MG#5 jaane dil mein kabse hai tu/limp./pg94/101/8dec - Page 45

maaneet becoming closer.maan reading her diary.was he in luv with geet thinking that its madhu?

lovely update..😊

nice part.

PART 61

30 more days passed out , in this period maaneet come more

closer and some where he start feeling his heart always beat for

geet...

In this between, one day he goes to geet room at night and sees

one dairy lays on bed , but geet not seen anywhere...

Maan : geet

.

Geet

.

Geet : maan five minute

Washroom mein hu

Maan : ok

He picks her dairy, knowing that's bad habit but heart wants to see this...

Maan : personal dairy

Let's see

Mere bare mein bhi kuch likha hai kya

.

On first page, one of his current sketches painted ...and next

into his childhood pic.

Maan : my image

It's really beautiful

.

.

Happy birthday maan

That's a first birthday after our friendship

You not beside me

.

Am missing you maan

.

He randomly open page in between...

.

Sometime am thinking

When you realize I go against your word

And using madhu name

.

Kya aap mujhe maaf kr donge

Ya firse naraaz ho jaayonge

.

Another page flipped...

.

Oh god aaj toh mein aapne hi jhooth mein pakdi jaati

Excitement mein

Ye kaisi bhool gyi

As in your eyes am madhu not a geet

.

Door opened, he hurriedly placed dairy on bed...and stand

little far from bed...

Geet : maan

Aap khade kyun hai

Baitho na

.

Maan : ha

.

Wo mein chalta hu

Geet : maan

Aap baat krne aaye tha

Na

Fir wo toh batate jaayo

.

Maan : mein bhool gya hu

.

Ab mein chalta hu

Good night

.

He left...

Geet : ab inhe kya huya

***********

Happy birthday maan

That's a first birthday after our friendship

You not beside me

.

Am missing you maan

.

.

.

.

.

Sometime am thinking

When you realize I go against your word

And using madhu name

.

Kya aap mujhe maaf kr donge

Ya firse naraaz ho jaayonge

.

.

.

.

Oh god aaj toh mein aapne hi jhooth mein pakdi

jaati

Excitement mein

Ye kaisi bhool gyi

As in your eyes am madhu not a geet

.

.

Kya jo mein soch raha hu

That's true

.

Kya wo humesha se geet hi thi

Jisse maine pyaar kiya

.

.

Why she use madhu name in all this thing

.

Sayad meri narazgi ki wajh se

.

Oh god

Why I not try to understand or find about my true love...

.

Geet am not sure

Kya wo tum hi thi humesha se

Jo mujhse mail pe chat krti thi ya nhi

.

Par in teen mahino mein tumhe jaanane ke baad

Smjhne ke baad

Ye jaroor smjh gya hu

I truly love you

.

10 days more left...

After this I know

You declined for this divorce

.

************

Madhu : oh rishabh

Today day is best day of my life

And thanks for this beautiful treat too

.

Waise treat toh mujhe deni chaiye thi tumhe

.

Risabh : it's ok madhu

Am happy you completed your course

Now we both go back

Madhu : ya

.

Geet se milungi sbsi phle

I want to hug her

Wo chahe kitna bhi gussa kr le mujhpe

Mein usse ab mna lungi

Risabh : right

.

Am going to miss you

Madhu : he

Tu bhi chl raha hai na

Risabh : ha

Pr

Tu waha jaake

Geet se milte mujhe bhool jaayengi

Madhu : never risabh

Asa kbhi nhi ho sakta

Risabh tum mere sath tb the

Jb mujhe ek dost ki sbse jyada jaroorat thi

.

I know tumne ye project bhi bs mere liye hi liya tha

Taki tum mere karib rh sako

Risabh : jb itna sb kuch smjhti hai

Toh wo kyun nhi smjh sakti

Jo mein tujhse

Kbse khehna chahta hu

Madhu : risabh

Raat kaafi ho gyi hai

Aur kal subh ki apni flight bhi hai

Risabh : madhu

Don't run

Mein tujhe khush rakhunga

I love you madhu

Mein tujhse bhut pyaar krta hu

Aaj se nhi

Bhut phle se

.

College times se madhu

.

Tb toh maan bhi nhi tha

Humare beech

.

Bs kbhi kh nhi paaya

Laga

Jaise tu sb smjh jaati hai

Toh ye bhi smjh jaayengi

.

Par

Madhu : sshhh

.

Koi ase izhaar krta hai pyaar ka

.

Saari galati teri hai

Tune kbhi mujhe shi se propose toh kiya hai nhi

.

.

Now am understanding

Risabh kundra

Aapne paise bachane chahte the

.

Risabh : you love me madhu

Madhu : maine asa toh nhi kha

.

Aur risabh

I don't want to hear maan name again in between us

.

Maine phle bhi kaha tha

I never love maan

Dosti se jyada aur pyaar se km bhi ek rishta hota hai

Maan mere liye bs whi hai

Wo bhi bs isliye

He always protect my geet

He cares her

For this

I respect him

.

I know

Mein maan ko ha khehne wali thi

.

Wo bhi isliye

Because I like him nor for I love him

Wo ehsaas toh kbhi the hi nhi

He is my friend...

Aur ek dost humsafar bn jaaye

Isse acha kya ho sakta tha

.

Par jb mujhe ye ehsaas huya

Risabh

He loves me from childhood...and tell about our chats late

night...how our chat became his part in his life...then I realize I

never chat with him...yes we talk on phone some time but

never on chat...

.

.

Maan ne humesha se pyaar geet se hi kiya hai

Aur ye sbhi complications geet ki wajh se huyi hai

Bachapan mein bola gya ek jhooth

Hum dono ke aaj pe baari pd gya

.

And more one thing risabh

I love you too

.

Sorry for late realizing

Thodi jhali hu mein pyaar ke maamle mein

.

Ydi tu mujhe college time bhi propose krta na

Toh mein ussi waqt ha kh deti

Par ha sayad us waqt mein tujhe sirf dost ke naate ha khti

Pyaar ke naate nhi

.

I realize my love

Here.

In Mumbai

.

Your cares

Your love

Turn my friendship into love for you

Risabh

Risabh : oh madhu

Am so happy getting you in my life

Tu thodi nhi

Bhut jyada jhalli hai

Madhu : ab jaisi hu

Issi se kaam chalana padenga

.

Aur ha

Khabar daar

Kissi aur ke taraf kbhi aankh uthake bhi dekhi toh

Risabh : no baby

**********

Payal : dad sorry

Maine aapse promise kiya tha

Mein geet ko bhai ki zindagi mein laayungi

.

Par mujhse nhi huya dad

.

She loves maan so much

And I see same love in maan eyes too for her...

Fir mein ye gunaah kaise kr deti

.

Thanks dad

Aapne mujhe rok liya

.

Am sure

One day my bhai

Also get the happiness

.

Harsahd : payal

Payal : yes bhai

Harshad : payal I take one decision

Am going back to London

.

Dad ki yaado se bhangne se kya honga

Payal : bhai kya sirf dad ki yaad thi

Ya aditi ki bhi thi

Harshad : aditi

Ki shaadi ho chuki hongi ab tak toh

.

Kb tak mein ase bhagta rahunga

.

Aaj nhi toh kal saamna krna hi honga na

10 din ke baad ki flight hai

Tb tak yaha ka kaam dekhke

Tujhe hand over krke

Mein chala jaata hu whi

Payal : bhai

Please stop loving aditi

Harsahd : mere hath mein hota na

Toh kb ka khud ko rok liya hota

Payal : bhai mein bhi aapke sath chalungi

Mera bhi ab yaha rhehne ka mann nhi hai

Harsahd : geet hai na

Payal : bhai

I never tell one secret to you

I want to separate geet from maan for you

Because I see your genuine smile with her

But bhai

I can't

Harsahd : bs payal

I know

I heard your talk on that day with dad

.

Ha maine kuch kha nhi

Because I know

My sister, never can't do any wrong

.

Payal : bhai

Sorry

Harshad : tu bhi apni packing krle

Payal ; hmm

*********

Morning

Maan : geet

I get know truth

Geet : kaunsa truth

Maan : whi jo tumne CID se puchne ko kaha tha

Geet : maine kb kaha

Maan : kal maine CID dekha

Aur mujhe mere kyi swal ke jwab mil gye

Geet : maan mujhe kuch smjh nhi aa rha hai

Maan : bhut jald aa jaayenga

.

Mujhe ye pata lag gya hai

How you know about me so much

Geet feel happiness to hear this but hearing next word from

him she feel sad...

Maan : madhu ne btaya na tumhe sb

.

Kyun ki

Tum toh mujhse baat krti thin hi

Usse hi toh maine ye sb btaya tha

Humari daily chat pe

I really missing those days

Jaha hum kyi hours randomly baat krte the

Tease krte the ek dusre ko

.

Acha phase thaw o bhi zindagi ka

.

Waise geet am right na

Geet : wrong totally wrong

Aap bhudu ho

No.1 bhudu

Maan : ab jaisa bhi hu

Issi se kaam chalana padenga tumhe

Geet : no

.

I think you forgetting

Now only 9 days left for our last divorce hearing

Aur ydi maine yes kh diya toh

Am free from you buddu khurana

He liking her cute dhamki aur says teasing...

Maan : oh really

And what you think

Mein tumhe jaane dunga

.

He pulls her by waist and another free hand roaming on her

back...

Geet tum chahe ke bhi

Mujhse durr nhi jaa sakti

.

Geet : jaa sakti hu maan

Aapki khushi ke liye mein aapse durr bhi jaa sakti hu

Maan : really

Geet : yes

Maan

For me your happiness always comes first

And for this

I do anything

Mujhe aapse dur bhi jaana honga

Toh mein jaayungi

Maan : yaad rakhna isse geet

Meri khushi ke liye

Abhi tumhe bhut kuch krna hai

.

Promise me

Geet : promise

**************

Geet

.

Geet

.

She jerked her...

Geet : ha

Payal : where you lost geet

.

Hume andher chalna hai

Today is last hearing

And am so happy

For you geet

Tujhe tera pyaar mil jaayenga

Aur fir aaram se bhai ke sath aaj sham ko yaha se chali jaayungi

Geet : hmm

************

So mrs. Khurana

What's your decision?

Maan : geet bola na judge ko

Wo tumse puch rhi hai

He is so excited but geet words break him totally...

Geet : madam

I want divorce

.

Maan : geet what you saying

Judge : mr. khurana

Aap inhe disturb mt kriye

Inhe bolne dijiye

.

Mrs. Khurana

That's your last decision

Geet : yes madam

I want divorce

Mein ab inke sath nhi rhehna chahti hu

Is Dil Pe Lagte Hai Jo Woh Zakhm Dikhte Nahin

Apnose Milte Hai Jo Woh Dard Mite Nahin

Maine Paas Apne Nahin Bas Door Jabse Hai Tu

.

(maan I completed my promise

yaad rakhna isse geet

Meri khushi ke liye

Abhi tumhe bhut kuch krna hai

.

.

Maan

For me your happiness always comes first

And for this

I do anything

Mujhe aapse dur bhi jaana honga

Toh mein jaayungi

.

Whi kr rhi hu maan)

Bas Door Jabse Hai Tu

Jaane Dil Mein Kab Se Hai Tu

Jab Se Main Hoon Tab Se Hai Tu

*******divorced*************

Mujhko Mere Rab Ki Kasam

Yaara Rab Se Pehle Hai Tu...

Maan : geet stop

.

But she want to run from here, he held her wrist...

.

Geet mein is divorce ko nhi manta

Why you said yes

.

Geet : maan yhi thik tha

Ek unwanted relationship mein rhke kya fayda

.

Maan : kya tum khush ho

Geet : of course maan

.

Maan I want to see your smile last time

.

Maan : geet tum asa nhi kr sakti ho

Geet ; maan divorce aapne hi maanga tha

Maine toh bs diya hai

.

Sayad yhi hum dono ke liye thik hai

.

Achcha Hai Haste Huve

Ho Jaaye Hum Tum Juda

Yeh Koi Na Poochle

Woh Humsafar Kaun Tha

Ab To Mujhe Yaad Nahin

Saath Mere Kab Se Hai Tu

Saath Mere Kab Se Hai Tu

.

She sees last time and left from here forever...

*******the End******

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Omg it was shocking. Maan comes to know that with whom he used to chat at night was not madhu but geet. Madhu and rishab also confessed their love for each other. Than what went wrong. Why geet decided to divorce maan. I know she would misunderstand something but without talking maan , how can she take this drastic step.

Good story but what is this ending. Wh did maan have to tease her why could he not have said he know he loves only geet and why does geet assume that maan wants divorce. This is sad. Is this really the end ...is there going yo be epilogue with a different ending. Am very confused

Awesome update dear. Every thing is fine but last me maaneet divorced 😲 😭 Feeling very sad for maaneet.Thankxx for these beautiful n amazing story dear 👏 Already missing 😊 Waiting for next season 😃 Thankxx for pm 😊

nice update .
bt really sad with the ending.
why maan didn't say to her that her loves her bt teased her .
nd geet misunderstnd him nd without talking to maan again about divorce she agreed to give him divorce.
give an epilogue dear.

bt love this story of urs.

oh no sad ending maan got to know all truth but didnt tell her n geet also gave him divorce thinking this what maan wants n there madhu n rishab r together

Originally posted by: nishamna

Omg it was shocking. Maan comes to know that with whom he used to chat at night was not madhu but geet. Madhu and rishab also confessed their love for each other. Than what went wrong. Why geet decided to divorce maan. I know she would misunderstand something but without talking maan , how can she take this drastic step.