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Posted: 10 years ago

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Part 9
both jo and jalal were not able to sleep that night ,both unable to digest their past in present and jalal was eagerly waiting for next day.it was first day of shoot jo was first to arrive ,everyone were waiting for jalal ,then he came along with aaliya ,jo murmers"he will never change,always late be it a date or shoot.jalal directly comes towards her "good morning jo.jodha coldly replies good morning .the shoot starts ,karan explains the first scene "u both r divorced couple whose relation broke two yrs back and ur emotional breakdown when u meet and their names in the film r pari and rajat.the shoot starts,jo smiles at her fate thinking "now my real life is connected to my career.jo & jalal standing opposite to each other.jo"this is my mistake to love a person like u.jalal"i think we didnot understand eachother properly.and this goes into their real life.jo"understand my foot u left me after u felt bored of me.jalal holds her tight"u were the one who walked out of our relation.jo"let me remind u u were first to ask divorce.jalal"but i came to u the next day ,i pleaded u we will not separate but u just walked out of my life.karan thinks its going too far and shouts"cut.karan "guys its just superb for a moment i felt both r real couple.jo goes away from there .jalal searches for jo and finds her in the balcony,he pulls her towards him .jo gets shocked with the sudden pull and says "what the hell? but keeps quiet seeing jalal.jalal"darling u were saying something .jo"leave me jalal .jalal "i didnot catch u to leave.jo"jalal pls its paining.jalal tightens his grip more"what abt the pain u gave me and pushes her towards the wall
Part b will update

Edited by zuytre - 10 years ago

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Ananya

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Part b
jalal harshly grabs her waist and pushes her to wall.jo"jalal i said leave me.jalal comes very close to her leaving no distance between them and says"before u used to like my closeness now what happened baby.jo starts crying.jalal holds her more tightly and says"stop those bloody tears ,u know i hate them in ur eyes.jo looks at him .jalal leaves her and says"i wont leave u saying this he pecks her lips and goes away.jo sits there only and cries.jo informs she is unwell to karan and leaves.jalal smirks and thinks"from today u will never be well.jo goes home and cries bitterly and thinks how jalal listening to his badi ammi pushed her out of the house ,how she pleaded him but he left her outside the house throwing divorce papers on her face.she also remembers how he came to her after two days asking forgiveness but at that time she felt her self respect is more important than love and left him.she crues remembering every moment and drifts to sleep.next day she wakes up and looks into mirror and says"jo dont let him rule ur life this time,now u r independent so focus on ur goal,she boosts herself and goes to sets.
on sets she sees jalal and thinks "today what he is going to do.jalal"oh!jo come,i have a gift for u.everyone's attention is on jalal's gift .jalal"actually u r new to this movie world so i thought to give u as a welcome gift.jo takes it as everyone r there,she unwraps the gift and finds a blue shirt,everyone get curious while jo is shocked.karan"jalal its a boys shirt.jalal"karan now if i give routine gift how will jo remember me anyways she cant forget me ,i mean as we r close friends in college right jo.jo just smiles and goes to her green room .she sits on her chair and clutches the shirt .
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jalal gets ready for his office wearing his blue shirt.jo comes out from washroom and looks at him ,he looks very hot with water dripping from his hairs.she goes towards him and hugs him from back ,jalal turns towards her and says"my wifey is very romantic early morning.jo chuckles and says"u know jalal how i love this blue shirt on u i feel like stay in ur arms whole day and kisses his lips which turns passionate while she crushes his shirt unable to hold his passion,they separate after sometime.jalal smiles and says"now i understood how to turn my wife romantic ,i must wear blue shirt.jo just hugs him inhaling his scent.

Edited by zuytre - 10 years ago