Rishabala SS: His innocent biwi {COMPLETED}

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Hello Dearies😊, I'm back with another story 😉.

I got this story idea long back and just drafted a page of this story. But when Azra and Suru initiated OS competition, i thought to complete this story and send an entry for it but i wrote only half part at that time & couldn't complete due to my work pressure. I decided to post this story whatever i have written till now rather than just keeping in my laptop😛.

So that's how i am here with this story, have written 13 pages till now so I'm posting them in two parts.

I will first try to complete my other stories until then i won't continue writing nxt part of this. If i get good response i may finish this off, my opinion will change purely based on your response😳.

This story is dedicated to Azra and Suru because of them i wrote atleast half of this story otherwise i wouldn't have penned down this story anytime soon.😃

PART 1

"Kiss me Biwi..." murmured Rishab against her lips, but madhu is trying hard to move away from his clutches.

"Kiss me back dammit..." said Rishab, irritated by her irresponsiveness, he wanted to kiss her and taste every inch of her mouth but at the same time he wants her to react the same way.

Even though she is not responding to the way he expected he couldn't able to leave her, so he started kissing her, chewing her lower lip.. His hands were roaming around her body..he squeezed her tiny waist to which a groan escaped from her mouth, taking this as a chance his tongue entered her mouth and started exploring her mouth.

Rishab left her after he was satisfied and looked at her face breathing heavily which is expressionless and her eyes were filled with tears which are going to start flowing her cheeks.

Taking one look at her face, he left the room slamming the door shut.

As soon as Rishab left the room she dropped herself on the floor and started crying.

Flashback:

Rishab Kundra and Madhubala parents are friends and also neighbors living in a small town near Mumbai. Mohan Kundra and Mallik worked as a normal employees in a factory present in that town .When Rishab was 5 years old, Padmini gave birth to Madhu both Radha and Padmini decided to convert their friendship to a relation. So, they decided to get RK and Madhu married when they are of marriageable age, Mallik and Mohan approved their wives wish happily ...

"Mom... who is it?" asked Rishab noticing a baby girl in the crib as soon as he entered the room .

"she is your biwi Rishu... " says Radha smilingly..

"Biwi !! means??" asks Rishab not knowing what is the meaning of that word..

"Biwi means she is your life partner who always stays with you life long, who loves you, takes care of you like the way i take care of your papa." explained Radha.

"Ohh... will she even play with me??" asks Rishab innocently.

"Yes , she plays with you"

"Tell her to play with me now "

"Not now Rishu, she is just 2 days old. After some months she can play with you until then you have to take care of her like a big boy as she is still a baby na, ok?"

"Okk" says Rishab and starts smiling at the cute little girl who is making some noises to gain people's attention. Hearing her noises, Rishab turned towards her and stared at her for some time.

"Can i go near her?" asked Rishab cutely pointing to the crib which is few steps away from him.

"ha, you can go but be careful with her as she is still little you may hurt her, ok? " said Radha.

"Ok" said Rishab happily and went towards the crib, he looked at her for some time as the little girl is looking at him too. After few minutes, the baby girl shifted her eyes and was looking somewhere else.

"Biwi... Biwi... See here " says Rishab trying to get the attention of the little girl.

"Why are you calling her biwi, Rishu??" asked Radha not knowing why he is calling like that.

"You only told that she is my biwi that's why i am calling her with that name only" replied Rishab innocently not understanding why he can't call his biwi with that name.

"It is not her name Rishu. Her name is Madhubala you can call her Madhu." said Radha trying to make her son understand.

"No ,you said that she is my biwi na so i will call her with that name only..." says Rishab stubbonly.

"But she has a name Rishu, you can't call her biwi" said Radha.

"Your name is also not mama na but i am calling you mama because you are my mama. So i will call her biwi only as she is my biwi" argued back.

Knowing her son's stubbornness she remained silent and thought of convincing him later. But he never listened to his parents words and continued to call her biwi.

Years passed, everyone pampered Madhu more as she is the younger one in both the families and everyone showered love on her, this made Rishab feel jealous of Madhu and started bullying her, he always made her do his works. Though he is arrogant towards her, he never wanted to hurt her, if he hurt then he will make sure to make it up to her indirectly not letting her know that he cared for her. Mostly when they were alone , he used to pamper her more as he will be the only one to pamper and take care for her. In fact he was never jealous of her but he just wanted to be the only person who pamper her not even his/her parents.

When Madhu started going to school, both Radha and Padmini started working. Rishab and Madhu used to go to school together and after coming home from school, she used to stay with Rishab in his house . One day Rishab's teacher gave him an assignment, that evening he told Madhu do it and went out to play with his friends in opposite house. By the time she finished writing that, her hand started paining and she slept off crying due to that pain. After an hour, Rishab came back and saw her sleeping on the floor with holding her right hand with her left hand, with a tear stained face. He understood that it must have hurted her hand so much as she is very small and writing a 4 pages assignment in an hour is too much for her to do. He felt bad for her and started massaging her hand without disturbing her sleep. After few minutes of massage she slept off peacefully. Next day he bought chocolates for her with his pocket money and gave them to her saying that his friend bought those for him but as doesn't like those chocolates he is giving them to her. Madhu seeing the chocolates didn't listen to any of his blabbering but took those from him and ate happily. He smiled and felt satisfied seeing her eating them excitedly.

Like this years passed, When Madhu was 13 years old her parents died in an accident. Padmini's sister Karuna who lived in Delhi came forward and told Rishab's parents that she will take responsibility of Madhu from then but Rishab's parents convinced her that she is their responsibility and assured her that they will take care of Madhu. From then on, Madhu started living with Rishab in their house.

Rishab's care and affection towards Madhu was replaced with Possessiveness and love. He always felt Madhu as his possession. He covered his love with arrogance, he used to tease her and irritate her but she never complained any of those to their parents as she knew that he can't hurt her intentionally but he is a bit arrogant . Whenever she needed him , he was there for her especially when she lost her parents he was there for her to share her sadness. But after she recovered, he again went back to arrogant attitude but whenever he saw her crying, his soft side used to come into picture to console her.

After a year, Madhu came from her school and was getting ready to go to her friend's house. She heard her room door opening with a thud and turned around to see a furious Rishab glaring at her standing at the door. She got scared and stood rooted in the same position.

"Where were you till now, biwiii?"asked Rishab angrily walking towards her dragging the word biwi.

"Umh..Just now I came from school and now getting ready to go to my friend's house" replied Madhu shivering as she never saw him so angry.

"Why didn't you wait for me ?? Daily i was the one who come to you pick you up from school right?" asked Rishab.

"Woah... i waited for you but you didn't came so i came along with my friend" she told shivering.

"Just friend or boy friend?" asked Rishab pinning her to the wall and placed his both hands on either side of her.

"No Rishu what are you saying? I came with my friend Meena, You know her na?"

"Then how come i saw you with another guy at the end of the street? huh?"

"Meena house comes first na, so we went to her home and she asked her brother to drop me. I denied, but she didn't listen to me."

"Whatever, but i don't want you to talk with any other guy. You are my biwi , understood?" said Rishab arrogantly trapping her between him and the wall.

"How many times should i tell you to not call me biwi? All my friends are making fun of me Rishu. I am not your biwi"

"How dare you to say this to me? You are my biwi."

"No, am not. My friends told me that am not your biwi not until our marriage."

"Yes, you are." saying that he slammed his lips on her. This is the first time he was kissing her. He wanted to claim his right on her.

Present:

As soon as Rishab left the room after kissing her, she dropped herself on the floor and started crying.

She didn't understand why he kissed her. She continued to cry for some time and touched her lips and saw that blood is oozing from it as he bite her lower lip hard.

Rishab walked out of Madhu's room frustrated and faced his mother who was glaring at him. Without saying any word she held his wrist and dragged him towards her room.

"What is this Rishu? Is this the way we raised you? What's wrong with you?"

"What happened, Mom? Why are angry?"

"You are asking me why i am angry? How can you kis...um force Madhu, Rishab? You are just 18 years old."

"She is my biwi, Mom. It is between me and her, don't involve in our matters."

"She is not your wife yet, Rishu. She is still your fiance. You both are not married. Why is it so hard for you to understand this?"

"Don't tell me this crap, Mom. she is my wife, i can do whatever i want with her." said Rishab angrily.

"That's it. Only one of you is staying with us in this house either you or Madhu. You both are not going to see each other until you settle in your life and Madhu is of marriagable age." said Radha firmly.

"Mom please don't do this. I can't stay away from my biwi. You know that too, please don't separate us."

"I trusted you Rishab, When all our neighours suggested me to keep you both away from each other, i didn't listened to their words. But now i understand why they suggested me to not keep you both in same house. Now it is decided that only one will stay in this house, other will go to Mumbai and continue their education and stay there in boarding school. So now i am giving you a choice, You or Madhu; Decide yourself and tell me. And don't come near Madhu. If i see you misbehave with her once again, i will know what to do next. Am i clear? " Radha said angryily to which Rishab nodded his head as yes.

Having no other option, he decided to go to Mumbai, as he knew that Madhu can't stay in hostel and she can't live without Radha and Mohan around her. He informed his mother that he will leave to Mumbai.

When Mohan came home from office, Radha informed him every thing and he even supported her decision. Next day Mohan and Rishab left to Mumbai and Mohan came back after two days and informed Radha that he joined Rishab in a college and that he will be staying in college hostel. Radha sighed in relief hearing that though they are sad to keep Rishab away from home but they too knew that it won't be good idea if they let Rishab stay near Madhu particularly in his teenage. They just informed Madhu that Rishab is going to study in Mumbai and not the actual reason behind sending him away.

Days were passing like this, Madhu continued her schooling in their town whenever Rishab has holidays, Radha and Mohan used to send Madhu to Delhi as Karuna, Madhu's maasi requested them to send Madhu to their house for every holidays. Thinking as a best solution to keep Rishab and Madhu away, Rishab's parents agreed to this. At first Rishab tried to argue with them for sending Madhu away whenever he came home, they just convinced him to study well and get a good job so that he can marry Madhu and take her wherever he wants. Having no other option Rishab agreed to their words. But whenever he came home he used to stay in her room, feeling the presence of her and dreaming about her seeing her photos.

Though Radha restricted their meeting but she used to show recent photos of Madhu to Rishab and of Rishab's to Madhu.

After a year Radha died of illness which made Madhu to take care of Mohan and the household responsibilities, though she is just 14 years old.

Madhu decided to stop her studies after high school as she wasn't interested in studies and wants to take care of house ; moreover she has to go few kilometers away from their place as their town doesn't have Junior collages. But upon Rishab's insistance, Mohan convinced Madhu to study privately and write the board exams that's how she completed her intermediate.

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INDEX

Part 1 & 2 : Page 1

Part 3 & 4 : http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4457341&PID=127167850&#p127167850

Part 5, 6 & 7 : http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4457341&PID=127763266&#p127763266

Part 8 : http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4457341&PID=128445370&#p128445370

Part 9 : http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4457341&PID=128598518&#p128598518

Part 10 : http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4457341&TPN=40

Part 11 :http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4457341&PID=128965367&#p128965367

Part 12 & 13(Page 51) :http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4457341&PID=129627583&#p129627583

Part 14 & 15(Page 56) :http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4457341&TPN=56&#p130080050

Epilogue 1(page 65) :http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4457341&TPN=65&#p130910865

Epilogue 2(page 72) :http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4457341&PID=131173993&#p131173993

A BONUS CHAPTER(page 72) :http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4457341&PID=131173993&#p131173993


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PART 2

After 8 years:

Rishab completed his studies 2 years back and started working in a software company in Mumbai. Madhu is 21 years old and turned as a beautiful woman now. As Rishab is stable with his job, Mohan decided to get Rishab and Madhu married. When the same was informed to Rishab, he told his father to fix the marriage date immediately.

Mohan made arrangements for their marriage as their family doesn't have any close relatives much other than Karuna, Madhu's maasi and few friends of Mohan in that town. Rishab informed his father that he will come two days before the marriage as he has some important meetings in office.

"Madhu beta, bring water to Rishab" called Mohan from the living room.

Rishab was eagerly waiting to see Madhu after 8 years. Last time he saw her was when he came home hearing his mother death news. At that time, there were not in a situation to talk they just saw each other. After funeral and other necessary works, Rishab went back to Mumbai.

"Here, have this" a glass appeared infront of Rishab which made him look up. He was mesmerized to see her after so many years. In these years he didn't even saw her in photos, after Radha's death nobody was there to send him her photos but whenever he visited home during holidays he left some of his recent photos for her to see when she comes back from her maasi's home.

"Thanks, biwi " Rishab told her while taking the glass from her hands intentionally touching her hand.

She shyly nodded her head and went back to kitchen. After having a chit chat with his father he went back to his room. While talking to his father he observed that Madhu was hiding behind the curtain near the kitchen and was looking at him.

After having a bath, he went to living room and saw that it was empty and then went to kitchen to get a glimpse of his biwi and found her busy doing something. He slowly went in without making any noise encircled his arms around her waist and twirled her around.

"Arghhh" Madhu started screaming.

"It's me biwi" told Rishab to calm her.

"Rishu, leave me. What are you doing here?" Rishab stopped twirling her and turned her so that they can face each other.

He didn't reply to her question. He just cupped her face in between his hands and started closing distance between them. Seeing this, Madhu widened her eyes and thought about the kiss he gave to her few years back. She got scared and immediately pushing him aside she ran out of the kitchen. Rishab stood there shocked seeing her running away.

At night, after having dinner every one retired to their rooms and Madhu after completing her chores went to her room. She entered her room and after latching the bolt she turned and saw Rishab who was lying lazily on bed. She turned back to open the door but before she could open; Rishab was on her side in a swift movement and pinned her to the wall.

"Tsh, tsh, bad move biwi. Why did you run away in the afternoon ? and why are you trying to escape now?" asked Rishab smirking.

"Woah..."

"Ok leave it. You will get punishment for this later. Now tell me last time when i came home 6 months back i wrote my mobile number in a paper and kept it in your cupboard. Why didn't you call me?"

"I don't have mobile na, that's why. I was shy to ask papa for his mobile."

"Who told you to call from dad's mobile? You could have called me from Telephone booth right?"

"I was scared that papa might find out if i call you. So i didn't call you"

"hmmm..." hummed Rishab bending his head close to her face and she started to push him back.

He placed his hands on her waist and pulled her closer and smashed his lips on her. He started kissing her and biting her lower lip, also squeezing her waist with one hand and moving his other hand on her back.

He knew that Madhu is not kissing him back but he was not in a mood to break the kiss;he continued to kiss her possessively.

After few minutes of Madhu's struggling he finally released her and attacked her neck.

"I can't wait for another two days? Do you want to wait till marriage?" Rishab asked her nuzzling her neck.

Madhu doesn't know what to say as she has no idea what he was talking about. She just nodded her head as yes. Sighing he left her knowing that if he stayed for another second near her he will loose his control. Kissing her on her forehead, he left the room.

After Rishab left to his room, Madhu stood there shocked she remember how Radha told her to not let any guy touch her after sending Rishab to Mumbai years back. Madhu couldn't understand whether to let Rishab kiss her or not. She liked his kiss though it was rough but she didn't have courage to kiss him back thinking about Radha's words.

Madhu is naive and doesn't know anything about what husband and wife relation mean. No body was there to give awareness as she has no friends of her age in that town , she used to spend her day in home with the neighbor kids. Radha's words strongly registered in her mind.

They got married after two days and Rishab was so excited for their wedding night. He was eagerly waiting for Madhu to come to his room . After half an hour she came inside with a glass of milk and was dressed in saree. She entered the room and stood at the door frame nervously. Rishab went near her and pulled her inside, closed the door.

"What took you so long, biwi?" asked Rishab walking towards the bed holding her hand. She just remained silent without answering.

"Why are you so silent? Are you nervous?" asked Rishab taking the glass from her hand and placed it on the bedside table.

"why did maasi told me to stay in this room? Shall i go to my room? I am not comfortable here" asked Madhu nervously. Rishab was shocked hearing her words but then he thought she was playing with him.

" No, you can't stay in separate room .Because you are my biwi na, that's why you should stay with me from now on. " told her cupping her face and kissing on her cheek.

"Drink this milk, it will get cold. You had a very light dinner. You will feel hungry in the middle of the night" Madhu offered him the glass to divert him from touching and kissing her.

"No, am not in a mood to drink it. I have some other plans to night, I'm not hungry for food." Said Rishab huskily placing his hands on her waist pulling her close to him.

" But, maasi told me to make you drink it " informed Madhu nervously as his touch sending shivers in her body.

"hmm.." replied Rishab burying his head in her hair inhaling the scent of her body.

"Rishu, please drink it before it gets cold" said Madhu pushing him.

Sighing Rishab leaves her and taking the glass from the table drinks it fastly.

"Happy now??" asked Rishab handling her the empty glass.

Madhu started to go towards the door when Rishab held her wrist to stop her.

"Where are you going?"

"To kitchen to keep this glass"

"No need to keep it now itself. You take it to kitchen tomorrow morning"

"But..."

"No, buts biwi, come here. I have a lot of things to do tonight. I don't want to waste time " said Rishab arrogantly pulling her into his arms, hugging her tightly.

"You smell so good, biwi." Says Rishab nuzzling her neck.

"Rishu, what are you doing? Leave me" said Madhu pushing him placing her both hands on his chest.

"You don't know biwi, ok let me tell you no no let me show you what I'm gonna do tonight." Said Rishab and picked up her in his arms and started walking towards the bed.

He threw her on bed, jumped on top of her and crashed his lips on hers while Madhu was shocked with his gesture.

"Rishu, you...you are heavy. I am unable to breathe." muttered Madhu in between the kiss while pushing him.

Realizing that his total weight is on her, he pulled away from her but continued to kiss her supporting his weight on his elbows on either side of her head.

"I'm...am unable... to ...breathe" told Madhu pushing him trying to get out of his hands.

Finally Rishab pulled away from her by placing a small peck on her lips and laid beside her , both of them breathing heavily.

"I was waiting since so many years to kiss you like this" told Rishab grinning while Madhu is struggling to breathe properly.

"Come here" told Rishab opening his arms for her.

Madhu was scared with his wild kiss and nodded her head negatively. She touched her lips and found that blood is oozing from the lower lip.

"Come na biwi "

"I won't come. See what you did, my lower lip is bleeding. I won't talk to you. " told Madhu in the verge of crying sitting on the bed.

"sorry biwi, what to do I stayed away from you for so many years. Couldn't control myself . Sorry, come here na" pampered Rishab while trying to sit while Madhu got up from the bed.

"I promise, I will try to be gentle. Now come near me. " told Rishab standing up and trying to take her in his arms but Madhu moved away from him.

Madhu moving away from him irritated him more as he has been waiting for this moment since so many years but she was not understanding his situation but he has to control his anger as he doesn't want to shout at her as they meet after such a long gap and moreover he don't want to pick a fight on their wedding night.

"I said i am sorry right? Come here na, i won't do anything now. "

"Pakka, you won't kiss me right?" Madhu asked innocently.

"No i won't, now come here. Don't stay away from me." i will try not to kiss you atleast for some time he thought to himself.

Rishab moved close to her and took her hands in his, walked towards their bed. He thought to talk to her for some time as she might need a divertion after his wild kiss.

"So, tell me how was today?Did you enjoyed ?"

"It was so tiring Rishu, Maasi made me wear heavy sarees, before each ritual. The heavy wedding saree and jewellary, only god knows how i managed to walk properly without falling down." Madhu stated remebering the morning incidents.

"It's our wedding na, she must have wanted you to look perfect today. " Rishab told her caressing her cheeck. While Madhu started brushing off his hand from her face.

"By the way you looked beautiful in that wedding saree." Rishab complimented her.

"Really " Madhu jumped from the bed and started giggling.

"Yes, I thought you will wear that tonight as well"

"Maasi told me to change into this saree, shall i go and change into that saree now" Madhu said excitedly as she was happy to know that Rishab found her beautiful in her wedding saree. Though it was heavy she want to wear it now as Rishab liked her in that.

"No no, you look beautiful and sexy in this saree." told Rishab pulling her to him.

Madhu blushed hearing his compliment and after that she started talking excitedly about her life here after Rishab moving to Mumbai.

Rishab kept looking at her dreamily, listening to her chatter. He missed all this, in childhood even though she was scared of him she used to tell him everything when he was with her; he used to act like he wasn't paying attention to her talks but he listens to her every word.

While she was talking, he tried to kiss her in between but she moved away from him. Usually he don't have much patience but today it is different. After few minutes, Madhu started yawning ,an idea popped up in his mind.

"Let's sleep, biwi"

"But I'm not sleepy Rishu." Madhu told him pouting.

"We should sleep otherwise you will be look tired tomorrow. Get on the bed, i will switch off the lights and come " said Rishab convincing her to which she nodded her head.

"Will you sleep here only?" she asked suddenly confused.

"ha, if not here; where will i sleep? We are husband and wife right?"

"hmmm but previously we used to sleep in different rooms right?"

"yes, from today onwards we can stay in same room, sleep on same bed and we are allowed to do whatever we want."

"what are we allowed to do?" Madhu asked innocently which made Rishab blush a little.

"That i will show you, now get on the bed."

"Won't papa or Maasi scold us if i sleep here?"

"Biwi, they won't say anything. You are with your husband not with some stranger. Stop asking these stupid questions" he told her controlling his irritation . Madhu got scared hearing his tone and calmly laid on bed.

After switching off the lights, Rishab excitedly walked towards the bed and laid on bed. Madhu's was lying on her side with her back facing Rishab.

He slowly scooted close to her and placed his right hand on her waist and his leg on her legs, started playing with her fingers with his toe. Madhu was shocked with this but feeling his hands and leg on her body is making her nervous which made her shiver under his touch. She stood still at her position not moving.

Rishab seeing her shiver under his touch grinned and moved more close to her leaving no air between them. He dipped his head on her neck and started pestering kisses on her shoulder and ear, rubbing his hand on her stomach and his toe continued to play with her fingers.

"Rishu..." Madhu wishpered his name breathing heavily for which he just hummed as a reply.

"what ...What...are...you...doing?" Madhu managed to say those words as his touches and kisses were creating havoc in her senses.

"Few. minutes. before. you .asked .what .are .the .things. we .are. allowed. to. do .right?" he asked kissing her after each word.

Madhu just hummed and was struggling to decide whether to push or not to push him off her. Her mind is saying her to push him remembering Radha's words but her heart is not allowing to do it as she liked him touching her so intimately.Strangely his touches felt good she thought to herself.

She waited for few more seconds for him to speak but didn't hear anything. Moreover his hands and toe stopped creating sensations but were just resting on her body . She came out of her dazed mind and realized that Rishab was sleeping with his head on her neck and half of his weight is on her.

She slowly turned him and made him lay on his back. She observed him sleeping peacefully with his mouth slightly open . She suddenly wanted to place her lips on his but scolded herself for getting that thought. Moving away from him, she laid down on her place and drifted into sleep.

In the Morning:

Rishab opened his eyes slowly, he is feeling lazy and he doesn't want to get up this soon. He was feeling as if he slept for days. He opened his eyes completely and observed his surroundings then he realized that he was not in his flat which is in Mumbai and in fact in his room, in his house. He realized that he married Madhu yesterday and slept in his own room with his biwi last night, he patted his side of bed and found it empty, Madhu must have got up early he thought to himself.

He got up and took the mobile which was on table to see the time. He saw that it was 11:30am now. He was shocked that he never slept this late not even in weekends. Also he was feeling very tired after waking up also, he tried remembering when he slept last night but he remember upto where he was kissing Madhu on her neck laying on their bed. After that he couldn't memorize anything. The more he tried to remember the more his head started aching.

"Biwi... biwi..." Rishab came out of his room shouting for Madhu.

"You woke up, as you were sleeping Madhu went to temple with her Maasi in the morning. You mean while go and freshen up, they will come now." told Mohan smiling at his son. Nodding his head he went inside his room to have a shower.

Rishab after his shower, he wore his clothes and was buttoning his shirt standing infront of the mirror, he heard the room door opening and turned to see Madhu walking inside.

"Rishu, shall i bring you breakfast ?"

"No" hearing that she turned to walk out of the room after mumbling an ok

"Biwi, wait" saying that he walked towards her and closed the door.

Pulling her to him, he hugged her tightly. Madhu stood numb with his sudden gesture.

"Rishu, I have to go. I have to help Maasi in preparing lunch." Madhu told him nervously.

Sighing he released her as he knew that he has to wait till night to get her to himself. Madhu turned and was about to open the door.

"hey, wait. What happened last night?"

"what happend?" she questioned him back.

"Why did i slept suddenly? I woke up late too" Rishab asked Madhu.

"Woah...you must be tired that's why you over slept" replied Madhu nervously biting her lower lip.

Rishab eyed Madhu and his doubt increased as whenever she was telling a lie she used to bite her lower lip.

"Don't lie and tell me, what happened? Did you do something?" asked Rishab to which she just nodded her head negatively.

"tell me now" asked Rishab faking angry as he doesn't know why she is scared about this.

"I mixed sleeping tablets in the milk last night" told Madhu in one breathe closing her eyes tightly.

"I didn't get you, come again"

"I mixed sleeping tablets in the milk last night" Madhu told slowly.

"What !!!!" Rishab shouted shocked and stared at her. Madhu gulped hearing his shout.

"why did you do that?" asked Rishab after few minutes of silence.

"Last night before coming to your room, i was getting ready in my room and all the ladies over there said that you won't get sleep seeing me like that last night. So to make you sleep peacefully i mixed papa's sleeping tablets in the milk which you drank yesterday." Madhu explained to Rishab hearing that Rishab's eyes went wide and his mouth formed an O shape.

"What!!!!"

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This part is somewhat crazy, i know😆 . I want to show RK as arrogant, possessive and at the same time loving in this story, i don't know whether i succeded in showing him like that,You guys have to tell me that😳😳 .

So how is this story so far?? Is it good, bad or worst ??

Please please do share your views because i badly need it to write further part. Does the title suits this story? if not please suggest me some titles 😃😛 .

@@Veni

Edited by veni7842 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Interesting start dear
So rk is arrogant
N madhu is naive
😊
Edited by v.p.joshi - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Congrats for the New story
Good start
Rk he is so possessive for his biwi
His care his love and same time his
Arrogance he is interesting

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice update...
Hehe... Rk is so possessive... But i liked the explanation he gave... Ur name is not mama but i call u mama... So i will call her biwi... So stubborn he was ... Loving & caring too but puts an arrogant front...
Hehe... He never knows to kiss softly & gently but only to crash hard on her lips...
Lol... Madhu's character is quite unbelievable... Even kids are well aware of love romance... Why even sex nowadays... But she is acting so innocent & naive... Poor Rk... Gonna have a tough time with madhu... I want rk to show her some romantic movies or novels to read... Lol...
She shld grow up or else every night rk will be sleeping with only wet dreams... Lol...
Lol... I was wondering what the hell happened to him? Why suddenly he slept after starting to kiss her... But poor guy's milk was spiked with sleeping pills... Madhu did this to get him some sleep or she want to get some sleep from him without any crashing kiss? Lol...
Okay... Lets see how rk tame is innocent biwi... Hope she will change once she moves with him to modern city mumbai... Thanks for the pm...
Edited by madhurish - 9 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Interesting start.
Madhu is very young, innocent n has no knowledge about love.
Rk loves her too much n is possessive.
Radha did the good thing n kept them apart.
Waiting for the not part...

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Posted: 10 years ago
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congrats fr new story.
amazing n innocent.
waiting fr next part
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Superb update
Madhu is too naive and rk the caring and arrogant
Loved a lot
Cont soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice story. ...Rk loves Madhu very much n is possessive. Radha did the good thing n kept them apart...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice start.
RK is arrogant and posessive.
Madhu is naive and innocent.
Radhaji did good by keeping them away.
waiting to read the next part.

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