Chasing her chappy5 posted 3/9/15 - Page 9

Originally posted by: sharmacatty

hey..

I read the first chapter yesterday.. That was nice dear😊

interesting story😉

thank you..

Very good one acchu

Originally posted by: shruthikarthik

Very good one acchu

I have a gut feeling Jalal was intentionally hurting JO

What happened to him at the end???

thank you shru ...

Originally posted by: meeramiss18

Awesome acchu😛

thank you sweet

awsum chaptr...poor jodha y jalal is hurting her... m eagr 2 knw...update soon...

Originally posted by: harshu27

awsum chaptr...poor jodha y jalal is hurting her... m eagr 2 knw...update soon...

thank you..

nice chappy
jalal is so cheap n jackass 😡he have hurt her enough not any more plz😡
plz reveal JJ's past why jalal hate her
i like eric...i want to see jodha n eric's cute bonding their friendship😛jalal dont deserve jodha😡he can rot in hell😡
plz write about eric's pov how he reacted plz
update soon

Originally posted by: hely

nice chappy
jalal is so cheap n jackass 😡he have hurt her enough not any more plz😡
plz reveal JJ's past why jalal hate her
i like eric...i want to see jodha n eric's cute bonding their friendship😛jalal dont deserve jodha😡he can rot in hell😡
plz write about eric's pov how he reacted plz
update soon

thank you Dea

chappy 5

Riya's prov

I stood shockingly, I was not able to
compherened , Jo was hit by a
truck and I couldn't do anything to
save her. I immediately ran towards
her, with tears threatening to come,
I felt so helpless, I took her head on
my lap. Trying to wake her up. Jenny
get up. See its me... Its me Riya get
up I shouted on top my lungs with
tears flowing down my eye. I called
of ambulance. That's the only thing
came to my mind.

Ambulance arrived within 5min and
Jo was taken to hospital.. She
was taken to operation theatre .. I
just moved too and fro in hospital,
not knowing what to do.. When
nurse asked me to call Jennifer's
parents so they can fill the form and
deposit fee.

I shit., How can I forget to call Mr
and Mrs Singh..I immediately took
my phone ., and tried calling but I
am not able to reach them. What
shall I do, what shall I do?.. I called
Eric that's what came to my mind
now..

Eric's prov

I stood there silently listening to
christain , while abused her When
suddenly Riya yelled at christain ,
everyone become silent but Jennifer
ran from there. But for some reason,
I didn't find truth in christain
words, I could see some
misunderstanding between them. My
thought broke , when my phone
started to ring, it was Riya, I
immediately received the call
Hello I said

Hello , Riya said with fear in her
voice, she was crying and sobbing
very hard. I got more tensed now, fear started to build in my heart, with all
negative thoughts, Riya why are
crying? What happen, I asked her
trying to control my nerves down
Jo,... Jodha... She said and
starting crying even more hard
I was getting tensed listening
Jo's name.. Jo What
happened to her, Is she alright tel
me got dammit I shouted echoing
the whole canteen for once
Jo.. She met with accident and
now admitted in Columbia hospital,
her condition is very critical, I don't
want to loose her Eric , I don't want
to loose her.. She said in one go and
started crying

I was shocked to my core listening
about accident and her condition..
Accident I said with all fear evident
in my voice.. I am coming wait right
there I said.. I don't why I felt
sudden fear of loosing her, maybe its
because of sympathy I held of her I
convinced myself.. I was about to
run towards my car when christain
held my hands

What happen? She is alright na .. he
asked, I could clearly see his pain,
his fear, his panic , he was actually
shivering

Jo met with accident, she is
admitted to Columbia hospital, her ..
Her condition is critical , I said last
sentence with much difficult and ran
from there without waiting for his
response..


okay guys I m done for today

love you all

Nice update buddy plz update soon