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I was so happy seeing Khushi stand up to Payal. There are times in life when it's disrespectful to your own self to stay quiet. Payal seemed almost desperate in wanting to get a rise out of Khushi. It was like she was deliberately needling her. Trying to prove to herself that her "perfect image" was just that - an image. More hurtful for Khushi was knowing her own mother was not able to see the love her daughter has for her Arnav. That who she considered "right" was more important. Even now.

Krabs (that's what my Arnav says ergo that's what I say) just comes across as a lovely guy. Feelings can't be switched off just because they're inconvenient. But he's handled himself so well. Been a good friend for his Koo as is evident in their camaraderie. I really liked how Arnav subtly let him know he was aware of his feelings. Without belittling or embarrassing anyone. I hope he is able to help Harshad in sorting out Rithvik's mess. (and sticks around long enough for our G to be successful in her endeavours ...)

Harshad and Khushi's conversation left me teary eyed. A father doing what he thinks is best. Sometimes you don't realise your children have grown up and don't need to be sheltered. It's painful having something he's spent a lifetime building up, disintegrating around him due to the carelessness of the very children you hoped to be securing the future of. I hope the situation is not beyond repair at his practice. And I hope he is able to demonstrate the love he has for Khushi, something which she's always known was there. Her grandfather had clearly been a very astute man. The promise he'd extracted from his grand daughter was as much to keep her connected to her family as it was to take care of his wife and son.

Khushi handled herself so well with an irascible Arnav. She sensed his behaviour was the result of something else. She kept her calm so so well even in the face of such determined incitement. "Hurricane Arnav" was ready to wreak more havoc. Another long night for Khushi yes, but one with a difference to the other ones ... her acute sense of loneliness has eased a little now.

Reading of her state of mind in the past was painful. Hurtful, thoughtless words searing an already open wound. Having people around her but still being alone in her grief.

But her present sense of certitude about her love for Arnav and for her marriage gives me hope that they will be okay. That the bare back he's turned towards her is only because he's being temporarily grouchy. Waiting for him to turn around ...

Enjoyed your update Jigs moreso because things are falling in its place😃. Khushi is fighting for her Arnav and is fighting for her right👏

I love the friendship between Khushi and Kabir! They're actually really sweet- and even if Arnav is most definitely not jealous, it was kind of cute to see him watching them at the beginning. I really loved how Khushi reasserted how much she loves Arnav- and how he did the same for her. They were both so firm about their commitment to each other- it was beautiful to see between the two of them, and they made sure people had no reason to doubt their faith in each other in this update. I especially liked Kabir because he knew when to step away- it takes a lot of strength to do that, and not everyone does. But I respect him much, much more for doing so.

I really liked the confrontation between Khushi and Payal- although, I can't say I liked Payal any more than before after that one. I have always loved how every character you write is consistent in how they react to situations, and this was one chapter where that was showcased very well. Payal's reaction to Khushi, Arnav's reaction to Payal and his anger that Khushi won't let him help her, Khushi standing up to Payal without stooping down to her level- all of them were so well portrayed, and there wasn't a single consistency flaw anywhere. With this many characters, it takes a lot to be able to do that, and it's something you pull off week after week with ease.


I loved the scene between Khushi and her father as well. I absolutely loved seeing Harshad take steps towards breaching that distance between his daughter and him. His reluctance to burden his daughter with his problems was such a parent thing to do- but I'm glad they talked. I respect him for owning up to his mistakes- when clearly, not everyone in his family has the capability of doing that. He has integrity, and while I may not agree with how long it has taken him to realize it... he did, and he's making the effort to fix it. I can respect that.


I won't say much on the flashback- not because I didn't like it, but because words for that scene won't do it justice. All I will say is that you really, truly made me feel Khushi's pain- and you did that absolutely beautifully. It was poignant and so damn well written.


You did a phenomenal job with this chapter. There were so many parallel storylines- but not once did I find myself confused or wondering why someone reacted a certain way. You handle them all with ease.

Love always,
Choti.

Res for my SS

Nice update with no cliff hangers. Enjoyed reading Kubbs and Kush catching up with not so jealous Arnav in the vicinity. Like how Arnav jumped at the first chance to show his stance on his marital status to Krabs.

Rithvik is real scumbag with no basic manners and Payal and he are match made in heaven. Payal has real venomous tongue and I hope she won't make riot on big day. Love the way Kushi gave back to Payal and I wish Arnav eavesdropped into complete conversation. I guess Mr & Mrs Khurana will be shown doors at office next Thursday. Did Harshad and Avni realize goodness of Arnav after Khurana mess or before?

Really what a day and how the few lone moments with each other got messed up for them. I hope they will have good time following day.

Dad and daughter conversation is heartwarming and welcoming for strong future bond.

already in the dream landdd ji..

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Superb update dear :) In your previous update, you left us at the cliffhanger about khushi' best friend kabir entry, i was thinking if their story will take any wrong turn by this new entry but you are so kind jigs😆 loved this super cool jolly guy :) no wonder he loved khushi once, afterall hamari khushi hai hi itni pyari 😊 arnav's thought about that guy made me think once in starting whether he uttered those words but the way his thought turned to a confident n not jealous husband, i confirmed that this friendship is just as harmless as a squirrel :) n no way he can say something like this to khushi :) husshhh i was so relieved :) lol infact as an doctor,kabir's work towards needful gains respect :) the argument between kabir n ritvik told itself ritvik's ill behaviour :(

Khushi's hurt with the turn of event like she is not aware of things happening in her family, its very normal for a daughter to feel that way as if she is not the part of family :( but arnav know how to make things right by diverting her mood..!! Wah wah kya baat hai:) again payal say mean things to khushi, i dont know what is both that husband n wife made up of?? Why cant she just mind her own business?? As expected, its payal who said those words to khushi but i like that khushi takes stand for herself rather than taking this bullshit:) payal's is jealous of khushi from her birth, with her achievements from very start whether its her school, her college, her choice of partner, her career choice !! Oh my gosh.. :( she is so evil 😡 it was so right for arnav to get angry on payal's words but oh how i wish he was there to listen to khushi's back answer:) finally the lioness khushi comes in her full glory, n i so loved it:)

Arnav's anger made me feel good somewhere as in it reflects his immense love for khushi:) loved khushi n harshad convo!! It was good to see daughter n father sharing some moments!! :) finally payal n ritvik's deeds comes in front of khushi by her father!! God, they are untolerable.. They have created enough damage, still have no shame:( That sad flashback take me to the memories of her hurt n pain filled life which is still connected to her in form of not having her own baby but the difference is that time her arnav was not with her but now he is with her in every up n down!! It gives me sense of protection that arnav will not let any problem or harm come to her..!! :) if they are together, then everything's gonna be fine, infact super fine:) beautiful update jigs:)

Thanks for the pm:)