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Posted: 9 years ago
OMGGG Gravityyy!! Woahoo! What an updatee!! Awesomeee! This is sooo inspired after the C saga on TV! Hahahaha!! Bold Biwi, I must say..I felt myself going red hot while reading her actions and Puttar getting all surrendered to her happily. Beautifully written... U just made our hearts race with this reeling update!
Loved itt!! Greatt Jobb!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
That was excellent - made me blush all the way😳 I loved the way you portrayed Ishita by making her take the lead and I wish she would be more even romantic on the show as well!!!!❤️
I love the way you write - very insightful and of course romantic!!!!!!!!!🤗 Please continue with more OSs
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Rivka

Last part after a long time bold hot n beautiful


Thanks dear!😊😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: avni_19

OMGGG Gravityyy!! Woahoo! What an updatee!! Awesomeee! This is sooo inspired after the C saga on TV! Hahahaha!! Bold Biwi, I must say..I felt myself going red hot while reading her actions and Puttar getting all surrendered to her happily. Beautifully written... U just made our hearts race with this reeling update!

Loved itt!! Greatt Jobb!!



Haha...yes...it was partly inspired by the great C saga on TV..which is why I could get the gumption to take the romance level a notch higher...😆 but Biwi as the bold and sensuous babe here was entirely my wish fulfilled on IF after a long, long time😛 I wanted Raman to pamper her like a princess morning after C...like, right after she woke up...Bas sahi mauka nai mil raha tha...and am glad I fulfilled that wish of mine thru this Mini Shot :)

There's nothing better than knowing I made your heart race...sacchi😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: nafnaf

That was excellent - made me blush all the way😳 I loved the way you portrayed Ishita by making her take the lead and I wish she would be more even romantic on the show as well!!!!❤️

I love the way you write - very insightful and of course romantic!!!!!!!!!🤗 Please continue with more OSs



Awww...am very very happy you guys liked it!!

I have always wanted to make Ishu the lead..be bold and demanding...personally, I ROOT for women who have the courage to SAY they desire the men they love and also that they want THEIR GUY to desire THEM😛 Gives me a high!

Thank you for all those compliments...I was very nervous while writing it...not sure how it wud turn out to be ...since Ive never attempted lovemaking wale OSes😆😆😆 Glad it didnt bore you guys!!

I have written a few cute, non-sexual wale OSes before..if u want I can send the links to u😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Thanks Lourel :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
NOTE


Hi Friends,


First of all I am sorry for posting the next mini shot (#12) after such a long gap. But i was badly stuck with work.
Second this note is to inform you all that the Ishra mini shots will be coming to an end for the time being after Shot #13 by Anusha and Vidya.

We had some amazing shots written by awesome writers. Mini shots saw few new writers emerge too and I am so happy that We all came up with a great idea and had so much fun writing and gushing.

Hopefully we will be coming up with another novel idea very soon and have a rocking Ishralacious thread once more.

I am posting the MINI SHOt #12 'Kaata laga..hai laga..' as a one shot and the next shot #13 will be written by Anusha and VIdya. Anusha will be posting by this weekend...


Love Shalini😊

MINI shot #12 next post

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Posted: 9 years ago
Mini SHOT # 12
PLEASE NOTE, this shot is not written by only me but i have written this along with my darling friend Tia...

Kata laaga..haai laga (Pricked by Thorns)
(One shot) by Shalini and Tia

Raman was busy getting ready for the party! Neil had already called 5 times to inform that everyone has reached and they are waiting for him!

Ishita entered the room huffing and muttering under her breath...

"O Aandhi!! Hua kya!! Puri tarha pagal ho gayi kyaa? Kya bar bara rahi hain!!!"

[O tornado? What is the matter? Have you gone completely crazy? What are you muttering about?]

"Aap ko kya... haa? Aap ko kya? Aap jao na...ek din ki bachelor ki zindagi ji lo..."

[What is that got to do with you? You go and enjoy.. Enjoy your one day of freedom...]

He smirked realizing that his madrasan was miffed with him for going for the bachelor party!!!

"Oho, madrasan tu kyun itni jal rahi hain?"

[Oho Madrasan, why are you burning with jealousy?]

"Jaale meri jooti! Main kyun Jalungi!! Aab jao aur aish karo.."

[My foot! I am not jealous! You go and enjoy!]

"Nahi nahi, isse jalna nahi , isse jal bhun ke rakh hona bolte hain..."

[You are right! This is not called burning...you are so jealous that you have turned to ash]

Saying this he locked her in his arms not letting her run away...

"Jaa kaha rahi hain pagal madrasan!! Itna gussa kyun ho...Tell me..."

[Where are you running away again...tell me why are you so angry...?]

Ishita turned to mush the moment he touched her

"Jao aap, mere saath jab jaate ho kahi to sirf boring se suits...aab dekho... New style, clean shaven... sab samajh rahi hu main..."

[When you go anywhere with me, you always wear your boring suits...and look at you now..all decked up, clean shaven...I understand everything...]

He started laughing remembering the same dialogues by him not so many days ago when she was dressing up for another bachelorette party!!

Mera dialogue mujhe hi? Biwi, your dialogue writer needs to be fired! Ek bhi original dialogue nahi hote tere!

[You are copying my own dialogues...That dialogue writer of yours needs to be fired... no original dialogues]

Aur nahi to kyaa... aap khud soch ke dekho... main to ghar pe hu to aap kyun itna sajh dhaj ke ja raahe ho...

[What else should I understand! I am here, and yet look at you all decked up..]

Before Raman could reply and tease his wife more, his phone started ringing again...

"Neil , yaar main aa raha hu!!! Aare yaar order to kar.. kyun meri jaan ke dushman ban raha hain..."

[neil, I am coming!! You guys go ahead and order...why are you guys trying to torture me]

He muttered about his phuti kismet and wrong timings...just when he was hoping to see his jealous wife...Jealous madrasan is best, but the boys were waiting and he knew if he doesn't go, they will keep on irritating him... so the best he can do is return early, giving some excuses

" Your timing sucks Madrasan... you are running away always and now you are enticing me with your sad doe like eyes..."

"And your timing is very good!!! Hain na? During a busy morning schedule, when the entire family is waiting downstairs, you demand sponge baths! Baat karte hain..."

"Oho...so you didn't mind giving me sponge bath? You should have told me! Main raat ko demand karta..." [ I should have demanded again during night time...]

"Kuch bhi!"

"Suno Na madrasan... cancel kar du? Bolo gi to main cancel kar dunga... bas promise karo you will let me drink..."

"You want me to serve you Alcohol?"

"I am talking about a different kind of a drink!"

"Raaamaaan... aap bhi naa..." [Raaamaaan...you are too much...]She blushed profusedly

"Shit yaar... they are calling again!! Rahu ban ke bhete hain sab ke sab...I am cancelling"

[Shit yaar...they are calling again...I am doomed...I am cancelling!]

" Nahi Raman, they are waiting for you! So, you go!! But promise me something...You will not look at any other girl and flirt with anyone..."

Raman couldn't leave such a golden chance to tease his biwi further...the more jealous she is, the more chances of getting rewarded...

"Acha??? Aab tum kuch karne deti nahi to main kyaa karu...banda ko bahar to at least koi entertainment mile"

[Really? Now you don't let me do anything! So what should I do? Atleast let the man be happy to get some entertainment outside home..]

"Haaw..main aapki biwi hu..." [Haww...I am your wife..]

"jo kuch karti nahi..., to mujhe yaad kese rahe..?" [ Who doesn't let me do anything! So how can I remember? ]

" kyunki aapki daadi chub ti hain..." [that's because your beard hurts my face..]

"WHAT!!"

"Aab main chaali..darwaza khula hain..." [Now let me go! The door is open]

"Wait Madrasan...shit yaar... "

She stalled near the door, closing it and slowly turned towards him...

She walked slowly towards him and pinned him to the wall whispering near his ear "Let me give you something to remember me by"

With that she kissed him right on his lips..and then gasped "Aab to nahi bhulo ge naa?" [Now you wont forget! ]

PS: Thank u Anusha...you know why!!

PSS: As you are aware few hindi words cannot have exact engkish translation...however we tried...

Edited by shalz_123 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Ok firstly, I hardly did anything in this shot but thank you Shalzuuu 🤗
❤️

Biwi is jealous and Puttar is loving it 😉
I loved their little Nok jhok n then flirty puttar ☺️ ❤️
"Aapki dhadi chubti hai" ☺️ ☺️ ☺️
N then biwi pinned him to the wall n kissed him.
Loved it ❤️
Edited by .TIA. - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wah beta Shalz too good. Big round of applause for u and Tia. 🤗 You guys make a good team. Time for another OS or TS.

I loved it...very very nice. I know how quickly you wrote it. Hats off to u for that. I wish I could write so quickly. Thank you for making biwi bold in a subtle way. Glad for her display of affection within band kamra.😳 I loved reading this and wish this is something that they showed on the show as well. I wanted to read more...not going to say my usual dialogue.You know it already. 😆

Good job again. Now please write your ss ka update also soon.
Edited by fugitives123 - 9 years ago

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