pratap ke deewane...praja os (updated on pg 5)

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Sorry , guys but we have soo many deewanes I can't stop my head from thinking this shit !!!!
If u want u can throw tomato on me but no eggs I m vegetarian yr ...
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Kunwar pratap was always busy with his works so much that its impossible for him to spend quality time with his pretty wife . he was silently moving towards his room .

Ajabde was still on her afternoon nap sleeping like no one is watching her chunri was lying far away from her exposing her blouse when kp make his entry and was shocked to see her sleeping like this .
Slowly he moved towards her , trapped in her charm so much he didn't notice her chunri lying near the bed trip in it . and falled over her making her scream .
Kp : its me ajabde , don't get scared .
Aj : kunwar pratap ...get up from me . her words fall on deaf's ear , pratap has already found his way from lips to neck . its been a long when they had spend quality time with each other making her hands explore his back after removing his upper cloth.
They smiled at each other before she could realise they are already became one in the afternoon light .

Kp : I m free today .
Aj : I got an example , she cuddled to him , pressing her soft body towards his harsh one .
Kp : how about going on a date .
Aj : yes , yes, but we wouldn't take chetak , u always get busywith him .
Kp : iI wouldn't my love .

They have decided to go near the lake for a romantic date when .
Patta : kunwar pratap . patta came in front of pratap with something in his eyes scaring pratap and ajabde .
Kp : u want something patta .
Patta : do u love me ? Patta asked with lust in his eyes.
kp : I love u as my younger brother , patta .
Patta : u love me more then u do to jija , right kp .
Kp : I...I...kp was helpless looking at ajabde .
Ajabde : what are u asking ?
Patta : I know ...I know...u don't love me . one after another tears started flowing down his cheeks . as he looked at kp like he had broked his heart . making kp got guilty .

Kp : no...no patta don't cry , I love u , u see ...don't cry .
Kp held his shoulder to stop him from crying but in return patta hugged him , pratap looked at him then at ajabde wide-eyed .

But patta doesn't know that his hug will be answered by a fuming chetak who came and give patta a hard push towards the floor.
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This os has 2 parts , I will update the next part soon...
I known this part is short but the next one will be longer .
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Haila apni Jija ke saamne shuru ho gaya Patta
Padh gayi na Chetak se maar
Abhi baaki deewaano ko aane do
phir pata chalega kisko karte hain
KP sabse zyaada pyaar

Aditi gal you crack me up

Waiting for the next one
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Aditi!😲You are ok na?😛Ye kya tha re?🤣🤪
Matlab first part made me all.☺️☺️
Aur ye patta ko kya ho gaya hai?😆😆
I am laughing like mad now!🤣🤣
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: twilightlover29

Haila apni Jija ke saamne shuru ho gaya Patta
Padh gayi na Chetak se maar
Abhi baaki deewaano ko aane do
phir pata chalega kisko karte hain
KP sabse zyaada pyaar

Aditi gal you crack me up

Waiting for the next one

patta 😆😆😆
pratap is trapped between his deewane's and all ...😉
thnks garima dee...😳
i will post it soon...😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: crazy-for-praja

Aditi!😲You are ok na?😛Ye kya tha re?🤣🤪

Matlab first part made me all.☺️☺️
Aur ye patta ko kya ho gaya hai?😆😆
I am laughing like mad now!🤣🤣

really...aaawww😳 ramya
same pinch 😵
i was too all BlushingBlushing tomato while writing.
pratap ke deewane ka pyaar nikal ke aa rha hai ROFL
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Posted: 10 years ago
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lovely os 😉
do update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Very bad boy Patta!!!! I'm seriously dying laughing 🤣
I don't have words to describe what I feel!
*checks Aditi's forehead to see if she has fever*
It was good! And extra creative 🤪
Waiting for the next part Aditi!! Update when you're fever is better 😆 ❤️
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Annei123

lovely os 😉

do update soon

thnks shivangi
will do soon...😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Natasha_1234

Very bad boy Patta!!!! I'm seriously dying laughing 🤣
I don't have words to describe what I feel!
*checks Aditi's forehead to see if she has fever*
It was good! And extra creative 🤪
Waiting for the next part Aditi!! Update when you're fever is better 😆 ❤️

patta ROFL
ohh my ! is it that funny ,😆
then i m sure u would kill me when i will update the next part...Silly
no , no , no i don't have fever😕
plzz nutz tell me the reason of u thinking soo😲
is it a bad reason or a good one ?
thnks ROFL
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Aditi...😲...🤣🤣 Pratap is so caring ...apne saare deewano ko bade acche se handle karta he...😆
poor patta ...chetu punch him ...but I'm sure end me dhulayi Pratap ki hi hone wali he..😈
update soon...😉 and this time long update..plz..otherwise I hv so many tomatoes

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