Manan-Pyaar Tune Kya Kiya - Page 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice yaar
I just love It
Wedding hmm
Ab aayege mazaa
Continue soon
Eagerly waiting for next part
Love
Diya😛😛😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
#12
Awesome dear ... Continue soon 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
#13
Interesting.. Tha ks for the pm...
Do i t again next time
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Posted: 10 years ago
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PART3
In few hours dey reached der destinatiom the udaipur palace(yjhd types palace)
Nandini:guyz m tired main sone jari hoon
Cabir:kitna soegi pure raste sote hue hi aai h...vo bhi manik ke khandhe pe
nandini:shut up cabirr
Manan were blushing
manik:ya...ya guyzz lts go
mukti:hn chalo pir kal shopping b jana h
ol boys ol tgether shopping...noo
grls...yess
nxt day dy ol got up n were on d way to mall manik was driving nandu was sitting beside him
piche cavya n mukhbhi were romancing
finally dy reached where dy had to
Mukti main abhi ko leke jari hun i need to gt him look the best in dis wedding...bye guyzz
Cabir:ohkk main n navya b jare h ve need to match our clothes
N our manik n nandini had no other opt than to go together
Dy went into a store nandini was trying same sarees n lengahs in d mirror
n d moment she tried the dreses she she looked at maniks face through d mirror to see his reactions n n whatever he rejectrd she too rejected n on which he smiled she took it
dis way nandus clothers were chosen nw it was maniks turn
Manik:nandinii ur choice is quite good bring some changes for me too na
nandini get some amazing kurtas n jackets(coats)for him
whike nandini was giving him his nxt change he pulled her inside thr trial room
Nandini:manikkk
manik:shhh dont spoil it
n maniks phon rang it was mukti
Manik was so irritated n meanwhile nandini ran ousode d trial room
Nandins pov:whatbwas tha kya hora h mujhe dis feeling dat i get near him...gosh whats happening
mukti:kahan ho tum log we r done
manik:ya we r cuming
Maniks pov:y did i pull her in what was i upto...ehh dis feeling i get around her its different n gud...
Manik cums out n says to nandu chalo
nandini was still blushing as to der nearness in d trial room
N manik was just luking at him n smiling
N ol 6 left d mall
Same day 10pm
Manik was not sleepy he ws confused abt his feeling abt nandini she was driving her insane
so he went to d terace coz stars game him peace
the moment he reached the terace he saw nandini standing der n he could not stop himself n he went towards her n huged her from the back
His hands were on d waist n nandis nand were on his hands
Nandini:manikk
(naye naye haron main tera sara main
metha metha tu khara khra main
tera sara main)
n nandini without loking back closed her eyes n said manikk (the peace in her voice was visible)
(sindori rang suhagan sacha
sacha h sarmaya jo paya h tu dil main mahi aya h maine mahi paya h)
[Do imagine dis song n scene ull definate gt a pure bliss]
nazar laye jo tmko chak jae vo...
nazar laye na...
ol dis conversation is in d same pose(back hug)
Nandini:Manik vo star dekh rahe ho vo meri mumma h jabhi im confuse i come to her n she solves my problem
Manik:to ajj kya puchne aai thi(he knew even she was hving that unknwn fellings...so he asked naughtily)
Nandini:my feelings...for u
dis brought up a big smile on his face
Manik:to kya answer mila
Nandini:tym ane pe batungi
(n suddelny fireflies were hlowing evrywhere...celeberating der luv)
Manik knw what d answer was
then dy both sat down hand in hand nandinis head was on maniks shoulder n it was a hevenly feeling

Nandini:ek baat puchun
Manik:pucho baby
Nandini dint knw hw to react whn he said her baby
Nandini:hum aise hi hamesha milte rahenge
Manik:agar tum chaho to i to enjoy it a lot
Nandini was silent
n just lyk dis talking to each other dey were asleep unknwowingly cuddling each other
at 4 nandu alarm rang woke up she realise she ws in maniks arms
she snaggled herself more into him n she suddnly realized what se was doing she blushed n was abt to get up n go but manik held her hand n brought her close to her
Manik:dont go
Nandini:bt i hv to go manik sab uth jaenge thodi der main
Manik immediately left her hand
She was abt to leave bt she came back running je huggeg him from behing n kissed his cheeks both were blushing
n she ran away
7am
evry1 was getting ready as it was d 1st function of wedding
Haldi
so lts se what dis brings in manans lyf
dekhte ki nadu pe manik ka rang kaise chaega
...to be continued
Guyzzz plzzz do leave ur commments...i bably need thm
N plzzz promote my story ask ur frndz to read it too
Plzzz



Edited by neeharika__ - 10 years ago
Roshni8 thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
#15
Hi Neeharika
Sorry for being late
Both the updates are awesome
Cont soon dear
priyasmiley thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
#16
awesome updte
loved it
continue soon
thnks forpm
diyaNarwal thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
#17
Hey niharika
I want to say
I like ur story
But I
Guess u need
Some changes
Like there conversation
And other things too
Its just a
Suggestion dear
If you want to take
U can take am
Just telling you
My view
Continue soon😛😛😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
#18
Both the updates were amazing dear...
nice work..👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
#19
I love ur story so much
Well done u r an amazing writer
Please update soon
Eagerly waiting

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