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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: anu012

superb chaptr dear

update nxt chptr soon...

thnks for pm

Tha kyou dear...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Very nice chapter , very well written.
Update next chapter soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: GurKaur

Very nice chapter , very well written.
Update next chapter soon.

glad that you liked it... Thankyou
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wonderful chapters dear read in one go really this is lovely . Both have started feelings for each other . And jalal don't know that Jodha birthday is been celebrating.
hehehe
when he get to know then ... it will be awesome I think
please update soonish waiting for it
and ya my name is Deeksha ur ? I think so?
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Posted: 9 years ago
wonderful story I read it in one go. interesting jo is actress and ja her family friend . both are attracted to each , ja feel jealous. hamida's teasing and garden scan with puppy was so funny. jo's dancing , their Mumbai darsan etc. very nice. jo's surprise bd celebration and JA don't know about it. waiting for next to know what ja will do.you very well write their growing relation .
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: paridhiloveu

Wonderful chapters dear read in one go really this is lovely . Both have started feelings for each other . And jalal don't know that Jodha birthday is been celebrating.

hehehe
when he get to know then ... it will be awesome I think
please update soonish waiting for it
and ya my name is Deeksha ur ? I think so?

Thankyou...😊😊 My name is Namita..
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Posted: 9 years ago
Chapter 9
Everyone cheered her. Jalal was confused to whom was thins unknown lady referring to as 'Edy'. Jodha went on the stage . Now Jalal was hell confused to why Jodha was going towards the bed. She climbed up and said
"First off all I would like to introduce to my new friend JALAL( and pointed her hand towards him). And Jalal these are my cast members. She is Rukaiya, Aarav, Moti, Adi, Noor ( pointing towards the respective people) ...(and so on... She introduced all the people one by one). The faces turned towards Jalal. Some were astonished to see 'Jalaluddin Mohommad' here. Some were drooling over him. And some were mute spectators. As Jodha finished and was on her way down the stage Raj held her hand to stop her from going down. " O miss, Where are you heading to ha? you are supposed to give the speech." Jodha gave an embarrassing smile and said "N... No. Vo kya hai na i heard mom calling me so i was just going to check out."said jodha to hide her uneasiness. "Koi nahi bula raha tumhe. Do what you are told. Go up now."said her bhaiya. Now Jalal was somewhat able to comprehend about all this confusion. Jodha was Edy and she was the birthday girl and all of them had come here to celebrate 'her' birthday. They had given her a surprise a part of which he had missed and this was the part which he was attending. He felt like laughing out hard but suppressed his laugh by bitting his lower lip.Jodha again climbed up and without speaking anything she just stared at the faces of the audience. Though there was nothing funny but all of them broke out into a round of laughter. Jodha composed herself and started the speech.
Ok, ok,ok now. All I would like to say is THANK YOU. I am really overwhelmed by this great surprise and I must say this was my best birthday till date. I didn't expect this day to become so great! It was a huge surprise for me to see you all here. You've made my day. Thank You once again from the bottom of my heart for such a adorable surprise and love you all. Rukaiya climbed up and side hugged her and said " we too love you Edy. And we had to make this birthday a special for the most adored lady on the sets. Jalal, do you know she is the most beautiful, loved, caring and fun loving lady on the sets. She is an amazing actor, dancer, singer and a great painter!Ya ya i know I am praising her more than required but kya karu vo hai hi aisi.we missed her a lot... She is the Jaan of our sets... Ok so now let us carry the party ahead... Jo we've bought some very special things for you." Aarav climbed up correction jumped on the bed and continued further "and now we're wish to gift you all those special things." Jodha could do nothing but just smile at her friends' cute antics.
Jodha climbed down to give space to rukaiya. She stood beside Jalal though unknowingly. Jalal saw her and whispered in her ear.. "Happy birthday... Edy" and chuckled. Jodha was embarrassed but managed to utter a 'thankyou' with a smile. Jodha knew this would come and she was expecting even more. Jalal wanted to do something very special for his special friend. A Bright idea popped in his mind but he needed at least a day to execute his plan. He decided to talk to Jodha after everyone goes.
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Moti uncovered the place in which the gifts were nicely arranged and wrapped. was elated to see it. Aarav called mother and Hamida too. One by one all of them came and gave the gifts. First came her brother, he gifted her a beautiful dark purple dress which had embroidery with golden threads on one shoulder. And the chest portion was made out of velvet of the same colour. It had broad border of the same pattern. The sleeves were made out from chiffon. The colour complemented Jodha's milky arms very well. It looked really adorable. Jodha gave a huge smile to him and thanked him.

Then came her sweet friend moti. She gifted her delicate golden anklets as Jodha loved wearing anklets. She loved the chum-chum sound created by them.
All of them one by one came and gifted her almost all of her favourite articles. She was really amazed by their choice. It was not like she didn't have those things,but, the love which was behind those gifts which Jodha liked. But amongst all those gifts the two which jodha liked the most was 'Lord Krishna's idol' and 'mayur pankh'. Jalal was astonished that she liked the gifts which didnt hold any monetary value in all those expensive ones. He decided to ask this question later.She gave a big smile to all of them and thanked everyone again.
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All friends, except Rukaiya, Aarav and Moti and her bhaiya- bhabi, were departing back to Delhi. Though Jodha tried to persuade them to stay back with for atleast one day but they were adamant to their decision. The gifting session was over. Jodha was really happy with the unexpected surprise. They had a lot of fun the whole morning and half afternoon. They had a fun time together as usual. Even Jalal had become friendly with some of them. Moti handed over surya's gift to her. He had gifter her a photo frame which had a cute pic of her with surya when they were about 5 years or so standing with Jodha's father, both of them licking a candy... Jodha was on the verge of tears but controlled herself.
Raj placed himself beside Jodha. Now the position was like Jodha, Raj, aarav and moti on the carpet and Hamida, Jalal and Maina on the sofa. Jalal could see jodha's face clearly but Jodha wasnt able to do the same. Raj stood up took a pen-drive from Rukaiya. Maina asked him"beta ye kya hai"...
Precap: More fun... Jalal reveals his plan.
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First of all a very happy rakshabandhan in advance to all of you. I am posting this chapter a bit early as i am going to my brother's house tomorrow and wont get time to post it on Saturday. Now comming back to the chapter.Sorry for the mistakes... I know it was a bit boring chappy and is not going as you all expected. But i need to add some twists and turns for the further chapters to make it better. Please do like and comment...
Edited by 155pari - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Its not at all boring,superb update

Thanks for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: zuytre

Its not at all boring,superb update

Thanks for pm

Thankyou dear!...😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
Happy Rakshabandhan dear
Nice update.. lovely friends and their gifts
Waiting for Jalal's surprise gift
Thax for the pm and update ASAP.

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