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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: divazfankau

Nice update
raman bhot jada hi attitude
dikha rah hai bechari ishita ne
itne pyaar se use gift diya n hi was
so irritating aur woh ghar bhi raman ki
company ka hai n ab ye kon aa gaya
ishita to be husband I hate him
ravan kumar ko kya kar raha continue soon waiting early


Glad you liked it 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: rufana10


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part 1A was hilarious 🤣
enjoyed that so much 🤣

part 1B was little bit serious 😉
at least raman loves one thing and that is surprise
his hate list has no end 😆
looking forward to d next update 😳



You'll wonder whether RKB is hero or villain 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: maduragymhasium

thank you so much season2 dear

season1 was just outstanding dear

season2 was going to outstanding dear

i think season2 is going to beat season1 dear

i love raman character so much in your update

he was adamant,funny guy and little bit romantic and so handsome dear and thanks for so much variation of raman dear and character was nailed it perfectly dear

what is this dear our hero doesnt like anything dear i feel relax when he said i like surprises and curd rice dear

he always have a fought between his mind and heart i think dear and he always say differently between mihir and ishita

feel bad of ishita 😭but want more ishra romance dear😊

i am 100% sure that i am unable to find what is in your mind regarding story and what twist you going to plot in story but i know that it could be a wonderful updates dear

when i read prologue dear i am shock what raman is fear of ashok 😡and runaway from him wonderful twist dear

continue soon dear

waiting for next update dear

both the part was nice dear👏




Thanks for the wish
I'll try to make this FF as merely good as the old one
That's really good..
But this one is entirely different 😕
Happy that you enjoyed reading it 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
hi gaya i m again.in one of comment u wrote that they are not going to romance soon.its ok but can we have some intimate moments and kissing scenes as its the essence of ishra and u are very good at it.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hi Kutties...
Update is not proofread
So ignore typos and enjoy reading 🤗

Chapter-1C

MY HATE LIST



Murugan left the place before Ishita and Meenu returning with the juice. The ladies scrutinized his attitude posture and gritted their teeth cheekily smiling at him. He in no time took the juice and drank it making Meenu and Ishita's jaw drop to the floor.


"What did you say him?" Ishita couldn't get a grip on her anger.


"I told him just the truth." Raman said and walked to his room leaving behind a confused Ishita and Meenu.


It was a terrible night for both Ishita and Raman for reasons they only know. Meenu was worried over Ishita's future but in front of sleep she was a lady kumbakaran who slept off so easily. Their sleepless night got disturbed by someone else whom they didn't expect at all; a thief!


Raman was laying on the bed looking at the fan and contemplating his on life. He first got scared of the cracking noise of window but when he saw a human shadow passing by like a cat which is sneaking in, he got alarmed. He took the torch and followed the shadow.


Ishita's room was opposite to Raman's the door of which was open because of her carelessness. The thief targetted Ishita's bedroom while Raman followed him. She was just slipped into a nice slumber after the upshots of the day. The thief looked at her closely and saw her nose stud shining in the midnight moon. Raman understood that the theif is going to take the beautiful nose stud which he liked from the very first look. He got angry and pulled the thief from behind by his shoulder.


"Abey saale kya karnewale ho?" Raman asked angrily yet siently not to wake up Ishita.

[What were you going to do?]


"Ji...voh...chori..." The theif ran out of words.

[That...theft]


"Oye...chup...aur ithar aa..." Raman pulled him aside.

[Shut up and come here]


"Tujhe paisa chahiye hai nah...lekin mere paas bhi ab paisa nahin hai. Toh tum yeh watch lejaao...costly hai...aur dobaara is ghar ki aas-paas mat dikhayi dena...samjha tu?" Raman warned the thief and gave him his watch which the poor thief accepted happily and went away.

[You want money right... I don't have it now. So you take my watch. It's costly. Don't cone near this house anymore. Understand?]


Raman looked at Ishita who still slept oblivious of the things happening around her. He moved closer to her and sat beside her. She unknowingly turned sideways and kept her head over his right hand which was on the pilow. He cursed himself for sitting beside her and slowly pulled out his hand.


"Arey oh madrasan...tum hindi sikho ya nah sikho...lekin main tamil zaroor sikhunga. Tumhara murugan hai mera guru!" He said sheepishly and got out of the room to his.

[You learn Hindi or not... But I'll learn Tamil for sure. Your Murugan is my guru]


"Hello police station...I'm Raman Kumar Bhalla...Someone theft my watch...Cartier Rotonde Tourbillon Chronograph Platinum Watch. It's 240,000 dollars. A thief ran away from my residence just now...yes...Mayur Vihar housing society...I want my watch back...ASAP!" Raman complained and commanded the police arrogantly.

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Ishita ran towards the main door hearing the calling bell at that early hour. It was just four o'clock. Meenu was still sleeping and so was Raman. She opened the door only to see some police officers. She got scared and called out for Meenu and Raman. Raman came there cursing Ishita while Ishita tried her level best to prove that the policemen had entered the wrong address.


"Dekhiye madamji...humein is gharka owner Mr Raman Kumar Bhalla ne bulaya hai." The inspector informed.

[See madam... The owner of this house Mr RKB has called us]


Meenu and Ishita froze to the spot thinking that Raman came to know about their lies regarding the house. But got relieved hearing Raman saying, "I said residence. It's not my house. Yeh inka ghar hai." He pointed to Ishita who smiled nervously.

[It's her house]


"Oh Mr Bhalla...hum us chor ko pakada hai. Dekho yehi apka watch hai nah?" Inspector showed him a watch.

[We caught that thief. See if it is your watch]


"Yeah it is. Thank you so much..." Raman said wearing the watch while Ishita and Meenu looked on.


"Aur us chor aise hi mat chodna..."
Raman angrily said to the police and left beseat in the sofa muttering an "I hate theives!"

[Don't leave that thief just like that]


"Kya ho raha hai...ho...huh?" Ishita asked angrily.

[What's going on?]


"Arey oh...stop sleeping like silk smitha at night. A thief tried to steal something from you...and then..." He trailed of and asked Meenu, "Oye...kaho isse ki raat ko half saree pehana bandh karne ko. Bechara chor!"

[Ask her to stop wearing half saree at night. Poor thief]


"Ji..." Meenu said casting her eyes downwards.


"Kya...?" Ishita asked in her chennai slang.

[What?]


"Thoongupoth davani podurathai nirthida sonnal." Meenu made a facepalm and ran to the kitchen while Ishita looked at Raman drenched in embarrassment.

[Asked you to stop wearing half saree when you sleeps]


When she was about to go Raman called her from behind. She looked at him embarrassed while he just asked her to do what Meenu said making her more embarrassed.


"Vekkamketta aal." She muttered under her breath and left the place for job.

[Shameless man]

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Meenu and Raman reached the Iyengar house on sharp 7 o'clock to catch the lady before she leaves for market. She looked at Raman in awe for his handsomeness and welcomed the duo. In no time Mrs Iyengar asked Meenu to buy the vegitables for her. So the only guest remained was Raman.


"Aunty...do you know hindi?" Raman asked for a precaution.


"Haan...bolo bolo hindi main. Voh toh bas Ishita ko nahin pata. Nayi hai nah Delhi main..." She cleared.

[Say in Hindi. It's just that Ishita doesn't know as she is new in Delhi]


"Nayi? Phir voh ghar bhi?" He got confused.

[New? That house too?]


"Arey nahin Raman beta...uski appa Mr Viswanathan...very sincere man...voh kisi Bhalla industries keliye kam karti thi...from the past five years. Oh kaise bataun...voh toh lambi kahani hai!" Mrs Iyengar showed disinterest.

[No Raman...her father Mr Viswanathan...he worked in Bhalla industries...how to say... It's a long story]


But how can a junior Bhalla ignore it?
"It's OK aunty ji...I'm all ears. I love stories!" Raman leaned forward like a kid.


"Acha bolthi hun. Voh accounting department main kuch gadbad hogaye the...toh Viswanathan ko pura ka pura 50 lakhs dena pada us company ko! Iskeliye voh apni apartment ko two months security main rakha...ten lakhs keliye. Aur jab time pe kuch kar nahin paya...toh voh Madhavi ke saath suicide karliya. Acha hua Ishita chennai mein MBBS kar rahi thi. Varna uska kya ho jaata! Ayyo kadavulai..." Mrs Iyengar completed.

[OK I'll tel you. He worked in the accounting department and some problems occurred. He needed to give 50 lakhs to the company. For that he gave his apartment as security for ten lakhs. Nothing happened in time. So he and Madhavi committed suicide. It was good that Ishita was doing MBBS in Chennai. Or else what would have happened!]


"Toh...voh ghar...aur Ishita kab Delhi aya? Voh kyun salesgirl banke? Raman asked suspiciously.

[Then that house...when did Ishita come to Delhi? Why she as salesgirl?]


"Sirf 2 months hua uska yahan aane main. Isiliye toh kuch hindi bhi nahin pata...Pavam...maine bola kisi private hospital mein nurse ki job dundne ko. Easily miljaati...Lekin voh bhi toh sahi hai...kaise face karega voh saare doctors ko jinhone uski ambition ki yaad dilate rahega..." Mrs Iyengar cleared.

[Just 2 months. That's why she doesn't know hindi. I asked her to find a job as nurse in some private hospital. But she is right in her place...how she will manage to face those doctors who would remind her of her ambitions]


"Apne us ghar ki baare main kuch nahin kaha..." Raman pressed again.

[You didn't tell about that house]


"Haan voh...ghar toh two months pehale hi Bhalla's Ltd ne warrant kiya hai. Bolna toh padega...voh logon ko toh bada humanity hai. Isiliye use gharse nikal nahin raha. Maine kahi Meenu se suna hai ki Bhalla's shayad ghar vapis dedenge." Mrs Iyengar beamed.

[Oh... House has been warranted by Bhalla's ltd before two months. But I must say that they have humanity. That's why they are not asking her to go from there. I heard Menu saying that maybe they will return the house to her]


"Haan...We'll see what happens auntyji..." Raman fisted his hand in anger.


"Aur tum... Mihir Bhalla ka dost hai nah?"
Mrs Iyengar asked for clarification.

[You're Mihir Bhalla's bro?]


"No...I'm Mihir Bhalla's elder brother!"

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"You tried to fool me...! You tried to play with Raman Kumar Bhalla! Tum donon ko achi tarah pata hai ki...I hate others using my things! You two are gonna pay for this bullcrap." Raman roared at Mihir and Patak who were looking at him in fear "virtually"

[You both clearly knows that...]


The video chat had begun from the last two hours and is stuck on the same thing. It is not moving nor does the stupid duo are being able to grasp anything.


"What happened bhai? We're not getting you." Patak finally found his voice.


"Oh really. Alright. I was telling you both...about this bloody house. Yeah...you got me right...I'm telling you about my house!" Raman finally spat it out.


"Ap ko kaise pata chala?" Mihir and Patak asked in unison.

[How come you know?]


"Wow...! So you both are damn hiding it from me! Mere hi ghar mein mujhe paying guest banaya aur us Ashok ki chakkar mein bhi bhasaya. You're my blood brothers...else...I'd have killed you both!" Raman roared.

[You made me paying guest in my own house and trapped in Ashok's affair]


"Bhai...please listen...It wasn't Iyer uncle's fault..." Mihir started but Raman intervened,"I don't wanna hear anything. The matter of my concern is...the house is mine. And I'm not gonna make that bloody madrasi stay here anymore."


"Bhai...she is alone. Voh kahan jayegi? Try to be kind...please bhai." Patak pleaded.

[Where will she go]


"Enough...! The company showed enough of humainty. She won't enter this house! That's final...!" Raman gritted his teeth and disconnected the video chat.

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Ishita came home late evening and stopped on the doorway watching the interior changed and some luggages were neatly packed which were kept on a corner. She looked on confused while a man came to Raman.


"Sirji...sub kuch hogaya. 1500 RS." The man said for which Raman gave the money whilst glaring at Ishita.

[Everything is done]


"Voh luggage bahar rakho" Raman ordered which the man did.

[Keep those luggage outside]


Ishita gave the man space to go still standing on the doorway. Once the man was gone, Ishita asked, "What's going on?"


"Ooopsie...sorry...I forgot to say. I don't want you to stay anymore in my house." He said as if it is a joke.


"Enna...? What you mean? Where is Meenu? Meenu...enna nadakkith inke?" Ishita called out walking into the living room.

[What's going on here?]


Raman pulled her by her arms and said everything furiously while Ishita could do nothing but cry. She tried to say what happened with her appa but the arrogant devil feigned indifference to her existance itself.


Raman pointed towards the door saying, "Get out..."


"Please...don't do this to me..." Ishita cried out.


"Get lost...I said you just get lost!" Raman threw her out of the house making her fall on the corridor floor.


"Where? Wh-where would I go...Please Raman sir...don't do this...I don't have a place to go..." Ishita pleaded clutching Raman's feet only to be kicked by him.


"Get lost you bloody...Don't make me say more. Get lost NOW..." Raman roared at her closing the door.


She knocked on the door vigorously crying. But it never opened!


TO BE CONTINUED...

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Posted: 9 years ago
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I HATE THIS RAMAN BHALLA..YEH TOH RUDE BHALLA HAI..RUDE BE NAHI SUITE KAREGI USKO...HUMANITY KE KOYE CHEEJI NAHI HAI.

Thief ko be ullu banaya..
And what he kicked ishu with his legs;->
p.s:yeh dream sequence hai kya,throughing out ishu?

thanks for pm..
Edited by janani_divan - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
First of my hate list I hate dis arrogant Raman how can he be dat rude?? Bechari Ishita I want to jst kill d Raman in dis update kitna attitude dika raha hein aur ishu is a doc?? Y can't she continue her studies???
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Posted: 9 years ago
Omg I hate this Raman Yaar
Such a jerk he is and really felt bad for ishitha
Where will she go now
Plz continue soon
Amazing story yaar
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Posted: 9 years ago
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omg i cannot believe poor ishu!!
how can raman do this to her.. he is so stone hearted n selfish!!!
grr... i hate him...

aweee poor ishu is suppering so much now!! were will she go?

gaya di u r evil i tell u..i heard di is actually writing it i am so excited!!!! tell her its awesome
Edited by sush_rddt - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Sri1091

First of my hate list I hate dis arrogant Raman how can he be dat rude?? Bechari Ishita I want to jst kill d Raman in dis update kitna attitude dika raha hein aur ishu is a doc?? Y can't she continue her studies???


Raman became number one in your hate list 😆

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