side partially slided upwards with a click revealing a small chamber. A tray came out
with a champagne and a set of flute glasses. Kabir took the bottle and filling glasses for everyone, requested them to join. When all raised their respective glasses, Kabir gave a bright smile

Ka: A toast, to our future success of mission Genevon. Cheers!

All shouted in amusement "Cheers!"


All that was heard afterwards was their happy laugh and the sweet sound of glass's slight contact. They cherished the moment of their celebration not knowing that they were celebrating the beginning of a
soon to be disaster.



~Quote of the day~


"Emotions are the gift of nature that is given by God. It is something that humans can never create; something that is beyond our power." ~ Kabir Sharma - Captain of Omnion





TBC>>>

Edited by akyalove0896 - 10 years ago
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lovely update
is ur story inspired from the Interstellar movie??

just made a wild guess

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