MaNan FF 'THE GREEK GOD' by Alohomora Chap 62 Pg 144 - Page 18

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: lovemylyf

read all the chapters in one go...

i really lovd the story ...
i was laughing like a maniac ..😆😆😆
the convo wit navya..😉
lap danc..😉
escalator...😉
everything was jst hilarious ...🤣
but feeling bad for nandu...😕always bcoms laughing stk infrnt of all...😭
whose dat wit manik in the phone??babes n all?dnt tell me he hav gf..alya?😲
waiting for next part..😊
u r a blessd writr...👏👏👏osm work


Thank you so much sweetheart 😊 You really wouldn't want to know who his girlfriend is... it would make you feel all creepy crawly from head to toe. 😆 But she's going to pop up soon. So be ready.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: zooni.shah

Hey ...

Heartily apologies for not commenting on the last few chapters.. Sorry!!

Okay so here's my review OMG! She has to be so clumsy only around him... And yeah after that devil (Greek god) or what ever you like to call him, had given her the task of those 500 cheques I was like Oh shit!!
All the while what ever happened was so embarrassing, though she was feeling like to be in dreams or let herself hide somewhere she dint and she had to face all of it... Well I won't call her a poor girl cuz she is not... The story was going like oh amazing! But when that 360 degree turn of the escalator and the accidental peck or kiss ... Oh my goodness I would have been crying bitterly if it was me in her place...

You explained every single thing with all the perfection you can, you made the scenes look funny at the same time explained what nandu was going through and what kind of person Manik is, truly Iam falling for this story bit by bit...

I love you for writing such amazing mind blowing stuff... Your story is very real like seriously I can completely relate to it at some points I guess every one can... It has simplicity and all kind of mixtures require... And after reading all the chapters gal! I know this ride is going to be heck of an awesome one and am enjoying it already...

About her clumsiness god! My cheeks were reddened and I was embarrassed during that escalator stuff cuz I have a funny memory not exactly similar but kind relatable to the exact scene in fact nandini reminds me of my stupidness...

Okay I will share something with you, I don't know whether you will be interested or not but heheh couldn't stop from sharing this.

Just two days ago I stepped out of college and was so busy in counting the number of books and coughing that I completely ignored my surroundings which were occupied with bunch of people in every corner and heavy traffic on the road I was too much engrossed in checking out my stuff that I dint noticed where I was walking and THUD! I collided with a tall figure guy more like a bamboo in shape and my entire being touched to the rocky ground as I fell and after cursing with all the slangs I knew with out looking at the person and grabbing my stuff from the ground straightening my self I stood up only to be left starlted... What I noticed was, the person with whom I collided was my first long lasting crush( besides I hate him now) I was like oh shit!!! I blabbered too much like hell of slangs with out even looking at him... Not that I regret it but he was standing with all his glory with a stupid grin on his face... After like gathering my senses back I noticed that the entire collegy girls were laughing like they saw something amazing and the people in the traffic looking at me with pity...

I was so embarrassed and then my nanu immediately came like from nowhere and took me home(he dint witnessed the scene) the entire journey till I reached my place, half of the way I was being followed by him, yeah he like dint completely followed me cuz he and I share the same route to home, so it was like obvious for him to be at my back and giggle... The nex t day when I reached college definitely I was talk of the town but the thing i got to know which shocked me to hell was he was my classmates brother... And I was like fu*k I mean the guy I had crush on 5 years ago has to be the brother of my class mate so that he will come to college daily and I would again be embarrassed...

Sorry for taking too much of your time but like I said am clumsy too... But nandu won the competition...

Continue soonish am waiting to read ur story... And obviously wanna know that what will happen next and ya a point, wasn't she suppose to wrap her work in 15 mins? As the time of one hour was coming to an end


And yeah please pm me for every update cuz I may read it late but u know right I will definitely comment
Well clear my confusion if u can...

TAKE care
Love
Aqsa

PS: sorry for the longest comment


Hey, in love with your reviews and comments. Feels like a huge surge of energy drink pulsing through my veins. 😆In fact, I love the feedback from everyone that I'm literally speechless and have no clue what to say. But all your comments, it inspires me to continue headstrong. 😉

Loved the embarrassing confrontation with your crush. LOL. I was grinning like an idiot throughout. Hehehe. Well, as far as Nandu's concerned, chances are that she's going to get worse. 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Alohomora


Thank you so much sweetheart 😊 You really wouldn't want to know who his girlfriend is... it would make you feel all creepy crawly from head to toe. 😆 But she's going to pop up soon. So be ready.



nooo...nandu ka kya hoga?ven maniks gf get to knw about the escaltr sequence ...😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
there u go again leavn us rofln😆
u r awesum..🤗

if at all there r any chances of s2 i wish u b the writer...😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
hi dear

just saw your ff and read in 1 go




i love it and plz add me in pm list

continue soon

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really happy

great idea

waiting for next
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Posted: 10 years ago
Ohhh Myyy Gawwdd !! Lyk really.. Kaise,, matlab kaise karlethe ho tum.. I mean u r awsm maahnn,, ds z hillariouss.. I read all d chapters in one go.. All d while i ws lyk ohhh nooo nooo freakkk.. I dont knw y,, i ws feeling sooo embarrassed !! I cant evn thnk myself in place f nandini.. Poor nandu.. I feel so pity..
Am feeling so happy so peace after reading ds ff.. Really.. Thanku so mch fr wrtng ds ff.. Am so xctd abt d cuming updates.. Pls do pm me.. Pls

I LOVE YOU
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Posted: 10 years ago
first cum first thanks for PMing me

secondly both be such sad cases...lol...I feel bad for her specifically

lastly update soon dear!
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Posted: 10 years ago
LOL this is going great !!!
Update soon ...
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~ CHAPTER SIXTEEN ~

Nandini felt the wind knock out of her guts as her waist slammed hard against a warm, rocky, rugged surface. A strong arm had bound around her midsection and locked her securely in place. The first thing she knew was that she was gawking into his chest, of course, covered up with a dark shirt and yellow blazer. And that very minute she felt like she could run down the escalator and out of the mall!

With immense effort, she tipped her head up... Up... up... and up... Till she finally reached the beginning of this towering figure's face. Manik Malhotra. She felt like a midget in front of him. This guy was as tall as a skyscraper! There seemed to be no limit to his sky!

Manik looked very grim and uncomfortable as he held onto her. Their eyes met for a moment but didn't take long to dart away in other directions. From the corner of her eyes, she could see that his ears were red hot.

Nandini felt very awkward and blushed a deep shade of scarlet. She started to become increasingly aware of the heat radiating from his ripped body into hers. This would have been a weird fantasy come true. But thanks to that silly phone call and a lot of other incidents, this peculiar feeling had long gone extinct. Right now, the need of her hour was to evaporate into thin air! She could say that Manik too probably felt the same. Because, he let go that very instant. Now all what was in contact was his hand wrapped gently around her wrist.

"From the looks of it, you don't seem to be a fan of escalators," he said in a low sarcastic voice and cleared his throat.

The contended smirk on his face made her feel even more miserable. "I do get a bit nervous," she replied in an equally low and defensive tone.

"A bit?!!?" Manik had his eyebrows raised and face contorted in utter amusement. He let out a low chuckle and looked away as they continued to descend.

Nandini squinted at him for a moment and looked away with a pout. This idiot! What the hell does he think of himself? Who does he think he is? Prince of Persia? I hate the way he makes those faces at me! As if the rest of us are all fools!

"We're there - there - there!" Manik rang out in alarm.

Like bullets, Nandini's arms shot out and clutched onto the railings with her dear life. "Shit!" she shrieked through clenched teeth and noticed that they still had a bit more to go. They weren't at the foot yet. She had just been had!

Manik bursted out laughing.

"That wasn't funny!" she snapped angrily.

"Gawwwd," he breathed, "sooo scared! Of an escalator? Un-buh-lievable!"

Nandini struggled to keep her cool as she looked away and gnashed her teeth furiously.

"Alright see, now we're really there," he snorted and pointed out.

Well, this time, he was serious. Sure enough, they were drawing close to the landing platform. Nandini began to tense up. Her muscles went rigid as she readied herself to make a touchdown. You can do this Nandini, she assured herself, you can do this. You don't need anyone's help. You don't! You especially don't need the help of someone who ridicules you.

"Whooop!" Nandini spun her arms madly and threatened to skid off the runway as she made a landing. But one sharp tug from behind and she was slammed against Manik's rugged frame once again.

He nodded his head whilst displaying a wide, sarcastic grin. "Wow, where do you people come from," he muttered under his breath and made his way out of the mall whilst Nandini tried to recuperate from the shock she just received after her escalator descent.

Without wasting anymore time, she rushed out of the mall and hurried back to her office. She swiped her keycard against the electronic and tried to push the door open, but ended up getting smacked against it instead. "Awoow God! Now what?!!?" she growled angrily, "what's wrong with this stupid card now? Why isn't the machine reading it?"

She swept her access card through the reader relentlessly but the damn thing just didn't respond!

"Because..." said a voice from behind her, swiped a card and unlocked the door, "you're using your debit card."

Nandini whirled around. It was Manik with his own electronic access card.

"Seriously girl," he smirked, "wake up and smell the coffee." Saying this, he carried himself into the department in his usual delicious stance. It gave Nandini the impression that he was always perfect and she was a dim-witted dumbass.

"And by the way," he paused for a moment, "when are you going to turn in the cheques?"

"In a while," she said quietly.

Manik raised an eyebrow and glanced at his watch not to know the time but to give her an indication that she had long crossed her deadline. "You're late," he reminded.

"I-I know, but I need more time," she said in a distressed tone.

"You were supposed to turn it in a very long time ago," he snapped, "and I'm warning you. If I don't see those cheques on my table in the next thirty minutes, you're so screwed. Get it?"

Nandini just sighed. "Yes."

Without another word, Manik strode off to his cabin confidently.

Nandini just stood there and took a long weary look at her card... debit card... with which she had been foolishly trying to access the office. She couldn't help but notice this growing urge to smack herself senseless. Really, what's wrong with me? Have I lost it? Maybe I need to see a psychologist. I must be losing my marbles. Oh God, just kill me.

But there wasn't any time left in her deposit to stand around and brood. She had to get this job done by hook or crook in the shortest stipulated time! And the more she thought about the time she had in hand, the more her muscles seemed to go haywire.

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