'Aao Bewajah Chale'-A Fiction ~ Chappy 6 0n P32

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<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="4"><font color="#3300FF"><font color="#3399FF" size="5">Prologue:
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</font>Life's beautiful</font>
<font color="#3399FF">Beautiful with friendship n luv</font>
<font color="#3399FF">Overwhelmed with sorrows n joy</font>
<font color="#3399FF">Passes with happiness n bond</font>
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<font color="#CC33FF">Bond... The word dat completes the meaning of life.</font>
<font color="#CC33FF">Bond wid family, friends, wid the luv of ur life</font>.

<font color="#FF00FF">LIFE is bond</font>
<font color="#FF00FF">Bond is friendship</font>
<font color="#FF00FF">Friendship is luv</font>
<font color="#FF00FF">N n luv is LIFE</font>

<font color="#FF3366">Buy whn LIFE IS NOT LIFE?</font>
<font color="#FF3366">Can then bond take breath?</font>
<font color="#FF3366">Can then friendship sustain?</font>
<font color="#FF3366">N WHEN LOVE BLEEDS???</font>

<font color="#FF0000">Then only 1 path is left..</font>
<font color="#FF0000">Say:LET'S WALK MEANINGLESSLY (<font size="3">Aao Bewajah Chale</font>)...

<font color="#000000">A dark ni8. It was raining. The rain of blood. N blood drops passing through the body of some creatures. N blood coming out frm the bodies of 2 creatures, the creatures who were fi8ing with the utmost hatred 1 can have... But the reason??? Can it b the bond or frienship or luv???

<font color="#6666FF"> :</font><font color="#6666FF">Bhaiya plz stop. Bhai..</font>.

<font color="#FF6666">:Kabir!!Stop,don't go there.

</font><font color="#6666FF"> :Nisha,jst go frm there.Main samhalunga. Mera haat chhod.

</font><font color="#FF6633"> :Kabir! Why don't u understand? it's impossible 4 u.


</font><font color="#6666FF"> :Kya impossible. Arey,meri bhaiya...

</font>(Again he screams seeing the situation getting more n more dangerous)

<font color="#6666FF">:Bhaiya... Bhai... Plz stop.

</font>The girl let his hand n he starts running. He tries 2 reach 2 thm but in vain since some unknown power was not letting him 2 cross the round mark.

<font color="#FF6666"> :Tujhe kya lagta hain?Teri liye sab possible hain? Yeh khun ki baarish dekh raha hain??</font>

<font color="#6666FF"> :Iss baarish se kuch farak nahi parta. Baas mujhe janaa hain... Bhaiya...</font>

<font color="#FF6666"> :Kabir, vo tujhe nahi sun sakte.</font>

<font color="#6666FF"> :Kyon nahi?Aur main jaa kyon nahi paa raha hoon?</font>

<font color="#FF6699"><font color="#FF6666"> :Kyon ki yeh sab kuch aur hi hain.. Aur tujhe iss sab ki baare main kuch nahi pata. Aur yeh baarish sab kuch keh rahi hain ki ab kuch nahi ho sakta. Luv is bleeding Kabir.


<font color="#3366FF" size="4">AN:<font color="#333333" size="2">So K Khandan,here is the prologue. My 2nd ever FF it is. So pardon me 4 all mistakes. N haan, u knw na I can't write lyk an expert.. But I want lyks n Comments. Lyk if u really lyk n comment if u lyk or do critisize.
N I won't giv any character sketch since I want u 2 knw abt the characters by reading n abt the plot.. The banner n the prologue may say it.. Agar samajh mein aaye toh achchibaat hain warna... Kuch nahi. no babaji ka thullu.U will come 2 knw after reading 😆
N 1 more thing,Meri FF hain toh RK toh rehigi hi na? N his heroine Dipu. N 1 more character was needed,so brought Manik aka Parth.. But don't worry, NiBir is the lead 😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
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awsm prologue maggy👍🏼

loved d title of your story❤️...

continue soon dear...

eagerly waiting😊
loved banner❤️
Edited by itznimi003 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Ji..Ja...Ji...🤗

My First Expression when I opened this post😲 Aila Main kahi galat post open toh nahi kar lia bcz I saw RK first😆🤣 Den Meri nazar padi NiBir par☺️ Tab mujhe tasalli mili ki SHukar hai post galt nahi mere Aankhein thodi peeche chali...🤣🤣🤣

For the title...👏👏👏

For the Scary Literally Bleeding Banner... Pehle Shack😲 den Clap👏👏👏👏🤣

For The Prologue dis was my first reaction When I read it for first time🤣 Aakhir Ji..ja..ji... Kehna kya chahthe hai..????😕🤣🤣🤣 Den I read A/N which made me to accept ur challenge of understanding the story (as u have not given CS) 😉 Mera ASR mann☺️ jaag udaa...😈 and I read it again...😆🤣 Below is Wat I get frm ur Prologue or I must Say Wat i understud frm ur Prologue...😈(Dnt knw how much I cracked it😳 But I tried my best🤣)

So A/c to me...😛
Blue colour represent Kabir's dialogue😊 & Red Colour Represent Nishu's Dialogue😊

I think Kabir is trying to stop his Brother😆 (Which can either be ur RK or Parth😉)🤣 & As usual Nishu is trying to oppose him as she knews its not possible now as its already Late...🤪

Then she released Kabira's Hand & He starts running behind his bro..😊 But he was unable to stop him...😕 Wats The reason Dont knw...😕 Why Nishu said weired abt the rain aka Bleeding rain Dont knw...😕 Dats It...🤣🤣🤣

Waiting 4 so much mysteries to Unfold...

Thanks 4 PM😳

Do write More🤗 Q ki DMM😳😆🤣

PS: I unres ed my comment so soon...🤪😲😆🤣🤣🤣




Edited by SaruSenan - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome work maggy di
Continue soon

P.S- main aapki bhanju K khandaan mein wo mujhe pata hai par main aapko maasi bulao Ki nahi??? Woh aap baad mein bata dein isliye abhi main aapko maggy di bula rahi huin
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Jaanu mujhe FF ka kuch samajh nahi aya😆
Btw...loved the Siggy❤️
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Posted: 10 years ago
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baap re m so conphushed kuch samaj nhi aaya
bt sounds super interesting
title is soo nice suits on nibir 👍🏼
story seems to be mysterious waiting for the next part
banner is wow amazing 👏
update soon
n can plz pm me 😳
Edited by crazyvaishu - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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res
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sachhi bolu... mjhe kuch samaj nhi aaya...🤪 par jo bhi tha achha tha... specially the titlee and banner... baki bhaiya kon h😲
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Posted: 10 years ago
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The prologue is so catchy, love to read more
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Areyyy maggu baba, I am kaan phoosed...!!!🤣
Jab samajh aayega tab comment karungi..!!🤣
Tab tak keliye " res "..!!☺️
BTW awesome colours..🤣🤣
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Amazing👍🏼
mujhe kuch samajh nahi aaya, phirbhi😉
luvd the banner❤️

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