NEW ManYa FF:That Feeling Of Love-ch 3 updated on pg 3 (8/9/15)

Hellow everyone...i am a silent reader of this forum...
i am really depressed what the shit the are showing in the show..😡🤢..so i thought of writing a story...which will be completely different from the show...this story will revolve around mantu and amaya's love story which will start with hatred and slowly slowly will transform into love...😳
I totally changed the characters/...hope you will like it...
i am not that good in writting so please forgive me for my mistakes...😃
And i hope to make some new friends here 😊😊
The story goes like this...
Intro...
Amaya is the new comer in the Banaras University, atudying 1^st year of engineering. Her elder sister,Rachita Mathur is studying in final year of Engineering.
Mantu is the Mr. Popular of the collage.Very handsome and has a well maintained body...very confident and very egoistic...every girl's dream boy.stud ying with amaya.in same class But the saddest thing is,he don't like girls..!!! His best friend Rama is a very shy type guy who stays away from the girls..
Uma is bigdi hui chudeil of the collage studying in same class as mantu. Every time she flirts with the boys around her. She and her best friend Kavita always bunks the classes and goes on date with new boy every week...
other characters are...Mr. chaubey: principal of the collage
Mr. Gupta(ramas dad)- professor
Dev-professor

chapter 1...

It was late night...the Mathurs completed their dinner and went to their respective rooms to sleep...but amaya was still awake...it was 1 o clock..but she couldn't sleep...
here rachita got up to drink water when she say amaya going to the terrace...
Rachi: itni raat ko amu kaha jaa rhi hai.??
she went upstairs and saw amaya sitting in the chair in deep thought...
she came and sat beside her...
Rachi:- what happened amu...? is everything alright..??
Amu : aree rachi di...aap soye nahi...nahi sab theek hai...i was just thinking ki kya hoga kal...kal humara new collage me first day hai na...so...
rachi: so tum nervous ho right.????
Amu: Exactly..!! pata nahi collage kaisa hoga,friends banenge ya nahi...kaise log honge...
Rachi: hmmm...dont worry amu sab theek hoga...cmon..go and sleep now...
Amu: aap jao mai aati hu,,,,
then rachi thought to tease her a little bit...
Rachi: by the way amu..!! ho sakta hai tumhe koi special insaan mile...
amu gave her a confused look...
Amu: Special..???Matlab...??
Rachi: special means your sacha pyaar ya something like that ..
Amu: kya rachi di...aap bhi na...
and both laughed...rachita went to her room..amaya to went to her room when she thought of rachi's words.."Someone Special"...
Amu: ye rachi dib hi na..kuch bhi sochti rehti hai...chalo ab so jana chahiye...
In the morning...At mantu's place...
Rama: mantu yaar jaldi chal na...late ho raha hai...pata hai na aaj new students aa rhe hi...Chaobey Sir ne hume duty di hai na...late ho jaayenge to hume khaa jaayenge...chal na jaldi...
Mantu(teasingly): kyaa baat hai bhai...chaubey sir se darr lag rha hai ya new girls ko dekhna hai
Rama: bs bs...tujhe to pata hai na...mai to door hi rehta hu ladkiyon se...par tu...tu zara sambhal ke rehna...tere peeche to poore collage ki ladkiyan marti hai...aur vaise bhi...
mantu interrupted..
mantu: don't worry re rama...u know na mere ko impress karna itna asaan nahi hai...pyaar to mujhe sirf apne aur apni family se hi hua hai...bs aur kisi se nahi...girlfriends banana to door ki baat hai...
Rama: wait wait...matlab meri to koi value hi nahi hai...apne dost se pyaar nahi karta tu...great...chal mai jaa rha hu...aa jaana time se...
Mantu: abe ruk to...tu mera dost thodi na hai...tu to bhai hai mera...meri family ka hissa hai re tu...idiot kahi ka...chal ab zyada senti mat ho...chalte hai...
Rama gave a wide smile...both sat in the car and left for collage...
in the car...
Rama: bhai ek baat bata...agar tujhe koi pasand aa gayi...mera matlab someone special,to tu kya karega...
Mantu:thats impossible re...mai aur date karu kisi ladki ko...bhool jaa...
Rama: aisa thodi na hota hai re...vo uma hai na...
Mantu: chee..!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! uske jaisi bakwaaas ladki maine aaj tak nahi dekhi..i just hate her...dekha nahi kitna makeup thop ke aati hai...bhootni lagti hai...pata nahi ye saare boys uske peeche kyu padte hai...
rama: sahi hai...even i don't like her...chal koi anhi...teko bhi mil jaayegi teri "Someone special"
Mantu: Let it be...
while driving...mantu thought..." Someone special.." kon ho sakti hai vo...
At mathur's place...
Amu...!! rachita...jaldi karo beta late ho rha hai...
sneha called out both her daughters...served them breakfast...
both the girls took her blessing and left for collage...


Precap:Uma and Kavita doing amu's ragging and amu giving them muh tod jawaab...
and mantu and amaya's first meeting.. (disaster..!!!!!!)🥱🥱


please tell me should i continue with this or not...
and do tell me your opinions...that will help me in improving my writting...

Index:
chap 1 on pg 1
chap 2 on page 3
chap 3 on page 3

its really nice to read ..ur characters designation made me laugh..chaubey prin.cipal..mantu calling uma wow so nice...

do continue will be excited to read more
by the way hiii

plz continue i am enjoying it hope next part will come soon
by the way hiii

Hey hi ...well start enjoyed a lot a college story

Gud start. .

Wow it's awesome I will love to read it more😊

Hey,
I loved the part...
Best was Mantu's description for Uma 😆 RamTu was lovely too 😉
"Someone special" 😛
Uma chadail...
Eager for the next part...
Especially after reading that Amaya is going to give nuh-tod jawaab 😆

Originally posted by: varam123

its really nice to read ..ur characters designation made me laugh..chaubey prin.cipal..mantu calling uma wow so nice...

Thank u so much 😊😊

Originally posted by: ManYa-pk

do continue will be excited to read more
by the way hiii

Hellow...😊😊
thanks a lot.