#3:ArshiSS/Inciting Desires2~llCOMPLETED/ CH 8-10 - Page 34

Hi dear ... first of all sorry...with holding my ear... m so late for comment...

Sorry...m more than busy in my new country...study n job hectic...

and you know i don't read your updates in rush...as i want to enjoy the update of every part...

now no more bore you with my blabber...

Come to the story...

wow! what a beautiful story u started...

every character here justified...

very nice concept...

I read all part from 1-8...

Character analysis...

1. Khushi- lead role our heroine...very similar of our IPK...soft, caring, crazy with looped past.

2. Arnav- reminds me IPK initial episodes...very reserved yet caring with compacted past.

• Adi - I like his character a lot...so loving and great friend.
• Payal- Cute, shy and caring sister.

Shashi - very creatively portrayed...like his kind and loving nature towards khushi.

Garima- another good depicted...so warm and caring mother of two daughter.

• Anjali - as always loving sister ...can't imagine her stone heart...she is lovely.
• Arun - very interesting character caring hubby. [he is not hubby yet, he is just a childhood friend of Anjali and Arnav,but loves Anjali since childhood yet never forced on her .Anjali never loved him before,but after divorce Arun had helped her in many ways and now she is developing her love for him]
• Shyam - as always hypocrite...but yet to reveal his more dark sides.

Nani - nice and good lady like IPK.

Akash - active but in deactivate mode

Dr vikram- more to reveal...

Other Villains needs to reveal more detail can't comment right now.

Chapter 7 is more than enough ,as I am not going to dig deeper grave for past .keeping it simple...Arnavs father always was in doubts for his wife[Arnav's mother] because of Dr.Vikrant who was just a friend of her.Arnav's chacha and Thakur Vikram played this card to create hate in between them and finally made Arnav's father fall for wrong women and gambling which made him lose money and Shesh Mahal became a pawn in this process.Thakur wanted Sheesh Mahal and Chacha wanted money so they both played a game and killed Arnavs parents ,threw them out of Sheesh Mahal.Thakur even killed Chacaha too.Nani took Arnav and Anjali to London to raise them and there , Shyam who is Thakurs nephew ..met with Anjali and trapped her in his love,He married her just for money of Arnav who created this empire at very early age.He got exposed while attempting to kill Arnav and went to Jail for his life.Arnav and Akash are playing a safe act to get back Sheesh Mahal .Akash bought it .Meanwhile Arnav found Dr.Vikrant ,but again Akash took him to London and now after proper treatment he told this whole truth to Arnav that actually Thakur is behind all of this.He has nothing to do anything with that night and whatever happened, as Arnav heard that night Dr.Vikrant's name but he was a child and didn't know the real truth of him so misunderstood him too.Dr.Vikrant also mentioned that Thakur kept him in his captivity and then left him after many years in an asylum .

Sheehs Mahal again was for sale and this time Aaksh bought it And Arnav started renovation of Sheesh mahal by hiring best architects so he can instigate Thakur.Now they made up a news that Shyam is out of Jail,but he has been sentenced for the life.He can't come out of jail ,but this news had made Thakur restless and he wants him and his Sheesh Mahal back at any cost.

Comment on parts 1-8 :

outstanding updates ...one after one...

wow! mojo...i just love this creature...

khushi and adi's character is well explained...

but on first part i thought he loves khushi...

on next it was cleared...

Arshi meet was very in fight mode...

crazy khushi gave ASR in a weird name...

shashi's assurance on khushi's safety always made me admire him...

garima and payal went well as story goes further...

anjali and nani was hell worried for arnav's future...

aman and mr o very interesting character...

anjali's worries always healed by arun...

a girl's biggest support her husband this portrays...

arshi fight always leave a caring side of each other...

khushi's working with arnav was really funny...

their cute nok jhok lovely...

their hurting each other made them more close...

finally ice break they are together...

their togetherness needs no words...

mutual feelings bind them...

but still fair love confession much needed...

I know you will give...

they realized their love ...

now confession coming...

arnav's family get together made their intention more clear...

I hope my long analysis compensate my absence...

waiting for next part dear...

Akorshi,🤗

Lovely character analysis👏

You are so so sweet.Really.Always there 4 me to cheer me up even in your tightest schedule ,

Thnx for liking the Mojo , Mr O and Aman, a slight different people from the original story.Ye sI kept their nok jhnok motto intact as that is what make IPK unique and different for us to love ot.Thank you dear always

my comments are in blue

Superb,mind blowing,exquisite,and enriched with detail 👏Fabulous Update.

I think the best update of all👏 I know I said it last time too.

from the temple ,from his hold on her and her holding his hand as a promise of both to be there for each other ,that blew me off ,A promise of hearts which they didn't confess yet ,but it has woven so beautifully and i think that is going to keep them on their faith during this storm which is knocking their door.I am so waiting to know what would be separating them, can't wait.

Their first kiss was for seeking solace near the ocean, second was for feeling each other in the Sheesh Mahal and Third one was comforting each other in his room and This was totally Passion and desire 😳Red nose, bangles, dress all showering passion here.

Absolutely brilliant ambiance of the engagement ,with Uncle Sukhi, a fun ,loving father. Aadi's holding Payal's hand as his promise to be with her for eternity during dinner.Anjali and Nani seeing the love in Chote's eyes sfor Khushi.

and then their hearts again don't want to leave each other.He found the meaning of love in his mother's words.

You have penned down so many small detail and small things which is making this chapter so intriguing and interesting.What a delight👏

Someone has beaten me to this spot





So this is how he realized his love...When he so wanted her to have those red bangles, and wished so see her in red avatar, like a bride,but still did not have guts to convince his brain to accept that fact that he is in love till the engagement seeing her in red, with his bangles which he adored and the kiss.It was more like he was showering his love and she felt that to her core.Before they shared kisses,but not passionate like this.He was showing her his clear intentions and he confessed, "I love you in this color" this is his way of saying I love you😉complicated guy.BUT she got it .
Love her in her room touching herself and saying that I love you too admirer.😳I really love that part.
A Desire, A Longing, A Need, is written all over when he said I love this on you...and during Kiss.👏Brilliantly written.

and Mojo , his song is so sensuous, is he missing his partner?😆😉

She was pretty much in red like maroon color.Aadi placed ring in Payal's finger and that stirred in him to have her with him, have his right on her, he didn't want to leave her and turned around one more time before leaving in his vulnerability.He so wanted to see her as his, with him just like he wanted her in his room with her.Yes Love found its way to his heart finally .I must say his mother's words are strong.

Must say, the description of engagement , decorations, dresses and all is beautiful written.So Mr. Shashi invited all the people from children to adults who are leading their lives because of this guy.Mr.Balraj Gupta , his father must be very proud of him today.👏


Six months are about to be finished, and Sheesh Mahal is again going back to darkness,not because he is missing it👍🏼 very plus point,but the reason is Thakur who he couldn't catch.

Is she going to convince her love and he will resist?

Now the part which is building up the storm ,is coming up next chapter, this suspense is killing one dear and lots of dhak dhak,

UnRes :-)

Faiqa my heart can't stop pounding. This chapter was so full of WANT and DESIRE...attraction!!!! and the kiss OMG ...kids just got home will have to feed them and then come back. Bravo my friend.

Sorry Faiqa, took me this long to finally read chapter8 and comment.

And what beautifully you wrote Arnav's care, concern and protectiveness of khushi. To top it all I feel that Arnav deep down in his heart knows that he is falling for her and that the words like love and trust which he wary off is no longer facing that 'no entry' sign from him. Coz he is just so lost in Khushi. Her pain, her fears, and her smile.

As for khushi, she has already acknowledged to herself that she is in love with Arnav. And the way she witnessed his care, concern and protectiveness for herself, in her heart she knows he feels the same.

What more you gave such beautiful scene among all three couple. All at different stages of there relation.

Now I'm off to reading chapter9.

Its a very beautiful update as usual. So, Payal- Adi engagement over. When is the marriage due by the way ????