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Nyonika walked in music room and finds her placing her head on the table and looking at the melted candles . she choked and walked ahead " he will not come " she said and placed her hand on her shoulder " he will not come " she whispered and press her shoulder , she gave her weird look and removed her hand from her shoulder

" i know him better " she said

"Nandini " Nyonika look at her helplessly

"he will come back , he has promised me " she said and save the candle which was about to fade out

" Nandini watchman want to lock the room " Nyonika said politely

" Ask him to lock me in here like before. i will not leave the place, if in my absence Manik's come,how hurt he will be to find me not here ? " Nandini said and fix the candles


Nyonika gave up and walked out of room , she wipe off tears that was about to roll down her eyes

she dialed a number "Mr Malhotra tell your son she is not listing me , and asked me to lock her in music room " she said , Mr Malhotra look at his side and shakes his head

"Manik she is not listening she is waiting for you " he look at him he was lying and staring at the roof


In Space Nandini walked out of room she look at Nyonika

" what happened ?" she asked her

" My heart is saying he is around " she look here and there in corridor


In Pune

Dad put it on speaker and let Manik hear her ,

"Manik i know you are hiding somewhere , i can feel you " her voice ego in Space and in Manik bedroom , he closed his eyes and clench the bed sheet in his fist " Naaa n du " he tires to call her but his tongue stammer and he could not say he hit his head with bed head and tired to sit

" Happy birthday Manik Happy birthday i can sense you , i know you very close to me " she shouted her voice echo in the corridor of SPACE , where they have build up beautiful memories

Dad look at Manik he was getting restless he wanted to get up but could not sit

" Nyonika i will talk to you later you be with her " Manik dad said and cut the call

Nyonika look at her she has a strange kind of peace on her face , she was smiling at her own thought she smiled and sang the song





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Posted: 10 years ago
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it is interesting...if possible plz cont soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: AMAR_LOVE

it is interesting...if possible plz cont soon

no dear i am not able to update my other ff's because of all the negativity here
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Its emotional nd awesome!! But nyonika will never change!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Very nice. If possible pls continue.
Hope something like this comes in show
That's why they didn't show manik
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Agree di... Relax... Sab sort ho jayega... Plz u don't stop updating... It gives us some peace...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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It is so emotional...
Baeutifully penned down...
Loved it...
I hope something like this happens in kyy2 also...
FINGERS CROSSED
If possible continue it...
Edited by KewlaniGarima - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nads it's amazing. ..
Please continue. ..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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This story will show their story...so plz cont the story
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Posted: 10 years ago
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I like your thoughts I have different though maybe manik must be in coma only manik's father only know and niyonika have no idea about this things what about this type of story.

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