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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: plily

Thank you for the update sweety πŸ˜ƒ

Felt so emotional on Raji's part . What torture she has to face just to live her life. The slap even make me to kill that Manoj , gald Karthik did somenting πŸ‘πŸΌ.

Raji feel safe and sound in Karthik hold , make her open up about her life .Her painful , sorrow life make Karthik take an importanta decision in his life .

Taking Raji to temple and get blessing to start a new life with Raji .

But will Raji agree πŸ˜• ...

Sushma enjoy your vacation ... you need it dear ...πŸ˜‰



Thank You SO SO much Lily!!! πŸ˜ƒ

Eppa ungalukku evalo kovam varudhu Manoj mela... πŸ˜†

Adhu revealed in the next part... πŸ˜‰
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: prema27

wow... enna oru feelings... she feels safe in his hold .. wowww. kalayanam ma !!!!😲 Aik Aik!! super... kalayanam super... i hope Raji will agree... i think she will agree πŸ‘πŸ‘ ... pavam raji... santhosama irukunom ava karthik udanπŸ‘...


Thank Youuu Sis!!! πŸ˜ƒ

Hahahaha, next part la theriyum... πŸ˜›
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Ramya05

waiting for the next...

Amazing update :)


How can Raji refuse such a cute proposal?


Thanks a lot Ramya!! πŸ˜ƒ

Exactly, how would she be able to refuse? Or Maybe? πŸ˜‰
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Rajee71

Wow, fantastic update , Dear

Last dialogue of Karthik in temple was awesome... Right now, Right here... πŸ‘

Waiting for the next update


Thank You Sooo Much Rajee!! πŸ˜ƒ

Updating a few minutes... πŸ˜›
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: srithu

wowπŸ‘.. superb update.. karthik genuinely listening to her horrible past and took a fabulous decision to make her future beautiful.. ippdi oru cute proposala epdi avanaala refuse panna mudiyum😳😳



Thank Youuu Srithu!! πŸ˜ƒ

Adhu next part la theriyum... πŸ˜›
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Abinaabi

Sorry for the comment machi...

Wow... Fantabulous... πŸ‘πŸ‘

Again this manoj 😑 Enna dhairiyam ivanuku? Ennmo raji avan admai mathiri poyi bottle eduthuttu vara solluran... 😑 Adhuvum raji adichuttan,.. 😑😑

Correct anga karthik vandhuttan... superr... Semma adi... Nalla vennum avanuku...

Karthik vida yaraliyum ivlo anba rajiya parthuka mudiyadhu... He's such a gem...

Wow... Ivlo speed story move agudhu... nice.. Karthik ku ippa ellame therinjiduchu... Good... Inime karthik parthuppan...πŸ˜‰

K's mom also nice... Ivangala edhuvum pretchanai varadhu nu neniakkuren...

"Raji... Will you marry me? Right here.. Right now??" πŸ‘πŸ‘ superrr... Takku nu kettutan... Adhuvum Right here.. Right now... paramadham...

Ippa raji enna solla pora?πŸ˜• Indha mathir oru update kudthu engala tension padithittu ne nalla jolly vacation ku poyittye di...

Seekirama vandhu update pannu... Waiting


Thank You SOOO Much Machi!!!! πŸ˜ƒ

Eppa neeyum Lily maadhiri Manoj mela semma veri la irukka pola... πŸ˜†

Nandri Nandri Machi... πŸ˜†

Update idho seekiram varudhu... πŸ˜›
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Smiles-20

Oh wow things are moving fast! Good update, really liked that slap Karthik gave to Manoj! Hope he gets more though for everything he did to Raji all these years and his mother needs to pay for her mistakes also. The part where Raji tells Karthik everything and breaks down in his arms was done well. Next part is the marriage?? Can't wait! Thanks Sushk.


Thanks a lot Smiles!! πŸ˜ƒ Ha ha, he will eventually... πŸ˜›

The update is on the way! :)
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: shiningstar77

Hello Sush Madam..

What a Story!

What a Start!!πŸ˜›

OCD format...Ada poma...summa kili kilinu kilichuta...Fantastic use of words...Loved it..

Intha maathiri story nammaku lesa therinchurunthalum,Un writingla summa minnuthu..⭐️⭐️

Coming to the story..

Raji...Pity her.😭..ivalavu kodumai padutharangele avala..Idiots..

Manoj..ivana...grr...manushana ivan??..cruel man🀬.oru ponna ippadiya pottu kastapadutharathu..ivanuku raji venumama??...comedy than..grrr...

Manoj mom...ada enna oru nalla ennam..guesta varathunala,rajiya konchama adi nu solra manoj kitta..super..😑

Karthik..vanthutaya??...Greek God nee ??...Sushhh...hehe..correctthan..πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

Rendu perukum etho thonuthu...handshakela oru minsaram varuthama...super..πŸ˜‰

Cha..karthik manoj rajiya kodumai padutharatha paarthurukanum..oru kuthu vitta pothum..hehe

Once again,Intha format enaku romba pidichuruku...kalaku thangachi kalaku.πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘



Hello Bro πŸ˜ƒ

Thank You Thank You πŸ˜›

Hahahaha, ungaluku theriyaadhadhu edhaavadhu irukka mudiyumaa? πŸ˜†

Neengalum Lily and Abi maadhiri Manoj mela semma veri la irukeenga pola? πŸ˜†

Correct dhaana? πŸ˜‰

He he he... πŸ˜†

Nandri Paasamalar πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: shiningstar77

Part 2

Adada ithauvallavo update...story jet speedla poguthu..πŸ‘

Manoj...ivana..oru bottlekaga rajiya adipanama??..appada karthik naan ninachatha pannitanπŸ˜†πŸ‘..but ithalam pothathu...KR ivana maathi mathi adikanum..especially Raji..hehe..

Karthikoda raji romba casual a pesarala..Good..

Karthik..paaruda..ivan etho plan panran..K's parentskum romba nallavangala theriyaranga...

Ivan conferenceku kottitu povanu paartha,templeku kottitu poirukan..πŸ˜†

Ketan paaru oru kelvi kadaiseela...aiyoo sema...sema..πŸ‘

Raji kandipa o solliruva...I know..I know...yei...adutha part seekarama update pannu..waiting eagerly..

Oruvazhiya comment panniten ma..enna aala vidu..heheπŸ˜†πŸ˜†


Thank You Bro!! πŸ˜ƒ

Jet speed la poganum nnu dhaan plan... Adhaan... πŸ˜ƒ

Karthik adichadhu la sandhosham ah ungalukku? Hehehe... πŸ˜†

Thank You Thank You... πŸ˜ƒ

Okay solraala nnu adutha part la paarunga... πŸ˜›

He he he... Nandri Paasamalar... πŸ˜‰
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hey Guys πŸ˜ƒ


Here is the third part of the SS... I know, I know I am late... πŸ˜† But as I said earlier, it is a double update... πŸ˜‰ It is to you all for being such amazing readers and encouraging me πŸ˜ƒ and also because I took forever... πŸ˜† So I hope it makes up for it... πŸ˜‰

You Guys take a shot at it and I will tell the rest at the end... πŸ˜ƒ


Part Three A -


"Wh- What??" she looked at him incredulously. He took a deep breath in an attempt to explain his thoughts. "Inga paaru Raji... I really don't- well actually it is that- I mean..." *Ugh* He mentally cursed his bad luck for the words were failing him at the wrong time. He really did not know how to give a sensible explanation to her without making himself look like an idiot. He closed his eyes to calm down and took another try, but this time he took another route as well.

"Raji... Do you trust me?" He stared right into her eyes, looking for the cue that he needed to continue. She slightly nodded a 'yes' and that was more than enough for Karthik. "If you do, then you will accept this marriage without questions..." She stared at him in disbelief, as if he had just lost his mind, and started to walk away. "Raji... Oru nimisham... Please listen to me..."

She turned around and looked at him, her eyes pooled with tears. "Raji... Indha Kovil kku saatchi ah solren, whatever I am saying is true and from my heart... I know what I am doing Raji... Ennala oruthar en kann munnadi kashta paduradha paarka mudiyaadhu... And what I heard from you yesterday is nothing but a description of hell... Edhukku Raji nee seiyyaadha thappu kku kashta padanum? And if you accept right now, you will see the light of your life..." She tried to speak, but he continued without giving her a chance, "Unna kalyanam pannikitta unna indha life la irundhu kaapatha mudiyum naa I am more than ready... It will just be a marriage of convenience... You can live your life as you wish to Raji... I don't expect anything from you except but for a pure friendship... Nalla yosichu dhaan pesuren, and I promise every word I am telling you right now is from my heart and not from haste..." He took another deep breath, "Ippo sollu... Raji will you marry me?"

He looked straight into her eyes, hoping with all his heart that she would accept it. Raji tried with all her strength to not cry, but the tears streamed down her cheeks. She really couldn't think clearly, she was feeling dizzy. "Marriage... Convenience... Heart... Haste... I- I don't understand... I really don't understand Karthik... Neenga yosichu dhaan pesureengala nnu ennaku sathiyama theriyala... Kaalam full ah ennala neenga en kashta padanum? Adhu evalo periyaa thappu... I should not be selfish... Unga parents oda nambikai ah odaichadha aaiyuraadha? You must have lots of dreams about your life, I will never be the reason to shatter it... I am feeling guilty..." "No- no... I can't do this... Please Karthik, it is not at all right..." She started shaking her head frantically.

But Karthik was in no way to back up now. He was determined that if he stepped foot outside the temple, then it will be with Raji as his wife. He spoke in a more firm tone, "Raji... Nee solradhu ellam 100 percent true, anaa if I cared for any of that, ippo inga un munnadi kalyanam panniko nnu ketka maaten... This marriage will work the way you want it to, and I promise to respect your decisions and be a true friend... Please accept it Raji..."

Raji stared at him, right into his eyes, for a long time. She saw nothing but pure sincerity and respect. She did not know if it was right, she did not know what the future will hold, but if this is what God had decided for them in heaven, then she was ready to do it. She took a long deep breath, "I will marry you Karthik..."

It took him a moment to realize what she had just said. "Ra- Raji? Are you serious?" he looked quite shocked not believing that she had just accepted his proposal. She smiled at his reaction, "Yes, I am 100 percent sure... Idhu sariyaa illa thappa nnu laam theriyaadhu... But idhu dhaan fate naa adha accept pannuradhu dhaan sari..."

He never expected her to say yes' this fast, but he felt more than relieved. He did not know how to react or what to say. "Raji... Ennaku enna solradhu nne theriyala... Thank You for this... Also, um mamba conference pola nnu inneram therinchu irukkum... They might start looking for us... So... Uh..." He couldn't figure out why he hesitated to call her inside. But she understood him, "Come let's go..." She held out her hand for him to hold. Karthik looked at her with respect that increased double fold every time she said or did something.

They walked inside the temple where Karthik had arranged the priest for their wedding. The priest had already started the rituals as Karthik and Raji came and sat down. By each passing moment, both felt their hearts thudding. Deep down, Karthik felt more nervous than he had ever in his entire life. But he knew, right now he was the confidence of Raji and he couldn't break it.

After reciting the marriage verses, the priest instructed the couple through the rituals. "Karthik, aathula irukka periyaavaa yaarum varalai nnu sollitel, friends yaaravadhu vaarala illa thaali ah kattidurel ah?" For the first time in life, Karthik felt lonely, his parents or the people he was close to, weren't there in such a huge point of his life, "Illa yaarum varala... Thaali ah kattidalaam..." he had nothing else to say. Raji noticed the evident sadness in his eyes, it pricked her heart to see him like that, but she determined right then, that she would give him the happiness he longed for, even if not now, very soon.

Her heart was pounding as she saw his hands coming towards her to tie the knot. She closed her eyes and thought of her parents, she asked for their blessings. All along, Karthik felt nervous, but when it came to the moment where he was about to tie the knot, his nervousness was washed away with excitement. He couldn't believe he was getting married, everything felt like a dream.

Karthik tied the last knot, with every god from heaven showering the new couple with blessings, Karthik and Raji entered a new phase of their lives as one and together.
Edited by SushK16 - 9 years ago

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