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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: srithu

Hi tink.. first of all am so sorry for gvng u late comments..

double combo was excellent.. enaku mini Ghilli movie partha mari erundhuchu.. enama eludhiruka,, chancea illa.. action cum thrillera erundhuchu.. so karthik married raji not becoz of love but out of little concern or soft corner i guess.. lets see how they vl be in their future...👏👏👏


Thanks sooo much Srithu!! 😃

Mini Ghilli ah? That is a HUGE compliment for me... Thanks 😛

That will be revealed later on... Thanks again!! 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Abinaabi

Hi machi... Sorry for the late comment...
Part 3 A - Eppdiyo un kitta update vangittom adhuvum two updates... Superrr... Adhukulla KR kalayanna ayiducha? Speed poven nu sonna adhuku nu evlo speed ah?😆 But superrr... Marriage mudinchiduchu... Adhu podhum ennaku...
First raji maten nu sonnadhu,m naa marriage nadakudhu nu nenaichen but hero eppdiyo pesi samalichittan...
Dialogues lam Fantastic ah irukku... Unnoda indha style writing ennaku romba pudichi irukku...
Ennama movies la vara mathiri action scenes lam veikkura 😆👍🏼 Good job... 👏


Thank Youuu Machi!! 😃

Speed ah poven nnu sonna speed ah dhaan pogum... 😆

Thanks Machi 😛
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Abinaabi

Part B - Back to back update... Pramadham...Story nalla interesting ah pogudhu... Manoj and her mom... 😡 Plz send them to hell...
But inime raji ku no problem... Ava dhan ippa Raji karthikeyan ayittale... I ams o happy... Karthik irukkura varaikkum no problem... Indha manoj edhala adicha nalla irukkum? Karthik kittaye sanda poda variya... Pottutu thirumba poyiduviya nee... Raji vidu vidu nu solluran... Viduradhukaga kashtta pattu kalyanna panni irukkan... Seriyana loosu... 😡😆 K's Parents so sweet... Raji ya marumagal edthukittanga... Idhu aalvu Appa Amma... 👏 Story mathiri neenum konjum speed update koduma...
Karthik and raji so lucky ...


Nandri Nandri 😃

Eppa evalo kovam varudhu... 😆

Nee happy naa naanum happy... 😛

Thanks thanks thanks Machi 😃

Sari sari... I will update tomorrow by the latest... 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
Bubbly ingayuma .. me too follow you .. 😉
Waiting for the surprise
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hey Guys 😃

I am actually stuck with a little problem over here... Don't worry, I am alright... But I will not be able to update today... 😔

Hopefully I can tomorrow, or sometime this week... Sorry for keeping you all waiting for long... 🤔

(The update is ready to go... So, it will be posted right after everything is sorted out...)

Thanks for waiting Guys, you are the best... ⭐️ I will update real soon... 😃

-- Sush
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hey Guys 😃


Here is the fourth part of the SS... What a medical miracle?!?! 😲 I am not so late with the update this time... 😆 Anyway, hope it is readable at least... 😃 Also, I have a question for all of you to answer in my last note... Please do take a look at it and tell me your thoughts... 😛

You Guys take a shot at it and I will tell the rest at the end... 😃


Part Four -


She stepped out of the car to see the most beautiful thing she had ever seen. The house that stood before her just took her by awe. She could tell it was specially designed, each and every feature of the house added to its grandeur.

She at first did hesitate, but it faded away as she was welcomed in the house with open arms."Raji inimel idhu un veedu... You can be free as you want, you make yourself comfortable the way you would be... Nee enga marumagal illa... Enga magal... You are the daughter of this house..." Raji was too overwhelmed to react. Never in her dreams had she thought she would get such a life. "Thanks Aunty... En--" "No Raji... When I say you are our daughter, I mean it... You call us just like Karthik does... Amma and Appa..." Raji's eyes moistened hearing that, and Karthik's mom took her for a motherly hug.

Karthik and his dad walked in right in time, "Karthik naan namba legal team ah vara solli irukken... It is better to sort everything out right now to be safe..." Raji looked nervous, thinking about Manoj, made her restless. Karthik understood what she was thinking and went up to her, "Raji idhu verum formality dhaan... Don't worry..." Raji slightly smiled and nodded at him.

"Karthik, nee Raji ah mela koopitu po... I will call you two for dinner" his mom told them. Karthik took her upstairs and pointed to the room on the left, "Idhu unnoda room, and this one is mine..."he pointed to the one across from hers. She felt relieved about not being expected to share the room with him. As much as it was true that they were married, sharing a room was something that neither of them were comfortable in. "Thanks Karthik, I will go freshen up and come..." "Sari okay... See you outside..." both went to their respective rooms.

Raji walked into the room to only be more surprised, it was a huge room, beautifully decorated. Karthik's mom had the room setup for her by one of their housemaids, and truly made Raji happy. She quickly freshened up to head downstairs. Just as she came out, Karthik did too, and he flashed a huge grin at her. "Do you like the room?" "I love it Karthik... Super ah irukku... Thank You so much!!"

Both headed downstairs, where Karthik's dad called them two. "Raji... Meet Mr. Nithin, he is our family lawyer... We have got most of the procedures done... Just one more thing left... Now that you are married, you don't have to wait until you are 21... Your legal assets will be transferred to your name..." Raji looked down, "Uh..." Karthik's dad noticed the hesitation on Raji's face, "Beta, remember you are speaking to your dad... Edhuvaa irundhaalum sollu ma..." Raji looked up, "Illa pa... I don't want any of that transferred to me... Please... Andha money naala dhaan en vaazhkai ippadi aachu... Ennaku vendaam... Athai and Manoj kittaye kuduthurunga... I don't want it..." She was on the verge of crying, she wanted nothing that reminded her of the hell that she lived through all these years.

Karthik looked at her face and felt extremely emotional. How much would this girl have gone through in her life? What could she have possibly known at such an young age? How is she still composed and subtle? He could only imagine what she would have faced for her to refuse the only thing she had in the memory of her parents.

He spoke up, "Raji nee solradhu puriyudhu anaa un parents idha serthu vaikuradhu kku evalo kashta pattu irupaanga yosichu paaru... It represents all their efforts of their life Raji... They left it for you to continue their dreams... Ippadi unna kashta paduthinavangalukku illa...""Karthik is right Raji... As much as your feelings are fair right here, idhu un parents oda ulaipu... Nee dhaan adhukku responsible, not anyone else..." Raji silently nodded giving her consent to sign the will. The rest of the time was fairly quiet until the procedures were finished and the lawyer left.

"Raji one more thing beta... What do you have in mind about your career?" Raji looked blank, she had never thought about that as it was always her Aunt and Manoj who decided everything regarding to that. "Theriyala... Eppodhum Athai dhaan choose pannuvaanga... I believe tomorrow is the start of university, and what I am studying or my field is something that I don't know... Avanga choose pannuvaanga, and I usually only get to know the morning before..."

Karthik's dad was beyond annoyed with Manoj and his mother, but kept calm in front of them."Okay Raji, here are your options... You can come to our Office to take up a position on the several projects we have lined up... If you wish to actually study before that, then that will be alright as well... Karthik is doing a five-year degree in Business Management, and has two more years left to graduate... For you, we can enroll you in a fast-track system, where you will only have to do half the time of the full degree upon your field of interest..." "I think it would be more responsible to finish a degree before working paa... So maybe Corporate Administration? I mean if that is okay with you all..." "That sounds like a great plan beta... Since it is a four-year degree, you can graduate the same time as Karthik... I will get your admission process ready, and Karthik nee naalaikku morning Raji kku uni la ellam set pannidu..." Karthik nodded, smiling.

Raji stood out in the balcony of her room, looking up at the sky. She sighed thinking about the day and how her life totally changed in one morning. Even now, she wasn't sure if she did the right thing by marrying Karthik. But somehow, confidence took over her every time thinking about how Karthik protected her since last night.

"Can I join you?" She turned around to see who it was, breaking her chain of thoughts. "What question is this Karthik? Of course you can..." she smiled to which he gave a wide grin. "So wifey do you like our house?" She laughed at the way he addressed her, "I love it... Mr. Husband..." She stressed the last words making both of them share to a good laugh. "Karthik neenga--" "Just for your information wifey, we both are on a contract of being friends, so 'neenga vaanga' laam contract rules padi illegal..." he tried to speak with a straight face, but he failed miserably and started laughing. "Adhellam illa... There is no way I can address you like that... Ennala mudiyaadhu Karthik... Ungala ivalo naal ah ippadi dhaane koopiduren..." Karthik sarcastically sighed, "Nope... I am not buying that excuse... If you want to speak to me, then speak like a friend... Or don't talk to me at all... Your call..." he smiled cheekily raising his eyebrows. "Sari... I will try, I promise..." she gave in smiling back at him. "You know Karthik... Since the time that I saw you first till even now, I thought you were a serious and a formal person... But Mr. Husband appadi illa nnu theriyudhe..." she looked at him teasingly from the corner of her eye. "Yaaru naan serious ah? Chance eh illa... I am actually a very happy-go person... But then again, it depends on who it is too..." he smiled. "Raji, it is getting late, you must be tired already... Nee thoonga po, naalaikku college kku ready ah irukkanum la... You have to meet two of the special people in my life... Okay ah? Now Good Night..." She smiled at the way he spoke with so much of energy, "Good Night Karthik..."

He zoomed the bike inside the campus and came to a stop at the parking lot. Both of them were equally excited to be there on the first day. For Karthik, there were several reasons. From introducing Raji to a whole new year, he was excited. Raji, on the other hand, felt content being able to choose her career in a field that she was interested in. She always loved studying, and while this being her selection, she wanted to make the best out of her career path.

"Wifey, are you ready to tackle the mission in front of us?" he winked at her grinning widely. "I think I am, Mr. Husband" she replied the same tone as his. Karthik held out his hand for her to hold, which she gladly took, as her nervousness increased with every second. They both walked to the building, several eyes, surprised and shocked seeing Karthik with a girl. He was the 'Handsome Hunk' of the college, a huge girl following, but Karthik never paid attention to any of that. Now seeing him with another girl, came across as as something unexpected.

But more than anything, there were two pairs of eyes, wide open looking their best friend in shock."Hi Machaan... And Lakshmi... Eppadi irukka??" Karthik casually greeted his best friends, Vishnu and Lakshmi. They composed themselves from their reactions and looked towards Raji. Karthik smirked looking at their faces, "My dear best friends, this is Raji... My wife..." Those two stared at Karthik in disbelief, it took a while for it to register in, but when it did, Lakshmi shrieked in excitement. Vishnu looked at Karthik, "Dei you have some serious explaining to do... Anaa unna ippo summa vida maaten da..." He started chasing Karthik around the ground, while Lakshmi and Raji stood laughing at the boys' expense.

Lakshmi turned around and greeted Raji. "Hiii Raji... I am Lakshmi..." She went up and hugged Raji. "Ennala serious ah nambave mudiyala... Eppadi idhellam?" she asked still looking shocked. Raji smiled at her reaction, "Adhu oru long story Lakshmi..."

To be continued...


Author's Note -


Hey Again Guys 😃

I just have to mention a few things more...

First of all I hope you all liked the update... This is the first part of this story that did not move so much... It probably was a bit boring, but it was needed for the story to progress... 😛

I was really elated in reading all your comments... Thank You so much !!! 😃

Now I have an important question to ask... I am around the point where I have to decide the length of the story... So I want to know if you Guys want me to extend the story than the parts that I had planned for or end it as I planned at around 6 - 8 parts?

Please be honest and tell me whatever you feel is the best Guys, I promise, I won't take any offence out of it... Let's be open as it will be the best for you and me... Thank You... 😃

Again... I am too lazy to color the update, so if you Guys wish for it then let me know and I will...

Finally... I will try to make the next part a lot more interesting than this 'filler' part, so do look forward for it... 😛

That's it... And... Leave me a comment, at least a like won't hurt to do... Thanks 😃


-- Sush 😉
Edited by SushK16 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Heyyy
Finally the update
Okie coming to the story

It's a filler part can see but sets the next part in motion so alll good :)

Karthi and his parents such nice people amazing to see such people and glad to see they treat raji well

I'm happy raji will be able to study glad she finally will get something good in her life and will get a degree strong group ur showing sush like that :)

Karthi the way he speaks to raji wifey... really cute and unique and raji too she has good teasing humour hahaha... both make a great pair and hope it will soon blossom to love paarpom

Yay VL are in this story happy about that :) and vishnu chasing karthi loool

Lakshmi and raji will now become friends too? hope soo and hope that manoj and his mum don't come back seriously want to punch them loool

For all the pain raji has been through I am glad that she will finally get something good in her life hope this lasts :)

Okie coming to your questrone

Firstly you know what I will say continue this story hahha but as a SS for about 15/20 as this story is set in that aspect where u cannot drag it out too much wont be good unless u have a lot of twists and turns

But as the author it's your choice and whatever u decide u know I will stand by you :)

Thanks for the update you have made me eager for the next one hahaha :)

Edited by Gayathri30 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hi machi... Wow... ivlo seekirama update panitta... Good girl... 😆
Sorry for the late comment machi... Exams poyittu irukku nu unnake theriyum la...

As usual Awesome update... 👏 Raji came to her house... Relieved from that devils...

K's mom... So sweet... Ippadi oru maammiyara? Pull arrikudhu... Raji so lucky...

K's dad... Adha vida dhandi... "Beta, remember you are speaking to your dad... Edhuvaa irundhaalum sollu ma..." 👏 Ivlo anbana family raji kedaichi irukku...

Raji is going to study... Happy... Eppadiyo andha hell la irunthu vandhu indha heaven ku vandhutta...

KR scene short and cute... Ippadhiku nalal good friends ah irukkanga...😉

Karthik kalyanam panni college la neriya girls soga kadal la thallittan pola...😆

So KR in same college... Appa jolly dhan... Neriya KRVL scenes parkkalam...😉

Nalla nallu poda vendiyadhu dhan... best friend kitta sollamale kalyanam pannikittan la... Ana parthu Pudhu Mappilai vera la... Konjuma adicha nalla irukkum... 😆

I loved this part so much... U rocked it... ⭐️👏

Edhuku di avasara padura? Porumaiya ave story kondupoo... Engaluku padikkaradhu la no problem...

Plz update next part soon... Enna ok va?












Edited by Abinaabi - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Sush dear miracle than .. I think you need time for update .. Hey KD 😆
Raji welcomed by beautiful house and wonderful MIL 😊
Karthik parents very warmth person ⭐️

Legal procedure is important at this stage to protect Raji. Clever FIL 👍🏼 . Raji emotional outburst make Karthik feel the pain 😭 .
Glad Raji continue her study that too in her interested field .

Karthik friendliness make Raji comfortable and bring out her bright side too. Wifey , Mr Husband nice name selection Sush , cute 😳.

KR entering colg , oh Karthik Colg Prince ah .. hope Raji dont any problem by marry the Handsome Hunk 😆 😆
Best friend nama Vishnu & Lakhsmiya .. super ipothan story super a pogum 😆 . Shock treatment kuduthurukaru hero athan Vishnu chasing Karthik 😆 😆 .. Lakshmi welcoming Raji 😃

Boring sola mudiyathu dear , need to move the story so its a nice update 😊

Sush , if you want to extend the story I welcome it . Colg life with KRVL should be fun ..

Colouring , actually I have no problem with the it. Its your wish 😉

Next part interesting ... I'm waiting for it come on bring it Sushma 😎

Like pothachu , comments panithen .. Welcome ... 😆



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Posted: 9 years ago
Sorry for the late comment sush.. yena athukulla innoru part updated a 😲 😆
Part 3 A:
Coming to d story..Oh she said YES for d marriage is it appada 😛 ippo dhan relieve aichu.. K saved R from dat family gud job K 👏.. He is clear in taking the decision and nice to see K like dis..
Though she is stil in confusion state its really nice dat she accepted dat proposal 😛.. Dnt worry all wel get soon R and K wil take care of u 👍🏼
Wow they got married 👏👏

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