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Hello Friends...


I am here again... No not with a new story... but to put my three OS's written for Lakspriya's Hum Tum, Behne De and Teri Deewani Celebration threads... in one place... Many of you may have read but I don't know whether you have notivced it or not... that they are interlinked... So i thought to pull all the three in one thread...


Let me know how do you find them...😳



Here are the Links For those threads... Plz have a look if you havent gone there... there are Awesome VM's, and Edits and Superb One Shots...


Hum Tum Celebration Thread

Behne De Celebrations Thread

Teri Deewani Celebration Thread



Lakshu and Priya I am using your banner for my stories here... hope you don't mind😳... And Jadoo ki jhappi For the Awesome threads...
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Mujhse Dosti Karogi...



Khurana Construction Confereance Hall...



Maan saw a sweating geet in AC too... he is frustrated... he groaned... papa ne mujhe kaha phasa diya... iss disaster queen ke saath... isse chalna bhi theek se nahi aata... aur yeh mere saath kaam karegi... he thought remembering his first encounter in the office with her...



Maan is stuck with Geet in the conference room... as his father asked him to complete the designs... and Maan is irritated with the fact that he is stuck with Geet... for Maan he is working single... coz Geet doesn't talk or make her presence obvious...



On the other hand...Geet was terrified working with him... she always had someone or the other with her when Maan is around.. but this is the first time she is alone with him and she is sweating profusely... she is constantly chanting her babaji's name.. to give her some strength...



She tried to concentrate on the papers before her... but her thoughts were wandering around Maan.. she is observing every move of him... if he does move a little she is holding her breadth... she is scared that he might come to her... but when he doesn't do it.. she sighs in relief... this continued for more than an hour... suddenly the light went off... and she got more terrified...



Maan saw her reaction in the moon light and he is more frustrated... he said rudely... main tumhe kha nahi jaoonga... toh daro mat...



Geet got more frightened with his rude voice... she started shivering... She slowly got up and went to the window... she wanted to shout for help... she wanted to shout for the watch man... but no voice is coming from her throat...She held the window pane tightly... to stop her shiver... and Maan saw this... he wondered why is she frightened ... is this the way she is or is it only limited to him... he saw her talking with Adi only... he is always around her... and she doesn't talk to anyone in the office... other than Adi and Pinki...



He slowly went towards her and stood beside her... she felt his presence and held the window pane very tightly... her breathing laboured... Maan saw this and moved away from her... he was confused with her behavior... he thought to talk to her in a soft manner...



He thought for a while... how to start the conversation... he thought to talk about her family first and then slowly he can know the reason of her behavior...



Maan - Geet... yaha aake baith jao... kitni der khadi rahogi.... he said in a sweet manner...



Geet couldn't refuse him... she came and sat at the far end of the table.. facing him...



Maan - Geet... time pass ke liye kuch baat karte hain... umm... apni family ke baare mein batao...



Geet slowly said... she couldn't refuse him... he is her boss... and she can't take the risk of annoying him... it may cost her job...



Geet - Meri family mein... mamma... main aur Meri choti behen hain sir... bas...



Maan - Aur tumhare papa...



Geet with misted eyes... 4 saal pehele unki death hui....



Maan - I am sorry...



Geet nodded...



Maan - tumhari mamma kya karti hain...



Geet - ji woh school mein teacher hain...



Maan - aur tumhari choti behen...usa naam kya hain... tum geet ho.. toh kya woh preet hain... he said with mischievous eyes...



Geet - ji... uska naam Anjali hain... woh engineering karr rahi hain...



Maan - umm... matlab dono milake Geetanjali...



Geet remained silent... she didn't look at him nor made any moment...



Maan observed her for a while...and asked...



Maan - aur adi...



Geet - Pinki meri cousin hain....



Maan understood as Adi is Pinki's husband...



Maan - usne kaha ki woh nahi aapayega... tumhe pata hain kya hua...



Geet nodded - ji... pinki is not well... usse hospital leke gaye...



Maan - kyun kya hua... kuch serious baat hai kya... he asked in

concern.



Geet - shayad food poisoning ..



Again there is silence...



Maan - tumne collage kaha se ki...he asked braking the silence...



Geet told him ...



Maan nodded... again silence... but noticed slight change in her posture when she told about her collage... so Maan decided to change the topic...



Maan - tumhare friends ke baare mein batao...



geet - ji... koi nahi... bas pinki hi meri friend hain...



maan - acha... kab se hai pinki tumhari friend...



geet smiled now a but... ji bachpan se... hum dono ek hi saal mein paida hue... ghar bhi bohut paas mein hain... school bhi ek hi 12th tak... and then she stopped...



Maan noticed the change... when ever the topic comes to her collage... she stops... she seems.. like she doesn't want to remember the thing...



He thought to ease her more...



Maan - geet.. maine tumhere baare mein bohut kuch poocha... tum mujhe poochogi nahi... mere baare mein....



Geet didn't say anything... again... Maan sighed...



Maan even then continued... You know me...he said about his school and collage details... he said about his study abroad... the he told her about his family...



maan - dad ko tum jaanti ho... aur mamma... simran... naam hain unka... woh ek designer hain...



A small smile came on her lips listening the name... Maan noticed that... and asked... kya hua geet....



Geet - ji meri mamma ka naam bhi wahi hain... Simran...



Maan - what a coincidence... but similarities bhi hai dono mein... dono independent hain...


geet nodded...



Maan - I have a younger brother and a sister... Dev, my brother is in abroad... studying... and Annie, my sister is also studying... here... in Delhi...and he said the collage name... and Geet turned pale... she started shivering...



Maan immediately got up and came to her... Geet... kya hua... tum theek toh ho... and he offered her water... she took that and drank them fully...



Maan - dekho geet... tum mere saat share karsakti ho... kuch bura hua hain toh bhul jao usse...



Geet - kuch incidents ko bhul jana hi acha hai sir... but woh itna aasaan bhi nahi hain...



Maan was not sure that something happened... but what... so he coaxed her...



Maan - tum mere saath share karsakti ho geet... kehte haina ki share karne se dard kam hojata hain... main tumhe uske liye judge nahi karunga... toh tumhe darr ne ki zaroorat nahi hain...



Geet - bohut mushkil hai sir... main unpalon ko phir se yaad bhi nahi karna chahti...



Maan - main samajh sakta hoon geet... tumhe shayad woh sab yaad nahi karna chahti... lekin mujhe ek baat jaanna hai...kya tum ussi wajah se aisi ho... dari dari...



Geet nodded... Maan sighed... she opened up a little... with somemore talk he can make her break to her shell...



Maan - try karo geet... kya pata tumhe halka mehsoos ho... yeh baat hamari beech mein hi rahegi... main wada karta hoon...



Geet didnt talk ... maan felt that she didnt want to share... may be something really big happened... so only she is not eve ready to remember those things...



Geet thought... what should i do... should i tell him... will he believe me... and what about later... can i work here knowing that he knows the darkest phase of my life... but how can i say no yo him directly... he is being nice to me and going out of his way to make me comfortable... i have never seen him discussing his family with anyone...what should i do...



Maan lost his hope that she will share her problem... so he decided to change the topic... but geet cleared her throat... he saw her... he felt she is preparing herself ... he smiled at her... his smiled encouraged her...



Geet - Sir... main poori baat toh bata nahi sakti... par samajh lijiye ki aisa kuch hua... ki mujhe apni collage change karni padi... mera admission pehle ussi collage mein hua jis collage mein aapki behen padti hain... kuch aisa hua kiski wajah se main poori tarah badal gayi... waha aisa kuch hua ki mujhe kisis bhi mard ke saath akele rehne mein darr lagata hain... aur andhere se bhi...



Maan felt bad... he understood... some one had played with her...



Maan - yeh kab hua...



Geet - ji first year graduation mein...



Maan murmured - ragging... as he know how Annie suffered being a Khurana... he can understand Geet's plight...



Geet eyes filled and she turned other side...



Maan changed the topic and talked to her some more time on other matters.. her likes and dislikes... one more hour passed...



Maan asked.- Geet... tell me what you feel about me...



Geet looked at him... main kya boloon sir....



Maan - wahi jo tumhe lagta hai... tum kya sochti ho mere baare mein...



Geet didn't know what to say... she slowly said... aap ache hain sir....



Maan - sirf acha... maan said in a disappointed tone...



Geet instantly nodded a no and said.. bohut ache hain... bohut ache hain...



Maan smiled... - aur...



Geet - sab ka khayal rakhte hain...



Maan - aur...


Geet told some more... and Maan continued with his aur... aur... aur... at last Geet gave up... sir... i have told all the good words... now only the opposites are left.. plz spare me...Geet told him with a puppy face...



Maan laughed out loud... Geet you are such a cutie pie... I so wanted to pull ur cheeks.... Geet blushed...



Maan came around the table and stood in front of her... Geet ... i wanted to ask you one thing...



Geet stood up with nervousness... main aap ko kya desakti hoon sir....



Maan - Geet jo bohut anmol hain... geet looked at him with questioning eyes...



maan - tumhari dosti... kya tum Mujhse Dosti Karogi... He said extending his hand..



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Deewana sa Ek Ladka

(Note - this is a continuation of the OS- MUJHSE DOSTI KAROGE of HUM-TUM celebration thread...)

Maan entered his office in a cheerful mood.. he just came back from an official tour and he didn't even went to his home... where his family is waiting... but he came office just to get a glimpse of her... its been only a week he saw her... but he felt like a few years... he smiled at himself... and thought... what have you done to me Geet... see how THE MSK became a romeo...



He walked through the corridors.. nodding his head to the staff who greeted him... he may be walking for others... but he knew he wanted to run... but its his office and he didn't want them to get any clue what he is doing or going through...



He reached his cabin... and said no disturbance to the person outside... the person hanged a card on the door handle... and now nobody will dare to knock his door...



Maan reached for the remote which is placed on his table and turned it on... and opened the blinds... and saw her... she is as usual like a dew drop.. like a fresh flower... and his racing heart slowed its pace and came to the normal speed... he placed his hand on his heart ... easy baby... she will have to come to you one day...till then have some patience... if you again does this what will people think of me... be patient as that day is not far...


Maan sat on his chair and turned to her direction... He was seeing how she is doing her work... no... jhoot... his conscience said... he is drooling on her... she wore a white colour dress today and she looked no less than a Pari ... but he liked colours on her... she looks more beautiful in colours... coz every colour she wears compliments her... she saw at his direction... as she is talking to Adi... Adi might be saying about his arrival... He could see a sparkle in her eyes... her cheeks turned pinkish... but in no time her face paled... he hated that sadness on her face... and she turned her face and went away from there...



He hated it when she is not in front of his eyes... He picked up his phone and called Adi... and Geet to his cabin...



Adi came with Geet and knocked... Maan composed... closed the blinds as no one know that he can see through the glass... he always kept the blinds closed... and said.. Come in...



Adi and Geet - Good morning sir...



Maan - Good morning... he said looking into a file... but didn't say anything after that...



Adi - sir... app... itni jaldi... ghar nahi gaye... Adi is one of the persons who is close to Maan... so he has the liberty to talk other than office matters also...



Maan - Ghar jaake ky karta adi... mera dil toh yaha hai...



Adi - Sir...


Maan got up and came to the side of the table... He stood there and kept his hand on the table... no... on geet's dupatta... only Geet noticed... but Adi was seeing Maan and he missed it...



Maan - Office adi... one week se nahi tha... tum toh jaante ho mujhe office se aur tum sab se kitna pyaar hain ... he said that part looking at geet and then turned at adi and continued... I was missing office more... isliye yaha aagaya...




Adi laughed his typical laugh... heh...heh... heh... Geet was silently trying to pull her dupatta not making it obvious... but Maan was not leaving ...He said... sit down both of you... and he himself settled in the table with one leg on the ground... and started talking to Adi... as they are seated...



Maan - I think you know what I want..



Geet looked at him... he now a days is talking in dual meaning dialogs... she gulped and aksed... what sir...



Maan knew her very well by now... but he didn't answer... but instead of Maan, Adi answered... arrey geet... bhul gayi... maan sir ko sab on paper chahiye... abhi hum jo bhi baat karenge... tum woh sab likh lena... aur sir ko dikhadena...




Geet nodded and started to write what ever they are discussing... in between... Maan without knowing( or say knowingly) moved his leg and it touched Geet who was sitting near him... first he didn't notice... but after a couple of times... he noticed... every time he touched her.. there was a slight shiver in her... he didn't know whether it is becoz of inconvenience or he is also having the same effect on her which she has on him... but he didn't stop that... the touch was very small... only they know... no one else can see it...




Some time later when they are finished... Maan asked Adi to leave ... Geet is left behind... as Maan stopped her...




Maan is still sitting in the same position and seeing a file... but didn't say anything...




Geet waited for a few minutes... but he didn't tell her anything... she thought to leave...she started getting up... but Maan said... baithi raho Geet...




He finished the file and gave it back... everything is fine... get it typed and give me and dad a copy of this...




Geet nodded... sir.. main jaaoon...




Maan - Geet tum ab meri secretary bhi ho... so mera saara kaam tumhe hi karna hain... pata haina...




geet replied haa sir...




maan - toh ek achi gf ki tarah mera khayal rakho...



geet - sir... she thought... yeh main kya sunn rahi hoon..




Maan - Kyun.. kuch galat kaha maine ... ek achi P.A ki tarah mera khayal rakho... meri coffee lao thodi der mein... aur uske baad mere saamne baithna...




geet - sir...




Maan - arrey mujhe poora tih karne do.. har baar sir sir... karti rehti ho...



geet - ji




Maan - Good... tum mere saamne baitho... aur main tumhe dekhta rahunga... he thought... aur dictation lo...




geet - ji sir...




Maan - waise Geet.. tumne bataya nahi... tumhe mere paas kaam karke kaisa lagraha hai...




Geet - sir... she thought... did she hear paas...




Maan - kyun... mere saath kaam karna acha nahi lagraha hai tumhe...




Geet thought... tumhe kuch hogaya hai... maan sir ne saath kaha aur tumhe paas sunayi diya... geet... pagal mat bano... woh THE MAAN SINGH KHURANA hai... aur tum.. geet handa... aur unke saamne tum kuch bhi nahi ho... unme aur tum mein zameen aur asmaan ka farkh hai she came out of her revive when maan cleared his throat...she replied... no... nahi .. sir...





Maan - kya... you don't like working with me... kya geet tumne mera dil tod diya💔🥺... agar sach nahi toh jhoot hi boldeti... mere liya... he made a sad face...




Geet is made Maan's secretary on a temporary basis ... as the secretary of Yash Khurana has resigned and Maan with a big heart❤️ made his secretary.. Mrs. Kathe D'souza his fathers secretary... and made Geet his secretary temporarily for his benefit... so that he can spend time with her and maker fall for him...




Geet - no.. no sir.. aisi baat nahi hai... aap... aap ache hain...




Maan smiled at her... she is far better now... interacting with him... he remembered how she was on that night where he asked ... Mujhse dosti karoge...




The expression on her face was unforgettable... she was shocked .. confused... afraid... everything but happiness... it took him almost 15 days to convince her... and in no time he fell for her...




Maan - toh main sirf acha hoon...




geet - nahi.. nahi... aap bohut ache hain... she said in the same way... as the other night...




Maan smiled... geet aaj hame bahar jana hai... shaam ko... dinner pe... aaogi mere saath... date pe...




Geet - sir... bahar... dinner... date... she was shocked and worried...




Maan laughed out loud... Geet... look at your face... God... how ... how... he couldn't find the correct word...





Maan - I was joking geet... sham ko hamari meeting hain... bhul gayi... mehras ke saath... toh tumhe bhi hona hai waha... meri GF....he wanted to say... but said meri P.A. hona...



Geet - ok.. sir...kitne baje aana hai...



Maan - be ready by seven... i will pick you up...




Geet nodded and Maan talked to her some more time... and then she left...




Maan came for as said and they both attended the meeting... The meeting was in a hifi restaurant...Geet was dressed in her simple attire... she felt the odd one out... but Maan guided her and didn't leave her for a second...he didn't let her feel left out...he took care of her...The meeting went on well and the clients asked them for dinner... but Maan politely refused saying.. he has to leave... for an important work... and Maan and Geet left the restaurant...




Maan took her to highway and they headed towards the outskirts...




Geet - sir... hum kaha jaarahe hain...




Maan - kyun... tumhe darr lagraha hai mere saath aane se...




Geet smiled nervously... no..sir... aisa kuch nahi hain...




Maan - ab tak tum ne mujhe samjha hi nahi... nahi meri dil ki baat...




Geet- ji...




Maan - Geet main mazak karr raha hoon... tumne waha kuch bhi nahi khaya na... isliye hum dinner karne jaarahe hain... dinner ke baad main tumhe sahi salamat ghar chodunga... theek hai...




Geet nodded ...



In next few minutes Maan parked the car at a neat and clean place... there were a few cars... Geet got down and saw the place... the place is beautiful... fully illuminated by lights... but it looked like a big house in a village...



Geet - sir.. hum kaha aaye hain...




Maan - this is a dhaba Geet... yaha har punjabi dish milti hain... chalo andar chalte hain...




Geet nodded and followed Maan... Maan entered and talked to a person there... Geet was observing the surroundings... the dhaba is very big and there are sections... one side there are cots with planks on them for eating... and other side.. some tables were arranged with chairs... there a few people having their dinner...



Maan called Geet and said chalo... and Geet followed him silently... the person lead Maan and geet to the other side of the dhaba... the other side of the dhaba had small huts with tables and chairs in them... the person entered a small hut and Maan and Geet followed... the hut was beautifully decorated with lights and flowers.. though artificial... the person took out a small spray and sprayed it all over the hut... now it had a nice fragrance...



The person took their order and went away...



Maan - toh bolo geet.. kaisa laga yeh place...



Geet - jagah achi hai...




Maan - khana bhi acha hi hain... main bohut baar aaya hoon yaha...




They heard some dhol sound and turned in that direction... a few people who are in typical punjabi attire are dancing ... and old Punjabi folk songs were playing. ...




Maan and Geet enjoyed their food ... and came out ... the weather was awesome and maan didn't want to go home early... but he has to.. coz he has to drop her...




Maan sat in the car... Geet too joined them in the passenger seat... Maan started the car... but it stooped after travelling a small distance... he got down and checked the car... but he didn't know what to do...




Geet also came down... sir... kya hua...



Maan - pata nahi geet... sab theek hi hai.. par engine start nahi horaha hai...




Geet - ab ghar kaise jayenge sir... aisa lagta hai ki baarish bhi hone wali hain...




Maan also felt the change... it suddenly felt good...the breeze.. the atmosphere... and Geet... and in no time it started to drizzle...




Maan - oh.. no... Geet... jaldi gaadi mein baitho... main kuch karta hoon.. with that Maan ran and sat in the car... he took out his mobile and called to send him a car.. as his car broke down...





Maan - Geet... don't worry... he turned but he couldn't see Geet there... Geet looked around... and he saw her drenching in rain... she is enjoying the drops on her... she had her face up and eyes closed... and to Maan's eyes she looked beautiful...




Geet opened her eyes and saw maan... she went to the car and said... sir... bahar aayiye... yeh iss saal ki pehli baarish hain... toh aap bhi maza lijiye... when maan didn't respond... she shrugged and went away... she stood under the rain and started enjoying.. twriling around like a kid.. playing with rain water...




Maan was seeing her and drinking the beauty with his eyes... his heart beat increased...




Geet - sir... bahar aayiye... aur baarish ki maza lijiye... pehli baarish hai sir... iski baat hi kuch aur hai sir...




Maan in a trance opened the door and stepped into the rain... the rains started drenching him too...




Geet saw him and smiled... bachpan se hi mujhe baarish bohut pasand hai sir... mamma ki daant bhi khayi... aur papa mujhe hamesha bachate the... maa ki daant se... iss baarish se bohut saari yaadein judi hai sir ... meri... papa ke saath...




Geet revealed a little more of her life to him...





Geet - Main toh baarish ke mausam mein hi paida hui sir... matlab mera aur iska rista toh janam se hai... pinky meri cousin hain... par hamari dosti bhi baarish mein hi hui...




Maan smiled at her... he said... aur ab se mujhe bhi baarish pasand hain...



and then suddenly there is a lightening followed by loud sound of a thunder... Geet got scared and hugged Maan... who is standing opposite to her...




Maan too hugged her... daro mat geet... main hoon... hamesha tumhare saath...




Maan felt complete with Geet in his arms... he knew what he want... he knew he needed her like he need his breadth to survive...



Maan cherished the few moments Geet was in his hands... main yeh baarish ki raat kabhi nahi bhulunga... kabhi nahi.... its time... Geet... its time...mere dil ki baat tumhe kehne ka... ab aur der nahi...






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Deewani si ek ladki...




Geet sat in looking for hope...kya koi ummeed bhi hai... kya hai uske naseeb mein... kyun baar baar usse woh chodna padta hai jo uski chhaah hai... pehle padhayi... kuch logo ki wajah se usse apni collage chodni padi... phir uske papa usse chodke chalegaye... aur ab...WOH bhi... kyun babaji... main jaanti hoon mujhe koi haq nahi hain unse pyar karne ka... par kya dil par kisi ka bas chalta hai...




Usse pata hi nahi chala ki kab iske dil mein woh bas gaya... kab apni jagah banali... kab uski rooh mein bas gaya... par... kya iss pyar ki koi manzil hain... kya usse woh pyar milega...






Preet ki lath mohe aaisi laagi

Ho gayi main matwaali

Bal bal jaaun apane piya ko

He main jaaun vaari vaari

Mohe sudh budh naa rahi tan mann ki

Yeh toh jaane duniya saari

Bebas aur laachar phiru main

Haari main dil haari - 2



She remembered seeing him first time... two years back... when she joined KC... but he didn't even spared a glance at her... nor she had feelings for him then.. it was a casual boss and employee meeting... they never interacted for an year ... but she had seen him occasionally in meetings...



But she had heard of him from her colleagues... thier crazyness for his looks...calling him Dhak Dhak... his everything... but she never saw him in another light... he was her boss.. and she IS a mere employee... she very well knew he didn't even knew her name also... but she heard tales of him...about his proposals and him rejecting them also... he didn't gave any hint what he was thinking..what is there in his heart... but everyday... some or the other girls heart would break... by his rejection...




She remembered how two of his clients tried to seduce him and how he dismissed them rejecting their deals also... He blasted them in front of his whole staff... he wouldn't do business with people who don't have morals... That is the first time she saw him in a different light... she slowly started observing things about him... but chori chori...





Geet smiled remembering the instances she used to observe him... and the first time he gave a chance to explain her point... may be he noticed her then...





New project meeting was going on and she found out something wrong... but she was too scared to even open her mouth in front of the heads of each department... she tried as the mistake may incur loss to the company... she tried to tell adi... but she was caught and Sr. Mr. Khurana told her to talk... and give her idea... but she couldn't open her mouth in front of so many people... they waited for few minutes..but she couldn't come out and put down her points... as usual some people who wait for an opportunity started their taunting... she was in verge of tears... she was trying hard to open her mouth and tell her point but couldn't coz of her fears... one of the HOD started to blast her... but was stooped by HIS voice... He got up from his seat... came to her... offered her a glass of water... asked her to cool down... she had that water but still there was that hesitation...




he turned to Adi... Adi said.. Geet... HE turned to her and said...MS. Geet... you are finding it difficult to express ...


SHE for the first time saw in to his eyes... His orbs took her into a different world...


she some how nodded...



Adi slowly said... Sir... she is...



HE stopped Adi by showing his hand...




HE again said... I have a solution for this... will you do that...



Geet nodded... HE said... good... do one thing... take this paper and write down your point...



Geet agreed promptly and did as he told and gave the paper to him along with the file in which she found the mistake...





After that all appreciated her... but she was too lost in his eyes even to know anything... their appreciation didn't matter to her... she was completely under his spell... his eyes casted a spell on her...




Tere naam se jee loon -

Tere naam se marr jaaun -

Teri jaan ke sadke mein kuchh aaisa kar jaaun

Tune kya kar dala marr gayi main mitt gayi main

Ho ri ha ri ho gayi main

Teri deewani deewani- 2

Tune kya kar dala marr gayi main mitt gayi main

Ho ri ha ri ho gayi main

Teri deewani deewani - 2




She opened her bag and pulled out a dried rose... she caresses it with extreme softness... IT was given by him to her... after the meeting... a white rose... it showed his appreciation and gratitude for what she had done...

Slowly he started to be a part of her life.. he would wish her good morning first... its was her duty to wish her boss... but he would wish her... as he says there are no rules in friendship.. it doesn't matter who wished first... sometimes he would invite her for aa coffee with him...in his cabin... after the office hrs... and if they got late.. he would made sure that she reaches he safely...


And then one day at such coffee time.. she told him about her ... what happened to her at collage...


Her father wanted her to be a doctor... and to fulfill his wish ... she studied harder and got admission in one of the best collages in the city... she got full scholarship too for that... but she couldn't adjust there... she tried hard... but she couldn't fight every day... one day they would lock her up in empty rooms... store rooms... one day in a lab.. or even in toilets... it was becoming too much for her to bear... and the final nail was when they had locked her up in a mortuary... she couldn't bear and ran back to save her life... she still feels sorry for not fulfilling her dad's dream... but she couldn't study in such an atmosphere... where there is no respect... no mercy on juniors... may be some have survived... but a girl like her couldn't... she had to leave the collage... and change her stream...and her dad supported her.. he couldn't see her miserable state and hear her cry every day...



Maan felt miserable hearing her pain... he knew how the collage was.. as his sister Annie is there too... but she is not in hostel... so she is saved from those tortures... and even the last name.. Khurana helped her too...



Maan consoled her saying beautiful things... he would make her laugh with jokes and saying about his pranks in childhood... he always made her feel great... he wouldn't treat her any less.. he would treat her equal to him.. even though she is much much less in status...





From that day she started following him... not literally but her eyes followed him everywhere... she stared to dress in his fav colours... she saw her dress... again his fav color... white... she smiled at her craziness... she is behaving like a teenage girl... or else who would do these things now a days... and she didn't know when he made place in her prayers too...




She prayed for him too along with her family members... she prayed for his well being...






She kept the rose back and sat watching the people coming and offering prayers... and she saw HIM... intently looking at her... she smiled with tears... smiled coz... she saw him again... and tears coz she knew he is not real... he is iust her imagination...










Ishq junoon jab hadh se badh jaaye - 2

Haste haste aashiq suli chadh jaaye

Ishq ka jaadu sara chadha kara bole - 2

Khoob laga lo pehre raste rab khole






She can see her(self) with him... both praying together and they both with the sacred dhaga... they were about to tie the dhaga... but... some one came and held her hand and took far away from him...










Tears started to flow from her eyes... Mujhe pata hai babaji... mujhe aisi ummed bhi nahi rakhni chahiye... woh kaha aur main kaha...












She then remembered an incident... Most of the staff has left that day.. as Sr. Khurana gave few hrs off as they cracked a very profitable and big deal... And the office atmosphere was light... Sr. Khurana.. Maan sir... Adi... Geet and few more staff were present.. Geet was gatherting papers and was listening to their talks... Sr. Khurana said something to Adi about finding a perfect match to Maan ...





Maan sir promptly denied and said... that he found someone... and is waiting for her yes...




Yahi ishq di marzi hain

Yahi rab di marzi hain

Yahi ishq di marzi hain

Yahi rab di marzi hain

Tere bin jeena kaisa

Haan Khudgarzi hi

Tune kya kar dala marr gayi main mitt gayi main

Ho ri ha ri ho gayi main

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She don't know what she felt... she cannot even measure the pain she endured that time... that was a reality check for her... till then she was in a imagination... a virtual world... and his words brought her to reality... a harsh reality...







From then she tried to avoid him but is it even possible... he would call her for every work... even for a small coffee he would call her... she tried to deny him... but he wouldn't listen ... his small touch would create ripples in her body... but she couldn't express... she would always find a way to escape from him... and she would be in his cabin the next minute... She , every minute fought with herself, she fought with the love for HIM...



Oh ho oh hoohhh...

He main rang rangeeli deewani - 2

Ke main albeli main mastani

Gaaun bajaaun sabko rijhaaun

He main dila zaram se begaani

Ke main deewani main deewani




She knew she has crossed all the barriers... HE is her krishna and she is his radha... Radha and Krishna never became one... but They both were present in each others hearts... And He will be in her heart forever...






Tere naam se jee loon tere naam se marr jaaun

Tere jaan ke sadle mein kuchh aaisa kar jaaun

Tune kya kar dala marr gayi main mitt gayi main

Ho ri ha ri ho gayi main




She is finding light in his eyes... his mere glance has become her life... his smile made her day... his small worry brought panic in her... his sad face caused her distress...




Teri deewani deewani

Teri deewani deewani

Teri deewani deewani

Teri deewani deewani...




Her mobile buzzed .. she looked at it... ... Her mother messaged her.. to return home immediately... She then remembered her mothers words... There is no other way... she has to accept her parents wish... Her mother chose some Dev for her... she has to obey her parents... how can she not ... when her father gave the word... She doesn't know she is doing right or wrong...




She stood up to leave the holy shrine... no matter what HE will always be there in her heart... she again drifted into her imaginative world... where he is close to her... walking with her ... guiding her like always... where nothing else matters...



But she least knew.. he is actually present there watching her...



and that day ... the gloomiest day as she thought transformed into the happiest day in her life... when she reached home... she is shocked to see her boss Sr Mr. Khurana and his wife... in their home... Preet ran to her as soon as she saw Geet... She was completely in a dream... when her mother told her about the rishta ... Mr. Khurana had come to ask for Geet for his elder son.. MAAN...


Another shock came her way.. when she saw Maan sir... in the same dress she imagined... He winked at her and she looked down ... and few minutes later she started blushing as she heard the elder talking about their marriage ...


When Maan came to know about Rahul through Adi... she didn't waste time... he told his dad about his love for Geet... Mr. Khurana agreed as he knew Geet and had seen her for two years... And in no time... Maan and Geet were married...


Maan said... I wonder what would have happened if you had not changed your stream and joined office... Geet...


Geet snuggled into him more and said... it wouldn't have mattered Maan... some or the other way I would have reached you... babaji ne Geet ko Maan ke liye hi banaya hain... toh kaise nahi milte... We are destined Maan... kuch bhi ho.. chahe duniya ke ksis kone mein bhi ho.. hum milke hi rehte...

Edited by -indu- - 9 years ago
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hi indu
all r fabulous updates ,..
the first one..mujhse dosti karogi ..i already commented for that on lakshmi thread ..
it was nice one ..but i felt it incomplete ..ab itni addat ho gayi hai maneet ko saath rakhne ki ki sirf story sirf dosti pe end hazam nahi hoti 😆..
second one maan ki deewangi ..he stares at geet when no one notices ..hai re yeh pyaar kya kya na karae ..
third one ..lovely story ..geet fell in love wth maan but can't say him ..there is lot of difference between them ...geet worship maan ..she was sad to see that man said that he likes someone ...she doesn't want to hurt anyone..she got the best gift when she saw maan's parents at her house talking abt her rishta with maan ..
finally love story complete ..maneet huye ek forever ..
love the story
thank u ..

Edited by tabby999 - 9 years ago
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3 in 1
bravo
all 3 scenes suited well in maneet here

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maan eet trapped in office
he saw her trembling
he made her ease talking with her n
he offerred her friendship
he fall for her
n she too
she felt heartbroken when maan told his dad he has found someone
her marriage fixed with maan making geet shock
beautiful story
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Beautiful story 👏
finally they got each other for ever..😃

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Nice story
Geet slowly slowly open up to him
She started loving him
Maan is so good im dual meaning dialogues
He made Geet confused by his dialogues
Continue soon
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thanks indu but i have already read them they all r amazing and well written

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